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.Sandal.

@.Sandal.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#201

loved it damn so emotional update but worthy to read

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Mirabell

@Mirabell

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: Raila1014
FWhile Aman was the wisdom, NK was the passion and people usually respond more to passion so their passion is temporarily gone. So for you NK, a salute Jai Hind!

So well put!!

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Nitya

@nik1310

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Well Choti confess i did not comment on the previous chapter. Am a total sucker for arshi tho...the last one did not go the way i wanted.. despite my knowing very well that the story has to move forward. One can't ignore the very superb premise of this FF...The pre-independence movement.

Then what on the current chapter...

no arshi ? But tell u what, its brilliant writing came alive visually...aman-khushi and arnav's helplessness. I felt all their respective pain and anguish deeply. Great stuff.👍🏼

Neverthless, I felt NK would still be around, khushi and co would have convinced the raizadas to help and kept him alive...story wahan se aage badega England, Revolution and arshi beech mein. But now I am all intrigued on the way forward...Wats gonna happen ? Many probable ways flip through my head now. Waiting to see this unfold ur style...just one small request pl weave in some cute arshi rom moments in all this.😉

oops there I go again...

Lastly, you are one punctual person Choti... very credible with your studies and schedules.

Edited by nik1310 - 10 years ago

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#204

You captured emotions, heart break and utter devastation in each character.. At the beginning I actually thought Arnav and Khuhsi had fought again.. But it was Anjali, her despair over NK and Aman, her concern for Khushi.

Every character is at a loss of how to help the other.. Your story has reached a pivotal point... I look forward to reading how each of them will move forward ...

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...ASB100...

@...ASB100...

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Why did NK have to die? 🥺

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...ASB100...

@...ASB100...

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#206

I'll be back soon with a better comment.

Why must you write so well Chots? This was heart-wrenching. 😭

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#207

That was just heart-breaking. Oh, poor Khushi! :(

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swtsam

@swtsam

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#208

oh poor khushi...cant belive nk is no more...update sooon...

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Phoenixrises

@Phoenixrises

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#209

The emotions that you portrayed were so hurt numbing. I couldn't help but feel Khushi's hysteria, Arnav's helplessness, Aman's grief and Anjali's sorrow. Choti this was a really wonderfully written piece.
NK, let his sacrifice not go in vain...
Thanks for the PM and update again soon.
Love.

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#210

This is so heart wrenching...my heart went out for NK, for khushi, for Aman, for Anjali and Arnav...Arnav has become an outsider in all this...he could do nothing to remove her pain...no words to explain what I felt after reading the chapter...my salute to all the people who sacrificed their lives during the freedom struggle...Bharat Mata ki Jai...Thanks for the PM