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PLZ CONTINUE IT DEAR AS I AM LOVING UR WRITING STYLE.
I LOVED THE SUGGESTIONS GIVEN BY READER AS VYOM AND GARV KIDS AS VIREN VIRAT AND MANVI AND JEEVIKA.
NOW UPDATE SOON DEAR.
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Part 548
In VM
After breakfast!
In divaan room!
Divaan is sitting.
Someone knock
Diya:(ask) kaun?
Payal:(tells) main hun Mom.
Diya:(open door) ajao.
Payal: mujhe aapdono ko kuch batana hai?
Divaan: haan
Payal: maasi k birthday k din, maine aapsabse lie kiya tha. Main koyal k against prove collect karna chahti thi, isliye mall chalegayi. Yeh baat Garv ko batana chahiye mujhe ya nahin?
Diya:(ask) tumne nahin batana Kya?
Payal: nahin tabse afraid hun. I was helpless, main nahin chahti Garv ki feelings ho Baad main isliye aise plan kiya.
Vivaan: (with smile)haan toh batadona beta, atleast tum koyal k sath alone nahin public main thi, tumhare Garv k jaise nahin alone nahin thi.
Diya:he is right. Bolke relief hojao.
Payal:thank you.
Vivaan: Garv ne scold kiya toh mujhe aur Diya boladena, we will straight him.
Payal:(smiles and went)
Vivaan:(tells) I forgot to tell you? Mr kapoor ka call aya tha. Gunjan aur Rahul ki shadi ki baat Karne k liye, Kya kehti ho.
Diya: I don't know vivaan.:(getsad) u know how was our past.
Vivaan:(hug her) I know don't be sad, otherwise mere liye handle karna tough hoga.
Diya:I will try.
Vivaan:(change topic) jab shadi hojayegi toh honeymoon par chalogi.
Diya:(tells) shut up.
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In garvyal room!
Payal told everything to Garv.
Garv::(get up from bed)
Payal:(get worried) Garv Main nahin chahti thi, tum uske acting ko reality samjho. Isliye Jo theek pata kiya maine,:(normally)cheating se Kya feel hotA hai main jaanti hun.
Garv:(keep hands around her neck with smile) good job, aur achcha hotA agar tum mujhe bhi lejati, main wahin kahin se sunta tha, aur koyal ko send karke humdono mall main rehte the ek sath.mom dad k jaise.
Payal:(get surprise & ask) tum angry nahin ho?
Garv:(smiles) Abhi toh angry nahin hun, next time hojaunga, agar tum mujhe leke nahin gayi mall moon par.:(praise her)i am proud of you,bahot achcha idea tha mall ka.
Payal:(tells) dad bhi bolre the.
Garv:(tells) iam sure, dad tum mujhse better ho bole hunge time
Payal:(ask) kaise pata tumhe?
Garv:(smiles)bcoz dad loves his daughters. :(Ask) tumhe time kyun laga?
Payal: mujhe laga tum koyal k topic par baat nahin karna chahoge.
Garv:jis story ki actress Meri juliet hogi usse mujhe problem nahin hai.:(normally) you are great.
Payal:(ask) kyun Kya hua?
Garv:(tells) maine Sach jaanke usko ghar se throw kiya, but tumne cheater ko tolerate kiya bahot dinon tak. Whenever I remember that i felt speechless.
Payal:(tells) it's all bcoz of you Garv, Ur believe and support help me. Otherwise main news paper ki headline banjati thi.
Garv:(tells) don't embarrass me.
Payal: reality hai.
Garv:(ask) relief hogayi?
Payal: yes:(smiles)
Garv:(hug him)
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In backyard!
Father son comes.
Vivaan: Garv, tumne office join Karne k Baremain Kya Socha?
Garv:(tells) dad, I am sorry to say I will not join u and Soham chachu.
Vivaan:(ask)aisa kyun Garv, tumhara favourite profession haina advocate banna. Phir Kya hua?
Garv:(get sad) mujhe nahin pata tha, peoples knowledge nahin hai mujhe, kissi par bhi belief kardeta hun, aap hi bataiye aisa person lawyer banega toh kitni insult hogi aapki Soham chachu ki, hamare grands fathers ki.
Vivaan:(made him sat and join him) Garv, tujhe pata hai, mera ek classmate friend tha, Jo mujhse itna jealous tha k apni wife k murder k liye jail bheja tha. Tab Teri mom aur vihaan chachu Madhu maasi khud research Kare aur main Ghar main agaya tha.:(smiles)
Garv:(getshock) what?
Vivaan: uske Baad Sab theek hogaya. Tum time lesakte ho. But defeat mat manna.
Garv: okay dad, sorry dad, main jaanta hun,aapko gun k sath mom k sath siblings k sath rehne hai. Mera bhi plan tha, jab Indian aunga toh aapko mom ko vecation par send karunga, but bhulgaya.
Vivaan:(tells) no problem. Atleast pata toh Chala tum Kya sochre ho.
Garv:(smiles)
Vivaan: jab bhi join karna ho? Pehle Payal ko ghumalo. Baad main office join large toh time nahin milega.
Garv: yes dad.:(went)
Vaderasehgal brothers arrives.
Vihaan: Kya what hui father son main.
Vivaan: Kuch nahin, office join Kab karna hai puchra tha.
Vihaan: ready hogaya hoga. Vyom jaise late nahin kara hoga.
Vivaan:(tells everything)
Brothers get shock.
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Back to garvyal room!
Payal reading magazine.
Garv:(arrives) juliet.
Payal:(ask) Haan Romeo.
Garv:(hug her from behind with smile)gun ki shadi k liye time hai, main bhi free hun tum bhi free ho. Kya meri juliet apne apne Romeo k sath honeymoon par jaana pasand karegi.?
Payal:(nod in yes)
Garv: okay then let's go to honeymoon.:(smile)
Payal:(realise door is open get separate) Garv, door open hai, tum honeymoon ki baat kaise karsakte ho?
Garv:(tells) no problem, Sab gaye hain honeymoon par hamari family. Ajkal tv par hero heroine bhi honeymoon ki baat karte Hain. Aur phir humdono ne duniya k samne love confession kiya hai. Honeymoon ka Naam Lena Kya back baat hai.
Payal:(ask) no one can win in talk with u.
Garv:(comes closer) its not like that, I can't win Infront of u, but I can win with you for sure.
Payal:(smiles) anyways jab Sab final hojaye toh batado main hamari packing karungi.
Garv:okay.(smiles) but apni favourite place ka Naam to batao.
Payal: shimla.
Garv: okaydone humlog shimla hi jayenge.
Payal: ek baar sabse permission lo, vyom pari Varun nia se ask karlo. Teeno couples teen jageh ghumlenge.
Garv:(tells) okay my juliet. Jaise tum chahti ho waise hoga.
Payal:(smiles)
Garv:(ask) are you ready to go?
Payal: yes Garv.
Garv:(hug her)
Payal:(smiles)
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Back to back yard!
Garvyal waiting for their siblings.
Pariom varunia arrives.
Garv:(tells) humlog shimla jaane wale hain vecation k liye. Tum bhi aaoge?
Vyom:(laugh)
Vaderabrothers sisters get amaze.
Garv:(ask) Kya hua?
Vyom: aap Na honeymoon ko vecation ka Naam dere Hina isliye.
Garv:(ask) Chalna hai ya nahin woh batao.
Varun: ready Nia.
Nia: yes.
Vyom: and you pari.
Pari: I am ready. But ek condition hai.
Vyom:(ask) Kya?
Pari:u don't fight with me. Otherwise main shimla k hotel main lock kardungi.
Vyom:(tells) Garv bhaiya, aap booking kardo, main pari ko find karleta hun. Pata nahin yeh gangster Kahan se agayi..
Pari: good idea main bhi tumhare memoryloss ka treatment find kardungi.
Garv:(tells) pari, let it be shimla k liye shopping list collect karlo.
Pari: good idea:(went along vaderasisters)
Trio brother stay with each other.
Vyom:(tells) Garv bhaiya, ek baat bolna hai humsab bhaiyon k behalf.
Garv: bolo.
Varun: aap world best brother ho. Motivater ho.
Vyom: yes.
Garv:(hug them)
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After lunch in Hall!
Vaderasehgal couple spending time
Garv:(arrives with tickets) Payal, pari, Nia, Varun vyom, hamare shimla k tickets agaye hain.
Vaderasehgal sehgal get happy.
Jaanvi: jaana kab hai.?
Garv: Kal early morning main jaana hai hai.
Diya: real look main aana. Sach Sach batana kab are ho. Payal yeh Kam tumhara hai.
Payal: yes mom I will inform u all.
Maansi: jackets main rehna
Garv:(tells) humlog Kal jaare hain aj nahin mom and mb..
Everyone felt nice.
Garv: hamara Jo school haina uske paas Jo resort hain wahan aaplog k room book kArdiye hain maine. Vivaaniya simple school bhi jayenge aur change bhi milega aaplog ko. And wahan gun madvi ko resort show karenge hamare sehgal brothers. Alone nahin hogi
Jaiveer:(praise him) wow garv bhaiya aap toh movie k director hogaye.
Maansi: yeh Sab ki Kya need thi garv.
Garv:(tells)
Jaanvi: group separate karlun humlog honeymoon tips k liye.
Ranvir: good idea:(went along brothers
Jaanvi: listen to me carefully, be daring, jhatke Dena chahiye, be bold with them.
Pari: main already kissi se nahin darti jb, vyom se bhi nahin.
Jaanvi: good. Payal tum.
Payal:(innocently) Garv is good with me,
Nia: Varun bhi achcha hai.
Jaanvi:(hold her head) kya karun tumlog ka.:(tells in details)
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In backyard!
Fathers giving tips to their sons.
Vyom:(tells) aaplog toh Bade expert ho. Romance class start kArdijiye.
Vihaan:(tells) good Idea.
Vyom:(selute him ) welcome dad welcome.,:(smiles)
Vihaan:(strictly) Be serious.
Vyom:(ask)aap kahen toh ICU main shift hojaun?
Vivaan: don't say like that vyom. humlog nahin chahte k tumharre respective wife's tumhe unromantic samjhe.
Vyom: oh I see.
Vihaan: chupchap sunno ab.
Vyom:ok(keep fingers on his lips)
They continue class.
Vivaan:(ask) Samar se samna hone ka chance toh nahin haina. Payal k liye
Garv: don't worry for him,uske badhabits reveal hogaye, I don't think he will come. Aaplog ko tension lene ki need nahin hai Abhi.
Vyom: ek baat bataiye, after marriage aaplog ki friendship main problem toh nahin ayi na jaise film main hota hai.
Garv: Jo bhi tha achcha tha, bas dar tha. Mere feelings reveal hogaye toh Kaise hoga.:(smiles) but aap Kuch secret nahin hai Jo Payal nahin jaanti.
Ranvir: I can understand.
Garv: meaning.
Ranvir: main busy hogaya tha jai tumlog k sath tha, jaanvi angry hogayi thi mujhse.
Jaiveer:(tells by fearing,)girlfriend's thi Kya dad aapki.
Ranvir:(glare at him) mind your language.
Jaiveer: sorry but mom jaldi angry hote nahin, melt bhi jaldi nahin hote isliye.
Mayur::(tells) bro plz.
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Back to Hall!
Vaderasehgal ladies sitting waiting.
Their their lp and brothers join them.
Jaanvi: tips session hogaya.
Vihaan:(tells)Haan but backyard main mosquito agaya tha. Disturb Kar raha tha.
Ranvir: mosquito ka bhai mujhe.
Jaanvi:(ask) tumhe kaise pata dono bhai hai.
Vihaan: dono partner in crime the.
Vyom:(tells) jb, let it be, dad is joking as always..
Madhu: vyom is right.
Vyom:(tells) thanks.
Madhu: welcome
Rimjhim:(arrives sadly bcoz of Karan) vivaan mamu mujhe divorce chahiye.
Family:(getshock) Kya but kyun?
Karan:(comes behind her) maine only itnA bola congrats chachi, toh madam angry hogayi.:(made face)
Rimjhim: aaplog batao riddhi ki sister hun toh maasi banungi,
Family:(getshock) Kya?:(happy)
Aryan:(arrives holding wife hand)
Senior vaderasehgal couples bless them.
Siblings congrats them.
Karanjhim:(hold ears)sorry.
Family smiles
Khanna couples sat with them.
Family spend times.
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In evening after dinner!
In garvyal room!
Garvyal spending time.
Garv:(ask) Kya baatein hori thi ladies main.
Payal:(tells) husband se share karna allow nahin hai.
Garv: buts friends toh share karsakte haina
Payal: no. Wife's ki baat hai.(smiles)
Garv:(tells) batao na plz.
Payal:(change topic) ek baar bags check Karen, sweater jacket hai ya nahin. Shimla main cold hota hai.
Garv: shimla main shopping karenge no problem. Pehle batao?
Payal:(tells) it's our home and room. Not your court.
Garv:(ask playing with her hair) maine kab kaha aisa.k main lawyer hun aur yeh court room hai.
Payal:(tells) decide karke batao.:(change topic again) kitni achchi news ayi na aj.
Garv:. I hope jaise hamare childhood main hua waise nahin no. Infact Koi family and parents k Sath nahin ho.
Payal:(tells) don't worry. Sab achcha hoga har couple k Sath.
Garv:(felt nice)
Payal:(tells) aj tumne Jo bhi kiya, woh bahot achcha kiya. Sabke liye.
Garv:(tells) it's my duty.
Payal:(smiles)
Garv:(tells) I love you Juliet.
Payal: I love you Romeo.
Garv:(tells) kabhi mujhe batane ka mood ho toh batadena.
Payal: dekhenge
Garv: dekhlo dekhlo.
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In pariom room!
Pari:(tells) vyom, I have decide something.
Vyom:(ask) Kya?
Pari: humlog maasi chachu banenge toh aise hi inform karenge.
Vyom: no ways. Dad mujhe mosquito k jaise mardenge. Unki beti ko trouble Karne k liye.
Pari:(start laughing)
Vyom:(ask) Kya hua?
Pari:(tells) dad aur ranvir uncle tumhe mosquito bolre the.
Vyom: jai ko bhi.
Pari:(sadly)so sad.
Vyom:(felt nice)wow Kya love hai.
Pari: woh toh hoga hi mera bhai Jo hai jai.
Vyom:(getshock) what?
Pari: haan aur nahin toh Kya? Aur phir Kare koi bhare koi wrong haina.
Vyom:(tells) maine only disturb kiya, jai ne ranvir uncle se question Kya, girlfriend thi Kya?
Pari:(get amaze) Kya?
Vyom: isliye dad humko mosquito brothers bolre the.
Pari:(tells)jai is so funny.
Vyom:(ask) real reason pata hai tumhe?
Pari:(tells) Jo tha sabko pata haina, time spend Karne nahin milta tha jb ko ranvir uncle k Sath.
Vyom: okay then.
Pari: let's rest we have flight.
Vyom: agree.
Pari: good night.
They take rest.
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In varunia room!
Nia waiting for her lp.
Varun:(arrives with medicines) shimla main cold hosakta isliye medicine leke agaya.
Nia: good job.
Varun:(smiles) thanks.
Nia: welcome. Achcha hai family bhi yahan resort main enjoy karenge.
Varun: agree nahin toh phir bore hojate.
Nia:(tells) maine mamma ko nahin bataya riddhima di k good news aur hamare honeymoon k Baremain. Batadun.?
Varun:Abhi kyun disturb karna rest Kar rahe hunge.
Nia: msg kardun?
Varun: okay fine.
Nia:(text her) mom dad aaplog k liye two goodnews hai, first is main Mami bannewali hun riddhima di k baby ki. Aur hum teeno couples honeymoon par jaaren hain.
Mihika:(replies) congrats Nia, congrats everyone behalf us to everyone.
Nia:(tells) aaplog cg ajaiyi aur wish mb and ronak uncle ko.
Mihika:(replies and lies) sorry Nia humlog holiday celebrate Karne k liye Singapore gaye hain, return ayenge toh cg ayenge.
Nia:(text her) wow. Have fun.
Mihika: same 2 u?
Nia:(inform) Varun, tumhe pata hai. Mamma papa Singapore main hain.
Varun:(felt nice) wow. Lagta hai honeymoon season hai.
Nia: siblingsmoon bhi.
Varun:(tells) agree.
Nia: let's rest.
Varun: ok.
They take rest.






Edited by Ranjan-Maanak - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY SUPERB AND MINDBLOWING UPDATE.
LOVED EACH AND EVERY PART . IT WAS WRITTTEN SO BEAUTIFULLY.
LOVED GARVYAL MOMENTS AS ROMIO AND JULIET.
LOVED GARV PLAN TO GO ALL COUPLES FOR HONEYMOON AT SHIMLA.
LOVED PARIOM MOMENTS TOO. THEY R SO ENTERTAINING.
LOVED VARUNIA MOMENTS TOO.
WOW RIDHIMAA IS GOING TO BE MOTHER . GOOD NEWS FOR ALL FAMILY.
NOW WAITING FOR HONEYMOON MOMENTS OF ALL COUPLES.
UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE.
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Promo
Next week later
Everyone blessing garv as he is joining father office.
Payal felt dizziness but pretending to be happy for garv.
Garv:(tells) see u soon Payal.
Payal: bye.
Garv:(ask) what happened dull lagri ho.
Payal:(smiles) journey ki tiredness hai don't worry.
Garv went.
Payal:(faints)
Vivaan: varun doctor ko bolade.
Varun : yes:(went)
Vyom:(lift her and went in
Scene shift.
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In garvyal bedroom!
Doctor checking payal.
Family is standing
Payal:(get conscious)
Diya:(ask) doctor Sab theek haina?Kya Hua Payal ko
Doctor:(smiles) Don't worry Mrs gunjan vadera and congrats you are becoming grandmom from mom.
Diya:(get happy) Sunaa aapsabne?
Family:(tells) Congrats to u.
Doctor went.
Payal:(worries)
Diya: Kya Hua Payal.
Payal: mom. I am worried. garv ko career set karna hai. Kaise manage karega. Main prepare nahin hun
Diya: Don't worry hum expert hai guide karenge
Payal:(get relief) iam sorry.
Diya: it's ok. garv ko batao.
Payal: lunch main batadungi. I will try
Vivaan: revenge lelena Payal proposal day ka garv se.:(smiles)
Payal:(tells) aaplog pray kijiye k main batasakun.
Voice over
Kya Payal apne garv se good news share karpayegi.?
Kya hota garv ka reaction Payal ki pregnancy ki baad jankar?












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AWESOME PRECAP DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT IS GOING TO BE VERY INTETESTING.
GOOD NEWS PAYAL IS GOING TO BECOME MOTHER AND GARV IS UNAWARE OF IT.
UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE.
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Part 549
After breakfast
In shimla
Resort!
Honeymoon suite1
Garvyal arrive with room service members behind holding their bags.
Garv:(take bags and tells) 6cups coffee Plz, two for two mr and Mrs vyom vadera and mr and mr Varun vadera.
Room service member went.
Garv:(lookdoor and to get romantic with his wife)
Payal:(getshy)
Garv:(while coming tells) door lock Karne se shy hori ho? Jab main tumhare paas aunga toh kya karogi?
Payal:wait and watch(smiles and take pillow and hit him)
Garv:(catch it and tells) catching main expert hun. Boarding and college main student mere paas aate the cricket tips lene k liye(throw on her)
Payal:(tells) nice to know Garv, tum Sab kuch karsakte ho in future criminal ko jail send kardoge, sorry to say mujhe nahin catch karsakoge:(show tongue)
Garv:(smiles) are you challenging me?
Payal: yes I am challenging u.
Garv:(ask) sochlo.
Payal:(tells) sochliya.?
Garv: okay then be careful :(follow her)
Payal:(tries stay away from her)
Garv:(act to faint and fall on floor)
Payal:(get worried and comes near him and take head in her lap shake him rub his hand)
Garv:(catch her hand wink at her)
Payal:(glare at him)
Garv:(hug her) sorry.
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In honeymoon suite2
Vyom start sleeping.
Pari:(tells) sleeping beauty k bhai utho?
Vyom:(tells)pari Abhi toh aye hain mujhe rest Karne do? Khud bhi rest karo.
Pari:(tells) hum roaming Karne aye hain? Rest k liye nahin aye.
Vyom:(tells) Kal Plz.
Pari: ab..
Vyom: coin toss karo heads aya toh challenge, tail aya to rest.
Pari: okay.
Vyom:(toss coin)
Pari prays.
Vyom:(catch and prays)
Pari:(ask) check karo.
Vyom:(check and show)
Pari:(tells) tails.
Vyom:(lies down) good night
Pari:(tells) cheating hai.
Vyom: tail hi toh aya tha.
Pari: tumne pray kiya hoga.
Vyom: no.
Pari: yes sleeping beauty k bhai.
Vyom: no.
Pari: yes sleeping beauty k bhai.
Vyom: no sleeping beauty ki bhabhi.
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In honeymoon suite3.
Varunia spending time with eachother
Varun:(ask) coffee drink karke achcha lagra hai?
Nia: yes.
Varun:(ask) Kya gift kiya jb ne tumhe. And bhabhis ko.
Nia: spl moment par bataungi.
Varun:(tells) hum honeymoon par hai, usse spl Kya hoga
Nia: you are right. But you have to wait for me.
Varun: okay boss
Nia: good.
Varun:(tells) reception Par call karke map order karleta Hun phir jayenge.
Nia: okay
Varun:(calls from landline) hi iam varun vadera
Receptionist: yes how may help you.
Varun: Plz send shimla map.
Nia: three map
Varun: three map one for us, one for mr and Mrs Garv vadera,. One for mr & Mrs vyom vadera
Receptionist: okay sure sir. (End all)
Varun: hogaya anything else.
Nia: no
Varun:(tries to get romantic)
Nia:(walk away)
Varun follow her.
Nia walk here and their
Varun follow her
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Back to garvyal suite room!
Garvyal resting on bed.
Payal:(ask) tum office join Kab Kar rahe ho?
Garv: jab hum cg jayenge tab. All thanks to dad.
Payal:(ask) kya bolre the tumhe.
Garv: mujhe doubt hua tha, main lawyer banneke capable nahin hun toh decline kiya. Phir dad ne bataya personal life main sabse misunderstanding hoti, professional life main misunderstanding nahin hoti.
Payal: wow dad is so intelligent.
Garv:(ask) mere without worried toh nahin hojaogi jaise main Parag tha toh hogayi thi.
Payal:(for his relief tells) family hai mere Sath aur office Usa main thodi hai Jo tumhe miss karungi. We will enjoy
Garv:(tells) as Parag dekhliya maine sabko aur tumhe kitni miss karte hain mujhe. So apni story apne paas rakho.
Payal:(smiles) okay.
Garv:(tells) kabhi kabhi lunch leke ajao hamare office.
Payal: okay i will come.
Garv:(felt nice)
Payal:(tells) I hope family Chandigarh resort main theek se ho.
Garv:(tells) don't worry Sab theek hunge
Payal: Sab Sath milke talk karenge
Garv: sure. Aur Kya Kya karna hai yahan.
Payal:(tells) Kal shopping karenge sabke liye, uske next shimla tour karenge each day aur phir chalenge hamare ghar.
Garv: pic captured kardenge.
Payal: yes(smiles)
Garv:(kiss her on cheeks)
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Back to cg resort garden.
Vivaaniya simple playing ball with eachother
Rocky:(arrives) hello vadera girls.
Simple: hi Rocky.(smiles) kaisa aya?
Rocky:(tells) Rahul bhaiya k sath. Family ko protect Karne k liye.
Simple:(smiles) wow.
Vivaaniya: aane se pehle mirror dekha ya nahin.
Rocky:(ask) kyun Kya hua?
Vivaaniya: bf Bade hain aur tum chote ho. Tumhare hands and legs chote hain, help kaise karoge?
Rocky:(tells) u don't worry. :(Smiles) bp problem hojaunga, Sab tense hojainge.
Vivaaniya: very funny.
Divaan:(arrives)
Simple: Ed and maasi.
Divaan:(hug them get separate)video time.
Trio stand together.
Vivaan:(shoot video of them)Diya tum bhi jao.
Diya:(join kids) hello.
Vivaan:(shoot their video)
Kids went.
Diya:(tells) vivaaniya Rocky Madhu vihaan jaanvi di ranvir bhaiya k jaise behave karte hain. Iam sure love bhi full hoga.
Vivaan:(tells)stop imagining.
Diya: sorry possessive dad.
Vivaan: chalen:(went)
Diya:(follow him)
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Back to shimla resort!
In resturant
After returning from shopping mall
Garvyal pariom varunia having lunch after talking with family.
Garv: pari Nia shimla shopping mall achcha laga.
PariNia: yes bhaiya.
Garv: Kal Payal aur tumdono k liye surprise.
Vyom:(ask) Kya?
Garv: Kal ka wait karna hoga vyom and you to wait varun. Phir dekhna kitni fun ayega.
Vadera brothers: okay bhaiya
Payal:(ask) Kal phir se Parag ka getup Karne wale ho Kya?
Garv:(ask) trust hai.
Payal: yes:(smiles)
Garv: then wait and watch.
Payal:(smiles) okay.
Varun:(tells) aaplog main se kissi ko cold k liye medicine chahiye toh mujhe bataiye I have with me. I have
Vyom: wow doctor Varun.
Varun:(inslowtone) vyom bhaiya slow Plz, otherwise patients ajayenge.
Garv:(ask) Varun Nia ko tune kabhi bataya, doctor banne ka idea kaise aya.?
Varun: nahin.
Nia:(ask) kaise.
Garv:(normally) hum jab chote the dad ko brain tumor hogaya tha, Uske Baad se Varun decide karliya doctor banungi.
Nia:(get touch by his idea claps for him)
Siblings also.
Varun:(felt nice)
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In shimla resort garden!
Vaderasisters sitting
Pari: Nia tune jb ka gift dekha ya Varun ne dekha.
Nia: maine dekha Varun ko nahin ko dikhaya.
Pari: good koi khas din batayenge, Payal di aap batao.
Payal: Garv toh mere liye dresses ready karna chahta tha. But I decline him, Pata nahin kitni din decline karungi. Garv ko. He want to help me.but Kya karun shy feel hota hai show Karne main. Mujhe habit nahin haina.
Pari:(getsurprise) husband wife jaise kuch nahin hua.
Payal:(get quite) hhmm. Aur toh aur Garv bhi complain nahin Karta kabhi.
Nia: what understanding you both have.
Pari: no problem, Bollywood movie ko follow aur wedding night celebrate karlo Garv bhaiya k sath
Payal:(get shy) shut up pari.
Pari: dekha Nia.2 times Wedding hogayi. Aur Abhi bride jaise behavior hain.
Nia: haan.
Payal:(tease them)teasing ka revenge ghar jaake lungi tumlog se.
Vaderasisters:(hold ears) sorry.
Payal:(tease) Kya bolre ho. Mujhe sunai nahin dera?
Pari:(tells) koi option nahin hai apke paas, Garv bhaiya convince Karne ayenge apni behnon k liye, aur reason learn karna chahenge. Nia jao Garv bhaiya ko leke ajao.
Nia:(get up)
Payal:(stop her) it's.
Vaderasisters smiles.
Payal:(smile)
They spend times.
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Otherside of resort garden!
Brothers sitting.
Vyom:(tells) aapke idea achcha hai.
Garv:(tells) thanks.
Fewgirl (approach them) hi guys.
Vyom: hi beautiful.(shake hand with her happily)
Garv:(slowtone) vyom tumne promise kiya tha pari k aane k Baad kissi aur ladki ko nahin Dekhoge.?
Varun: yes.
Vyom:(tells) cg ki ladkiyun k liye tha, shimla ki ladkiyan hai. Woh bhi beautiful.
Garv:(dial pari number) ek baar phir sochle vyom. Pari ne tujhe stranger k sath dekha toh mujhe tumlog ka divorce karane ko kahegi. Garden k yeh side aake
Vyom:(get scare but didn't show Infront girls) no problem.
Varun:(tells) vyom bhaiya,pari di bhabhi ko easy nahin lo. Pool main dump karegi.
Someone:(said) no problem.
Vyom:(smiles) exactly no problem.(get scare to realise her voice) pari
Pari: nahin pari devil.(laugh evilly)
Vyom:(varnish from their sight)
Pari: u also go.
Girls went.
Pari:(went)
Payal:(tells) Garv Kya need thi? Pari ko call Karne ki. Pata nahin vyom ka Kya hoga?
Garv:(tells) don't worry.
Payal:(tells) Chalo patch up karane k liye.
Garvyal:(went)
Varunia spends time
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In evelator
Vyom:(dialing number)
Pari:(step in) hello my not so dear husband.
Vyom:(getscare)
Lift begins.
Pari:(ask) Kya chalra tha garden main.
Vyom:(make excuses) pari achcha kiya tum agayi, tumhe pata haina main ladkon se physicalfight karta hun. Ladki kyun se nahin.
Pari: so.
Vyom:(made excuse)so I was waiting for you to save me from them. Otherwise main kidnap hojata aur phir respect chalejati thi. Aur mujhe suicide karna padta tha. Phir mom dad ka divorce hota tha. Dad par responsibility ajati toh business ki. Main mamu ya chachu nahin banna na Abhi.
Pari:(start laughing)
Vyom felt nice
Lift open.
Garvyal varunia:(getsurprise) patch up hogaya.
Vyom:(tells) aapke bhai hi itna cute koi bhi ladki attract hojati hai, (side hug her) yeh toh phir bhi Meri friend + wife hai.
Garv:(tells) I know, but be careful, (normally)otherwise kab Kya hojaye pata nahin.
Payal:(tells) don't worry Garv, they are here for fun not relation.
Vyom:(tells) wow Payal di bhabhi, aap To girls learning main expert ho?
Garv:(tells) agree, let's go park
Siblings: yes.
Payal: yes.
Garv:(press down botton)
They wait for to go downwards
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In evening
In garvyal suite
Garv arrange surprise dinner date.
Payal:(arrives) yeh surprise tha Kal ka Jo aj preponed hogaya.
Garv:(tells) Kal ka surprise kuch aur hai but fun ayenge. Aj ka dinner hai, save hai kuch nahin hoga tumhe.
Payal:(smiles) it's okay for that day Garv.forget it. Jab log love karte hain toh yeh Sab hota hai.
Garv:(ask) jab tumne mujhe love karna start kiya toh kaisa kuch hua?
Payal:(tells) only tension thi, alone kaise hoge? Ek din call nahin aya toh dargayi thi.(ask) us din Kya hua tha?
Garv: tumhare photos ko dekhte dekhte sojata tha. Aur aise phone discharges hogaya? Secret tha toh charge Karne ka time nahin Mila.
Payal: oh I see.
They feed eachother.
Garv:(ask) Payal tumhara bhi koi dream hoga na batao Kya dream hai?
Payal:(tells) teacher banna tha.
Garv:(ask)tha se Matlab. Ab Kya burayi hai.
Payal: main vaderasehgal family ki d.i.l hun, tumhari to be lawyer ki wife hun, achcha nahin lagta na.
Garv:(tells) what's big deal, poonam chachi famous physicartic hai, kasak maasi doctor hai. Tum kyun nahin. Tum teacher banogi aur hamare school ki teacher banogi.
Payal:(tells) but Garv.
Garv: no but if, decide hogaya hai, hum jab return jayenge toh family ko batadenge.lets finish dinner.
Payal: Garv plz listen to me.
Garv:(feed her)
Payal:(feed him)
They spend times.
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In pariom suite!
Pariom spending time!
Pari:(ask) tum dar rahe the na divorce name sunke.
Vyom: haan.
Pari:(ask) Kya baat ka dar? Mujhse apni band play hone ka?
Vyom:(tells) nahin.(Normally) tumhe khone ka.
Pari:(tells) then bhuljao. I will not go anywhere. In my entire life.
Vyom:(felt nice) okay
Pari: haan but mere Sath smartness mat karna, aisa jaungi k return na asakun?
Vyom:(tells) Don't worry. I won't do smartness with u. Let's watch film.
Pari: you know mujhe film ki need thi.(bit her upper lips)
Vyom:(ask) kyun?
Pari: koi shimla dikhaya toh humlog actual main photos lesakte.wahan.
Vyom: good idea. Smart hogayi tum mere Sath rehke.
Pari: tum insaan ho ya rain kahin bhi start hojate ho?
Vyom: tum bhi. Achcha Woh gift kab show kar rahi ho?
Pari: tum surprise date plan karo toh.
Vyom: sure.
Pari: Kal ka surprise Kya hai.
Vyom: hum 3 husband ka secret hai, Wait and watch.
Pari: okay fine.
Vyom: film dekhen?
Pari: ok
They watch movie.
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In varunia suite!
Nia:(thinks how to help her sister in getting romantic)
Varun:(ask) Kya sochri ho?
Nia:(tells) yeh k tum jAb chote the kya achcha sochte the. Iam proud of you.
Varun:(smiles) thanks.
Nia:(tells) welcome.
Varun:(ask) tumhe height phobia hai Kya?
Nia:(ask) kyun?
Varun: batao toh.
Nia: pehle batado
Varun:. Kal ka surprise height se related hai.
Nia: cable train par jaaren hum.
Varun:(tells) right answer.
Nia: okay.
Varun:(in mind) bahot innocent ho tum.
Nia:(ask) Kya sochre ho.
Varun: yeh hi garden main kidna fun aya vyom bhai se, ek number k cartoon hai.
Nia:(seriously) varun.
Varun: Garv bhaiya bhi kuch Kam nahin hai.
Nia: Kya kArdiye.
Varun: Payal di bhabhi ko khud se love karane k liye, sardar Parag bangaye the,
Nia:(getsurprise)what?
Varun: koi bhi question karde toh emotional hojate aur hum sabse dance karate the apne entertainment k liye.
Nia: wow
They take rest.












































































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Precap
Garvyal pariom varunia to have hot air balloon ride one by one and romantic moment as well.
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FABULOUS UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY MINDBLOWING AND SUPERB UPDATE.
LOVED HONEYMOON TIMES OF ALL COUPLES. LOT OF FUN IS THERE AND LOVELY MOMENTS OF ALL COUPLES.
GARVYAL MONENTS R ROMANTIC.
VYOM PART IS FUNNY ONE LOVED PARIOM TUNING .
VARUNIA R ALSO VERY GOOD.
WAITING FOR HUSBAND SURPRISED FOR WIVES.
TAKE CARE. 😊 😊 😊
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Part 550
After breakfast
In shimla
Garvyal having hot air balloon ride.
Payal:(is fearing by height) Garv chalte haina.
Garv:(tells) Payal pehle Dekho na Plz.
Payal:(tells) mujhe dar lagra hai baat ko samjho.
Garv:(hold her hand) I promise you I won't let anything happened with u instead me
Payal:(keep another hand) I promise you I won't let anything happened with u instead me.:(smiles
Garv:(tells) is baat hot air balloon par enjoy karte hain.
Payal:(ask) Garv ek question tha. Ask karun.
Garv:(normally) nahin.
Payal: stop joking Garv.
Garv: tum jaanti hona tum mujhse kuch bhi question karsakti ho formality kyun?
Payal: sorry. Main kaise achche lagti hun tumhe, open hair ya tie hair main.(warn him) no old dialogue.
Garv:(tells) first shadi k next day tum fresh hoke ayi thi wet hair without makeup, thoda sa sindur simple se earings main bahot achchi lagi thi, main wahin rehke dekhna chahra tha tumhe.
Payal:(felt nice)
Garv:(ask) sudden yeh question kyun?
Payal:(makes story kabhi humlog game play karenge hum win karsakenge sametime.
Garv:(tells) ok.
Payal:(in mind) thank God. Garv ki choice pata chalgayi mujhe.
Garv:(ask) afraid to nahin hona Abhi.
Payal: tumne hold kiya mujhe afraid kyun hungi main.
Garv:(felt nice)
Romantic song playing,
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After garvyal ,pariom join hot air balloon.
Pari:(hug her lp instead watching down in fear)
Vyom:(tells) pari. Don't worry kuch nahin hoga.? Aur phir mamma papa bhi toh hai sky main. Kuch bhi kaise hosakta hai humein?
Pari: aur cg main mom dad bhi hain, pray karenge.
Vyom: yes we are double bless so why worry instead enjoying.:(Smiles)
Pari: try karti hun?
Vyom: good.
Pari:(try to watch) vyom, yeh scene kitna beautiful hai Dekho.
Vyom:(watch with her) yes you are right.
Pari:(tells) it's not that bad.
Vyom: exactly. Aur tum aise hi dargayi. Don't worry hum one more time hot air balloon se jayenge cg return.
Pari: luggage ka Kya?
Vyom: luggage flight se ajayega. Apni luggage family k Sath.
Pari:(smiles)
Vyom:(tells) problem solve.
Pari:(tells) tumhe pata haina, bags ko walk karana padta hai.
Vyom: Dont worry.:(smiles) and watch
Pari:okay.
Vyom: good.(ask) cg main hot air balloon purchase karenge hum.? Every time usmain ghumenge without traffic fun karenge.
Pari: good idea.
Vyom: okay then very soon I will gift you hot air balloon.
Pari: okay.
They watch scene.
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After pariom, varunia join hot air balloon.
Their journey begin.
Nia is fearing.
Varun:(ask) Nia tum toh flight se ayi thi, Usa main alone rahi ho,(ask) aise kAise dargayi.
Nia:(tells) hot air balloon main thodi rahi alone main, flight main hostel main koi na koi hota hai.
Varun:(tells) exactly,now also, i am with you so don't be afraid. & Enjoy.
Nia: okay I will try. But yeh scary hai.
Varun:(divert her) cg jaake Kya karna chahogi. mere Sath hospital join karogi kya? Ya housewife rahogi.
Nia: family ko problem nahin hogi toh join karungi, otherwise family k Sath rahungi.
Varun: don't worry, family will get ready. Poonam chachi bhi toh Abhi Kam karte hain.
Nia: actually jaane do. Mujhe ghar k Kam learn karna hai. Sabko tumhare behalf company Dena hai.
Varun: okay fine.
Nia: koi hospital se confirmation call aya?
Varun: Abhi nahin interview k liye nahin gaya main.
Nia: okay. Kahan jaane wale ho, arjun uncle k paas ?
Varun: no. Kahin aur. Let it be to that. See outside.
Nia:(give her hand and go forward to watch)
Varun:(hold her hand to support her) don't worry mere hath main hai tumhara hath.
Nia:(smiles)
Varun watch with her.
Nia:(tells) wow it's so beautiful.
Varun: not more then you.
Nia:(smile at. Him)
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In garvyal suite!
Pari:(teaching her sister how to impress her lp with sister)
Payal:(tells) mujhse nahin hoga pari.
Pari:(warn her) aapko impress karna hoga Garv bhaiya ko. Otherwise humlog kuch years Baad toh kya? Kabhi promote nahin hunge. Aur na aaplog promote hunge
Payal:(get shy) tu bhi na
Pari:(ask) Payal di aapka mood nahin hota. Garv bhaiya k romance ko enjoy Karne ka? Romantic decorate place par ya dream nahin kiya.
Payal: haan jab Garv Parag banke rehta toh ek baar imagine kiya tha.
Pari: dekha ab reality kArdijiye.
Payal:Garv arrangements kara.
Pari: theek haina, Garv bhaiya arrangements karenge, aap enjoy karna learn karo.
Payal:(tells) okay.
They continue.
Someone knock.
Payal:(ask) koun hai.
Garv: main hun garv.
Payal:(open door)
PariNia:(went)
Garv:(ask) kya chalra tha.
Payal: nothing, hot air balloon ride ki baat.
Garv: really. Sisters aise kyun bangaye.
Payal: vyom Varun se Milne k liye excited hunge.
Garv: okay.(ask) yahan achcha lagra hai?
Payal: haan. Aur aj jo tumne beautiful sights dikhaye uske return gift bahot jald dungi tumhe
Garv: kab aur Kahan?
Payal: yahan shimla main.
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In pariom suite
Pariom spending time
Phone ring
Pari:(happily) hello dad.
Vihaan:(ask) kaisi ho
Pari: theek hun,aj hum teeno couples hot air balloon main ghumke aye.
Vihaan: good, hot air balloon main vyom badmashi toh nahin karana.?
Pari: no dad. vyom is good with me.
Vihaan: good otherwise main shimla asakta hun
Vyom:(takephone) hello dad. Meri one and only mom ko chodke aaoge aap?
Vihaan: haan. Any problem.
Vyom: i don't have any problem, but hosakti hai hamari mom aur aapki wife ko woh aapki band bajadengi, unke bte ki band bajane k liye?:(laugh)
Vihaan:shut up, otherwise pari ko bolunga tujhe room main bankar k aye
Vyom:(tease him)I will close her in room And come.
Vihaan:(tease him I will close Madhu and come home then(endcall)
Vyom keep telling hello.
Pari:(ask) kya hua?
Vyom: mere joke ko serious leliye dad aur mom ko cg resort main lock Karne wale hain.
Pari:(start laughing)
Vyom:(ask) kya hua?
Pari: tum aur dad ek jaise ho. Dono joke karna jaante hain, wife ya family ko harm karna nahin.
Vyom:(tells)oh no.
Pari: oh yes.
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In resort resturant!
In lunch
Triple couples eating.
Nia: Garv bhaiya, main aapse ek baat ask karsakti hun.
Garv: Nia, yaad jab Varun ne permission lera tha toh kya kaha tha,
Nia: haan.
Garv:(ask) then kyun ask Kar rahi ho. Sister hoke kyun permission leri ho?
Nia:(smiles) Varun batara tha, aap Payal di bhabhi k liye Parag banke aye the, really.
Garv: yes aisa hi hua tha.
Nia: wow Payal di your so lucky.
Payal:(smiles)
Garv:(tells) only payAl hi nahin tum aur pari bhi lucky ho, sehgalbrothers ki to be wife bhi lucky hai,
Nia:(smiles)
Garv: yeh first time nahin hai, jab hum bachche the, Payal aur main Romeo juilet banne the. Aur madvi k birthday main bhi vyom pari ki acting Kare the hum dono.
Nia:(tells)wow
Vyom: tumhe pata hai, baat baat par bachhon jaise rote the, hum sabse dance karate the the.
Garv: Nia ek baat main batana bhulgaya, hum childrens ko show Karne k liye remarriage plan hue the aur tumhare vyom bhaiya, sabse chupake vihaan chachu ki car dickey main baitgaye the.
Nia: Varun ne bataya mujhe
Vyom: Varun k bachche bahot naughty hogaya tu.
Pari: jiska tumhare jaise bhai ho woh aise hote hai.
Payal saw someone and get shock.
It's samar
Garv:(ask) kya hua?
Payal:(nod in no and smiles)
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Back to garvyal suite.
Payal:(is worried)
Garv:(hug her from behind)
Payal:(getscare) kaun?
Garv: tumhara Garv aur tumhara romoe hai. Koi aur nahin hai aur koi hoga:(ask) kya baat hai hotel se dekhra hun tum afraid ho?
Payal:(lies) mujhe laga tha mere legs k paas cockroach hai.
Garv:(get relief)mujhe bolna tha na, main mardeta(hug her from behind)itni si baat k liye worried hote hain kya?
Payal:(turns and hug him) sorry.
Garv:(hug her back) it's ok and be happy,
Payal:(hug him,inmind) sorry garv, main nahin chahti samar k bcoz tumhe ya hamare siblings ko kuch ho isliye lie kiya.
Garv:(ask) yeh magic kaise hogaya aj.?
Payal:(get confuse) meaning.
Garv: tum bhi worried thi main bhi worried tha aur door lock karna bhulgaya aur tum mujhe rokna bhulgayi.
Payal:(tells) tumne hi toh bola tvsoap and movie Sab common hai.
Garv:(tells) nod bad
Payal:(get shy)
Garv:(tells) ek aur baat batana bhulgaya.
Payal:(ask) kya batana hai?
Garv:(tells) shy karte time aur beautiful lagti ho?
Payal:(smiles)
Garv: ab toh double beautiful.
Payal:(hug him)
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In shimla temple
Garvyal comes for prayer.
A little girl join them and pull Garv coat.
Garv:(turns)hi.
Girl: dad I want laddoo.
Garvyal getshock.(look eachother)
Payal:(tells) beta. Aap kissi ko bhi dad nahin bolsakte ho. Aapke mom dad Kahan hain? Aapka Naam kya hai?
Girl:(slowtone) I know? They are coming after talking on phone, I loves sweets, and iam hungry,isliye aaplog ko join karliya? Plz by my parents.
Garv:(inslowtone)okay. But mera daughter ka Naam kya hai?
Girl: my name is soniya.
Garv:and iam Garv and she is payal let's pray.
Trio pray.
Pandit distribute prasad
Garv: pandit ji Meri beti k liye thoda aur prasad dijiye.
Payal:(get impressed with him)
Pandit:(give prasad)
Soniya went.
Garv:(ask) kya hua?
Payal:(tells) kuch years Baad tum wonderful dad hoge pata chalegaya mujhe.:(smiles)
Garv: mujhe bhi pata chalgaya k tum strict mom hogi.
Payal: strict wife bhi hojaungi. Zyada spoil kiya toh. Teacher stick se bandplay kardungi. Tumdono ki.
Garv:(tells) time haina years ka main change hojaunga.
Payal:(tells) let's go.
They went.
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Back to resort
Garden tree.
Pariom Varun engraved Garv loves Payal and Payal love Garv,(in second line) Vyom loves Pari and Pari loves Vyom,(in third line) Varun loves Nia and Nia loves Varun.
Garvyal:(returns) what's happening here.
Pariom varunia move different side.
Garvyal:(reads and felt nice) so beautiful. Thanks.
Payal:(give them prasad)
Pariom varunia eat prasad.
Garv:(ask) permission mili ya nahin yeh Sabk liye.
Vyom: don't worry Garv bhaiya permission mili ayi thi.
Pari:(text and ask) Payal di Garv bhaiya ko Surprise kab free ho.
Payal:(text and tells) two three time aur help kardo. Habit hogi toh surprise kardungi.
Pari:(replies) okay.
Soniya:(arrives) uncle aunty.
Garvyal: soniya aap yahan.
Soniya parents: sorry mr and Mrs vadera. Soniya ne trouble kiya.
Garv:aisi koi baat nahin hai, bachchi hai soniya, masti toh karegi.
Sonia's father:agree, (look around for garvyal daughter)
Sonia's mother: aapki beti nahin dikhri.
Garv: we three couple marries this year.
Sonia's father: oh I see, aapke caring side ko dekhke laga, aap loving parents ho.
Garvyal:(tells) no problem.
Pari: aap friend request dijiye, jab hamari niece ayegi ya nephew ayega, aapse miladenge
They exchange request.
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After dinner!
In resort!
In garvyal suite!
Payal:(waiting in sleeveless Nightwear and open hair and makeup wearing shawl)
Someone:(knock)
Payal:(ask) who are you?
Someone: it's me Garv.
Payal:(hide behind door and open door)
Garv:(enter) where are you?
Payal:(close door) here.
Garv:(turns and get worried) kya hua, unwell ho Kya?
Payal:(remove her shawl)
Garv:(get mesmerized by her beauty)
Payal play aye dip hai mushkil
Garv:(twirl her and pull closer and kiss her on shoulder)
Payal:(get shy and goes to bed)
Garv:(close door lift her in arms like a bride put her on bed and switch off lights and restdown on bed with her remove his dress)
Payal:(turn her face)
Garv:(comes over her kiss her everywhere)
Payal:(close her eyes with shyness)
Garv:(whisper) I love you.
Payal: I love you 2?:(hug him)
They comsumenate marriege.
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In pariom suite
Pari:(inmind) I hope Payal di plan successful karsake Garv bhaiya k Infront.
Vyom:(ask) kya sochri ho?
Pari:(tells) Kal ka surprise guess Karne ki try Kar rahi hun. Tum toh bataoge nahin na.
Vyom: obviously. Surprise thodi batate hain jo main bataung tumhe.
Pari:(start fake drama)love main log kya kya nahin karte hain aur tum surprise nahin batate mujhe.how rude
Vyom:(tells) main hi nahin Sab husband's aise hi karte hain.
Pari:(tells) unsabke wife k number do. Wife group banake straight karna sikhaungi tumhare Sath.
Vyom:okay theek karlo(ask) tum party planner ho ya hitlers ki Nani,? Jo fight Karne ready rehti ho.
Pari: party planner hun, aur bones breaker bhi hun. Hitler nahin hun.
Vyom:(getscare) pari toh really devil banri hai, kya hoga mera god.
Pari:(ask) kya hua vyom? Afraid ho mujhse bhagne ki planning kar rahe ho?
Vyom:(getscare)tumhe kaise pata.?
Pari: bhulgaye main kya hun.
Vyom:(by fearing) devil.
Pari:(glare at him) kya kaha? Devil
Vyom:(tells) devil toh main hun aur tum Meri devi ho.
Pari:(laugh)
Vyom:(tells)cg main tumhari band play karaunga, mom se.
Pari: don't scare me?
Vyom: truth hai truth hai?.
Pari: chalke dekhenge.
Vyom: okay.
They watch movie.
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In varunia suite!
Varun:(Ask) Nia, Abhi talk karen kya mom se. Humdono k joining k Baremain, hum jab bhi return jayenge toh decide karke rakhenge sochke.
Nia: okay but morning main, Abhi Sab rest Kar rahe hunge.
Varun: okay fine. Iam excited to join hospital with u.(smiles) iam sure sabko achcha hi lagega. Jaise mere joining se achcha laga.
Nia: I know maine dekha, dad, gun di k love ko support Kare the.
Varun: yes he is amazing person. You know jab humlog bachche the, weddings jokes hote the,toh dad hyper hojate the,
Nia: how sweet our dad is.
Varun: possessive bhi.
Nia: mom apne sons k liye possessive rahe hunge.
Varun:haan ofcourse. By the way aj tum aur pari di bhabhi Payal di bhabhi k Sath.
Nia: sisters talk lps ko nahin batate Varun.
Varun: main toh Payal di bhabhi pari di bhabhi ka bhai hun na.
Nia: phir bhi nahin bataungi
Varun: not fair.
Nia: sorry rules are rules. More important then you
Varun: okay.
Nia: good.
Varun: I hope lps complains nahin hui ho.
Nia: ofcourse not. Bcoz we three have good respective husband's.
Varun:(smiles) we also have good respective wife's.
Nia: congrats and good night.
Varun: good night.
They take rest.
















































































































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