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Ayesha_Tabassum

@Ayesha_Tabassum

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Posted: 10 years ago

Prologue

Struggle jaane ke baad Aarri hai ranjan-maanak ki zindegi main khushiyan ki hope...But kya ?vivaan-gunjan ko apne siblings ke tarah struggle karke same khushi jeene ka chance milega

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Part 319

In VM backyard

Ranjan unborn baby 12 week begin. After breakfast

In backyard.

Ranjan-maanak spending time.

Jaanvi:(smiles)kya amazing taste haina?yeh fruits ka.

Maansi:(smiles) agree.

Ranvir:(smiles)its taste depends on its eater, not fruits.

Ronak:(smiles) agree.

Ranjan:(praise them) kya tuning hai,? dono ka same answer.

Maanak:(smiles) same to u.teaser couple.

Ranjan:(smiles) hum tease nahi kar rahe, reality bolre hain..

Maanak:(smiles) ok fine.

Ranvir: jaanvi & maansi bhabhi, hospital chalna hai kya if dizzy feel hora ho.

Maansi:(smiles) nahi ranvir main fine hun.

Jaanvi:(smiles) after sitting, better lagra hai.

Ranvir:(smiles) ok fine.?

Vihaan:(comes with guitar) mere song ke baad war better lagega

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In kitchen

Gunbala cutting fruits to make juice for sister.

Vivaan:(arrives) hello madhu, vihaan kuch search kar raha hoga, help him otherwise temperature increase hoga uske anger ka.

Madhu:(show fruits) then gunjan di kaise manage karegi.

Vivaan:(smiles) main hoon na, help kardunga.

Madhu:(smiles) ok.(went)

Gunjan:(smiles) tum jao vivaan main manage karungi.

Vivaan:(hug her from behind head resting on neck and helping her in cutting) and main help karunga

Gunjan:(get shy and say) vivaan koi bhi asakta hai.

Vivaan:(smiles) thirsty aur hungry feel kare toh aata hai koi bhi.

Maanvi:(comes) kya baat hai kitchen-r.

Vigun:(get separate bcoz of her voice)

Vivaan:(smiles) maasi main water ke liya aya toh dekha madhu Vihaan se Milne gayi toh main help karne roka.

Jeevika:(comes their) kya hua?

Maanvi:(smiles) couple ko disturb hogaya mere bcoz, otherwise better scene aasakta tha.

Vigun:(get shy) its not like that.

Jeevika:(smiles) meaning flashback dekhri thi apna virat ka.

Maanvi:(madeface) virat mujhe help kare . in dreams.

Jeevika:(smiles) don't lie, ek baar birthday breadcake prepare Kara tha, soup making main bhi. Vivaan main uske chachu quality ayi.

Maanvi:(smiles)

Vivaan:(smiles) wow nice.

Gunjan:right saying(finish making juice and went to offer)

Jeemaan:(smiles) go now help bhi hogayi.

Vivaan:(smiles and went)

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Back to backyard

Ranjan-maanak madhu enjoying vihaan music.

Gunjan:(arrives and give juice)

Vivaan:(join them)sorry madhu, vihaan yahan tha mujhe laga apne room finding kar raha hoga.

Madhu:(smiles) its ok.

Vihaan:(smiles) name mera tha work apka tha.(to his s.I.l) right hun na main gunjan bhabhi

Gunjan:(look otherside)

Vivaan:(withsmiles)stop making imaginary story.

Vihaan:(smiles) stop shying my brother and s.I.l

Vigun:(shake head in disbelieve) why stop,once more play guitar. Vihaan.

Vihaan:(smiles) ok(start playing guitar)

Trio couple and madhu enjoying song.

Jaanvi:(get up) ranvir let's dance plz.

Ranvir:(with care) tumhe dizzy feel hora hai, rehne dete hain.

Jaanvi:(smiles) tum hona saath mujhe kuch nahi hoga. :(verge of cry) plz agree ho

Ranvir:(get up saying) ok we will dance, but don't cry:(take her hands and his start dancing)hold me ok(hold from waist)

Jaanvi:(felt nice)ok.

Maanak: (felt nice join them )

Vigun aswell

Jaanvi:thanks ra(start feeling dizzy closing and opening eyes loosing grip)

Ranvir:(notice it and make her from behind pressing her head) hats of hai aapdono ko yeh condition main bhi hamare saath dance kiya.indirectly wish fulfill kari, no ko yes samjha

Maansi:(get worried but controls)

Ronak:(also get worried butsmiles) agree.

Jaanvi:(getting relieve and tell) mr.poet control, future siblings hasenge apne papa aur chachu par.

Ranvir:(smiles pressing head) main yeh hi toh chahta hun, babygirls time lagaye but smile karte ayen(madeface) Jo other babies nahi karte.

Maanak:(felt nice)

Jaanvi:(smiles) ok fine.(stop him made him) you win, now sit.

Ranvir:(smiles) where I won, tum mangayi babygirls aari, ya massage se

Jaanvi:(smiles) in blowing my dizziness.

Ranvir:(madeface) kash ke mere message se, tumhe thoughts aate Jo mere mind main aate.

Jaanvi:(smiles) daily massage karo toh ithink possible hojai.

Ranvir:(smiles) done deal.

Ronak: me to.(smiles)

Maansi:(smiles) let's not interfere in their deal.

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In lunch

Family eating.

Jeevika: raghav sameera cg main haina,?

Ronak:(smiles) yes mamma.

Maanvi: I was thinking,we should invite them to stay here:(smiles)even after prayerday

Jaanvi:(smiles) nice idea.

Maansi:(smiles) right saying maasi.

Ronak:(smiles) ok we will try.

Viren:(smiles) tumdono roklena tha brothers right se apne.next time must

Ranvir:(smiles) okay.

Jaanvi:(smiles) maaza ayega.

Maansi:(smiles) agree.

Ranvir: let's hope ke work hote yahan aane ka forget karke chale Jaye.(smiles)

Ronak:(smiles) agree.

Jaanvi:(smiles remembering his things) jaise host waise dost aur sibling.don't be negative.got it

Maanak felt nice.

Family also.

Ranvir:(felt nice on her praise)yes got it.

Ronak:(smiles) ranvir toh happiness main forget kardiya, main boldeta hun thankyou jaanvi.

Jaanvi:(smiles) welcome ronak jiju.

Ranvir:(smiles) main forget nahi Kara but due to friendship nahi bola thank you.

Maansi:(smiles) right ranvir.

Ronak:(smiles) good then.

Family smiles.

Viren: baby songs learn kare vihaan?

Vihaan:(smiles) yes badepapa, I am learning, bas angels aana hai like Karna hai mere rhymes.

Maanvi:(smiles) keep trying ok, little judge bhi elder judge jaise hote, not good k instead nonstop cry karenge.

Vihaan:(smiles) we will not let them cry haina vivaan bhaiya.?

Vivaan:(smiles) exactly,

Gunbala:(smiles)

Family nice and left

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Outdoor

Sarag roaming

Sameera:(smiles) kya amazing hai, dono bhai aur dono bhabhi same khushi relive kar rahen hai.

Raghav:(smiles) right saying.

Sameera:(sadly) kash hum sab 7 rehte, dono couples ko same care milta tha. Mom dad se Jo humko mila woh 4

Raghav:(smiles) don't be sad, Sam, gift find karne ka time hai.

Sameera: agree.:(smiles) but kya gift Karen.

Raghav: to variety dress for both babies.

Sameera: yeh ok hoga.

Raghav: toys bhi lenge.

Sameera: ok

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In evening after dinner

In maanak room!

Ronak:(smiles) baby's lucky hai,hamare types four spoilers ready hai

Maansi:(smiles) hum 4 stoppers bhi ready hai

Ronak:(fake sadly) so sad, main socha hum babies ko spoil karene main busy hunge, hamare LPs humko chahne main busy hunge.

Maansi:(smiles) then sorry ronak.

Ronak:(smiles) its ok.

Maansi:(smiles) ranvir amazing lp haina, dance bhi Kara jaanvi k 7 aur afterwards head massage bhi.

Ronak:(smiles) agree.

Maansi:(smiles) aap bhi ho ok.

Ronak:(smiles) thanks.

Maansi:(smiles) welcome.

Ronak:(smiles) tumhe sach main dizzy feel nahi hua na.

Maansi:(smiles) ofcourse not.

Ronak:(smiles) thank god.

Maansi:(smiles) let's rest

Ronak:(smiles) ok

They take rest

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In ranjan room!

Jaanvi:(with surprise) yahan to dizzy feel hora nahi.

Ranvir:(smiles)its nice thing.

Jaanvi:(sadly) dizzy aur faint hone bachne rehna hosakta aur tum nice think bolre ho.

Ranvir:(smiles) main tumhe relief hua isliye happy hora tha, woh way se nahi socha.

Jaanvi:(smiles) sorry.

Ranvir:(smiles) its ok.

Jaanvi:(smiles) ranvir tumhe yaad hai next month kya hai?

Ranvir: (with shock)mere bhai bhabhi ki anniversary.

Jaanvi:(smiles) nice.

Ranvir: but gift kya denge

Jaanvi:(smiles) time hai, hum kuch bhi samajhayega, tab tak.not tomorrow, don't take tension.

Ranvir:(smiles) your right.

Jaanvi:(smiles) kuch unique idea dijiye god.

Ranvir:(smiles) double idea for double relation god.

Jaanvi:(smiles) right

They take rest

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In vigun room!

Gunjan: next time aj jaise nahi hona chahiye vivaan.its not look good

Vivaan:(smiles)ok fine. Hum yahan ya kahin out(get some idea) outhouse main spend karenge.any type ka, what's say?

Gunjan:kya?(blush)

Vivaan:(smiles) yes.don't shy

Gunjan:(smiles) its not like that.

Vivaan:(smiles) lawyer friend+ lp se jhoot nahi bolte.

Gunjan:(tease) mujhe tease kar rahe ho, self bhi toh shy master hoke

Vivaan:(with shock) what did u say?

Gunjan:(smiles) truth kaha.girls ka samajh aata hai, but larke ka shy hona

Vivaan:(made face) what's big thing, jaise tumhe shy ka s nahi aata, waise bhi, main unique family se hun.so is ok

Gunjan:(smiles) angry ka a bhi pata hai.

Vivaan:(smiles) woh tumhare rakhibrother ka department hai. Main toh normal rehnewala hun.

Gunjan:(madeface) no words against my rakhibrother ok.

Vivaan:(smiles) ek condition par.

Gunjan:(normally) kya?

Vivaan: tum madhu k against nahi bologi.

Gunjan: done

They take rest

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In vibala room!

Madhu: gift discuss ki?

Vihaan:(smiles) nahi. Hum dono backyard main the phir surprise ki baat kaise karta.

Madhu: right ho.

Vihaan:(smiles) tumne discuss kiya.

Madhu: cutting time baat nahi karte, finger cut hota by mistake

Vihaan: (smiles) right ho.

Madhu:(smiles) next week jaake hi find Karna hoga.

Vihaan:(smiles) agree.

Madhu:(smiles) I hope hum 4 k gift like karen

Vihaan:(smiles) jaanvi di ka nahi pata, maansi di, ronakbhai-ranvirbhai like karenge.

Madhu:(smiles) as u.

Vihaan:(smiles) meri baat kahan se agayi.

Madhu:(smiles) tumhe upset rehke bhi bad feel hota na koi far hue toh.

Vihaan:(smiles) how do u know.

Madhu:(smiles) same problem meri gunjan di ki bhi. Pata nahi koi sweet brother ya lp se angry kyun hota, thought ki value karne instead, verybad

Vihaan:(madeface) vivaan bhaiya bolte hain, hum jinse close rehte, fight bhi karte. Which means main aur gunjan bhabhi, close hai Vivaan bhai heart ke

Madhu:(smiles) let's rest

Vihaan: ok

They take rest

Edited by Ranjan-Maanak - 8 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

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In VM

After breakfast

Babyroom! Which was once their room!

Maanak unbornbaby 12week begins.

Both sister layingdown.

Maansi:(with smile) kitne time baad hum yahan rest kar rahen.

Jaanvi:(smiles) agree. All thanks to our dizzyness.

Maansi:(laugh) very funny hai.you are, very nice thinker

Jaanvi:(smiles) thank you.

Maansi:(smiles) jaanvi apne niece ya nephew ka name socha?

Jaanvi:(smiles) still thinking and u.

Maansi:(smiles) same here

Jaanvi:(smiles) hamare second relation ko use kare aur share kare baby name. Instead as sisters

Maansi:(smiles) then doubles sorry,

Jaanvi:(smiles) so smart.

Maansi:(smiles) bcoz of u.

Jaanvi:(smiles) remember apki aur ronak jiju ki first meeting k baad aapne cry kiya tha.

Maansi:(nod in yes)

Ronak-ranvir: (comes and ask) why?

Sehgalsis:(getting up)

Ronak-ranvir:(stop them saying) Maine y r resting nahi kaha.(sat beside their wife) cry ke liye "y" kaha.

Jaanvi:(smiles) she felt bad being lawyers daughter, hesitate karke hurt kardiya sochke.second time fine the

Ronak:(get shock) kya?

Maansi:(smiles)

Ranvir:(smiles) aap mujhse ask Karna tha call karke bhai samajhke Ronak bhaiya ki like and dislike, Rona nahi tha,

Maansi:(smiles)r u sure sab pata hai

Ranvir:(smiles) yes maansi bhabhi

Maansi:ok(smiles) so tumhare brother hum 4 k babies ka name kya soche?

Ronak:(get shock and cough)

Ranvir:(smiles and handles) I am sure Jo bhi name soche hunge, aapse less best soche hunge.

Maansi,:(made face) kya ranvir meri hope ko dump kardiye.

Ranvir:(hold ears)

Jaanvi:(sadly) dekhliya apne devar ki reality, (imitate him)main world ke liye devar rahunga apka, but bhai types care love karunga.

Maansi:(smiles) don't be hurry in judging, ask your ronak jiju.

Jaanvi:ok ok(smiles and ask) ronakjiju boliye na.

Ronak:(hold ears) sorry wait Karna hoga.

Maansi:(laugh and said)sunliya ranvir alone hider nahi hai.

Jaanvi:(smiles) ok ok.

Ronak-ranvir: (smiles)

They feels baby heartbeat by droplers.

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In hall family having tea.

Vihaan:(remember something) mamma maasi, 1time again bolenge, Jo last week bola tha. Babyshower ke about main.

Jeevika:(smiles) 8thmonth par function hoga woh.

Vihaan:(smiles) aur bhi kuch bola tha aapne. Hamare plan k about main, I am happy for that to

Maanvi:(got it) meaning?

Vihaan:(smiles) baby showermain humlog dance and fun karsakte, meaning mamus-mamis together.

Virat:(smiles) she understood , but chance nahi ayega, hamare uninvite entry ko exit show kardeti thi, tumlog ke saath b4 wedding hua four time. Forget it

Vihaan:(get shock) kya.

Maanvi:(smiles) exactly.

Vihaan:(smiles)time bhi unlimited hai aur hum sons se love bhi, think plz.(to bro) Vivaan bhaiya bolo na.

Vivaan:(smiles get up said) chalo sisters ke paas time spend karte hain. (Went)

Vihaan:(tap feet saying) kya hogaya hamari tunning ko? my bro(get pain) ouch.

Jeevika:(with care) be careful Vihaan.

Vihaan:(made face) yahi karunga ab mere brother kidnap Jo hogaye madhu ke jijubhai se:(left)

Gunbala:(went).

Family laugh.

Virat:(warn ) I warn u for dear son k liye cheating ki toh,mujhse bura koi nahi hoga.

Maanvi:(smiles) kabhi kiya Jo karungi.

Virat:(smiles) daul wedding bhulgayi, as waiter rehne diya.? Bangle ceremony main vivaan aya tha

Maanvi: mehendi main humein breakfast ya lunch karane aye the:(smiles) and bangle ceremony main vivaan apni sister madhu k liye aya tha. Unlike u fun k liye.

Virat:(madeface) so rude.

Virika:(smiles) chup hojao.

Virman:(in union) tell him/her.first

Family laugh.

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Back to babyroom

Trio sat after hearing babies heartbeat.

Madhu:(smiles) so sweet they are haina?

Sehgal sister resting.

Vivaan:(smiles) agree, looking main cute bhi hai.

Vihaan:(smiles)agree. aate-aate aur cute bhi hunge.

Gunbala:(smiles) right saying.

Ranjan-maanak: (smiles)

Jaanvi:(smiles) tumlog ke name list complete hogayi.

Vigun-vibala: (smiles) no time hai.

Maansi:(normally) atleast tum 4 excuse nahi karo.

Vigun-vibala: (smiles) promise we are not lying.

Jaanvi:(smiles) okay fine.

Vihaan:(smiles) 2reasons bhi hai that's y. 1st surprise hai, second hum kuch aur SPL sochre.

Ranjan understand

Maanak: (smiles) kya?

Vivaan:(coughs)babies ko enjoy aur spoil karane ki turn ki,

Vihaan:(smiles) exactly. Ab KBC close. Babies scare hunge kahin woh KBC contestant na banjaye.

Ronak-ranvir: (smiles) I am with u in this matter.

Foursomesisters:(sternly) what?

Foursome brothers:(smiles) yes. You can straight them, but let me spoil them.

Foursome sister: dekhenge.

Foursome brothers: most welcome.dekhlena.

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In lunch

Family eating without ranjan-maanak.

Viren:(normally)maansi-jaanvi ronak-ranvir ke without strange lagra lunch karna haina.?

Ranjan-maanak: (arrives holding plate) samehere.

Jeevika: dizzy feel hora tha jaanvi-maansi. Room main lunch and rest Karna tha.

Ranjan-maanak: (join them)

Jaanvi-maansi: abhi fine hun main.

Virika-virman: okay then. Eat.

Vihaan: mamma-maasi, hamari wish ka socha..?

Maanvi:(laugh) tumse ,tum4 ki wish kabse hogayi?

Vihaan:(smiles) bas hogayi.

Jeevika: time haina afterwards sochenge.

Vihaan:(smiles) especially angels k liye sochiye, (seriously)otherwise hum par hate ka blame apply kardenge.nahi rehne party main

Family laugh.

Maanvi:(smiles) eat karo, ice type food eat karoge tum. Otherwise.

Vihaan:(smiles) maasi k rehte impossible hai.

Jeevika:(smiles) agree.

Maanvi:(smiles)

Madhu:(thought something and smiles)

Jeevika:(notice) kya hua madhu.?

Madhu:(smiles) hamara future dekhri thi, aanewale nephews maansi di jaanvi di ke close hunge, uske baad (pointtoward herself)is maasi ka nephew iske close hoga.

Family (smiles)

Vihaan:(smiles) meri horoscope main tha, 3 cutie angels ko roam karaunga.(sadly) so madhu, forget about nephews.

Madhu:(smiles) you need to forget your stupid astrology.

Vihaan:(madeface) what a wife, itne saare examples hai learn karo. Best wife bano, husband ki khushi ki care karo

Madhu:(smiles) first u learn.

Family laugh andeat and left

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In hall

Sarag arrives

Family get happy and sat with them.

Sameera: bhabhis kahan hai.?

Ranvir:(smiles) bhaiyas se to baat karlo,

Ronak:(smiles) your bhabhis is resting anyways.

Sameera:(smiles) ok.

Jeevika: pooja k liye 1more week hai, rehjao na tumdono.(smiles)

Sarag:(smiles) hum ajayenge next week k baad promise.

Viren: okay fine

Everyone chat.

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In evening after dinner.

In maanak room!

Ronak:( hold her hand)maansi tumhare kitne secret pata hona hai mujhe. Tumhari especialities

Maansi:(smiles)sab toh pata hai aapko.

Ronak:(smiles) bahot kuch baki hai.

Maansi:(smiles) aap best ho isliye sab best lagta hai aapko.

Ronak:(smiles) exactly, tum best ho, sabko best samajhti ho.

Maansi:(smiles) kuch bhi bolte ho.

Ronak:(smiles) truth bolra hun.

Maansi:(smiles) ya apka love bolra hai mere liye.

Ronak:(smiles) it must be u your love.

Maansi:(smiles) genuinely bolri hun.

Ronak:(smiles) ok

Maansi:(smiles) aur kuch confirm Karna hai.?

Ronak:(smiles) nahi toh.

Maansi: okay

Ronak: ok ho?

Maansi:(smiles) yes.

Ronak:(smiles) let's rest

Maansi: ok

They take rest

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In ranjan room!

Jaanvi:(smile) botao kitni talking overhear ki?aj.

Ranvir:(smiles) only "cry" wali baat.

Jaanvi:(smiles) sure.

Ranvir:(normally) don't make my mother (realise and get sad)

Jaanvi:(smiles) last year promise kiya tha, mom se k unke aur dad k recreasion time par(pull his nice) unke bete se woh sab karaungi Jo woh karnewale the tumse.inmind

Ranvir:(smiles)oh achcha.

Jaanvi:(smiles) obviously, tum mere koi nahi the, but woh mere elders the na.

Ranvir:(smiles) scolding ki deal toh nahi Kari na?

Jaanvi:(smiles) tum good boy sorry good husband rahoge toh. Without deal scold nahi karungi otherwise scold bhi without deal.

Ranvir:(smiles)no problem super-d ayegi mujhe save karne.

Jaanvi:(smiles) khud bhi scold hojaigi.btw on the way super-son hai.

Ranvir:(smiles) late agree hone se better hai, ab agree hojao.

Jaanvi:(smiles) tum bhi hosakte ho.agree.

Ranvir:(smiles) kuch months ki baat hai, dekhte hain.

Jaanvi:(smiles) good idea

Ranvir:(smiles) let's rest

Jaanvi:(smiles) ok

They take rest

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In vigun room!

Vivaan:(smiles) tumhe kya lagta hai? Hamari entry possible hogi?

Gunjan:(smiles)I don't think, girls function main entry milegi, kissi man ki entry nahi hoti kabhi.

Vivaan:(smiles) let's hope for best.

Gunjan:(smiles) time hai bahot sa.

Vivaan:(smiles) ok.

Gunjan:(smiles)

Vivaan:(smiles) kya gift Lena hai.? Anniversary ke liye, maansi di aur ronak bhai ki.

Gunjan:(smiles)tumhe kuch samajh aya?

Vivaan:(normally) no Gunjan.

Gunjan:(smiles) no problem.

Vivaan:(smiles) Jo gift on the way hai hum sabke liye, use less best hoga hamara gift.

Gunjan:(smiles) agree.

Vivaan:(smiles) thode weeks ki baat hai, sochenge.

Gunjan: ok

Vivaan: let's rest

Gunjan:ok

They take rest

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In vibala room!

Madhu: tumhe girls function main interest kyun hai vihaan?being man

Vihaan:(smiles) hai toh hai, you don't know this? Sharing is caring.

Madhu:(smiles) ghar cupbourd food car share karne ke hote. Girls Parties nahi.

Vihaan:(smiles) kc k din kahan gaya tumhare yeh thought. Paris

Madhu:(smiles) elders ki tradion hai, mera nahi.

Vihaan:(normally) I wish secretly fasting karte.

Madhu:(smiles) sorry for thats impossible.

Vihaan:(madeface)unique family main hi born hona tha mujhe.kash ke normally family both yeh

Madhu:(smiles) 2Di's ,jijubhai aur Soham bhi born hue yahan, not only u. Don't forget

Vihaan:(smiles) I know already nahi sunna hai.

Madhu:(smiles) ok fine.

Vihaan:(smiles) aj shy nahi hua 3rd couple.

Madhu:(smiles) bcoz woh samajhgaye, irritate hue toh aur irritate karoge tum.

Vihaan: ok

Madhu: let's rest

Vihaan: ok

They take rest

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sandhYA_123

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Posted: 10 years ago

MANY MANY CONGRATS FOR UR NEW THREAD DEAR. AWESOME UPDATES. TOO GUD. BOTH UPDATES R AWESOME AND SWEET ONE. VIGUN SCENE IS AWESOME AT KITCHEN. RANJAN AND MANAK PART IS TOO GUD. LOVED EACH AND EVERY PART OF BOTH UPDATES. NOW UPDATE NEXT PART SOON DEAR. TAKE CARE.

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panamaa

@panamaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome update dear.

Congrats for ur new thread.

Loved all two parts.

Both r awesome and mindblowing.

Loved all couple scenes.

Now update next part dear.

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Ayesha_Tabassum

@Ayesha_Tabassum

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Posted: 10 years ago

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In vm after breakfast ranjan-maanak left for nearest resort for two days.after3days

Family spending time.

Jeevika: gunjan theek toh ho, subha kuch eat kiya. Kuch weeks se notice kar rahi hun

Gunjan:(smiles and touch tummy) I am fine mamma bas chramp feel hora hai toh nahi eat kiya.

Vivaan:(glare at her for hiding).

Maanvi:(remember something and smiles)

Jeevika:(get worried) oh no.vivaan, hospital kab lejaare ho.

Vivaan:(to himself) bolti toh lejata, koi krissh thodi hun.sab feel karne

Jeevika: vivaan Maine kuch pucha.

Vivaan:(getup) aap boldo gunjan ko hospital jaane ki baat, main lejaunga.(smiles)

Jeevika:(smiles) gunjan ready hojao aur check karake aao ok, pain main nahi rehna chahiye.

Gunjan:(smilss) ok mamma.

Vigun:(left)

Vibala:(follow them)

Jeevika:(get worried) yeh kya hai, sab theek hote-hote spoil hota hai.

Maanvi:(side hug her sis) my di, itni baar dekha, kuch nahi samjhe.?

Jeevika: meaning.

Maanvi:(smiles) little sehgal sibling koi join karnewala/wali hai. Jaanvi ko bhi aise hua tha. gp banre hain, for sure

Virika:(get shock and happy) kya?

Virat:(smiles) nice guess

Family get happy

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In resort

Foursome arrives.

Jaanvi: kitna beautiful place hai.?

Maansi:(smiles) agree.

Ronak-ranvir: I am glad u like.

Receptionist: may I help u.

Ronak: hi am ronak sehgal two suites book hai mere aur ranvir sehgal ke name se.

Reception:(checking)

Jaanvi:(smiles) suites for us wow.

Maansi:(whisper) ronak, suites newly wed couple ke liye hota hai.hum to be parent's hai

Ronak:(smiles) madam new relation aane se old relation over nahi hote right?

Maansi: (smiles) agree.

Ronak:(smiles) isliye hum aye yahan ok.

Jaanvi:(smiles) what a nice thought ronak jiju.

Ranvir:(smiles) chalen agey?

Ranjan-maanak: (take keys and left)

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In hospital. Room!

Vivaan:(anger change in worries)

Vibala is worried

Gunjan comes and sat with doctor after checkup

Vivaan:(with care) sab theek toh haina.hum chalen?

Doctor:kuch test karne hunge Mrs gunjan vadera ke, only asking and checkup Karna hua.

Vibala-Vigun:(get worried) test.

Doctor: don't worry, sometime ka work hai.:(smiles).gunjan ka hai,aap sabka nahi so scare mat ho.

Vigun-vibala:(smiles)

Vigun went for test for her test.

Madhu:(assuming negative things) kahin meri behen ko mere types BT toh nahi hogaya? Oh god. Vihaan. Meri behenko kuch naho

Vihaan:(hug her) sshh, gunjan bbhabhi ko headache thodi hua. Jo BT ka doubt kar rahi ho.

Madhu:(still hugging)right ho.

Vigun:(arrives and tease) wow kya scene

Madhu:(hug her)are u ok.?

Vivaan-vihaan: (smiles sidehug eachother)

Gunjan:(smiles) haan theek hun madhu,(hug her back)don't worry.

Vivaan:(smiles) ghar chalen.?

Gunbala:(smiles) ok.

Foursome left

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In suite

Ranjan spending time.

Jaanvi:(smiles) so beautiful.

Ranvir:(hold her hand) meri beautiful super wife and superdaughter ki presence se.beautiful hua.

Jaanvi:(smiles) really.

Ranvir: yes. Otherwise nothing hai.yeh place.

Jaanvi:(smiles) main aur beautiful?

Ranvir:(smiles) no my Supergirl's beautiful. Main every month new place ko dekhaunga, main beautiful hai.

Jaanvi:(smiles)tum good looking fool lagoge tab.sabko.balloon wife ke sath

Ranvir:(smiles) I don't care of world.more then your care jaanvi.

Jaanvi:(smiles) me to.to baby also.

Ranvir: me to:(smiles)

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In VM hall

family waitingfor vigun-vibala.with flowers for vigun

Vigun-vibala: (arrives get surprise) koi guest are hain kya?

Maanvi:(smiles)koi aisa waise guest nahi, SPL guest. Vihaan madhu par shout mat Karna SPL guest k in front otherwise apni team main lega woh madhu ko

Virat:(smiles) exactly mere saath hua, tere saath bhi hoga,helpless rahoge.Kuch bhi mat karna

Vihaan:(get hyper and said) Main uski aisi band play karunga na, triangle banne ki himmaat bhi jayegi humdono main aur woh khud bhi.

Maanvi:(smiles) uske parents tumhara same condition karenge, kuch kiya toh.

Vigun:(get confuse)

Vihaan:(get confuse) no chance,main dining jail bhejdunga madhu ko d.I.l aur wife banane ki (nod in no)

Maanvi:(nod disbelieve)suna ?to be parents gunjan-vivaan.tumhare against planing

Family smiles.

Vigun:(get shock)

Vihaan:(get shock) kya? Meaning main

Maanvi: fool chachu banra hai

Vihaan:(happily) congrats guys, (shake hands)

Madhu:(happily) congrats I am happy for u.(shake hands)

Gunjan: (normally)doctor ne nahi kaha test liya.

Vivaan:(smiles)kal pata hoga.

Virman: humein already pata, jaanvi ke bcoz.samjhe new mamma papa.

Vigun:(look down)

Family wish (them) Jo chahe ask karo.

Vigun:(take blessing)

Vivaan:(gave afraid look)

Jeemaan left with gunbala along sakshi

Viren-virat:(smiles) kya hua? Ready nahi, kids nahi pasand

Vivaan:(hesitately) its not like that, main aap fathers types hunga ya nahin he fear hai , best beta aur bhai aur pati hona tha abhi mujhe, so

Viren-virat-shlok: we will help u.

Vihaan:papatobe,-mamma to be ko congrats nahi karoge kya, go.

Jeemaan-sakshi-madhu arrives.

Vivaan:(went)

Family discuss

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In suite room!

Maanak laying down.

Ronak: how are u feeling now.?

Maansi: fine hun.

Ronak:(smiles) that's good.

Maansi: sudden yeh sab kyun.

Ronak:(keep hand on her tummy look her) meri angels k liye.

Maansi:(smiles) thank you.

Ronak:(smiles) relax karo thank you nahi.

Maansi:(smiles) okay.

Ronak:(smiles) good.

Maansi: next week main three months over hojainge. I never thought aisa hoga.history repeat hogi

Ronak:(smiles) achche persons ka bura nahi hosakta maansi, past main Jo hua its our luck. Yeh bhi wahi hai

Maansi:(smiles) thanks for be with me.

Ronak:(smiles) welcome.

They spends time.

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Back to VM backyard

Vigun is first time being past friends is speechless and shy. Sitting.

Vivaan:(break silence)gunjan are u happy? Ya scare

Gunjan: both, and u.

Vivaan:(normally) both.

Vigun: apni kya tuning hai:(laugh)

Vivaan:(sat on knees in front of her) I promise u, I will take care u both, teacher types nahi.past main jaise look after main last raha waise nahi hoga

Gunjan:(felt nice) don't say like that. Confirm honedo

Vivaan:(hug her carefully) right saying

Both went to family

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In hotel

In lunch

Jaanvi: so tasty it is.

Maansi:(smiles) agree.

Ronak-ranvir: (smiles) great news.enjoy it.ok.

Maansi-jaanvi: (smiles) ok

Ronak :(phone rings up) papa ka call hai.(keep on handfree)

Ranjan-maanak: (happily) hello everyone.

Family:(on handfree talk with them)

Ranjan-maanak: (felt nice after talking)

Ranvir: family se bhi talk hogayi, eat now ok.

Ronak:(smiles) exactly.

Jaanvi-maansi: (smiles)

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In hall.

Vihaan:(sadly) vivaan bhaiya gunjan bhabhi congrats for joining parents group as our sis and bro, siblings group.by leaving us

Madhu:(smiles on his behavior)

Vivaan:(smiles) I understand rock star.

Vihaan: (get confuse)meaning.

Vivaan: (sadly)main thodi chachu group join karsakunga fourchachus ki.(smiles pat him on shoulder)haina

Gunjan: agree

Vihaan:(smiles) answer less ho aap

Vivaan:(sadly) gunjan, tum maasi banlogi so mera sadness nahi samjhogi only jo chachu nahi hosakte, (pointhimself)woh samjhate ,meaning main

Vibala:(cough)

Vivaan:(smiles) wah my bhai-behen, what a reaction

Vihaan: dis ko kab bolenge.

Jeevika: day after tomorrow.aane ke baad bolenge.ok.

Gunjan:(inmind) I hope sab confirm ho.

Vivaan:(notice it and text)What happened?

Gunjan:(text back) kal ki tension hai.Jo sochre hain sab woh hoga ya nahi

Vivaan:(smiles and text)don't worry in advance.

Vihaan: aap log mujhe spoiling ki freedom dena third angel ko ok.

Madhu: nahi mujhe Dena hoga.

Vigun:(smiles) truth hone do.

Jeevika: exactly.

Family spends time

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In evening after dinner

In suite room!

Maanak resting

Ronak: are u comfortable?

Maansi:(smiles) yes hun.

Ronak: by the way as friend kuch bataugi mujhe.

Maansi: boliye.

Ronak: tumhe first semister completion k liye kya gift chahiye.

Maansi:(smiles) we have discuss about it.already.

Ronak:(smiles) mujhe laga place k saath, tum bhi change hogi but.

Maansi:(smiles) last name change hote, decision nahi.

Ronak: love bhi.

Maansi:(smiles) agree.

Ronak:(smiles) don't change it main bhi change nahi karunga ok.

Maansi:(smiles) yes,I know.

Ronak: let's rest.

Maansi: ok

They take rest

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In ranjan room!

Jaanvi:(is lost in thinking)

Ranvir:(notice) family ko miss kar rahi ho?

Jaanvi:(nod in yes)

Ranvir:(hug her carefully) jaanvi tumne kabhi socha, hum haters couple rehte toh kya condition hota tha sabke ears ka.?

Jaanvi:(ssmiles) headache hota tha, hamari ya family ki shifting hoti thi,

Ranvir:(smiles) together ya separate?shifting.? Tumbolo

Jaanvi:(smiles) shifting nahi, problem ka get out hota tha. Topic change karke as u did now

Ranvir:(smiles) right saying.(get shock) kya

Jaanvi:(smiles) yes.

Ranvir:(smiled) phir stuck hogaya.

Jaanvi:(smiles) Same here.

Ranvir:(smiles) yes.right

Jaanvi:(smiles) anyways yeh sab separate arrangements ki ya ronak jiju ke saath.

Ranvir:(smiles) dono contributed kare.

Jaanvi:(smiles) nice

Ranvir:(smiles) thank you.

Jaanvi:(smiles)

They take rest

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Back to VM in vigun room

Gunjan:(is tense for tomorrow)

Vivaan:(notice) phir same thing sochri ho.?

Gunjan:(smiles) hhmm.

Vivaan: hum one thing decide karte hain promise karte hain, result good ho ya bad, hum happy hunge saath hunga:(smiles)eachother ko chahenge

Gunjan:(smiles) ok

Vivaan:(smiles)good.

Gunjan:(smiles) thanks.

Vivaan:(smiles) welcome.

Gunjan: but family ka kya.? Advance main happy hai.

Vivaan: no problem they will understand.(smiles)

Gunjan: right hai dekha hai Maine.anywayz kab reports aare.

Vivaan: don't worry main launga:(smiles)

Gunjan: hum.plz.

Vivaan:(smiles) main ladunga, nahi aao

Gunjan:(smiles)mujhe aana hai.

Vivaan:(smiles) koi mujhe propose kardegi dar hai kya?

Gunjan:(smiles) believe tumpe hai, dar nahi koi girl ka. Saath aana chahti hun,

Vivaan:(smiles)okay fine ajao mere saath.

Gunjan: let's rest

Vihaan: ok

They take rest

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In vibala room!

Vihaan: tumhari socha amazing hai.(smiles)

Madhu: dargayi toh bola, don't make fun.gunjan di hai behalf parents.after all.(get sad)

Vihaan:(smiles) sad nahi hote, triple happiness ka welcome Karna haina.

Madhu:(smiles) agree. By the way vivaan jiju ke samne kya daringly warning dere the?

Vihaan:(smiles) mujhe kya pata tha third angel ki baat hori, bcoz of mamma yeh sab boldiya.

Madhu:(smiles)sorry bolna bhulgaye.

Vihaan:(smiles) tum bhi toh bhuli.mujhe kuch bolna

Madhu: what.?

Vihaan: congrats.

Madhu: tum bhi bhule:(smiles)

Vihaan: congrats.(smiles)extra arrangements karte hain babyroom main

Madhu:(smiles)first confirm honedo

Vihaan:ok let's rest

Madhu: good idea.

They take rest

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sandhYA_123

@sandhYA_123

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Posted: 10 years ago

AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. LOVED IT. IT WAS REALLY NYC UPDATE. BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN BY U. LOVED RONAK AND RANVEER SURPRISE TO THEIR LOVELY WIVES. LOVES THE IDEA OF SUITS AND THEIR TIME SPENT TOGETHER. AWESOME VIVAAN IS GOING TO BE FATHER. WAITING FOR GUNJAN REPORTS. EXCITED FOR IT. SO PLZ UPDATE SOON DEAR.TAKE CARE.😊😊😊

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panamaa

@panamaa

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome update dear.

Loved it.

It was really nyc update.

Loved the couple spending time together at suite so sweet it is.

Now vivaan is going to be father.

Waiting for next part.

So update soon dear.

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Ayesha_Tabassum

@Ayesha_Tabassum

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Part 322

Family eating

Vivaan:(got call and receive with smile) hello.

Doctor:(with seriousness) Mr vivaan, apki wife k reports agaye aap ajao aur discuss bhi Karna hai report ki.

Vivaan:(felt strange but smiling for family) aap Abhi bataiye na kya hai reports main family k sAth hun.

Family:(focus at him)

Doctor:(with seriousness) Its better if u come.emergency hai

Vivaan:(get worried) ok:(cut call) main abhi aata hun:(get up)hospital jaana hoga

Family: ok

Vihaan:(get up saying) he means humdono.(smiles)

Vivaan:(with smile) vihaan its ok main jaunga tum work karne jao ok.

Vihaan:(smiles) aap kuch time physic honewale hain happiness main, handle karne mera rehna important hain, by the way hum bhai hai, aap ice-cream aur main sunlight nahi hai melt ka fear hora toh so let me come:(get up)returning main icecream laate hain ok.

Vivaan:(get relax) ok chal selfboss.

Jeevika:(get up) ruko vivaan:(went to bring something)

Madhu:(with smile) vivaan jiju aapko physic bola vihAan, aap scold karo.

Vivaan:(smiles) we know him how he is so let it be.

Madhu:(smiles)

Gunjan: main bhi ajaun saTh:(smiles)

Vivaan:(smiles nod in no)

Jeevika:(comes and gave sweet) good work k liye jaare ho dono:(feed sweet them) eat karke jao.

Vivaan-vihaan:(smiles and left)

Ranjan-maanak: (arrives) surprise everyone.

Family get happy

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In hospital.

Vivaan:( come)hello doctor I came to learn and collect reports

Doctor:( checking reports of gunjan)hello Mr vivaan vadera plz be seated.

Vivaan:(sat with her) boliye.

Doctor:(normally) Mr vivaan vadera, I am sorry to say naturally Mrs gunjan vadera is can't be mother bcoz of her lower abdomen is weak for baby

Vivaan:(get shock) kya? Its not possible, hamara koi accident nahi hua(held head)

Doctor: (normally) remember your wife told that she fall on tummy on trolly.that' y hurt hua.

Vivaan:(nod in yes emotionally)doctor do something, plz otherwise she can't tolerate this, I can't tell her.

Doctor:(comes near him) Mr vivaan calm down,Maine kaha natural impossible hai, medically possible hoga treatments hai,uske liye batana hoga aapko apni wife ko.

"She is right vivaan bhaiya".

Doctor and vivaan:(look voice owner)

Vihaan:(sat beside him normally) vivaan bhaiya, I know gunjan bhabhi halftruth tolerate nahi karenge easily,but treatment ke liye full truth bolna hoga,ready Karna hoga, aapko bhi ready ho bolne plz.

Virika sad music plays.

Vivaan:(remembers everymoments relate to tthem)

Doctor: Mr vivaan vadera are u ready to inform Mrs gunjan. Unke checkups k after ivf hoga twelve days tak.

Vivaan:(normally) work karega treatment.

Doctor: less chance hai aaplog decide kar lijiye treatments start hoga

Vivaan-vihaan:(left)

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In VM hall after lunch.

Family waiting for vivaan-vihaan

Vivaan-vihaan: (arrives normally notice ranjan-maanak) what a surprise.

Ranjan-maanak: (smiles) thanks.

Jeevika: late kaise hogaye? Reports agaye, kya hai reports main?

Vivaan: sorry next time nahi hoga(normally went to his wife) gunjan yaad hai jab main eliminate hua musicompetetion se toh kya kaha tha tumhe?

Gunjan:(remember and said) winner ka title nahi mila toh no problem husband ka title milega:(smiles).

Family smiles

Vivaan:(smile for hers) exactly,I am sure tum bhi aisa kehti thi.aftrerall Humdono eachother ke liye enough hai.

Gunjan:(nod in yes remember vibala talking during bt) vivaan, problem boldo.vihaan ke types story making chodo.

Family get shock.

Vivaan:(hug her)humko ek test face Karna hoga, destiny ko badalne

Gunjan:(get shock get separate)meaning. Kya hua mujhe?

Vivaan:(normally show reports)

Gunjan:(read and get shock with tears)yeh nahi hosakta.(left)

Vivaan:(normally)madhu jao gunjan ke paas.

Madhu:(went)

Vivaan( falldown on kneesinmind) mujhse gadbad aur family ko hurt kyun hota hai.

Vihaan:(handle him) vivaan bhaiya, control yourself

Virika: report main kya hai?

Vihaan:(explain them and show)

Sehgal sisters went to gunjan side.

Family consoles him.

Maanvi: tum bravely sachbole ,bravely problem finish karloge apne parents type ok.

Vivaan: (normally)vivaan vihaan bhai hai,sadly t equal strong nahi hai,

Vihaan:(Felt bad and hug him) 1st April nahi hai

Viren make him understand

Vivaan:(went with vihaan to backyard)

Family get tense.

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In backyard

Maansi-jaanvi- madhu consoling gunjan and gave relieve and smiles.

Vivaan-vihaan: (arrives normally)

Maansi-jaanvi: vivaan kal kya karoge gunjan ko surprise,decide kiya.?while coming.?

Vivaan:(normally) kal boldenge aake, anyways aaplog aur angels ok ho?

Gunjan:(smiles) sorry I forget to ask.

Maansi-jaanvi: tumdono fine toh nieces-nephews fine.

Vigun:(smiles)

Vibala: (fakesadly)what About us?they don't love us.kya?.

Ronak-ranvir: (arrives)impossible hai.

Vibala: really.

Jaanvi: actually 2 mami's 1 mamu ko miss kiya.(smiled)

Maansi:(laugh) equal miss kare the, even us

Vihaan:(smiles) maansi di ka answer same straight hai as her..hota

Vivaan: mere sisters straight hai.(smiles)got it..

Ranvir: tumlog bhi aate na fun double hota tha as last year.couple+siblings trip hoti thi:(smiles)

Ronak:(smiles) agree.

Vivaan-vihaan:(went with gunbala)

Maansi:(get worried) gunjan vivaan ko struggle karne kyun milra like us.

Ronak:(hug her) maansi dont worry, hamare types successful hunge,

Ranvir:(smile a bit) ronak bhaiya is right, problem 1 hai aur woh 2 hai, kyun fail hunge.

Jaanvi:(smiles a bit) i agree with ranvir.

Maansi:(smiles a bit) hum pray karenge.

Foursome spend times.

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In hall.

Gunjan:(fake happily) mamma next week ke liye arrangements start kaise Karna hai?

Family get amaze.

Vivaan:(fakehappily) main advance main batadun,master chef vihaan and master chef vivaan ready hai, acompany karenge.

Vihaan:(supports them) agree, hum cooking karenge.

Madhu:(fakelyfight) vivaan jiju aap vihaan ko kitchen se far rakhne ke help karopls, warna kitchen ko kuch hojaiga.last time ka yaad hai na sabko.

Vivaan:(fakely smiles) of course hai.

Vihaan:(madeface) first time hota sabke saath, tumse bhi hua hoga..

Madhu: tum entry karoge toh hoga mess mujhse.(smiles)

Vivaan: (smiles)

Vihaan: okay fine main gunjan bhabhi ko join karta hun, aapdono team banjao.dream main bhi join nahi karunga.

Vivaan:(nod in disbelieve)

Madhu: better idea.(smiles)

Jeevika: hospital kab jaana.

Vivaan: kal se jaana hai:(smiles)

Gunjan:(smiles)

Ranjan-maanak: (arrives)secret plan bhi boldo vivaan.

Family: meaning.

Vihaan: extra plans hai:(smiles)secret

Family: nice.

Vigun:(smiles) its not like that.

Family:(fakesmiles) no problem Jo chahe plan karo.

Vigun:(smiles)

Vihaan: hum aaye disturb karne toh mind nahi karna, in mind wrong shong words mat bolna humko.

Madhu:(smiles) he means to him not me.

Vigun:(glare at them) stop.

Vibala:(hold ears)

Family talks

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In evening after dinner.

In maanak room!

Maansi: I wish sab fine hojai.

Ronak: don't worry, sab fine hoga, ok. Strong hai couples.(smiles a bit)

Maansi:(smiles) pata nahi vivaan khud ko aur gunjan ko kaise handle karega, scare hota hai self bhi

Ronak:(smiles) manage karega, lastime dekha hai, bravery se vihaan aur gunjan ko save Kara tha, fear sideline karke apna.

Maansi:(smiles) agree. I wish is baar bhi ho, gunjan bravely face karsakegi.As me

Ronak:(Smiles) tumne self manage kiya, main saath raha only.

Maansi:(smiles) don't say like that.

Ronak:(smiles) sahi toh bolra hun.

Maansi: mujhe darne nahi diya aapne:(smiles) different types of talk main busy karke.agree ho

Ronak:(smiles) okay fine. Agree hota hun.

Maansi:(smiles) good for u.

Ronak: otherwise kya karti thi tum.?

Maansi:(smiles) convince karti thi, thousand ways se.

Ronak:(smiles) ok fine. My 1in1000 wife.

Maansi:(smiles)welcome.

Ronak: rest Karen?

Maansi: agree.

They take rest

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In ranjan room!

Jaanvi: problem football types yahan wahan kyun move hori hai?

Ranvir:(smiles) jaanvi, don't worry, hamare 2 couples types win hunge woh.dekhna.

Jaanvi: are you sure.

Ranvir:(make her smiles) yes. Problem ko bhagadenge vivaan gunjan. Kuch days main

Jaanvi:(smiles)I hope aisa ho.

Ranvir:(smiles) aisa hoga.

Jaanvi:(smiles) I wish woh win ho.

Ranvir: problems ka football airless hoga :(laugh) ok.

Jaanvi:(smiles) joke tha.Jo haste ho.

Ranvir:(smiles) tumhara logic achcha tha.

Jaanvi:(smiles) thanks.

Ranvir:(smiles) welcome.

Jaanvi: tum kabse jaare ho office.

Ranvir:(smiles) angels se Milke.

Jaanvi: time haina bahot saara.

Ranvir: right but talk to karsakta na.

Jaanvi: ok

Ranvir: rest Karen?

Jaanvi:(smiles)

They take rest

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In vigun room!

Vivaan:(in mind) I wish main tumhare saath rehta accident se bachaleta.:(get sad)

Gunjan: (normally)vivaan, I was thinking main alone hospital jaati hun.tum office jao

Vivaan:(listen and smiles for her) yeh sab chodo, after hospital kahan chalna hai socho, ok.

Gunjan:(smile a bit) no idea right now, pata nahi kya hoga kal?

Vivaan:(smiles for her) tumhara friend hoga saath aur kya.?

Gunjan:(laugh) stop being vihaan.

Vivaan:(smiles) gunjan, vihaan mera dialogue writer nahi, main hun.

Gunjan:(smiles) really.

Vivaan: not really, hum brothers hai.so same behave karte hain.

Gunjan:(smiles) okay fine.nice hai quality.

Vivaan:(smiles) thank you., anyways scare ho kya?

Gunjan:(smile a bit) thoda sa hun.aur tum

Vivaan:(smiles lies crossing fingers) not at all. In fact tumhari detectivity smartness dekhne ke baad noways.

Gunjan:(smiles) us main siblings support tha mujhe.

Vivaan:(smiles for her) okay fine.

Gunjan: is time tumhara support hoga.

Vivaan:right ho(hug her in mind) I promise u, I will not leave u to get like this:(wipetears

Gunjan:(in mind)I hope sab theek hojaiye.(wipe tears)

Vivaan:(get separate) let's rest

Gunjan: ok

They take rest

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In vibala room!

Madhu crying for gunjan and blaming herself for not saving her.

Vihaan:(is sad but consoles) madhu, humko happy cheers rehna hai gunjan bhabhi aur vivaan bhaiya ke liye. Sab theek hojaiga. Maansi di-jaanvi di, ko yeh happiness mili suffering ke baad toh gunjan bhabhi ko kyun nahi milegi.

Madhu: kash k problem mere saath hoti.

Vihaan:(hug her) gunjan bhabhi ko achcha nahi lagega, sunengi toh,.

Madhu:(with tears) right toh hun vihaan, agar main vivaan jiju ko stupid adhiraj ke intention SMS kardeti toh jailed hota tha, gunjan di ko mere bcoz tumhe mere bcoz, vivaanjiju ko hamare 3 k hiding ke bcoz bad feel nahi hota.(cries more)suffer nahi hona padhta tha.

Vihaan:(get separate and wipe her tears)sshh hamari duty hai, eachother ko save karna, don't blame your self.

Madhu:(get calm) rest karte hain.

Vihaan: done.

They take rest

Edited by jeemanfan123 - 10 years ago

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Ayesha_Tabassum

@Ayesha_Tabassum

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Vigun to struggle as virika, but kya medical try work karega?

Edited by jeemanfan123 - 10 years ago

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sandhYA_123

@sandhYA_123

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#10

AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. LOVED IT. IT WAS VERY NYC UPDATE. FEEL REALLY SAD FOR VIGUN. BUT HAVE HOPE AFTER TREATMENT GUNJAN CAN BECOME A MOTHER. LOVES THE SUPPORT OF VIVAAN AND ALL FAMILY MEMBERS TO GUNJAN. SOON EVERYTHING WILL BE F9. NOW UPDATE NEXT PART SOON. TAKE CARE DEAR.😊😊

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