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LOVELY UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY SUPERB AND MIND-BLOWING UPDATE.
LOVED EACH AND EVERY PART. SO BEAUTIFUL WRITTEN.
GARVYAL R REALLY ADORABLE COUPLE. LOVED HOSPITAL PART AND GARV BEING AS PARAL. IT WAS SO ENTERTAINING AND LOVELY.
LOVED PARIOM PART TOO. LOVED PARI CONCERN FOR GARVYAL AND PARIOM CUTE NOK JHOK ON MAASI AND CHACHI.
VARUNIA PART WAS AWESOME.
WOW NIA JOINED VARUN AND WENT TO CHILD WARD SOON SHE WILL WIN KIDS HEART.
LOVED PAYAL PART WITH HER LOVELY AND CARING SAAUMAA DIYA.
LOVED GARVYAL SPENDING TIME TOGETHER AND GARV CARE AS MASSAGE OF PAYAL HEAD BUT FRIM INSIDE HE IS DISTURBED. HOPE SOON EVERYTHING WILL BE ALRIGHT.
UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE. 😊 😊 😊
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Part 565
In hospital
Payal getting medication!
Garv:(take phone, on video recorder)
Payal:(get shock) yeh kya kar rahe ho?
Garv:(tells) hamare baby ya babies k liye video banara hun, jab ayenge toh dekhenge, mom kitni strong hai.:(smiles)
Payal:(tells) every mother ka name different hota hai, love and try same hota hai. Its not big thing.
Garv:well said(kiss her on for head)
Payal:(getshy) hospital hai.
Garv:(tells) mere resort se kam nahin hai., waise bhi hum family k first runaway bride and groom hai, yeh bhi bolenge hum
Payal:(laugh)
Garv:(tells) payal, I have decided, tum strictmom rahogi, main spoiling dad. Role reversal hoga
Payal::(tells) sochlo defend karoge bachon ko wrong work toh toh one leg par stand karadungi father daughter se.
Garv:(tells)OK:(get shock) what?
Payal:(tells) yes.
Garv:(ask) parag kya karega?
Payal:(tells) eating reading and enjoy woh bhi mere sath.
Garv:(tells) you are changing b4 baby arrival.
Payal:(ask) garv, jis din hamara separation, tum theek the na?
Garv:(lies) haan:(ask) aise kyun ask kar rahi ho?
Payal:(tells) mujhe believe nahin hai, Jo garv mere liye itna big sacrifice karnewala woh itne easyily eat and rest karega.
Garv:(hold ears)) I am sorry I agree but, main next day achche se rest kiya aur agaya, I promise I will not repeat mistake again
Payal:(smiles)its ok
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In VM backyard
Diya:(is thinking)
Jaanvi:(along sisters)kya hua gunjan.?
Diya:(tells) di, hum payal aur baby k liye pooja karenge garv nahin hoga toh payal ko kya bolenge.?
Jaanvi:(tells) don't worry? Garv tumlog ka beta hai, apne love k liye apne decision k against jayega.
Madhu:(tells)sab theek hogaya toh decision change hojaiga. Don't worry.
Jaanvi: madhu right hai. Don't worry now.
Diya: thankyou both of you. Bahot tension thi mujhe:(smiles)
Madhu:(ask) jaanvi di, apki shadi main kya karna hai.
Jaanvi: kuch nahin otherwise surprise spoil hojaiga.
Ranvir:(arrives along his brothers) kaisa surprise.?jp
Jaiveer mayur enters
Jaanvi:(ask) kya bolre ho tum.?kya surprise kaun sa surprise.(tells) I think tum old hogaye ho na toh misunderstand kar rahe ho.
Ranvir:(ask) what?
Jaiveer:(repeats) I think aap old hogaye ho na toh misunderstand kar rate hain.
Mayur:(cover mouth with palm)
Ranvir:(strictly) shutup jaiveer.
Ronak:(tells) ranvir let it be.
Vihaan:(tells) he is right, yehlog old hosakte hain but stubburness nahin chodte
Madhu:(seriously)what do u mean.?
Vihaan:(get scare)nothing.
Divaan: let's discuss.
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Back to hospital!
Garvyal spending time
Payal:(tells) garv I was thing tum work join karna chahiye, main pari ya gun ya madvi k sath aajaungi.
Garv:(tells) impossible, chahe is duniya main ho ya us duniya main. I won't leave you alone.(smile a bit) samajhne main late karunga but samjhunga tumhe aur tumhare feelings ko.
Payal:(felt nice)its OK for past garv, tum mujhe apne jaisa banake khud mere jaise bangaye the:(smiles)
Garv:(tells) aisa kuch nahin hai, tumne before wedding se leke aj tak bahot strength dikhayi hai.
Payal: okay fine tumhari wife bhi achchi aur mera husband bhi achcha hai.
Garv:(smiles) right saying.
Payal:(ask) hum returning main icecream khasakte hain plz.
Garv: haan but doctor se permission Milne k baad.
Payal: okay.
Garv:(ask)aur kya kya plan hai batado, thode din hi arre hain hum, utne time main tumhari wishes fulfill karunga. Baby k arrival k baad baki k wish fulfill karunga I promise.
Payal:(smiles)okay.
Doctor:(arrives) comfortable hona payal.
Payal: yes doctor.
Garv:(tells). Theek khati nahin hai. Uneasy hojati hai.
Doctor: its okay, aap try karte rahiye. Khilane ki.
Garv: yes doctor,doctor kya payal icecream khasakti hai.
Doctor: haan but limited not much.:(went)
Garv:(ask) yes.
Payal: now fulfill your promise.
Garv: okay
They spend times.
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In VM pariom room!
Pariom spending time.
Pari is thinking.
Vyom:(ask) kya sochri ho.
Pari:(tells) hamare ghar k couple kitne awesomehai. Chahe Jo hua ho kuch difference nahin hai. Excepted us.
Vyom:(ask) aisa kyun?
Pari: bhulgaye, mere friends ki baat sunke effect hogaye.
Vyom:(tells) pari main upset hoke gaya tha. Baki ki baat pata nahin thi
Pari:(get separate, start acting) mujhe zyada important hai baki ki baat,
Vyom:(get confuse) what happened.?
Pari:(tells) yeh Mera question hona chahiye, what happened to your love?
Vyom:(tells) ghalti se mistake hogayi.
Pari:(block him to the wall) kya mistake? Mujhe love karne ki ya wedding karne ki.?
Vyom:(tells)tumhe wrong samajhne ki. Wantedly nahin kara dad se agayi habit.
Pari:(tells) Maine toh nahin dekha dad ko misunderstand karte.
Vyom:(tells) hosakta hai.dad aise rage hain, meri age main, bilkul bachche. Mom straight kare hunge.
Pari: don't make excuses.
Vyom: I promise. Reality hai. U know na main pretend nahin karta, sab bolta hun.
Pari: aur yeh bhi k tum fool banjate ho:(smiles)
Vyom:(get shock) what. Iski punishment milegi tumhe:(pull her by waist)
Pari:(taken a back)
Vyom:(lock lips with her)
Pari:(close eyes)
Vyom:(wrap hands around her back)
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In varunia room!
Nia is working
Her phone rings
Nia:(take calls) haan varun.
Varun:(ask) alone work kyun kar rahe ho?
Nia:(get shock) tumhe kaise pata?
Varun:(tells) turn around.
Nia:(tells) joke ka time nahin hai.
Varun: okay, three words ka time kehna ka time nahin hai kya?
Nia:(tells) ghar aane k baad
Varun:Main hospital k bachon k sath hun. Wohlog sunna chahte hain. I love you varun.
Kids: yes.
Nia:(tells) bachchon aapke bhaiya k work ka time hai gift ka time nahin, aaplog samjhao.
Varun:(tells) bachchon, aapke didi se bolo. Gift nahin milega toh kam nahin hoga. Scold hojaunga main.
Nia:(tells) very funny.: hand free off karo.
Varun:(off hand free) haan bolo.
Nia:(tells) payal di bhabhi and baby main improvement hai.
Varun: abhi test nahin hua nia, iam sure improvement hoga.
Nia: okay.
Varun:(tells) don't worry.
Nia: I am glad to know.
Varun: tum payal di bhabhi ko possitive hope dena.one more thing
Nia: kya
Varun: mujhe I love u bolna. Main happy toh payal do bhabhi.
Nia:(laugh and end call
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After lunch in Vm
Dining
Family enjoying icecream with payal.
Garv:(in mind) baby aapko pata hai grandmom and chachu ko problem main the but chachu grandmom apne aap ko protect karliye, aap bhi mom ko aur apne aapko protect karlo plz. She is suffering. (Get tears)
Vyom:(notice him) garv bhaiya what happened?
Everyone notice him.
Garv:(wipe tears) kuch nahin, sisters ko miss kar Raha hun. I wish humlog hamare parents jaise sath hote toh kitna achcha hota na. Hum log sisters and baby's ki care karte.
Vyom:(tells) let's go and bring them.
Payal:(tells) main kuch bolsakti hun.
Family: haan.
Payal: mere aur baby k normal hone k baad rehne k liye bulaiye. :(normally) otherwisesistra ko reality pata chali toh sisterz and baby k health k liye achcha nahin hoga.
Garv: you are right, wohlog wish karne ayenge hum return gift main stop karenge:(smiles)
Vyom:(tells) good idea.
Diya:(tells) garv, mujhe kuch kam hai chalo.
Garv: sure mom:(tells) siblings payal rest karna chahe toh leke jao.
Siblings: okay.(smiles)
Mother son went.
Payal:(in mind) god save us,for everyone happiness. Pata nahin sab past repeatense ko kaise tolerate kar rahe hain.
Pari:(ask) kya hua payal di aap silent kyun gain
Payal: nothing pari. Thanks dad.
Vivaan:happy raho thanks nahin bolo.
Payal: okay dad.
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In divaan room!
Garv sharing his pain with mother.
Diya:( consoling him) don't worry god will make everything fine.
Garv:(tells) god jaise kuch nahin hota mom. Stone hai woh, jab bhi wrong hua, help nahin kare dekha hai jaise movie ho:(get emotional)
Diya:(felt bad for him)
Vivaan:(arrives) kya hua? :(join them)
Diya: weak hora garv.
Vivaan: main baat karta hun tum Jao.
Diya:(wipe tears and went)
Garv:(wipetears) I know dad iam doing wrong by behaving like this. Payal k liye strong rehna chahiye, but uske pains tolerate nahin hote mujhse, dreams main khodeta hdad,
Vivaan:(tells) I understand garv, Maine yeh sab witness kiya, chahe kitna hui ho. God dissappoint nahin hone diye, mujhe believe hai yeh complications payal ko hi nahin baby ko kuch nahin hone denge. Hope mat chodo chance do god ko.
Garv: okay dad, main aapke jaise brave rahunga, payal aur baby strength banunga.
Vivaan: woh sab mat karo. Be brave. Payal ki hope break hone mat do. Happy rakho,
Garv: yes:(ask) dad itne strong husband & father & brother kaise bane.
Vivaan: chodo aur batao, kya gift kar rahe ho. First term complete karne k liye.
Garv:(tells) dropler machine. Payal jab chahe sunsakti hai heartbeat.
Vivaan: good idea.
Garv:(ask)dad, Pooja main family k log rahenge na.
Vivaan:(tells) haan don't worry.
Garv: thanks.
Vivaan: ab chalo.
They went.
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Back to hall!
Family spending time.
Father and son arrives.
Ranvir:(ask) jaanvi surprise kya hai?
Jaanvi:(in mind) god, aap baki sabke usko kam sunnewala kyun nahin banaye old age main.
Ranvir:(ask) bolo
Jaanvi:bolri hun(tells) congrats ranvir,hum phir se parents banre hain.
Everyone control their laughter
Nia:(to herself) yeh kaise hosakta?
Varun:(whisper) just wait and watch.
Ranvir:(start laughing)
Family start laughing
Jaanvi:(ask) kya hua?
Ranvir:(tells) main woh ranvir nahin hun Jo would bhabhi k liye aya tha ok . don't makes excuse with me.
Jaanvi: tum bhi kuch puchna nahin chahiye. Main same jaanvi hun, nahin bolungi
Varun:(whisper) kaisa laga.
Nia:(whisper) amazing family.
Varun:(smiles)I know that.
Garv:(get up and come in front of wife) payal, will u marry me after 10 years.
Payal:(getshy) what r u doing?
Everyone ask her to say yes.
Payal:(tells) yes.
Garv:(get happy and hug her) thanks,
Vyom:(tells) but garv bhaiya aapko payal di bhabhi k bhaiyon ka test pass karna hoga.
Everyone laugh.
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In evening after dinner!
In garvyal room!
Payal:(comes after puking)
Garv:(hold her hand) theek hona?
Payal:(tells) tension hori hai? Baby k liye. Usko energy kaise milegi. Mere uneasyness se.
Garv:(tells) don't worry payal. Baby ko problem nahin hoga.treatment se normal hojaiga. Tumhari koi mistake nahin hai, hamari mistake hai.
Payal:(get confuse) kaise
Garv: hum ek dusre ko compliment kar rahe the, aur surprisebaby aane se pehle pata karliya, so usne socha, mujhe problem main aake dekhna chahiye, mom dad sach main strong hai ya mujhe chodenge
Payal:(nod in disbelief)
Garv:(joke with her) don't worry jab surprise baby ki entry hogi toh humdono ears pull karenge uske.dikhayenge, baby ko kaun hai parents main hai. If u don't want to take action then I will straight him.
Payal:(tells) humlog bhagjayenge toh kaise action loge garv.
Garv:(tells)achcha ji, main password lock install karadunga, phir dekhta hun. Kaise jaate ho.
Payal: okay try karlo, as all husbands tum apni wife k naam ka password set karoge. Right, I will unlock it:(smiles)
Garv:(act to get speechless)
Payal:(ask) kya hua?
Garv:(tells) life main first time koi mujhse Dari nahin, otherwise tum jaanti ho na main school don hun.
Payal:(tells) Jo wrong ho usko darna chahiye, main aur baby right hai, kyun darenge.
Garv: right hai, let's rest.
Payal:(smiles)yes.:(close her eyes)
Garv:(kiss her on head and tummy and take rest)
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In pariom room!
Pariom resting.
Pari:(ask) vyom hum kal garv bhaiya payal di k sath chalen. Hospital
Vyom: why not.
Pari: thanks.
Vyom: aur kuch.
Pari: itna hi. Thanks.
Vyom: don't say anything, tum nahin bolti toh lejata.(tease) Woh kyahain alone drive karte bore hota hun.tum aogi toh fun ayega
Pari:(ask) main cartoon hun kya? Jo entertainment k liye lejare the.
Vyom:(tells) kya baat hai, mujhe bolna nahin pada.
Pari:(glare at him) u.
Vyom:(tells) my name is vyom not u.
Pari:(tells) rude.
Vyom:(tells) its ok , mujhe dekhke sabki tongue slip hojati hai. After all iam handsome guy of the world
Pari:(tells) its your misunderstanding.
Vyom:(ask) Feb main kya hota hai.
Pari:(make excuse) surprise baby ko dekhna hai. Kitna grow hua.
Vyom: uske baad.
Pari: sabko inform karna hai. And yes achcha greeting dena hai.
Vyom:(ask) aur.?
Pari: abhi sona hai.
Vyom: nahin pehle yaad karo.
Pari: good night:(take rest)
Vyom:(made face and rest)
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In varunia room!
Varun thinking past and felt bad.
Nia:(ask) kya hua?
Varun: tumhe pata haina dad missing the, eldersibling ko school trip main jaana tha. Toh garv bhaiya gun di nahin gaye the mom aur mujhe chodke.
Nia:(tells)ek idea hai.
Varun:(ask) kya?
Nia:(ask) tumse hoga.?
Varun: bolo.
Nia:(tells) hum ladies servents banjate hain veil main ayenge. Isse payal di bhabhi aur garv bhaiya ko lagega hum chalegaye khushi milegi, but hum yahin rahenge.aur humein relief.
Varun:(tells) idea achcha hai aur uncomfortable bhi
Nia: varun ko easy lo. Rehne ki khushi manao.
Varun: yeh toh garv bhaiya types hoga,
Nia:(tells) get ready for acting.
Varun: (ask) tumhe bura toh nahin laga.
Nia: not at all.we are family, we need to stay here.
Varun:(ask) pakde gaye toh hurt hoga. Chalte hain.
Nia:(ask) payal di bhabhi bolne se, ladki banne k dar se.
Varun: first payal di bhabhi. Then ladki banne se darke.
Nia: main aur pari di bhabhi, ajate hain aur tum vyom bhaiya sath rehna.
Varun:(tells) very funny.
Nia: let's rest.
Varun: I love you bolo.
Nia: kal.
They take rest.

































































































































Edited by Ranjan-Maanak - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
LOVELY UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY SWEET AND BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.
LOVED EACH AND EVERY PART.
LOVED GARVYAL MOMENTS AT HOSPITAL. GARV IS SO CARING AND LOVING HUSBAND.
SO DIYA WANTS TO DO POOJA FOR GARVYAL BABY BUT WORRIED FOR GARV. LOVED HOW JAANVI AND MADHU GAVE HER POSITIVE SIGN. LOVED HOW VIVAAN MAKE UNDERSTAND GARV TO GET READY FOR POOJA. LOVED PARIOM ROMANTIC PART VERY MUCH.
VARUNIA PART IS SO CUTE. LOVED HOW VARUN IS ASKING I LOVE U FROM NIA IN FRONT OF KIDS.
LOVED GARVYAL SPENDING TIME TOGETGER AND UNDERSTANDING EACH OTHER.
JANVEER PART WAS ALSO SWEET.
LOVED THE IDEA OF NIA.
UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE. 😊 😊 😊
Edited by sandhYA_123 - 8 years ago
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Part 566
In hospital
Afterbreakfast
Payal getting treatment.
Garv is thinking how bad he is as husband and dad.
Payal:(notice him)garv
Garv:(getworried and ask) are u ok? Restless weakness nahin hori na.? Doctor ko bolaun
Payal:main theek hun, bas tum theek nahin lagre.
Garv:(tells) main theek hun, SG samajhna nahin teach kare dad toh kya hoga sochra hun.
Payal:(laugh)
Garv:(tells) oh hello, tumhe bhi SG samajhna nahin learn kiya.
Payal:(tells)doctor batadenge.don't worry.
Garv:(smiles) okay:(ask) ek baat puchun?
Payal:Haan.
Garv:(tells) tumne baby k liye record kiya kya Jo main bola tha,tumse baby k against.
Payal:(tells) nahin bcoz, jab baby bada hoga toh tumhare jaise ajib lagega, emotional state
Garv:(tells)not at all.main ajib nahin lagta.
Payal:(tells) its OK most people think like that about them self.
Garv:(tells) u know I won't lie.
Payal:(tells) yes but in your matter u lie always.
Garv:(change topic) payal, hum treatment ghar par karadein kya, isse tumhe aate jaate time tiredness hota hai, woh nahin.
Payal: idea achcha hai but problem hai, rimjhim riddhima ko pata chalega ghar ayenge toh. Hurt hoga sach pata chala toh. Achcha nahin hoga.
Garv:(tells) tum great ho.
Payal: aisa kuch nahin hai friends k liye anything.
Garv:(felt nice)
Pariom varunia:(arrives) surprise.
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After sometime
in SG room!
Doctor about to start SG of payal.
Garv:(ask) doctor, plz stop, liquid par mechine touch hoga toh shock lagega.
Doctor:(tells) don't worry. Mr garv, bahot time se SG hota hai, its safe.
Payal:(get amaze)
Garv: sorry doctor, first time hai toh panic hogaya.
Doctor: its:(ask) Mrs payal and mr garv are you ready.?
Garvyal:(tells) ready.
Doctor:(start procedure)
Payal:(praysinmind) god plz save us, mujhe sabke sath aur garv and baby k sath rehna, plz save us.
Doctor:(get surprise) yeh kaise hosakta hai?
Garvyal:(get worried) kya hua doctor.
Doctor:(tells)congrats, you are having twins.
Garvyal:(get happy) thanks
Payal:(ask) sab theek hoga na.
Doctor: don't worry, treatment se improvement hoga. you just eatwell, sleep well.:(tells) I will send nurse:(went)
Garv:(tells) congrats payal. Actually congrats twinsmom.
Payal:(tells) welcome.same to u. And I hope.Sab theek ho.
Garv:(tells) don't worry parag ya gia ekdusre ki care karenge. Strength banenge.
Payal:(getconfuse) gia kab se hogaya name.
Garv:(tells) varun vivaaniya dad ka name v se hai, maine bhi socha, hum follow karenge:
Payal:(tells) let's go.
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In vm hall!
Family waiting for garvyal
Garv:(arrives with his wife, give them envelope) yeh sab aapke liye hai.
Everyone watch it one by one get happy for garvyal. Hug them.
Elders bless them.
Vyom:(jokes) finally main pehle wala vyom bansakta hun.
Pari:(ask) meaning?
Vyom:(tells) pari main sochra tha, one baby ayega toh tumse achcha banke apni turn lunga tumse. But I don't have 2 do anything.
Vihaan:(sternly) what?
Vyom:(tells) joke tha.
Diya:(ask) happy
Payal:(tells)yes mom
Vivaan: garv tum batao.happy ho
Garv:yes dad.:(smiles hiding fear, take phone and click SG pic and share pics with sisters)
His phone rings.
Garv:(on handfree,answer happily) hello my sisters.
Khannasisters: congrats. Both of u.
Garvyal:(tells) thanks.
Khannabrothers along parents: congrats.
Garvyal:(tells) thank you.(smiles)
Rimjhim:(ask) cake kahan hai.
Garv: aaplog ayenge na tab ready milega.
Khanna sisters: okay.
Garvyal went.
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In garvyal room!
Garv:(bring his wife in arms keep her carefully on bed)
Payal:(tells) garv, u don't need to lift me. Main alone nahin hun, twokids hai.
Garv:(tells) mujhe pehle bhi problem nahin thi agey bhi nahin hogi.
Payal:(felt nice)
Garv:(ask) BTW tum hospital main kya sochri thi.
Payal:(tells)main god se bolri, safe me,mujhe sabke aur tumhare sath rehna hai, tumhe lawyer bante dekhna hai. Baby k sath rehna hai.:(get emotional)
Garv:(hug her emotionally)don't worry payal, tum sabse ya mujhse ya babies se koi separate nahin karsakega.:(wipe tears get separate) tum mujhe toh kya parag ko lawyer bante dekhogi. Kuch bhi mat socho, strong raho mere liye.(wipe her tears)plz.
Payal:(smiles for him)
Garv:(tells) oh god. Main kaise bhulgaya
Payal:(ask) kya hua?kya bhulgaye?
Garv:(tells)humein married siblings k upcomingbaby or future baby ko dekhna, single siblings ko married dekhna hai.
Payal:(tells) oh yes.
Garv:(tells) tum ek list banado, main uske according shopping karunga. OK.(reminds) apni bhi banalo ok. Jo dresses se break Lena woh main pack kardunga ok.
Payal: okay.
Garv:(tells) tumhe pehle se zyada khana hai, kuch laun?
Payal:(tells) no thanks, iam sorry.
Garv:(ask) kyun?
Payal:(tells) weak hoke feelings batake sad karne k liye.
Garv:(hold her hand) main yeh hi toh chahta hun, tum sab batao mujhe. Friend samajhke.
Payal:(smiles)
They spends times.
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In backyard!
Phone rings
Doctor: hello,
Garv: hello doctor main garv vadera hun.
Doctor:(ask) Sab theek toh hai.
Garv:(tells) yes doctor sab theek hai, main chahra payal ka treatment ghar par ho.plz arrange someone.?
Someone take phone and cut call.
Garv:(get confuse) kya hua mom.
Diya: tum aise Kaise believe karsakte ho unknown par.
Garv:(tells) payal ki doctor ko bolra tha mom, payal aane jaane main tired hojati, toh socha, kuch months k liye nurse book karlun, doctor.
Diya:(tells) tum right ho garv, personally check karke book karo, payal and babys recover nahin hue, chance mat lo.
Garv: okay mom.
Diya: ek aur baat, god se angry Rehna chodo, apne life nahin toh payal k liye.
Garv:(tells) mom, hum unse angry hote hain Jo hamare hote hain, god mere nahin hai.
Diya:(ask) payal ka kya? Pooja k liye aanewale Rimjhim riddhima ka kya.?
Garv:(tells)don't worry mom, main payal aur rimjhim riddhima k liye Join karunga:(went)
Vivaan:(arrives)
Diya:(tells) garv , samajhne k liye ready nahin hai garv.
Vivaan:(tells) diya, understand him, yeh situation difficult hai, u know one time tha, mujhe bhi apne se hate thi, tumhara mere sath nahin rehna punishment lagti thi, but tumhare aane k baad meri thinking change hogayi.
Diya: but god se angry hona wrong hai.
Vivaan:(tells) don't worry god samjhenge. Tum garv se much mat bolo
Diya: okay.
They went.
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After lunch in hall!
Family spending time.
Arka:(arrives) congrats everyone.
Family: same 2 u.
Arka:(gave sweets)
Arjun: garv kaise lagra hai?
Garv: I am happy:(smiles) thanks.
Someone:(ask) may I come in?
Everyone get shock to see koyal.
Garv:(tells) gun plz payal ko andar lejao. Door close karo
Jrgunjan:(take her went)
Garv:(ask) how dare u step here.?
Koyal:(tells) main nahin ayi, doctor purvi ne send kiya mujhe payal k liye, I want to do something for u as friend so I came
Garv:(tells) socha na bhi mat, Jo bhi hua uske baad main tumhe payal k close jaane nahin dunga. Get lost. Koyal.
Koyal:(to divaan) uncle aunty aap samjhaiye, payal aur twins k health ka sochne k liye, past se zyada important hai.
Vivaan:(tells) garv I think we should give her a chance as nurse.
Garv:(tells)iam sorry dad, i can't agree with you, iam sure she came to take revenge from payal,
Koyal: aisa nahin hai. Mera wrong motive nahin hai.
Payal:(arrives) garv. Plz come with me.
Garv:: tum yahan kyun ayi
Payal take him and went.
Family worried.
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In backyard!
Payal:(bring her lp) garv, plz hamare babies k liye, appointments karo koyal ko.
Garv:(consoles her)payal, don't worry I will find new nurse. Koyal nahin, she will harm u.
Payal:(tells) nahin mili toh
Garv:(smiles) okay fine.(call his brother)
Vyom:yes bhaiya.
Garv: loyal ko bhejo. Sath main gun ko.
Vyom: okay bhaiya.
Jrgunjan and koyal arrives.
Garv: gun apne sath payal ko lejao
Gun take payal and went.
Garv:(ask) tumhare paas glocuse injection hai.
Koyal: haan hai.
Garv: lao aur mujhe lagao. Main bhi toh dekhun tumhe acting hi aati ya kam bhi
Koyal:( went to bring glucose injection)
Garv:(sat and lift sleeves)
Divaan:(arrives) garv kya decide hua.
Garv: mujhe dekhna koyal ko kya aata hai kya nahin.
Koyal:(come with glucose)garv.
Garv:(sternly) garv sir.(extand hand)
Koyal: sorry garv sir(inject glocuse to him)
Garv:(tells) chalo achcha hai, atleast good nurse toh ho tum.
Koyal:thank you garv sir.
Garv:(tells) hamare sath aao.
Four some went.
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Back to hall!
Garv:(tells)kal se ajao tum, no carelessness. Otherwise jail bhejdunga
Koyal:(went)
Payal:(tells) thanks for getting ready.
Garv:(get frusted) thanks for proving me good for nothing.
Divaan: garv.
Garv:what garv.
Payal:(tells) 6months ki baat hi toh hai, ek baar parag and gia ko aane do, uske baad bhejdenge.tumhi batao doctor ko kya bolenge.
Garv:pari nia apni behen ko leke jao,
parinia:(take her and went)
Garv:(satdown)
Vivaan: garv what r u doing.
Garv: kya karun main dad, thodi der ki khushi milti nahin k tension ajati hai, aise main kya kare koi. Kahan phas humlog:(get emotional)
Diya: don't worry garv humlog haina alert rahenge. Payal se kuch mat bolo, as mother she is right.
Vivaan: tum payal k sath rahoge toh koi kuch nahin karega.
Garv:okay:(tells) kasak maasi, plz payal k liye another nurse arrange kariye. Varun tum bhi plz. Its my request, otherwise sabse pehle main marjaunga.
Vihaan: garv kaise baat kar rahe ho beta, tum sabki strength ho, aise karoge toh kaise chalega, vyom ko kaun handle karega bhi spoil hojaiga toh.
Garv:(tells) aise lagra hai k kisse ne time bomb set kardiya, kabhi bhi kuch bhi hoga.
Arka: don't worry.
Garv: OK.
Arka:(met them and went)
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In evening after dinner!
In garvyal room!
garvyal spending time.
Payal:(ask) garv aj kya hua tumhe.
Garv:(tells) koyal ko dekhke cheating yaad agayi, control khodiya khud par se. I don't have complain with u. Na parag and gia se. Don't worry.:(side hug her)
Payal:(smiles) you are a best husband and tobedad. Jealous son. Phir cute and sweet ho
Garv:(smiles) I love you.
Payal: I love you 2.
Garv:(ask) payal ek baat puchun.
Payal: haan.
Garv: are you afraid.
Payal:(tells) afraid nahin, babys k news Aane se pehle problem hoti toh koi baat nahin thi, :(get emotional)
Garv:(hug her) don't be sad, yeh Jo bhi situation sab theek hoga:(joke with her) payal ek baat batao pehle kaun aya? Parag ya gia.
Payal:(tells) parag.
Garv:tum no.1 buddhu ho, as usual gia ayi hai parag afterwards.
Payal: tum buddhu the buddhu ho aur buddhu hi rahoge.
Garv: tum buddhu ho.
Payal: tum.
They debates.
Garv: calm down, otherwise mujhe car main sona padega. Alone.
Payal: jab babies ayenge toh bade hunge, unko mujhse story sunna hoga main bachchon k Seth rehjaungi raaton main, so habit karo. Alone rehne ki.
Garv:(pull her closer) abhi toh mujhe time do.
Payal:(smiles) ok
They take rest.
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In pariom room!
Pari:(is lost somewhere)
Vyom:(ask) kya sochri ho.
Pari:(tells) kash hamara baby pehle ajata.
Vyom:(get shock) kya aur kyun?
Pari:(tells) agar hamara baby aata toh, payal di aur garv bhaiya ko difficulty nahin milti. Hum baby ko handover karte the
Vyom: agree. Now we can pray, everything to get well soon.
Pari: another nurse bhi milne k liye.
Vyom: don't worry, kasak maasi aur arjun chachu aur varun arrange karenge.
Pari: correct.(get some idea) vyom yaad hai, jab hum bachche the badepapa ko BT tha, garvbhaiya online posting kare the.
Vyom: haan but hum aisa nahin karsakte, Didi's jiju's ko pata chalega. Let's wish kasak maasi and arjun chachu ko nurse mile
Pari: right saying.
Vyom: aj chahe Jo hua ho. Twins surprise achcha hai, payal di bhabhi ko complication face karna nahin padega again
Pari: babys innocent hai, healthy nahin hai
Vyom: I know.
Pari: let's pray parents and baby's.
Vyom:(ask)babys arrival party main mujhe ladki toh nahin banaogi.
Pari: thanks for reminding.
Vyom: very bad.
Pari: maine kya kiya? Tumne remind kiya.
Vyom: let's rest.
They take rest.














































































































































































Edited by Ranjan-Maanak - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
SUPERB UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY AWESOME AND MINDBLOWING UPDATE.
LOVED EACH AND EVERY PART. BEAUTIFULLLY WRITTEN.
PARTS OF GARVYAL R SUPERB AT HOSPITAL AND AT HOME IT. IT WAS EMOTIONAL ONE TOO.
WOW GOOD NEWS. GARVYAL R GOING TO BE TWINS. SUPERB. EVERONE GETS HAPPY AFTER THIS NEWS.
LOVED CUTE VYOM SO MUCH.
OMG NOW KOYAL IS APPOINTED AS NURSE OF PAYAL. BUT GARV IS NOT READY FOR IT. LOVED THE WAY HOW HE TOLD KOYAL TO INJECT HIM TO KNOW THAT SHE KNOWS IT OR NOT.
GARV IS VERY MUCH ANGRY ON GOD.
PARAG AND GIA R NYC NAMES. LOVED THEM.
LOVED PARIOM CUTE PART TOO.
NOW UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE. 😊 😊

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