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aquagal

@aquagal

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#211

It was completely an emotional update. My heart ached for everyone here. Anjali, Aman, Khushi for losing their friend. Arnav for being helplessly watching Khushi in so much pain but not being able to help her.

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#212

That was an emotional and amazingly written chapter...the bond which you have shown between Aman and Khushi is awesome. I am guessing that you are going to bring Arnav in NK place...they all are broken and now they need someone who can be more strong and confident.

Brilliant chapter dear!

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cocoamob

@cocoamob

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Posted: 10 years ago

#213

Even thought I was expecting this to happen and that Khushi would be devasted, I must say this chapter is way beyond my expectations.

First, Anjali and Aman's reaction to the news - how broken Aman is at the loss of his best friend and driving force, and how Anjali thinks of NK, then her brother and Khushi and finally holds Aman to share her grief. Finally, Khushi's initial disbelief, then her hysterical reaction to the news and finally accepting reality. Superb writing!

Khushi breaking down and Aman trying to hold her reminded me of the scene in the show when Khushi has this telepathic moment that Arnav is hurt and tries to run out of the marriage hall and NK holds her. This is during the second wedding.

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#214

Choti, you have written the emotions so beautifully. Hats off to you. That was heart-wrenching agony Anaji, Aman and Khushi were going through. I am crying buckets after reading this chapter. Cannot say anything else...

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canapoem

@canapoem

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#215

Choti, you do know that you are awesome right!!!!

Me, growing up in India, during my teenage years when I would hear stories of freedom struggle from my grand parents, a unique kind of excitement, a unique kind of happiness and pride would run in my veins.

My great grandfather (Mother's grandfather) who lived until his mid 90s, was such a strong disciple of Gandhiji, always trying to follow Gandhian principals and I think I have never seen him in any attire other than a white dhoti and a white kurta. When he would come to our house holding his walking stick, all the kids in my neighborhood would comment that Gandhi thata (grand father) has come to our house and my heart would swell with happiness and pride that my thata is compared with Gandhiji.

Today after reading this update, I felt the same feeling I used to feel all those years ago.

Kudos to you Choti for writing this amazing story. Atleast many of us have grown up back in India and we have read and heard stories about these great freedom fighters. But you are just 18 and having grown up in this part of the world, to bring out the same feeling of oneness among the people and to show their immense patriotism in your story is just amazingly awesome.

Come here you, I just want to give you a big hug. 🤗

Edited by canapoem - 10 years ago

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#216

oh that was a heart wrenching update - tooo good choti -

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#217

We knew this was coming , sooner or later khushi would have found the truth . NK stole the lime light without his presence in the whole update .

Its very difficult to believe that your loved one is no more , who was very much alive till yesterday . NK has marked his place in Aman - Anjali & Khushi's heart forever .

Khushi's emotions were penned to the T , her initial confidence when she went to jail to meet NK crumbled like house of cards . Her agony is very heart wrenching .

Simply superb , loved this update

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dev25

@dev25

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#218

Choti...

Brilliant Story and especially the last chapter

I could empathize and fell the anguish of Kushi for the loss of NK

You are such a brilliant writer, from your pen all types of genre come out superbly ⭐️

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#219

amazing part! khushi is not able to take that her dear friend NK is no more.. her pain brought tears in eyes.. both aman-khushi cried for their best friend.. well agree with aman khushi will need arnav a lot now.. lets see what arnav does? will he return to england or be with his wife..

thanks for mail 😊

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#220

NK the leader...i admire him...anjali aman and finally Kushi, their pain is unbearable...feel bad for Kushi the way she is looking for NK in jail cell to cell...but thats the life at that time...so many people died at very very young age...

now what Kushi will do...will she let arnav in????or she feel guilty because her friend died 10days ago and she is enjoying her life...very very curious for the next chapter...

thanks for the update...

Edited by kushiarnav1 - 10 years ago