MaNan FF:~ Dil Dhadhakne Do~ upd pg 16.

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Hello Peeps!!
Ya ya i know so careless of me to not update my works, my fictions.
But seriously i have been crazy all this time with my Mba. Now finally i am over with it!!

So, This is my new Fan Fiction starring our very own @Manik @Nandini #Kaise Yeh Yaariyan @MTv

Actually i am very much fascinated with this couple and now after watching Dil Dhadhakne do, i wanted to write it on MaNan.

So please read it and enjoy, and yeah drop comments as you pleasee!!

Story Line:

The story starts from the the two best friends decided to change their friendship into permanent relation, promising to marry their children to each other. When the children fates are pre decided. What happens when the friends of one of them doesnt like the other.
When they grow up would they feel the same as their parents wants them to feel for each other? What if one of them falls for other, while other falls for someone else, leaving the other heartbroken? How will the love story take turn?

Stay tune to read the amazing love story of manik and nandini.



Character Sketch:-

MALHOTRAS:

Suyyash Malhotra: Suyyash is a very successful business man, who lives in Mumbai with his family. He is considered to be one of the biggest and strongest businessman of India. He is obviously very rich, But very simple nature. he know what it takes for a person to achieve this success. He alwaz resects and love all the people who contributed in his successful journey, specially his life partner Mrs. Nyonika Malhotra, and his best friend Mr. Arjun Kirlosker. He has two Children Manik and Mukti. He can do anything for his family's happiness.

Nyonika Malhotra: Nyonika, Suyyash and Arjun were best friends from their nursery. they completed their school and college evrything together. Nyonika fell in love with Suyyash in the due course and they got married. Nyonika is a perfect women who cud ever ask for. She ia a perfect wife to her husband, a perfect best friend to arjun and his wife, and a perfect mother to manik and mukti. She helps suyyash in handling business from home. She loves her children to the core and can do anything for her family.


Manik Malhotra: Manik is the elder son of suyyash and nyonika. He is hot, arrogant, and rude for all those people who hurt his family and friends. he can never see his loved ones hurt. He is the best son a parents cud ask for.he loves his sis alot and alwaz obeys to her demandss. he has group of friends namely Fab5, who are commonly interested in music and are chuddy buddies. they all are together since childhood. he shares a uninteresting relationship with his father's bestfriend daughter.

Mukti Malhotra: Mukti is a spoilt brat. A most pampered girl one cud ever come across. She is very stubborn, and has a lot of attitude, but have a golden heart. she loves her brother the most, and can never see him hurt. She loves her group Fab5 and alwaz wants them to be together. She is like a small little child in front of her brother who fulfils all her wishes.


KIRLOSKERS:

Arjun Kirlosker: Arjun is a very rich and successful businessmen like suyyash he had been awarded with title of best businessmen of india for the 13th time. she fell in love with purvi during his conference in ahmedabad. he loves his wife and daughter alot, and wants to protect them alwaz. he can do anything for his baby doll nandu. he treats nyonika as his sister since he lost his family in a flight crash when he was in college.

Purvi Kirlosker: Purvi was a princess before marriage. She was the daughter of the most reputed industrialist of ahmedabad. she fell in love with arjun during her first official conference. after marriage she merged her company with Arjuns making them the top most industrialists of india. Twice she been awarded for the best business women of India. She can do anything for her princess nandu.

Nandini Kirlosker: Nandini as her name she is a soft hearted girl. but she is soft only for her parents and friends. for others she is an arrogant bitch who knows how to keep loosers on their toes. she has a friend navya. she shares a not so friendly relationship with manik. she has her own band group and studies together with manik and his friends in SPACE ACADEMY. she is her parents princess. a total fashionista. Girls are alwaz jealous of her, and boys wants to have her. she loves her group band names as SPARKLING STARS.

MANIK'S FRIENDS:

Best friend: Cabir Dhawan: Cabir is a total funky guy. he loves playing pranks on thers. he is the naughtiest one in their group. he loves manik alot, and considers him as his brother. he lost his parents in an accident. he is very rich, and flirts alot. had many girlfriends. he is the only one who shares deepest secrets of manik.

Druv Singhania: Druv is the son of cabir's father business partner. he is a calm and composed boy. and is very serious towards his music, he doesnt like to waste time unnecessarily. he likes alia alot, but alwaz ignores his feelings thinking them to be useless. he shares a healthy friendship with nandini.

Alia Chopra: Alia is a total diva with lots of attitude. She lost her parents in the same accident as cabir. since then she lives with cabir. she is cabir's father's best friends daughter. she likes manikalot, but never shows due to her diva image.and gets jealous seeing nandu's bond with manik's family... but is a true and honest friend with FAB5.

NANDINI'S FRIENDS:

Best Friend: Navya Kapoor: Navya is a diva and princess of her parents just like nandu. when she was born her parents left her in an orphanage with some business and properties in her name. she lived in an orphanage for 10years of her life. Nandu mether in the orphanage only as she used to go their to spend her time with the children there on her birthdays. nandu's parents adopted her and brought her home. since then she and nandu are inseperable. She is very intelligent. with her college and her music she is even handling her parents business. she is also very rich, and is very much fascinated about designer wears. she likes to be a diva and show attitude.

Abhimanyu Sehgal: Abhimanyu or abhi as his friends call him is a maternal cousin of navya. when he joined college he had no idea that he had a sister. once when by chance he saw navya's parents pictures with her official docs he told her that he is her mama's son. since then he and navya shares a very strong relation. he also trats nandu as his sis. he is kind of attracted towards mukti.

Harshad Khanna: Harshad is a very notorious person. he loves to create mess. he is kind hearted but loves to irritate others. he likes navya alot, but had never told her. he alwaz irritates her with this flirtings.

Sanaya Irani: Sanaya is a sweetheart. she is the cutest member of SPARKLING STARS. she is very gulible. inspite of being very rich she never shows her superiority, and attitude to other. she loves Harshad alot, and shares this secret with navya and nandu.


Other characters will be introduced as and when they come.




I hope u will enjoy reading this FF.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part: 1
The whole mansion was surrounded by workers, evryone was busy preparing forthe big day. andwhy not, afterall it was their princess's birthday.

A lady comes there.

Lady: bhaiya suno... ye lightings wahan poolside pe laga dena, princess ko bahot pasand hai.

Worker: ji madam

Just then a man comes there...

Man: Arey purvi tum itni tension mat lo... maine sab se bata diya hai ki kya kya karna hai... sab kuch hamari princess ki pasand se hi hoga...

Purvi: haan arjun, wo toh theek hai.. but tum ye mat bhulo ki ye hamari princess ka 18th birthday hai.. she will be so big today!!

Arjun: arey baba.. y r u taking tension... tum janti ho na main apni princess ki pasand se sab kuch karunga... and main apni princess and princess ki mom se bahot pyaar karta hun unhe kabhi sad nahi karunga..

saying this he keeps his hand on her waist and pulls her towards himself... he was just about to kiss her when they were disturbed by a girl...

Girl: mom.. dad...

arjun purvi seperates immediately...

purvi: haan navi bolo beta...

navya: mom.. abhi we have left with so much of work, and here u guys are romancing that too infront of so many workers... common dad, kuch toh dekho and socho...

arjun pulls navya towards himself and side hugs her...

arjun: achcha ye batao... hamari princess uthi ki nahi??

navya: wo toh abhi so rahi hai, main jaa ke usey uthati hun...

Arvi: okay beta!!

A girl was sleeping in a superking size pink bed, in a large room...
princess bed

sun is peeping thru the window and disturbs our princess sleep...

princess: shooo... shooo... go away sun... i wanna sleep more...

just then the door of her room opens...

navya: nandu... wake up...

nandu: navi... plz pull the curtains na... i wanna sleep more...

navya: nandu wake up its ur birthday today...

hearing this nandu immediately wakes up...

nandu: ohhh yeah.,... its my bday today... yayayy!!

nandu gives a big hug to navya..

navya: now u get ready mom dad are waiting downstairs... and then we even have to go to college for admissions remember??

nandu: yeah!! okayy!! i will be down in 15minutes...

navya leaves and goes to her room... which is no less than princess room

Here nandu goes to her washroom and gets ready wearing

navya gets ready in:
which is basically backless...

Arjun: happy birthday princess... muah :*
Nandu: thanks dad ... muah :*

Purvi: happy birthday nandu :*
Nandu: thanks mom and hugs her...

Navya: Happy birthday nandu... heres ur gift from all of us...
Nandu: thank u so much.. i love u all...

she quickly opens all her gifts...
she finds iphone 6, macbook (latest version), a designer puple dress, matching shoes and accessories, and a car key...

nandu: dad, mom, navi this key...

arjun: well.. its ur Audi A8.. ur own car..

nandu: what... omg omg omg... thanks so much dad... i love u so much

she goes and hugs her mom, dad and navi...

nandu: but dad... i dont have a driving liscence

navi: here it is!!

nandu: wowww.. thank u so much navs...

and hugs navi,...

purvi: beta.. lets have breakfast and then u both have to go to Space for ur admissions...

Nandu-navi: yes mom...

they complete theirbreakfast and then leave for college...



PRECAP:

Manik's entry... 😊

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Wow amazing start dea...
Continue soonnn
If possible pm me nxt time
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wow...sound is intrsting...i jus loved it...plss try to update regularly...continue soon 👍🏼
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Amazing update...
Plz pm me if possible..

LOVE,
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PART: 2

Same morning...

Malhotra Mansion

A boy sleeping on his king size white bed, with his guitar on one side...


Alarm rings.. boy opens his eyes and wakes up...

Boy: ohh gawd, aaj late nahi ho sakta...

He quickly freshens up and changes into simple blue denims, white white round neck tshirt and orange blazer.

He come down in dining hall to see his parents and sister waiting for him...

Boy: gud morning maa papa, gud morning mukti

Maa- Papa: gud morning beta

Mukti: gud morning manik

Maa: manik sit down lets have our breakfast

Papa: arey nika, y r u stressing my boy... he will have it kyu champ??

manik: ofcourse papa

Nyonika: suyu u keep quite, tumhare is faltu ki freedom and pampering ki wajah se hi ye dono bahot careless ho gaye hai, their fooding habbits are pathetic...

Suyyash: ohh jaan... they are kids.. samajh jayenge.. rights manik- mukti?

Nyonika starts blushing listening jaan

Manik- Mukti laughs...

Nyonika: waise aaj princess ka birthday hai, i hope u kids remember..

Manik- Mukti: yes maaa

Suyyu: ohkay, i am done, leaving for office.. will come early in the evening, u guys be ready, then we will leave to Arjun's place!! Bye!!

Nyonika- Manik- Mukti: okayy.. bye!!

Suyyash leaves for office...

Manik: maa is it really necessary for us to come for that Nandini's birthday??

Nyonika: manik.. (sighs) achcha tell me thruthfully, y do u both hate nandu so much?

Mukti: its nothing like that maa.. its just that ki we all dont like her..

Nyonika: yeah, thats what i am asking.. y??

manik: maa... dont know what the reason is.. but i just knw that from childhood only, whenever nandu is around our place we both lose our importance in front of dad.. she becomes the priority.. u knw when we used to go for parks we used to go to only those rides which she used to go.. no other rides were allowed for us.. y?? just becoz she shudnt stay even 5 min alone... me and mukti shud around her alwaz.. gawd i hate her, for snatching our choices in childhood.. and as fas as i have seen she is still the same!!

Mukti: yes maa.. when dad used to take us for shopping, we alwaz used to buythings according to her choice, i mean common it was me and bhai who were to wear those clothes, who the hell did give her right to take decisions for us?? and 3 years back when she was ill on my bday u guys cancelled my bday party for her. gawd.. i hate her so much...

Nyonika: but kids, she was seriously ill.. she has alwaz been alone.. she used to find her companions in u both..

manik: whatever mom.. i just knw that i cant tolerate that girl in front me.. so i will come to her party with my friends, will wish her,m and then will leave.. we have already a plan for tonite, so i am not gonna change that coz of her..

Mukti: maa. make any excuse and tell that too dad.. we cant disrespect him, by saying no to him directly.. and as it is not like we are denying to come to wish her.. anywaz.. we are getting late for college.. bye maa...

Both the kids kisses her on each cheek and leaves...

nyonika: (sighs) bye

Nyonika (self talk): manik ur so angry for childhood things, i cant even imagine how will u react when u come to knw that we have already arranged ur wedding with nandu at the time of her birth.. god bless us with ur anger when u come to know of the truth...


SPACE ACADEMY OF FINE ARTS

Students are roaming around here and there, as today is the day for freshers to come... the admission process has already started... and students are talking among themselves...

Some girls..
Girl 1: u knw aaj freshers aa rahe hai, i am excited...

Girl 2: yeah hamare liye excitement, and freshers k liye nightmare😈

Girl 3: yeah obv ab FAB5 in freshers ke sath kya karegi ye hamare liye toh entertainment hi hoga na...

Girls 1& 2: yeah right!! 😆

Just then 3 cars stops outside the foyer of the college,

Car 1: manik and mukti comes down

Car 2: Aliya with a bright smile comes down]

Car 3: Cabir and Dhruv comes down laughing over something

Girl 1: aa gaye FAB5

FAB5 enters into college with attitude

Boy 1: yaar.. ab mazaa aayega in freshers ki raaging karne mei

Boy 2: ohh boy.. ragging nahi introduction lene mein

Boy 3: yaar, ragging ban hai, but humne kabhi princi ki suni hai kya jo ab sunenge, wo bhi FAB5 ke hote hue, jab ki Manik ke dad is college ke bahot bade trusty hai

Boy 1: yeah boys.. we will have fun..

FAB 5:

Manik: heyy guys missed u so much...

Aliya: seriously yaar, ye jab college na ho toh i get so bored..

Mukti: exactly aliya.. but our trip was also amazing..

Cabir: obviously.. we are FAB5 guys.. hamare trip amazingtoh hona hi tha.. but there was no real fun.. i mean mujhe apne website ke video ke liye koibakra nahi mila...

Dhruv: cabit shut up yaar.. abhi freshers aaye bhi nahi hai, and u have started planning also?

Cabir: haan toh, plan hamesha perfect hona chahiye na..

Manik: okay okay guys.. leave it.. before we make any plans.. i want to inform u that today we all will be going to Arjun uncle place, its nandini's birthday

Aliya: what?? u wanna say that our plan for tonight is cancelled...

{Aliya neverliked nandini, first of all becoz of whatherver manik mukti shared with them abt nandu, and also coz aliya alwaz had some soft corner for manik, and alwaz wanted to impress his parents, but they never pay heed, and alwaz raises nandu alot}

Mukti: no aliya, what manik means is that we all are gonna go there, wish her and leave, just for formality u knw.. we cant say no to dad...

Cabir: fine by me

{Cabir too dint like nandu much before, but later he started analyzing her and beahvior.. so now is okay with her.,.. he doesnt hate her}

Dhruv: for me also.. (nandhruv are friends from the time when once nandu saved him from falling off stairs at manik's place, which exactly happend 3yrs back, but he never shared this thing with FAB5)

Aliya: okay then...

Fab 5 enjoys their day at the college... waiting for next day to come to begin some fun..


SPARKLING STARS:

Nandu- Navya came to college, and were waiting at college office for their friennds.. very soon harshad, sanaya, abhi, joined them...

they completed their admission process and leavesfor some shopping for evening...

later they reach home and get ready for the party...





PRECAP:

Manik Nandini face to face



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PART: 3

Evening...

Malhotras along with FAB5 reaches Kirloskers place, and FAB5 specially Cabir, Aliya, and Dhruv are suprised seeing the decorations...

and the cake in the middle

Cabir: Now that is something... itna grand decor...

Aliya: seriously, what has she ever done to recieve such loving and caring parents?

Mukti: seriously guys.. lets notwaste time, and find the birthday gal, wish her and lets leave...

Manik: i think mukti is right, wemust waste our time, by standing here guys... lets go...

Meanwhile, The Malhotra parents comes near the Kirlosker parents and greet each other,

Arjun: thank god, tumlog party start hone se pehele aa gaye

Suyyash: aana hi tha, afterall hamari princess ka birthday hai

Nyonika- Purvi hugs each other

Nyonika: btw ye nandu hai kahan??

Purvi: ready ho rahi hai... abhi aati hi hogi navi k sath!!

Just then arjun recieves navi's msg saying they are coming downstairs

Arjun comes in the middle.. and asks for attention

Arjun: hello ladies and gentlemen thank u so much all of u for coming here, and making my princess birthday graceful... now let me introduce u all tomy princess, the birthday gal Nandini Kirlosker...

Nandu- Navya comes on stairs, an a spotlight flashes on nandu...

Everyone is amazed seeing Nandu looking truly like a princess, wearing a princess dress

Manik was lost seeing this beauty, infront of him..

Where as Mukti and Aliya were making faces, and Aliya was very jealous.

Cabir was lost seeing the girl coming down with nandini

She was none other than Navya, she was wearing

Cabir: gorgeaous!!

Druv who was standing beside him headr it.. and was smirking seeing Cabir oogling at Navya...

Suddenly the lights turns on, and evryone gathers around the centre... and FAB5 also comes out of their trance.

Arjun: guys.. please join us, for cake cutting ceremony...

Arjun hugs nandu

Arjun: hapy birthday beta

Nandu: thanks dad

Nyonika- suyyash: happy birthday princess...
😃

Nandu: thanks so much sweetheart and jannat
(nandu calls suyyash sweetheart as he alwaz fufills all her wishes, and nyonika jannat coz she thinks only cause of her she dint miss being with parents, when in childhood both #ArVi used to go for their business troops)

Suyyash: now lets cut the cake...

Nandu thencuts the cake, and all sings birthday song for her...

FAB5 except manik- mukti are amazed seeing the treatment nandu is getting from everyone present in the hall..

After cake cutting, Nyonika calls Fab 5 near nandu to wish her..

Cabir- Druv (together): happy birthday, and hugs her sideways from both the sides,

Nandu: thanks cabir, thanks druv

Aliya (fake smile): happy birthday nandini

nandu: thanks aliya

Manik and mukti then comes forward and gives her a gift, the same gift that they have been giving her since last many years
Given by manik
given by mukti..

Nandu: thanks so much guys, notonly for the gift, but also being here today.. i knw how much u guys hate me, but still u came here, it really means alot..

Manik mukti are shocked seeing her that she knws how they feel abt her..

Mukti- manik (fakes smiles) and leaves...

FAB5 leaves the party and very soon the party also comes to an end.

Fab5 goes to their hanging out place, and enjoy themselves.

After returning home, MaNan are busy in thinking about the other...

Manik (ST): how does nandu knw what di we feel abt her, did mom tell her?? no she cant do that, and on her bday...never...
but y am i curious to knw abt how she knws, its good she knws that we hate her.. so now she wont bother us...

Nandini(ST): sorry manik... i never knew mere wajah se u and mukti had to give up on ur freedom and choices in our childhood, and thats ke u guys hate me so much.. that u ppl dont wanna see my face.. its okay then even i wont my friendship on u guys.. i wont bother u ever again.. i am joining ur college, but i will never disturb u both..

she starts crying and ultimately sleeps, waiting for the new day...



PRECAP:

First day at college... FAB5 meets SPARKLING STARS



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Woww swesme storyline!!! Plz update nxt part soon!!
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PART: 4

New day, new morning...

Malhotra Mansion:

Manik: morning mom.. morning dad.. hey muks...

Suyu-Nika: gud morning son!!

Mukti: gudmorning bhai...

Nika: manik i have made ur favourite cheese brazeitto.

manik: wow.. thank u mom... i love itt...

Mukti: aur mom mere liye???

Nika: mukti.. i have ur favourite for u too sweetheart...

Mukti: wow... chole puri... thanks mom!!

Suyu: jaan.. bachon ke liye itna.. mere liye ??

Nika: awww.. suyu... uhave to adjust with these things for now... i will make something for u in the evening..

Suyu: (baby face) okayy!!

Manik- mukti laughs..

Suyyu: waise arjun ka call aaya tha morning mein?

Nika: what was he saying??

Suyyu: yahi ki he cant believe, princess itni badi ho gayi hai ki she is gonna join college from today!!

Nika: yeah, our kids grown up too fast...

Suyyu: btw manik- mukti... princess tumhare college hi aa rahi hai... i want ki tumlog uska sath dena...

Manik: but dad, now she is not a kid, that u want us to keep her compeny.. waise bhi navya bhi toh hogi na uske sath...

Mukti: and her friends too...

Suyyu: yeah, i knw... but i want u to make her comfortable and ya no ragging for her and friends!!

Manik- mukti: okay dad!!

Manikmukti leaves for college, and suyyu leaves for office. nika gets busy in her own work...


Kirlosker Mansion:

Arjun: princess, navi... come fast...u will be late for ur college first day...

Purvi: arjun... aa jayenge...

Arjun: no purvi.. aise toh they will be very late...

just then nandu-navi comes down...

Nandu-Navi: gud morning mom, dad...

ArVi: gud morning..

Purvi: now jaldi se breakfast karo... driver is gonna drop to u both to ur college...

Nandu: no maa, i am taking my car...

Navi: yes maa.. we both will take our cars on alternate days to college...

Arjun: okayy.. as my beauties wish!!

Purvi: but...

Navi: common mom.. we have liscence, and yeah we will be safe... i promise...

Nandu: yes maa promise!!

Purvi(smiles): okayy

Everyone finishes breakfast and ArVi leaves for their office, and the firls leaves for college

In Nandu's car:

Nandu: navi did u talk to harshad, abhi, and sanaya??

Navi: yeah.. they called in the morning.. they asked us to reach college, and they wil join..!!

nandu: okayy!! lets go then!!

SPACE ACADEMY:

FAB5

Manik- Mukti: gud morning guys

Cabir- Aliya- Druv: gudmorning

Cabir: kya hua manik..?? tera chehera dekh ke lagta hai subah subah tera teri gf se jhagda hua hai??

Manik: yaar tu bhi.. ye dad ne phasa dia yaar, subah subah!!

Aliya: what happend manik baby??

Mukti: yaar, that nandini is joining our college today, and dad has asked us to give her company and no ragging for her!!

Aliya: what the f**k?? how can uncle force u guys like that?

Manik: no aliya, dad dint force us.. he just wants us to make her comfortable thats it!!

Mukti: yeah... its not like we are gonna friends with her.. we will help her when she will ask..

Cabir: okayy guys, whatever it is.. the fact is nandini is joing our college, though she is not our friend butshe is not our enemy too.. we have to be cordial with her..

Druv: right guys, we cant mistreat her...

Manik: right... anywaz lets go guys. its time to welcome freshers.. (smirks)

Mukti: laughs, yeah lets go!!

FAB5 reaches the main foyer, just then brand new Royal blue audi convertible enters the college..

Cabir: hey.. thats the same audi model that i have ordered for myself, but my one is in choclate brown colour.

Aliya: wow.. what a car... even i am thinking to buy this model..

Mukti: its the same model that dad gave us last week, isnt is bhai???

Manik: yeah muks, but lets see who the person this car belongs to!!

Druv: i think i knw, who is the owner of this car!!

FAB4: who??

Druv: Nandini...!!

FAB4: what????

Aliya(jealous): how can u say that??

Druv: coz last she texted me the car's pic she got as her bday present from uncle...

then he shows the picture on his phn..

Mukti: ohh how cud i forget?? she has to get the same thing that me and bhai have!!

Aliya: u r right mukti.. she is sucha B****!!

Manik: ALIYA(shouts), mind ur language...

Mukti: yeah.. just coz we dont like her, u cant abuse her like this...

Manik: we knw she never asked for the same things that we have, infact it were our parents who gave us all the same things..

Mukti: exactly, i knw we hate her, but the reason is just for me and bhai... uhave no right to insult our parents best friend's daughter like that...

Aliya: i am sorry guys.. i never meant to say like this...(starts crying)

mukti side hugs her,

Mukti: its okay.. but be careful of what u say about her from next time...

Cabir amnd druv were silent all the while...

Cabir: are yaar... chalo na dekhte hai.. why are they not coming out of the car...

Druv: yeah lets go...

FAB5 moves towards the car... just then two other audis same model comes in the college and stops at both the sides of nandu's car!!

Aliya: what the hell is happening??

Cabir: if i am not wrong its her friends... in those two cars...

FAB5 stops and looks at the scene...

Three cars doors opens, and from one car comes down nandu- navya, wearing red and baby pink short sundresses respectively.

from the car left to nandu's car, comes out ABHIMANYU wearing a casual blue tshirt, with black jeans, and a black & grey cap..

From the right car, SANAYA and HARSHAD comes out sanaya wearing a white backless short sundress, and harshad wearing a casual yellow body fit tshirt, and beige colour pants.

The 5 of them comes together
HARSHAD- SANAYA- NANDINI- NAVYA- ABHIMANYU, and stops infront of FAB5

Navya: hey guys!!

Fab5: heyy navya!!

Cabir: hi nandu!! u r looking like a pataka!!

Nandu laughs, and rest joins her!!

Nandu: thats cabir, and u r looking like a rockstar!! :)

Cabir: hamari baat hi alag hai!! :D

All laughs...

Druv: welcome to our college nandu, navi, harshad, sanu, abhi!!

Sparkling stars: thank D!!

Mukti: navi u dint tell me that u were joining our college

(mukti alwaz considered navya as her friend, navya joined nandu's family very late, so she dont knw how much manik and mukti hates nandu, neither nandu tells her anything)

Navya: yaar.. kab batati, yesterday only we came for admissions!!

Dhruv: kal?? kal toh hum yahi the, but tumlogo ko nahi dekha humne!!

Abhi: yaar wo, nandu ne kaha not to disturb u guys, she only said we shud handle our things by ourselves..

Fab5 gets surprised listening to this. they have alwaz seen nandu asking others to get her work done!!

Mukti: what seriosuly nandu ne aisa kaha?

Sanaya: yeah.. she said that...

Harshad: and she even asked us not to tell u guys abt our admissions, as she dint want any special treatment for u from u all as here u all are our seniors...

Abhi: yeah.. she is such a sweetheart u knw..

Navya: i was literally shocked when she actually filled her admission form on her own, and submitted it.

Aliya(sarcastically): wow!! thats an achievement for THE NANDINI KIRLOSKER!!

Nandini gets sad listening all these things about herself..

Nandu: okayy guys, u all continue talking.. i have some work with Principle sir.. i will join u guys later!!

Nandu leaves from there, before anyone cud say anything!!

Sanaya who understands nandu more than others, she also leaves after nandu giving some excuse!!

nandu then goes to a side corner as thereis no one, sits on the stairs, and starts crying!!

here,

manik and mukti are amazed seeing nandu so different from all the other times..

they chat for some time, and The sparklings leave for their classes...

Fab 5...

mukti: bhai, apko nahi lagta ki aaj nandini kuch alag behave kar rahi thi??

manik: yeah.. even i felt so!! she is behaving strange.. and she dint even tried to talk to me... nor she talked to u directly..

Mukti: it was her friends and navya!!

Aliya: leave it na guys.. its her wish!!

Druv and Cabir talks something thru their eyes, and then nods to each other...

Druv: guys.. yaad aaya.. humei mean mujhe and cabor ko freshers day ke preparations ke liye panditji ki help karni hai... we will see u guys later.. chal cabir!!

they lave before mukti manik or aliya cud say anything

Mukti: ab inhe kya ho gaya??

Manik: let it be muks.. chal chalte hain!!

they also leave!!

Meanwhile, with nandu

nandini is crying, just then she feels a hand on her shoulder and gets shocked, she turns and finds sanaya!!

Nandu: sanu, tu yahan??

Sanaya:kya hua nandu?? tu ro kyu rahi hai?

Nandu: nahi.. wo kuch eyes mei chala gaya hai!!

Sanaya: achcha.. i never knew tujhe FAB5 ki baatein aakhon mei lagti hai!!

Nandu again starts crying, and hugs sanaya!!

Nandu: dekha na tune sanu, wo log mujhse kitni nafrat karte hai.. they mock me, for every thing!! especially manik, mukti and aliya..

Sanaya: nandu, u knw na wo log tumse kyu hate karte hai.. but it was never ur fault.. it was elders thinking that u needed to be protected, but isme manik and mukti ko aisa lagta hai ki its because of u... u cant do anything abt it, just let it go!!

Meanwhile, druv and cabir were searching for nandini, and strops listening to sanaya's voice..

Cabir: right nandu, ek din wo bhi samajh jayenge... ki it was not ur fault..

Druv:and u knw na.. hum hai tumhare friends.. and even mukti and manik doesnt hate u, they just feel like that...

Cabir: yeah, aaj morning mei unhone tumhe defend kia tha, when aliya started saying rubbish abt u!!

Sanaya: that aliya.. uski problem kya hai nandu se?? she is such a jealous bitch!!

Cabir: yaar leave it na..and nandu u too dont take such things to ur heart... and give ur life a chance to fly..

druv: and yes, we dont like to see tears in ur beautiful eyes..

Cabir and druv hugs nandu.. sanaya too joins!!

Later they leave for their classes!!


Precap:

(i)
Princi: lets welcome SPACE ACADEMY's new band: SPARKLING STARS


(ii)
Manik: miss nandini kislosker, lets see kiska band better hai.. we are the champions of SPACE.. and u are just a commoner... BRING IT ONN!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow...amazing update ...Thanks for the
lovely and wonderful update...
i jus loved it each and every part...
u penned it very beautifully...
The way write is awsm n outstanding...
i am toatally in love with ur ff...must say u blessed with ur writing skills...keep it up...ur such awsm writer...plss next part we want manan scene...i jus love manan scene...update soon dea...eagerly waiting for next part...once again thanks for the lovely update...love u 👍🏼

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