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Posted: 8 years ago
LOVELY UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY SUPERB AND FANTASTIC UPDATE.
GARV IS SO SWEET AND INTELLIGENT. HOW HE DID DRAMA INFRONT OF KAPOOR UNCLE AND AUNT WAS AWSSOME.
HE IS SO LOVING THATS Y HE DENIED TO GO TO DEV HOUSE.
LOVED PARIOM AND VARUNIA MOMENTS TOO.
LOVED LAST PART SO MUCH.
UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update Merry Xmas and Happy New year 🥳😊👍🏼
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Part 556
In VM
Christmas spl
Afterbreakfast
In garvyal room!
Garvyal spending time.
Garv:(ask) aj k din Kya karna chahogi?
Payal:(tells) family party k Baad apne friend se milke aao.
Garv:(tells) ussi k sath hun.
Payal: dev se milke aane k liye bolri hun.
Garv: I can't go payal.
Payal: garv mujhe rest karna hai tumhe nahin.
Garv:(divert her) Tum change hogayi ho.
Payal:(get confuse) Kyun Kya hua? Mujhe?
Garv:(complain like a kid)ek time tha jab Tum Meri company enjoy karti thi, mere liye aana chahti thi, but jabse se little vadera ki news ayi hai Tum mujhse away rehnA like karti ho.
Payal:(smiles) how cute.
Garv:(tells) mujhe bura lagra hai aur Tum praise kar rahi ho.
Payal:(tells) sad boy k role main cute lagre ho.(tells) two terms aur uske Baad bade hojana.
Garv:(ask) kyun?
Payal:(tells) little garv aanewala hai. I have to train him when you spoil him.
Garv:(tells) juilet, iam sorry, Apni family main ladies first ka trend hai.
Payal:(tells) isliye toh bolri hun. Grow hojao.
Garv:(tells) u r missunderstanding me, iam so much very much to much sure little payal is coming and next time little garv will come.
Payal:let's see actual day.
Garv: okay:(smiles) Abhi kuch Khana hai Kya?
Payal: nahin.
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In sisters room!
Jrgunjan reading news papers.
Vaderasehgal siblings:(tells) surprise for you.
Jrgunjan:(ask) kaun?
Rahul:(enters with gift) Merry Christmas
Jrgunjan:(get surprise) Tum yahan.
Siblings went..
Rahul: aj merry Christmas toh socha tumse milke aaun.
Jrgunjan: Merry Christmas.:(smiles)
Rahul:(tells) APNA hand do.plz
Jrgunjan:(ask) kyun?
Rahul:(tells) gift hai.
Jrgunjan:(extend her hand)
Rahul:(unwrap box and take watch and tie on her wrist) kaisa laga.?
Jrgunjan: very pretty. Thanks and sorry. Rahul
Rahul:(tells) thanks ka reason Samajhgaya main, sorry kyun?
Jrgunjan:(tells) I didn't gift u.
Rahul:(tells) mere liye tumhare dil main space milgayi yeh hi enough hai gun.
Jrgunjan:(ask) sabse mila tumne.?
Rahul: haan sabse milke tumse Milne aya hun.
Jrgunjan:(ask) coffee juice kuch leke aun.
Rahul: no need,(look around) yeh dolls yahan.
Jrgunjan: vivaaniya simple k hain.
Rahul: oh achcha.
They continue their talk.
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In pariom room!
Pariom spending time.
Pari deciding dress for party
Vyom:(start romancing)
Pari:(push him away)
Vyom:(ask) Kya hua?
Pari: iam busy in selecting dress. And you are romancing.
Vyom:(tells) party evening main hai. Dress Baad main bhi final hosakta hai.
Pari: matching main ready hone main time lagra hai isliye Abhi se preparetion karna chahiye, unlike u only dressup hi nahin hona hai.
Vyom:(tells) Tum aise hi achchi ho.
Pari:(smiles) I know but yeh Apna first Christmas hai aftermarriege. So I have to ready more then more.
Vyom:(tells) oh toh yeh baat hai.
Pari: not really, sab brothers bhi toh hai complete family.
Vyom:(ask) vadera and khanna new member aye Kahan hai?
Pari: didis k andar hai, only personal meeting left hai.
Vyom: right saying.
Pari: I hope secret reveal nahin ho koi guest aye toh.
Vyom:(tells) don't worry. Garv bhaiya have ideas of hiding things.
Pari: yes. Woh toh hai.
Vyom:(tells) tum bhi kuch Kam nahin ho, party preparetion se pehle dress final kar rahi ho.
Pari:(smiles) let's get back to work.
Vyom: okay I will decide mine.
Pari: okay.
They find their dresses.
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In varunia room!
Nia is working.
Her phone rings.
Nia:(answer) hello mamma.
Mihika:(tells) hello Nia, kaisi ho.
Nia: theek hun, merry Christmas.
Mihika: Merry Christmas.
Nia: aaplog agaye vecation se.
Mihika: yes, do din hue. Tumlog kab aye.
Nia: last week.(smiles) And aapko pata hai mera promotion hua hai. Garv bhaiya payal is becoming parents.
Mihika: congratulations.(smiles)
Nia: hamare riddhima di aur Aryan bhaiya bhi.
Mihika: phir toh double congratulations.
Nia: thanks.
Mihika:(tells) welcome,
Nia:(tells) main aapko pehle hi batanewali thi but phone busy tha. Uske Baad chalegaye humlog.
Mihika:oh achcha.
Nia:(ask) papa Kahan hai?
Mihika: preparetion kar raha hai.
Nia: okay fine.
Mihika: important baat payal ki care Karne k liye badon se learn karke karna.
Nia: okay mom.
Mihika: bye.
Nia:(endcall)
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In garvyal room!
Doctor checking payal whose BP increase.
Garvyal is worried along divaan
Payal:(ask) doctor sab theek toh haina.?
Doctor: sab theek hai, try to be happy hai. Don't worry and take rest (Tells) Mr garv I want to talk to u about her proscribtion.
Garv: okay:(to his wife) Tum family se baat karo main aate hun:(went along doctor)
Payal:(get emotional)
Diya:(ask) Kya hua payal?
Payal: iam not good mother.
Diya:(consoles) don't worry payal, sometimes BP increase hojata hai. Tension se hi nahin diet se bhi hojata hai.:(wipe her tears)
Vivaan: she is right.
Garv:(comes back join her)
Divaan: you take care her we will leave:(went)
Payal:(ask) sab theek toh haina.
Garv:(tells) Abhi toh doctor ne bola na sab theek hai.
Payal:(ask) doctor ne alone main Kya kaha.
Garv:(smiles))tumhe thinking allow nahin hai, healthy homemade food Lena hai, Khush rehna hai. Jitna hosake rest karna hai. If needed hospital jaana hai?
Payal:(tells) Tum worried kyun the.
Garv:(smiles) achcha woh, actually mujhe nahin pata tha, common baat hai, tension hogayi.
Payal:(get relief) thankgod.
Garv:(praise her) by the way iam impress, itne jaldi love hogaya mother and baby main.
Payal:(tells) same here.
Garv:(smiles)
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In VM temple!
Garv:(arrives and sat down and join hands, inmind emotional) thank you God for saving them, woh dono ko sari khushiyan Dena, chahe toh mujhe problem dedijiye, main complain nahin karunga. But plz payal and baby ko kuch mat karna. Humdono aapke godgift k liye best parents banenge,actully I will be god dad. I promise. Give me strength to handle payal, otherwise main emotional habit se daradunga, aj jaise
Sehgalsisters:(arrives) garv Tum yahan.
Garv:(get up and tells) nothing my buas, thoda dargaye tha, you God ko bolra tha brave Karne k liye.
Jaanvi: it's natural, vivaan gunjan bhi ekdusre k liye aise panic karte, Tum wohlog k here ho toh panic karoge.
Maansi: jaanvi is right.
Garv:(tells) oh I see.
Jaanvi: don't worry and thinks names.
Garv:(smiles and went)
Maansi: kitna love hai dono main.wow
Jaanvi: I agree. Best Jodi hai.
Maansi: god ,payal aur garv ko problem se bachadena.
Jaanvi: don't worry.
Vaderasisters:(arrives) Kya hua didis.
Maansi: pray karne agaye. Garv payal k liye.
Diya: same here.i was worried for them. Past yaad agaya tha.
Madhu: don't worry, (sign to toward god idol) god will save them from anyproblem.
Poonam: I agree with you.
Maansi: party Karen ya nahin.
Diya: we can't stop di.
Maansi: okay.
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In mall!
Kidswear section.
After family members shopping
Garv:(comes) excuse, can u show me girls wear and boys wear. Christmas spl
Shopkeeper: apke bachon ki age Kya hogi.
Garv:(smiles)unborn k liye chahiye.
Shopkeeper: okay sir.:(went to bring)
Brothers:(arrive) shopping hogayi.
Garv: unborns ki shopping hona hai.
Vyom: oh ho tobedad shopping:(take out phone) payal di bhabhi ko batana padega?
Garv:(tells) no need, surprise karunga. So u can be quite.
Vaderabrothers:(made face)
Shopkeeper arrives with dresses.
Garv:(lift and check) wow kitna pretty haina. Bhaiyon?
Vyom: bahot pretty, next Christmas main achcha lagega little vadera ko.
Varun: I agree.
Garv:(pick fews) plz pack this.
Shopkeeper:okay sir:(went)
Garv:(inmind) I hope tumhe mere gifts achche lage payal Meri juilet. Tumhe jo anger ayega woh nAhin ayega vadera baby k liye forgive kardogi mujhe.
Brothers: (ask) what happened.
Garv:(tells) payal kaisi hogi sochra hun.
Varun: sab hai payal di bhabhi k sath, don't worry.
Garv:(smiles)
Shopkeeper arrives with packs.
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Back to VM garvyal room!
Garvyal arrives sat
Garv:(close her eyes) wait for me to say open your eyes.
Payal:(tells) okay.
Garv:(unwrap small boxopen it) you can open your eyes.
Payal:(open her eyes get surprise and take little vaderagift) two varieties.
Garv: ek Meri little princess k liye, yeh tumhare next time little prince k liye.
Payal:(smiles) so sweet. Thanks dad from little prince and little princess.
Garv:(tells) welcome from dad.:(close her eyes)
Payal:(ask) again kyun?
Garv:(close her eyes again) be a good girl
Payal:(smiles)
Garv:(inmind) god, don't let payal get angry and:(open big box) now you can open your eyes, and don't get angry with me.
Payal:(open her eyes saw red and white dress)
Garv:(ask) kaisa hai?
Payal:(tells) achcha hai but Kya need thi,?
Garv:(tells) what r u saying payal, hum teeno ka first Christmas hai, jab little vadera ki news mili, gift due tha na. Iam sorry if I hurt u and if you forgive me you will wear it.
Payal:(meltdown)I forgive you.thank you, I love you.
Garv: I love you to.(smiles)
Payal:(tells) tumhari selection bahot achchi hai.
Garv:(side hug her) I know tabhi tumhe love kiya hai. Khud best hun ya nahin notice hi nahin kiya tumhare liye.
Payal:(smiles) u r not unstraight able garv.
Garv:(tells) I am ready to stay unstraight able for u to make me straight.
They spend times.
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In evening in VM
Everyone gather for Christmas party along guest.
Garv:(whisper) someone is looking gorgeous.
Payal:( smiles,whisper) someone is looking dashing
Garv:(smiles)
Vyom:(tells) Santa k aane main time toh kyun na hum dance karenge.
Family get worried for garvyal.
Garv:(assure them and take his wife to dance,whisper) don't worry.
Payal:(smiles)
Pariom varunia also join.
Garv:(did slow dance wither)
Ragun also join them.
Diya:(tells) Kash riddhima Aryan rimjhim kv asakte toh family complete lagti.
Vivaan Romaansi ranjaanvi madhvihaan: agree:(smiles)
Garvyal:(join them)
Diya:(ask in slowtone) problem toh nahin hui na payal?
Payal:(inslowtone)no mom iam fine. It was slow dance
Garv: yes don't worry.
Diya:(tells) okay. Good.
Ragun bring sr.vaderasehgal couple for dance.
After some times.
Everyone went for dinner.
Garv went inside.
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In garvyal room!
Garvyal having dinner.
Payal:(tells) dancing way achcha tha.
Garv:(tells) thanks.
After dinner.
Garv:(opening medicine) medicine time.
Payal:(ask) important hai.
Garv:(tells) yes, Tum aur vadera baby strong hojaoge. Aur phir vaderababy fast fast bada hoga aur hum pick karenge.(ask) open your mouth.
Payal:(open her mouth)
Garv:(make her eat medicine and water) we are done.
Payal:(tells) iam sorry to scare you.
Garv:(cover themself with bedsheet) u didn't do anything, mujhe idea nahin haina, isliye dargaye. But don't worry, god se wish kara main k thoda strong kardene k liye mujhe tumhare liye,
Payal:(tells) Tum already strong ho. Jo bhi hua love k bcoz hua? Jo tumhe mujhse hai, vadera baby se hora hai
Garv:(smiles)
Payal:(tells) don't worry and focus on your career. Everyone is here with me.
Garv: I know. But I have right to be happy for you and worry for you.(ask) haina
Payal:(tells) hain hai. But tumhari speciality hai, worrieds ko happy karna.
Garv:(smiles) okay I will be happy:(ask) mere gift main comfortable thi Na Tum.
Payal: yes. But baby bada hona start hogaya toh nahin pehnongi.
Garv: no problem, tab k liye shopping karunga hum online.
Payal: okay.
Garv:(ask) rest Karen,
Payal: okay.
They take rest.
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In pariom room!
After three hrs
Pariom return from dev' Christmas party.
Vyom:(tells) garv bhaiya ko boldeta hun, phone karke, dev ki Christmas party se agaye.
Pari: no need, next day bolenge, otherwise teeno disturb hojayenga.
Vyom: you are right.
Pari:(ask) practice karne main achcha lagra ya nahin doll k sath.
Vyom: thoda SA achcha laga.
Pari: good.:(ask) how was iam looking in party
Vyom: as always beautiful.:(ask) ek secret bataun.
Pari: why not.
Vyom: Tum childhood main bhi beautiful lagti thi.
Pari:(ask) phir bataya kyun nahin.
Vyom: hum best friends jaise nahin the, Tom and Jerry the. Kaise bolta?
Pari:(tells) you know what, Tum bhi cute lagte the. Childhood main. Kahin baar impress bhi hogayi hun. Tumhare badonwali acts se. Tom and Jerry relation tha toh nahin bola.
Vyom: no problem copycat.
Pari: not again.
Vyom:(smiles) gift kaisa laga tha.
Pari: achcha hai.
Vyom: abse ipad hi party plans karna. Tumhe pata garv bhaiya two types ka dress laye the.Little vadera k liye
Pari: payal di ne bola.show bhi kiya.
Vyom:next Christmas main cute lagenge dono.
Pari: yes.
They take rest.
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In varunia room!
Varunia spending time
Varun:(ask)after marriege Christmas kaisa laga?
Nia: bahot achcha but I wish mamma papa bhi sath hote.:(getsad)
Varun: no problem, Christmas main nahin hai toh Kya hua, I will try to bring them.
Nia:(tells) no it's OK.
Varun:(ask) kyun?
Nia:somedays pehle aye the, Kam hoga. AJ hi pata Chala.
Varun: no problem.
Nia:(tells) by the way yahan Christmas bahot kuch intresting hua hoga na Christmas main.
Varun:(tells whole stories)
Nia:(laugh)
Varun:(normally)ek baar toh dad missing the, sabko laga tha death hogayi,Christmas k din aye the.
Nia: oh my god, I hope theek se aye dad.
Varun: haan.
Nia:(ask) Kahan the.
Varun:(lies) koi hotel main the.
Nia: safe and alright the na dad.
Varun: yes.
Nia: thankgod.
Varun: yes thankgod.
Nia: let's rest.
Varun: okay
They take rest.







































































































































Edited by Ranjan-Maanak - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
LOVELY UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY SUPERB AND MIND-BLOWING UPDATE.
LOVED GARVYAL LOVELY MOMENTS TOO MUCH.
GARV IS SO CARING. LOVED GOW HE IS CARING THE PAYAL .
LOVED PARIOM ROMANTIC PART SO MUCH.
LOVED VARUNIA PART TOO.
LOVED JARGUNJAN AND RAHUL PART TOO.
LOVED THE SHOPPING DONE BY GARV FOR WIFE AND NEWLY BORN.
NOW UPDATE SION DEAR.
MARRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR DEAR.
TAKE CARE. 😊
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Part 557
In VM
Afterbreakfast in morning
In garvyal room!
Garvyal spending time.
Someone knock.
Garvyal get separate
Garv:(ask) kaun.?
Pari: dev aye hain. Aapdono se Milne.
Garv: oh no.
Dev:(enters) why oh no.(look his wife) hi what should I call u? Payal, payal bhabhi, Mrs payal garv vadera.
Payal: payal.
Dev:(give her buquet) belate congratulations for marriege? Payal.
Payal:(smiles) thanks dev.
Dev:(ask) payal tum toh class mate thi Na garv ki toh batao na kaisa tha yeh
Garv:(interupt and tells) jaisa ab hun waisa tha, one head one nose two eyes two ears two hands to legs one heart.
Payal:(control her laughter)
Dev:(jokes) oh my god ab itna jealous hai toh tumlog marriege k time Kya hota mera.
Garv:(tells) jealous nahin hun main. Itne time Baad mile hain toh baat karna chahta tha.(take him and went)
Payal:(laugh then talk with little vadera) I wish Tum sunsakte toh mere jaise laugh karte dad k acts pe, no problem, jab Tum aaoge toh record karke sunaungi:(tAke phone and start telling to her child)
Vadera sisters arrives.
Payal:(save and tells) achcha kiya agaye:(play recoding)
Vaderasisters get amaze.
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In playground!
Vaderasehgal brothers and dev arrives.
Garv: hum brothers sisters weekends par yahan play karte the.
Dev:(praise) nice playground
Garv:(ask) tujhe love hua ya nahin.
Dev: nahin:(ask)tumlog k in-law kaise hain.
Garv: mamma papa is no more. Hamare boarding shift hone k kuch time Baad unki death hogayi thi, tabse payal Pari friend +familypart hain.
Dev: sorry.
Vaderabrothers: it's OK.
Dev:(smiles) congrats, for becoming brothers of eachother.
Vyom:(tells) family tradition hai hamara.
Dev:(ask) waise tumlog kar Kya rahe ho ajkal.
Garv: lawyer banna hun, chachu se tips lera hun
Dev: vyom tum
Vyom:(dramatically keep head on friend shoulder) mere luck main dad hai, but na love karte hain help, saara time madvi Pari ko dete hain.love and help bhi. Except dad ki company kuch nahin hai mere pass: mujhe mandir main chod do(act as cry)
Brothers get amaze
Dev:(smiles) vyom, Tum a 2 z same cute ho. Varun jai and mayur
Varun: iam working as intern in city hospital
Dev: wow
Sehgalbrothers: humlog kabhi office jaate hain.
Dev:(ask) by the way payal rest kyun kar rahi thi.
Garv: BP problem hai.
Dev: oh I see.
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Back to VM
In garvyal room!
Vaderasisters spending time.
Madvi: gun di, tobe jiju aapke liye Kya gift laye?
Jrgunjan: watch.
Vaderasisters:(tells) congrats.
Garv:(comeback with milk) milk time of tobe mom and little vadera.
Sisters went.
Payal:(tells) garv, morning main milk drink nahin hota mujhse.
Garv:(tells) okay no problem.(take phone) payal, main sochra tha, Jo brothers room hai USKO kids room kardenge, phir humsabke kids hamare types rahenge sath main.
Payal: nice idea.
Garv:(tells) Tum design fine and final karo.
Payal:(checking)
Garv:(ask) kuch achcha laga.
Payal: tough hai
They start discussion.
Payal:(felt thirsty) water.
Garv:(give her milk)
Payal:(get busy in checking and sip milk without notice)
Garv:(inmnd) thankgod payal drinking milk.
Payal:(ask) Kya sochre ho?
Garv:(tells) yehi ki Tum kitne amazing mom ho,vaderababy k liye untasty milk drink kiya.
Payal:(tells) Tum bhi toh amazing husband and dad ho, humdono ko hungry rehne nahin diya.
Garv:(getshock) Tum payal ho ya private investigator?
Payal: apne husband ki wife
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In pariom room!
Pariom laugh hearing garv talk.
Vyom:(tells) father aise hain toh son kaise hunge. But I hope girl aye payal di bhabhi types sober.
Pari: garv bhaiya bhi toh achche hain.
Vyom: I agree but payal di bhabhi best hai.
Pari: garv bhaiya bhi best hai.
They debates.
Varunia:(arrives) what's going on.
Pari:(tells) kuch nahin vyom ko garv bhaiya se problem hai.
Vyom:(tells) secret rakhne ki habit se, payal bhabhi bilkul aisi nahin hai, that's y I want niece.
Varun: garv bhaiya don't want us to suffer
Pari: payal di bhi secret rakhte hain.
Nia: I think we should wait some months, uske Baad personally dekhenge new member hai kaun? We should think name instead fight
Pari: you are right Nia.
Varun:(ask) if u don't mind ek baat ask karun? Aapdono se.
Pariom:(tells) yes?
Varun:(ask) aaplog kab promote kar rahe ho. Humlog ko.
Vyom:(ask) bachon k bachche Hote hain kya?
Pari:(smiles)
Varun: but aaplog to adult ho.
Vyom: yes isliye tumlog promote karo humein.
Varunia went from there with shyness.
Pari: Tum bhi na bicharon ko shy kardiya.
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In varunia room!
Varunia arrives.
Varun: vyom bhaiya bhi na to much hai.
Nia:(smiles) but mistake tumhari hAi.
Varun: its every younger brother right to become CM.
Nia:(get confuse,ask) cm kaise bansakte ho, Tum toh doctor ho.
Varun: Meri innocent wife, cm means cheif minister nahin hota, chachu mamu hota hai, bcoz payal di bhabhi hamari sister bhi hai bhabhi se pehle.
Nia: OK samajhgayi.(tells) I have read somewhere, tobe parents babymoon par jaate hain toh Kya hum kuch nahin Karen?
Varun:(tells) kab ka decide karun.
Nia:(check phone) three-month complete hone k Baad.
Varun: okay. Fine, yahin k resort main send karenge.
Nia: good idea. But hospital close main hona chahiye payal di bhabhi k liye.
Varun: okay boss. I must tell you, Tum jitni achchi family member hona utni achchi doctor banogi. Mujhse bhi best.
Nia:(smiles) mere liye Tum best doctor ho.
Varun:(tells) thanks. I hope Jo tumhe aur family ko lagra hai, Sach ho.
Nia: ofcourse Sach hoga
Varun:(smiles) thanks.
Nia: you are most welcome varun(smiles)
Varun:(smiles) tumhe badfeel toh nahin hua na vyom bhaiya ki teasing se.
Nia: I know he is funloving person. Mind kyun karna chahiye.
Varun: correct ho.
Nia:(tells) forget it OK.
Varun: okay
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After lunch back to garvyal room!
Garvyal spending time.
Payal:(tells) Maine mom se inspire hoke name socha hai. Hamare son k liye.
Garv:(ask) Kya.
Payal:(tells)Parag.
Garv:(tells) okay then, girl ka name pragati hoga.
Payal:(ask) AJ office kyun nahin gaye.
Garv:(tells) dad ne order kiya k unki aur Meri beti k sath rahun, sath mein mera mood bhi tha.
Payal:(smiles)
Garv:(tells) be happy like this, even after becoming mom, one time pragati k ears aane do, main bolta hun, jabhi mom silent hojaye tickling karna.
Payal:(tells) main bhi boldungi Parag ko aane k Baad tumhe yahan wahan ghumne force Kare cry karke.
Garv:(tells) dekhte hain kiski band bajagi. Meri ya tumhari.
Payal: okay.
Garv:(ask) what shall I bring for u.
Payal:(tells) no need be with me.
Garv:(ask keeping hand over tummy) aur pragati ko?
Payal:(tells) it's Parag, he don't want anything.
Garv:(smiles) okay.
Payal:(ask) ek baat batao,mere unwell hone se angry toh nahin hona tum.
Garv:(normally)I understand Jo bhi hua woh bhulna tough hai, but ek advice Dena chahta hun, Jo baat tumhe hurt karti hai usko ignore karo, baby aane tak nahin humesha k liye, kyunke jitni hurt tum hoti ho, main, family, baby hurt hote hain.
Payal:(tells) i know garv, main bhi sab bhulna chahti hun, but nahin hora:(start crying)
Garv:(hug her and get emotional) payal, main tumhe hurt nahin karna chahta, happy dekhna chahta hun.
Payal:(hug her back)
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In VM Hall!
Family spending time.
Garvyal:(join family)
Garv:(ask) dad, I aap mujhe aur bhaiyon ko sonography main baby dekhna teach kariye
Ranvir:(tells) garv pehle heartbeat sunna hota hai, one week k gap k Baad dekhsakte ho.
Garv: okay.
Pari: tobe parents k sath extra people nahin jasakte.
Madhu: jasakte hain, infact hamare time bhi humlog jaate the.
Vyom:(ask) doctor bolte hunge na ladka hai ya ladki.
Maansi: God ko batadi thi wish toh Doctor se puchna nahin pada.
Pari: wow nice trick.
Vihaan: garv tune koi Naam toh socha hoga.
Garv: every second new name aate hai, pehle pragati tha, ab pankhudi hai.
Madhu: payal Tum batao.
Garv: payal ko Parag name achcha laga.
Madhu: wow mother daughter ki kya tuning hai, di ne Apna and vivaan bhaiya k name ka first letter se decide kiya garv is name.
Payal:(smiles) thanks.
Vyom: i hope drama King na ho payal di bhabhi ka beta apne dad jaise.
Garv: oh hello, what do u mean?
Vyom: aap as Parag dramebaaz the:(wink and went from there running)
Garv::(laugh)becareful:(went)
Trio brothers went behind them
Family members laugh.
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In playground!
Brothers playing.
Garv:(tells) bhaiyon, mujhe tumlog se important baat karna tha.
Brothers: haan.
Garv:(tells) new year k liye easy games sochlo, Jo sab enjoy Karen. Sply payal.
Vyom:(ask) Kya hua?
Garv: past se worried hai.
Vyom:(get angry) yeh sab woh chinky k aane se hora tha, Pari ko get out Karne dena tha aap.
Garv:(tells) vyom, yeh time Kisi ko blame Karne ka nahin, payal ko handle Karne k hai, baar baar BP problem hona theek nahin payal ko is condition.
Varun:(tells)be possitive my brother, aap babymoon ki baat kyun nahin karte.
Garv:(get confuse) babymoon Kya hota hai.
Varun:(tells) babymoon main tobe parents jaate 3months complete hone k Baad.
Vyom:(laugh and tells) yeh baat main Parag ko bataunga, me uske dad ko babymoon pata nahin hai.
Garv:(tells) my dear brother, hamara thirth baby nahin aara hai. First aara hai. I mean aari hai. Kaise pata hoga, Varun toh doctor hai.
Vyom:(ask) garv bhaiya aap happy toh haina.
Garv: happy bhi hun, tension bhi hori hai. Kahin phir se kuch wrong hogaya toh. Kaise handle karenge,ek baar three-months complete hogaye toh I will be very much happy.
Varun:(tells) don't worry garv bhaiya, sab theek hoga.
Vyom:(tells) Varun is right. Don't worry aaplog jab sath hote ho problem nahin aati. Jaise aap dono ek dusre k sath safe ho, baby aaplog k sath safe.god is with u both 3
Garv: main yahi chahta hun.
Sehgalbrothers: chalen ab.
Garvarun vyom: okay.
They went.
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Back to VM Hall!
Family members is spending time.
Brothers arrives.
Diya:(ask) itna time Kahan lagaya.
Garv:(tells) humlog play kar rahe the mom.
Vivaan: hamari beti aur tumlog ki beti ya bete par focus karo.
Garv: okay dad.
Foursome brothers (write something on paper and give their sis)
Payal:(ask) yeh Kya hai.
Vyom: payal di bhabhi, aapko garv bhaiya and Parag k sath babymoon par jaana hai, uske liye place hai.
Family smiles including payal
Varun:(tells) decide kariye Kahan jaana hai, humlog sab manage kardenge.
Vyom: yes payal di bhabhi.
Garv:(ask) chits do main decide karta hun.
Foursome brothers: tobe mom ka babymoon hota hai, tobefather ka nahin.
Garv:(tells) how rude.
Vyom: don't be sad garv bhaiya, don't worry mujhe so idea Mila hai
Garv:(tells) payal k Baad decide karun.
Vyom:(tells) babymoon ki preparetion karlijiye, packing karlijiye APNI aur payal di bhabhi ki.
Garv:(act to be upset) thank you.
Family laugh
Brothers: welcome.:(smiles)
Garv: I will see u all.
Brothers:(tells) dekhiye:(lift sleeves and show muscle from different-different angle)
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In evening after dinner!
In garvyal room!
Garvyal spending time
Garv:(ask) kuch Khana hai, sweet or sour
Payal: sweet.
Garv:(get up and tells) I will be back.
Payal: okay,
Garv:(went)
Payal:(smiles)
After sometimes.
Garv:(arrive with sweet) here is your sweet. And carrots also, teethache nahin hoga tumhe.
Payal:(tells) thanks.
Garv: welcome.(think something and taste sweet) now you can eat.
Payal:(ask) Kya hua? Tumhe Khana hai
Garv: check karna bhulgaya tha fresh hai ya nahin.
Payal:(tells) everyone loves me and baby, unfresh sweet kyun rakhenge.
Garv: I trust family a lot, but cakes par trust nahin hai.(smiles)
Payal: you are right:(ask) Tum jab bhaiyon k sath aye toh, tumhari shirt wet thi:(ask) kyun? Did u cry.?
Garv:(tells)eyes main kuch chalegaya tha toh to tears agaye.(changetopic) forget it, have fun payal. Afterall Yeh hi toh time hai jab relax Karne milta hai. Otherwise khudko bhuljate hain ladies
Payal:(tells) okay.
Garv:(ask) babymoon k liye Kahan jayen?
Payal: I will tell later
Garv:okay. Let's rest
They take rest.
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In pariom room!
Pariom spending time.
Pari:(ask) babymoon idea kiska hai?
Vyom: Varun ka.
Pari: wow.
Vyom: haan.
Pari:(tells) u should change, otherwise nephews niece Kya sochenge.
Vyom: kuch nahin. Jaise mere siblings hain waise unke babies hunge. World best.
Pari: what a believe
Vyom: Jo bhi hai mera hai.
Pari: as u wish. Well ek baat except karna hoga.
Vyom:(ask) Kya?
Pari: Tum best dad banoge. Jaise best CM ho
Vyom: hum kuch decide kiya tha.
Pari: main nahin forget kari, future k liye bolri hun.
Vyom: okay.
Pari: ek baat puchun tumse.
Vyom: kyun nahin.
Pari:(ask)ghalti se hamare baby ki news toh divorse toh nahin kardoge.
Vyom:(ask) sudden kyun ask kar rahi ho:(getworried) kahin.
Pari:(tells) mb jb maasi k Baad mom ki turn thi Na.riddhima di payal di k Baad Meri turn agayi toh.kya karoge, practically bolri hun.
Vyom:(laugh and tells) good night, zyada mat socho, mera toh pata nahin but tumhara brain divorce kardega:(take rest)
Pari:(inmind) god, kaisa husband hai, pehle vyom ko straight kariye, phir history repeat kariye.
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In varunia room!
Varunia spending time.
Nia:(ask) vyom bhaiya aur Tum three ne Abhi kyun payal di bhabhi ko, surprise kyun nahin kiya.
Varun:(tells) tumhe yaad haina? Payal di bhabhi k past k baremain yaad aarea hai, isliye humlog ko divert Karne k liye kaha
Nia:(feltbad for her)
Varun: don't be sad
Nia: sunke achcha nahin laga payal di bhabhi k liye, us idiot k bcoz payal di bhabhi APNI life k khushiyun k pal ko enjoy nahin kar rahe.
Varun: we have to do something for her.
Nia: but Kya?
Varun: Kal sochenge
Nia: okay.
Varun:(ask) new year ka resulation Kya hai?
Nia:(tells) perfect d.i.l banne ki try payal di bhabhi aur pari di bhabhi k jaise.
Varun:(tells) don't worry, don't tell d.i.l to yourself, kyunke yahan shadi tak d.i.l s.i.l hote hain. Baki k din beta beti ya jiju ko bhaiya bolte hain,
Nia: aur payal di bhabhi Pari di bhabhi bolte hain right.
Varun:(praise her)how intelligent.
Nia:(tells) u know what, mujhe yahan sab APNI family lagte hain. Thanks for making me member of this awesome family. Mom dad bhi amazing hai.
Varun: don't thanks me Tum ho hi itni achchi toh achche hi log milenge.
Nia:(tells) thanks.
Varun:(tells) welcome.
Nia: let's rest.
Varun: okay.
They take rest.


























































































































Edited by Ranjan-Maanak - 8 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY SUPERB AND NYC UPDATE.
LOVED EACH AND EVERY PART.
LOVED THE IDEA OF VARUN TO SEND GARVYAL FOR BABYMOON.
LOVED GARV SO MUCH CARE FOR PAYAL. PAYAL IS SO LUCKY. LOVED THE SWEET NOK JHOK OF COUPLE OVER BABY BOY AND BABY GIRL. LOVED THE NAME DECIDED BY THEM FOR BABIES AS PARAG FOR BOY AND PRAGATI FIR GIRL.
PARIOM PART WAS SO CUTE. LOVED VYOM TEASING TO VARUNIA.
VARUNIA PART WAS ALSO AWESOME.
NOW UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE.
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I will b late in updating next part of new year spl
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Part 558
In VM Hall!
New year eve
Afterbreakfast
Family spending time
Payal is lost somewhere
Vyom:(tells) thankgod higher studies finish hogaye, otherwise humlog wrestler banjate.
Pari:(ask) aisa kyun vyom.
Vyom:(tells)family k behalf bhi cake khate the humlog.
Pari: elder younger brothers, chod k aana tha vyom ko. Santa Claus banke aata tha toh maasa aata.
Vyom:(tells) mujhe pehle bolna tha, bada dil hai mera, main tumlog ko Mr and Mrs Claus banadeta tha. Woh bhi Chinese Santa Claus se shadi karake
Everyone laugh.
Varun: payal di bhabhi last year ka kaunsa din aapka favourite tha
Payal:(tells) woh din tha, jab baseless blame sunke bhi garv ne mujhe Bina sorry except kiya mujhe. Before marriege bhi bahot support kiya, mujhe realise Karaya k garv mere liye friend se zyada hai. Sometimes lagta hai, garv nahin hai:(get emotional)
Garv:(ask) what do u mean by iam not garv.(start acting) Kya yeh Sach hai? Kaun hun main Kahan se aya main.?
Payal:(tells)SPL ho
Everyone claps.
Vyom:(tells) Pari main tumhe important baat batana chahta hun.
Pari: batao.
Vyom: Pari shimla main jo girls aye the aur garv bhaiya ne call kiya toh main afraid hogaya tha tumhare reaction ki sochke, but achcha laga jab tumne wohlog ko bhagaya aur melt bhi hogaya tha. Thanks for saving me from them.
Pari:welcome.
Phone rings.
Everyone claps
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In garvyal room!
Garv:(bring his wife in their room and put her on bed and sat beside her) thodi der rest karlo, sath mein mere sath time bhi.
Payal:(tells) party se koi leke aate hain kya.
Garv:(tells) hamara first new year hai, toh kuch time spend karte haina hum..
Payal:(tells) kuch baat thi jo wahan nahin bolna hai tumhe?
Garv:(ask) Jo bolna hai bolo, but emotional mat ho, emotional Tum hoti hai AUR eyes mere burn hote hain.
Payal:(tells) toh itna special feel kyun karate ho mujhe? Plz Hamari mom ko blame mat karna.
Garv:(tells) juilet main 100% right hun, mom and dad reason hai. Aur Tum bhi.
Payal:(ask) Maine Kya kiya
Garv:(tells) mere liye born hogi.mere dream ko reality kiya?
Payal:(smiles) Tum achche ho aur selfless ho, isliye tumhare dreams fulfill hogaye.
Garv:(tells) Abhi do dreams baaki hai?
Payal:(ask) Kya dreams hai.
Garv:(tells) tumhe aur pankhudi ko Apna cabin dikhana hai. Agar twins aate hain toh Parag bhi dekhega learn karlega.
Payal:(tells) I want u to be as successful lawyer.
Garv: don't worry.woh bhi hojayega. And yes Tum bhi teacher banogi hamare school main, after becoming mother.
Payal: baby will trouble everyone if I don't stay here
Garv:(tells) don't worry we will wait for that:(kiss her hand)
Payal:(smiles)
Garv:(while running fingers in hair ask) kuch eat karna hai.
Payal: no need.. already bahot eat kiya. Ab aur nahin
Garv: okay fine.
They spend times.
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In pariom room!
Pariom spending time.
Vyom:(ask) Pari, Tumne event planning business k liye socha,
Pari:(tells) no vyom, mujhe event planning business main serious interest nahin hai, help karna achcha lagta hai.
Vyom:(ask) are you sure.?
Pari:(tells)yes.
Vyom:(tells)okay.
Pari:(ask) shimla girls irritate toh nahin karte na ab?
Vyom:(tells) tumhe dekhne k Baad kissi ki hamat hi nahin hui.(show his FB) Jo nahin jaante wohlog k liye.
Pari:(tells) not bad.
Vyom:(tells) thanks.
Pari: welcome.
Vyom:AJ midnight main after party drive par chalen, new years celebrations dekhenge.
Pari: okay:(ask) vyom woh photo Kahan hai?
Vyom: kiski photo..
Pari:(tells) tumhari aur brothers ki Santa Claus look ki.
Vyom:(tells)di secret hai. Tum ask kar rahi ho isliye batara hun.
Pari:(ask) Kya secret hai.?
Vyom:(tells) I have lied.
Pari:(ask) kyun?
Vyom:(tells) mera mood tha.(smiles)
Pari:(tells) you drama King:(start beating him)
Vyom:(trying to save himself) aj ke din mat maro? Whole year markhaunga.
Pari: u deserve it.
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In varunia room!
Nia is lost somewhere.
Varun:(hug her from behind) Kya sochri ho?
Nia:(tells) morning main sabne wish kiya? But mamma papa ne ek baar bhi wish nahin kiya.
Varun:(felt strange to know) don't worry, mamma papa time spend karte rahe hunge. Tumhe mujhe invite Karne dena chahiye tha.
Nia:(tells) main bhi chahti hun mamma papa enjoy Karen sath main but mujhe call nahin aye yeh nahin chahti thi.(get sad)
Varun:(hug her) don't be sad, time spend karke call karenge mamma papa.(get separate) aj Kya Kya Karen hum, long drive, park visit, lunch date.
Nia:(tells) long drive after party
Varun: okay. Don't be sad
Nia:(smiles)okay. I will back, payal di bhabhi ko juice Dena hai:(went)
Varun:(inmind) I can't believe this, yehlog Nia k sath aisa karenge,:(look door and calls)
Mihika:(answer) haan hello Varun beta.
Varun: Nia ka accident hogaya.mamma
Mihika:(panic) accident, kab hua, ?kaisi hai Nia, ?zyada chot toh nahin ayi.? Hospital ka Naam bolo humlog aate hain.
Varun:(felt nice to see her care) sorry mamma, mujhe laga Nia ab vadera toh aaplog usse bhulgaye.
Mihika:(tells)it's OK Varun, Tum humlog ko Jo chahe bolo, but aisa mat bolna k humein Nia se love nahin hai, bcoz of we love Nia very much, after poonam Nia is our only family uske sath Tum bhi. Humlog ne isliye call nahin kyunke hum nahin chahte sabko pretend karnq
Varun:(get confuse) meaning? Aapki ek aur beti hai.
Mihika:(tells) tumhari chachi Poonam Meri behen hai.
Varun: what
Mihika:ek time tak behen the, but mere crimes k bcoz sab khatam hogaya
Varun:(endcall)
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Back to garvyal room!
Garv is working online.
Payal wake up from sleep.
Garv:(saw her and join) achche se rest Mila na.
Payal: haan aur sorry mujhe nahin pata kab sogayi main.
Garv:(tells) it's OK payal. Tum bas 9months babymoon enjoy karo Apna.(give juice) yeh raha juice.
Payal: I am not feeling hungry.
Garv: achcha theek hai:(keep juice aside) acha aj ka day Kya romantic Karen hum
Payal:(start thinking)
Garv:(tells) it's OK. Payal ek confession karna hai mujhe.
Payal: Kya?
Garv:(tells) Tum childhood main juilet k look main, bahot beautiful lagri thi.
Payal:(ask) tumhe Abhi yaad hai.
Garv:(tells) haan infact jab bhi walk and study karta tha Tum mujhe scold karti thi, aur main darke baitke k study karta tha. Otherwise koi hospital main injured
Payal:(getsad and cover his mouth)shut up.
Garv:(take her hand) don't worry ab koi chance nahin hai, bcoz mujhe straight rakhnewali mere sath hai.(smiles)
Payal:(tells) promise me aisa nahin boliye ya sochoge.
Garv:(tells) I promise main negative nahin sochunga:(show online)yeh Dekho.
Payal watch it and get surprise
Garv: it's our baby future gift
Payal:(tells) I love you romeo
Garv:(tells) I love you 2 juilet.
They spend times.
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After lunch
In divaan room!
Varun bring his parents.
Diya: batao Kya baat hai. Ask karo?
Varun:(tells) mom and dad, Poonam chachi ki koi sister hai?
Diya:(tells) haan.
Varun:(getshock) what?(ask) chachu jaante hain kya?
Diya: haan?
Varun:(get angry) how come family and chachu except criminal like her.
Vivaan:(scold him)yeh Kya way hai badon k Baremain baat karne ka?
Diya:(tells) Varun, jaise Nia innocent hai poonam innocent hai, that's it, Tujhe confirm karna tha confirm karliya baat khatam. Forget it.
Varun: iam sorry and thanks.
Divaan: it's OK.
Diya: next time se Bina jaane aisa waisa kuch mat Kaho.
Vivaan:(ask) new year wish kiya?
Varun:(tells) I was angry on them so I didn't wish them.
Diya:(ask) kyun?
Varun: Nia ko mamma papa ne wish nahin kiya toh mujhe laga parents love drama khatam hogaya.
Vivaan: next time se careful raho, yaad nahin hai garv Bina soche samjhe payal ko physicartist lejane ki socha toh Kya hua?
Varun: I will be careful dad:(went)
Diya: pata nahin kaise handle karenge relations ko hamare bachche.
Vivaan: Diya don't worry, hamare bachche relations ko sambhalenge.
Diya:(smiles)
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In VM garden
Varun reading messages.
Nia:(ask seriously) how can u do this?
Varun:(get worried) Kya hua Nia? Angry kyun ho.
Nia:(tells) Tumne Kam hi aisa kiya?
Varun:(ask) Kya kiya?
Nia:(ask) mamma ne sab bataya mujhe.
Varun:(get worried) iam sorry, main tumhari khushi chahta tha.
Nia:(hug him) I love you varun.
Varun:(getshock) what?
Nia:(tells) mamma ne mujhe bataya k tumne mere liye invite Karne ki try ki, but mamma papa se possible Nahin hai aana.
Varun:(get relax)Nia main vyom bhaiya jaisa strong nahin so becareful.
Nia: shock ka return gift deri thi.shock se.
Varun:(ask) happy ho ab.
Nia:(tells) very happy.bahot achcha gift hai.
Varun: I am glad
Nia:(ask) Tum afraid kyun hogaye the.?
Varun:(tells) Tumne serious behave nahin kiya kabhi.
Nia:(tells) Pari di bhabhi se learn kar rahi hun.
Varun:(tells)oh achcha.anyways party ka dress select hogaya Kya?
Nia: haan.
Varun: get ready well and enjoy well.
Nia: okay.
They went.
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In kitchen!
Vaderasehgal ladies doing cooking for new year.
Garvyal:(join them)
Diya: tumlog yahan.
Garv: payal bore hogayi thi isliye leke agaya.
Payal:(ask) mom main kuch karsakti hun plz.
Diya: chair par baitho batati hun OK.
Garvyal:(sat on table)
Vadera sehgal ladies give dishes to her
Payal:(get worried) itna nahin hoga mujhse.
Garv:(tease her) aane se pehle sochna tha, now eat it's your punishment for breaking rules
Diya:(tells) payal, don't worry, yeh bas samples hai, tumhe Jo Khana hai khasakti ho, Jo nahin Khana woh nahin khao ok, healthy hai. It's warm be careful
Payal:(tells) thanks mom.:(start tasting)
Garv:(admire his wife)
His phone ring.
Garv:(answer) hello.
Receptionist: Mr garv, I call to remind u on your request, on 22nd jan and 6th feb, ko city hospital main apki wife ki appointment hai, plz be on time
Garv:(tells) thanks, may I know doctor name.
Receptionist: doctor Pooja Sharma.
Garv: okay thanks hum ajayenge:(end call)
Diya:(ask) Kya hua
Garv: hospital se reminding k liye call aya tha:(ask) payal let's go from here.:(take her and went)
Madhu: finally normal dikhra hai garv.
Diya:right.
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In evening after dinner!
In hall!
Ronak: 10
Maansi: 09
Ranvir: 08
Jaanvi: 07
Vivaan: 06
Diya: 05
Vihaan: 04
Madhu: 03
Soham: 02
Poonam: 01
Everyone:(tells) happy new year:(hug and wish eachother and also wish arka and triplets, and ridhimaryan karanjhim through video call)
VivaaniyA: bf aapne gun di wish kiya hi nahin. Na gun di ne aapko.
Everyone one motive him
Rahul:(wish her) happy new year Gun.
Jrgunjan: happy new year Rahul.
Everyone feed cake to eachother.
Garv:(hug her whisper) happy new year pankhudi's mom.
Payal:(whisper) happy new year gyan's dad:(get separate)
Garv:(get surprise)
Everyone cut cake and eat and dance.
Payal:(faints)
Family get worried.
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In garvyal room!
Garv is worried for payal.
Doctor is checking payal
Family as well.
Doctor:(finish checkup)
Garv:(ask) payal theek toh haina.
Doctor: yes theek hai,take care of her and the baby.:(went)
Family also went.
Garv:(tells) thankgod Tum theek ho.
After some time
Payal:(get conscious)
Garv:(get relief) how are you feeling?
Payal:(tells) theek hun. Sab theek haina garv.
Garv: sab theek hai:(smiles)
Payal:(ask) sabko pata nahin haina.
Garv: don't worry vyom ne boldiya, party arrangements main time nahin Mila.
Payal:(smiles)
Garv:(tells) babyboyvadera na, aane k Baad guinees world record main admit karayenge.
Payal:(ask) kyun?
Garv: ek boy k itne names hunge toh aisa hi hoga na.
Payal:(laugh)
Garv:(tells) Chalo ab rest karte hain.okay.
Payal: okay.
Garv remove coat and lies on bed.
They take rest
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In pariom room!
Vyom:(sleeping being tired)
Pari:(ask) vyom Tum hamari drive date kaise bhulgaye?, get up.
Vyom:(tells) aj NAHI phir kabhi.
Pari:(tells) plz.
Vyom: no plz.
Pari: promise break karna bad habit hai.
Vyom:(tells) plz.
Pari: okay fine.
Vyom: tumhare liye new year gift hai.
Pari:(ask)Kya?
Vyom:(tells) I love you so much.
Pari:(smiles) I love you too.
Vyom: aj Mrs India se Kam nahin lagi thi tum.
Pari: really.
Vyom: haan.
Pari: aj forgive karungi, next time se promise break Nahin hona chahiye. Otherwise replace kardungi.
Vyom: oh hello, main husband hun TV nahin jo replace kardogi
Pari: main bhi wife hun, knife nahin OK.jo Tum darte ho.
Vyom: main nahin darta.
Pari:(ask) shimla main toh darethe.
Vyom:(tells) jalte volcano se dur rehna chahiye isliye,main chalegaya.
Pari: very funny.
Vyom: reality.
They debates and rest.





















































































Edited by Ranjan-Maanak - 8 years ago
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OUTSTANDING UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY SUPERB AND MIND-BLOWING UPDATE.
LOVED EACH AND EVERY PART. U WROTE IT VERY BEAUTIFULLY.
LOVED NEW YEAR CELEBRATIONS SO MUCH.
GARV IS SO CARING THAT INSPITE OF ENJOYING PARTY HE BROUGHT PAYAL TO ROOM TO SPEND TIME WITH HER AND ALSO SHE CAN TAKE REST.
LOVED PARIOM PART SO MUCH. THEY R SO FUNNY AND MATCHING TO EACH OTHER.
LOVED VARUNIA PART. FINALLY TRUTH COME IN FRONT OF VARUN THAT POONAM IS SISTER OF MIHIKA BUT FAMILY HANDLED IT BEAUTIFULLY.
NOW UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE. 😊 😊 😊
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Part 559
In VM
Afterbreakfast in morning
In garvyal room!
Garvyal spending time.
Payal:(tells) double sorry garv.
Garv:(ask) kyun.
Payal: Christmas and New year gift nahin diya tumhe.
Garv:(take her hand in his hand)Tum aur tumhara love and support kaafi hai mere liye, not to forget our love symbol also enough.
Payal:(get shy)
Garv:(ask) humein 2times hospital jaana hai, returning ka Kya plan hai.
Payal:(tells) Abhi decide nahin kiya:(ask) driving practice kaisi chalri hai
Garv:(tells) nice, dad bolre the, mom and kasak maasi joke banate the dad ki driving way ka.
Payal:(ask) kyun?
Garv:(tells) slow drive karte the na isliye.
Payal:(tells) wow.:(ask) garv, hamari beti love karegi toh problem hogi tumhe.
Garv: no.
Payal: wow.
Garv: koi bhi kaise bhi chalega, but CG main rehna chahiye.
Payal:(tells) garv, humlog food ki nahin beti k bf ki baat kar rahe hain.
Garv:(tells)main bhi.
Payal:(ask) agar aisa nahin hua toh.
Garv:I will cry likethis(take her duppata corner act to wipe tears)
Payal:(get amaze) Tum bhi na
Garv:(tells) let's forget think something else
They spend times.
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In backyard!
Romaansi ranjaanvi divaan madvihaan sitting.
Ranvir:(ask) jp tumhara new year resolution Kya hai.
Jannvi:(felt nice to hear jb from her lp after long time close eyes)
Ranvir:(ask) Kya hua.
Jaanvi:(tells) nothing. Kya puchre the.
Ranvir: tumhara new year resolation kya hai.
Jaanvi:(lies) tumhara health checkup karana hai, uske Baad healthy diet Dena hai, itne years ka chlostrol decrease karna hai. Main bhi toh dekhun meri ignorance main kitna advantage liya hai tumne.
Ranvir: dekhna hai toh apne bete ko Dekho. Kitni cheap soch hai USKI.
Jaanvi:(ask) Kya kara jaiveer.
Ranvir:(tells) jaiveer ko laga Meri girlfriend hai jiske liye Tum angry hogayi mujhse.
Jaanvi:(laugh)
Phone rings
Ranvir: office se call(went)
Jaanvi:(get calm) my siblings, mera new year resolution hai, RP se marriege karun, start afresh relation.
Ronak: jab bhi surprise karna hai mujhe batado, main ranvir ko rokne main help karunga.
Ranvir: Kya karoge.ronak bhaiya.
Maansi: riddhima se baat karne k liye phone karunga bolre the.
Ranvir: Abhi baat karlete hain.
Jaanvi: Aryan k sath hogi time spend Karne do.
Ranvir: okay.
They spend times.
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Back to garvyal room!
Garvyal spending time
Payal:(ask) garv Sach main vyom Varun jaiveer Mayur tumhare sath main rehte the Kya?
Garv: obviously. Humlog ko habit Kahan thi dur rehne ki, Jo wahan rehte the.
Payal:(smiles)wow what nice bond. I wish hum sabke kids main bhi aisa hi bond ho.
Garv: don't worry aisa hi hoga, vyom ko Jo habit se problem hai Meri, woh habit nahin hona chahiye.
Payal: secret rakhne ki.
Garv: haan. But main bhi Kya karun, main hurt nahin dekhsakta apne bhaiyon ko. Isliye include nahin karta.
Payal: I understand garv, kuch aur toh batasakte ho jaise mujhe bolte ho.
Garv:(tells) easy nahin hai, mujhe hurt hota hai, hurt karke.
Payal:(tells) I am so lucky wife. And our baby also.
Garv:(felt nice) me to.
Payal:(ask) ek baat puchun?
Garv: sure.
Payal: don't mind sab wife puchte hain ya questions is time main, so main puchna chahti hun.
Garv:(smiles) hum friendly couple hain,but I will answer.
Payal:main fat hogayi toh love Nahin karoge Kya?
Garv:(laugh and tells) payal, I love you not your look.
Payal:(felt nice)
Garv:(tells) kissi ne bola Kya husband's badal jaate hain.
Payal: read kiya tha.
Garv: don't read stupid things, baby kabhi bhi sunsakti ya sunsakti aur bade hoke editors ki office main bandbajayega, jaise hum kids ne kiya tha.
Payal:(tells) right saying. I will be careful.
They spend times
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In pariom room!
Pariom spending time.
Someone knock.
Pari: kaun hai?
Nia: Pari di bhabhi, aapke friends aye hain.
Vyom: Varun ki kit se injection leke inject kardo.
Pari:(smiles and beat him) Nia, aane do wohlog ko.
Nia:(Smiles)okay:(went)
Vyom: don't forget main tumhara school mate hun
Pari: okay Mr jealous.
Friends enters.
Pari: hi .
Vyom:(tells) hi iam vyom vadera. U can call me vyom.
Friends lookeachother
Pari:(ask) kya hua?
Vyom: friends baat karo main jaata hun:(step out)
Friend 1:(ask) Pari are out of your mind.
Pari:(ask) Kya hua?
Friend2: Tum vyom ko jaante hue shadi kaise Karli, god know kab mood bigadhjaye, kuch bhi karde toh tere
Vyom felt bad and went.
Pari: friends, kuch chote bachche naughty hote hain, waise vyom bhi naughty tha, hum ek dusre ko kuch bhi bolte hain pehle k jaise but vyom ne kuch nahin kiya mujhe aj tak, one more thing mere samne vyom k against much mat bolna. Past is past.
Friends:(hold ears) sorry my friend.
Pari: it's OK.(spend times with friends)
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In backyard!
Vyom:(is sad by pari's friend views)
Garv:(arrives and join) Kya hua. Pari k friends aane se disturb hogaya.
Vyom:(tells) stranger banke Mere question ka answer desakte ho.
Garv:(get confuse) aisa kyun?
Vyom: garv bhaiya plz.
Garv:(ask) bolo questions.
Vyom:(ask) main mannerless hun Kya? Kissi ka husband hone k capable nahin Kya?
Garv:(ask) kisne bola.( About getup with anger) I will straight them
Vyom:(tells) Pari k friends ne.
Garv:(smiles)) vyom Tu na(Pat her head) buddhu hai.
Vyom:(madeface) garv bhaiya iam not in mood of joke.i am seriously serious
Garv:(tells) main bhi toh seriously serious hun,(ask)iam sure Pari kuch nahin bolegi, phir bhi kuch bola Kya Pari ne kuch
Vyom: pata nahin. Main wahan se agaya.
Garv:(get amaze) wow.
Vyom:(ask) wow ki Kya baat hai.
Garv: kuch nahin, vyom, Pari Teri wife hai hum teri family hai.Tere liye Pari k aur hamare views important hona chahiye. Duniya ki nahin sunna sochna chahiye, Jahan tak Pari k friends ki Baad hai, Tujhe bhi toh Pari ek time tak irritating lagti thi, waise tu bhi Pari ko irritating lagta tha, so take it easy and be happy with Pari.
Vyom:(smiles) thanks.
Garv: welcome, now don't think much, don't overhear anyone talk and dont get angry with Pari OK. Family ke Baad wife hi hoti hai Jo hamesha support karti hai, Jo most friends nahin karte.
Vyom: I will never forget it
Garv: good boy.:(smiles)
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In afternoon In lunch in garden
Siblings did romantic date arrangements and went.
Garv:(bring his blindfold wife)
Payal:(ask) garv Kahan hai hum.
Garv:(remove hanky and point towards decorations)
Payal:(get surprise by romantic date)wow.thanks garv.
Garv:(tells) welcome.
Payal: but garv humlog hospital k Baad jaanewale the.
Garv: haan but woh public place thi private place nahin. Jahan hum hi ho third person nahin.
Payal:(tells) but garv yahan hum dono nahin teeno hai.main Tum aur:(keep hand on stomach) baby.
Garv:(smiles)ya right.:(ask) lunch Karen hum teeno?
Payal: yes.
Garv:(he feed her by his hand)
Payal:(did same)
Garv: payal, childhood main aisa kya favourite tha Jo Tum har time har mood main achcha lagta hai.
Payal:(ask) sudden kyun
Garv:(make excuse) koi competition main jayenge toh batana padega na, jab choti toh dolls like karti thi, badi hoke Kya like karti ho mujhe nahin pata nA.
Payal: I like you garv.
Garv:(get surprise) and I like and love you payal. Baby also love his and her tobemom.
Payal:(smiles)
Garv:(ask) lunch achcha laga?
Payal: bahot achcha hai. Lagta hai mujhe imagine nahin kiya
Garv: woh possible Nahin hai and yeh sab hamare sisters ne cook kiya hai, safe hai.
Payal:(feeds him)
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After lunch in hall!
Family spending time
Garvyal arrives
Vyom: iam sure, Mr truth teller ne inform kArdiye hunge.
Everyone laugh.
Garv: Mrs truth teller kuch decide kiya vyom pari and Varun Nia k liye.
Pariom-varunia: bataiye.
Payal: baby ki news aane k Baad, humlog family k sath celebrate Karne agaye the,. Tumlog k plans bhi secrifice hogaye the isliye main chAhti hun tumlog vecation continue karo, kahin aur nahin toh Chandigarh main hi.Vecation continue karo.
Vyom: payal di bhabhi aisa kuch nahin, mujhe childhood se dad ko irritate karna mera singing Karne se zyada favourite Kam hai. Aap chahe toh Pari se ask kariye
Vihaan:(madeface) what.
Vyom:(tells) sorry but it's true dad, USA se specially aapko irritate Karne aya hun.
Vivaan: hum sab toh Kya vihaan bhi bore tha.tumhare Bina.tumse fight nahin karke
Garv:(tells) how sweet is that:(smiles,)
Jaanvi: bookings hote rahenge payal, Tum humsabko we wish karo Kya chahiye jab tumhare three months complete hunge.
Payal:(tells) nothing jb aapsabke blessings hi mera gift hai.
Vyom:(tells) lagta hai garv bhaiya style try karna padega.
Payal:(get confuse) meaning.
Garv:(tells) let's go payal,:(went along her)
Pari:(ask) Kya hai garv bhaiya style.
Vyom:(tells) one mothers day,humlog favourite gift Dena chahre the directly nahin jaansake toh garv bhaiya ne kaha game play karte hain uske Baad gift Kare humlog.
Pari: oh I see.
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In backyard!
Garvyal spending time.
Payal:(ask) Kya hai tumhara style?
Garv:(tells) vyom was joking.
Payal:(tells) not possible. Vyom kuch bola toh Sach hi hoga.
Garv:(tells) height body badi hai uski, dil se bachcha hai vyom, don't take him seriously.
Payal: bachcha but dil bhi achcha vyom ka, as bhai mujhe Khush Karne k liye excuse banara tha, tumhare style ki baat bhi Sach hogi so batao Kya baat hai.
Garv:(tells) let it be:(ask) maternity shopping k liye kuch achcha laga.
Payal:(tells Abhi nahin socha.
Garv: okay fine, only Dekho, socho,book karlo. OK
Payal: but garv already bahot dresses hai.
Garv: baby k arrival k Baad continue karlo, Abhi k liye choose karo book karo OK.(ask) Tum old baat se dar rahi ho Kya? Don't worry I won't run away from u.
Payal: nahin. Kyunke Tum relation banate hi nahin always nibhate ho.
Garv:(smiles) exactly.
Payal:(smiles)
Garv:(ask) hum Kahan chalen babymoon k liye.
Payal: sochke bataungi.
Garv: okay. Cold feel toh nahin hora na.
Payal: nahin iam f9.
Garv: okay then, sabko Kya bolenge hum.
Payal: sabki wish except karenge.
Garv: okay boss.
Payal: okay.
They spends times.
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Back to hall!
Family waiting for garvyal
Garvyal:(arrives)
Vyom: payal di bhabhi babymoom par Kahan jaana decide kiya apne.
Payal: bhulgayi thi vyom.
Varun: no problem. Jab bhi decide hojaye batadijiye. Apke four brothers wishfulfill karenge.
Payal: I know but tumlog ko free hona padega. Join karna padega, chahe toh cg k resort main rahenge. Work delay nahin hoga aur Ghar aate jaate rehsakte.
Pariom varunia: okay
Payal: aap sabhi chaliye na.
Family: you enjoy behalf us.
Payal:(smiles)
Garv:(ask) payal ka function kab hai.
Maansi: three months complete Karne k Baad.
Madhu: kuch time Baad babyshower hai, done function main achcha gift but karna.
Garv: aaplog boldijiye payal ko mujhe divorse Karne ki warning nahin dene k liye
Payal:(tells) aisi koi baat nahin hai maasi, already mere paas bahot clothes haina toh nahin lane k liye bolti hun.
Garv: Parag ko toh scold kiya.
Payal: tumhi timid banre the jaise yeh Ghar nahin jail ho.
Divaan: right saying payal.
Garv:(act to shock) what..
His siblings: she is right.
Garv: English aata hai mujhe.
Everyone laugh including payal.
Garv:(felt nice to see her happy)
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In evening after dinner!
In garvyal room!
Garvyal spending time
Payal: garv if u don't mind ek baat ask karun.
Garv: kyun nahin?
Payal: jab mom ka baby aanewale tha, tab Tumhe aur siblings ko kaisa laga tha sunke
Garv:(tells) question se trouble kardiya tha dad ko.:(smiles) dad clearly boldiye k doctor nahin lawyer hoon. Air main hain baby.
Payal: uske Baad Kya hua?
Garv: phir hum mom ko hug Kare tohkasak maasi ne bola k baby mom k stomach main hai, slowly hug karo. Thats it.
Payal: wow childhood main learn karliya.
Garv: haan.
Payal: very nice kabhi mujhe hogaya toh problem nahin hogi tumhe.
Garv:(stop smiling)you are right. Pata hai kyun?
Payal: kyun?
Garv:(emotionally)jaise hum sath ji rahe hain waise sath Mar bhi jayenge. Kyunke payal hai toh garv hai.agar payal nahin rahegi toh garv bhi nahin rahega. Hamare Mamma papa aur hamare grandparents is baat ka example hai.
Payal:(tells) mom dad bhi. Mom theek rahe isliye dad theek rahe.
Garv:right(ask) sudden aise baat kyun kar rahi ho?
Payal:(tells) Indian Superman ho tum
Garv: Jo bhi hun APNI dearest wife k bcoz hun, other zero Hun
Payal: let's rest.
Garv: okay.
They take rest.
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In pariom room!
Vyom telling Pari how he felt overhear her friends thanks And how garv make him understand.
Pari: (with attitude hold his collar) Mr vyom vadera, childhood main tumne jo bhi bola hai uske liye tumhe pyar aur shadi ki punishment dedi hai Maine. Jo change nahin hosakti. Jo bhi interfere karegi nahin bachegi mujhse.
Vyom:(tells) pari, main dusri ladki nahin tumhara husband hun.
Pari:(tells) I know but repeat kyun kar rahe ho?
Vyom:(point towards his neck)
Pari:(left his neck) koi aur ladki nahin thi aur main action main bhulgayi.
Vyom:(tells) no problem Kal se tumhari diet change karunga.
Pari: garv bhaiya Tum four k close hai toh sab share karte hunge na.
Vyom: sab nahin Sirf kuch baatein. Garv bhaiya excited bhi hai scare bhi.
Pari: kyun
Vyom: tumhe pata hai na, ek baby aane se pehle maasi ka chalegaya toh darte hain garv bhaiya. Ed se training lere hain toh perfect hone ka dar nahin hai.
Pari: main toh always wish karti hun, sab parents children sath rahen.
Vyom: good.(smiles)
Pari: achcha babymoon par jaane k Baremain Kya Socha.
Vyom: payal di bhabhi ne first time kuch wish kiya hai, hum chalenge.
ParI: nice of you.:
Vyom: thanks but no thanks. Iam her brother first. Afterall.
Pari: okay sorry.
Vyom: let's rest.
Pari: okay.
Vyom: devil mat bano phir we.
Pari:(laugh)
They take rest.
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In varunia room!
Varunia spending time.
Nia:(ask) Kya decide kiya.
Varun: hospital main try karke dekhunga,
Nia:(tells) payal di bhabhi khud bolre hain yahin koi resort main chalenge. Holiday ki need nahin padegi.
Varun:(realise it)oh yes.
Nia: mujhe lagra hai, humlog jaldi agaye na toh payal di bhabhi ko badfeel hora hoga, isliye bolre hain.
Varun: yes right. Are u ready. Then let's go.
Nia: yes.
Varun:(tells) let's see cg resorts kaun SA couple promote hota hai.
Nia: iam sure Pari di bhabhi and vyom bhaiya.
Varun: hum.:(smiles)
Nia: sorry ghalti se bola, iam sure hum promote hunge.
Varun: kitna fun ayega,
Nia: haan. Iam lucky for becoming Mami and chachi.
Varun: me to. I hope main best chachu and mamu bansakun.jaise chachu apna aur mamu banke love diye waise dun.
Nia:(ask) really.
Varun: haan mom maasi k family main koi nahin the toh hamari family double love diye. Dad maasi k liye chachu k against hote and mom chachu k liye maasi k against, waise garv bhaiya bhi tumhare liye mere against hogaye, declare kardiye Nia k instead koi aur ayegi toh shift karlenge bhabhi k sath.
Nia: so be careful with me.
Varun:(smiles) okay.
They take rest.



Edited by Ranjan-Maanak - 8 years ago

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