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Part 350
In breakfast guest room!
Vigun unborn baby 7week begin.
Kasak palm is burning,
Nimrit: kasak what happened, breakfast k liye kyun nahi get up hori, okay toh ho?
Kasak:(lies bcoz of burn palm) dizzy feel hora hai, tum jao, I will rest.
Nimrit:(went)
Kasak:(realize) family KO nahi bole toh achcha,:(get sad) I can't face them .
Vadera sisters:( arrive with food) are u alright.?
Kasak:(nod in yes tears falling)
VaderAsisters tries to ask reasons.
Kasak:(join hands ) go plz:(felt pain in right palm) ouch.
Gunjan: (take her hand and see palms) oy my god, madhu side table se water do plz.
Madhu:(take and gave) lijiye.
Gunjan: thankyou(dip her dupata corner and slow-slow massage her palms with chilled water and asking)kaise burn hua?
Kasak:(keep watching her with tears and vivaan words related gunjan ringing in her mind suddenly)
Madhu:(click fingers not talking from yesterday)gunjan di ask kar raha tumhare pain k about main.
Kasak:(point toward vigun photo) god made couple ko hurt karne ki punishments hai, rehne do
Vaderasisters: meaning?
Kasak: mujhe apne friend vivaan se love hua
Vadera sisters get shock.
Kasak: uske bcoz maine bahot bad work liye, tumhe problem main daldiya mall main, woh msg bhi wantedly kiya, game k day tumhe show Karna tha vivaan KO tumhare unfit hone ka sadness hai, tumdono KO far karne , lie kiya tha, including yesterday act
Madhu:(get angry) how can u do this? Bcoz of u, relations spoil hogaye na, meri behen past main rehgayi.
Kasak:(cries)
Gunjan:(sternly) madhu stop it and go, ek reason se kiya tha, usko realize hogaya.
Madhu:(left)
Gunjan begin consoling her
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At dining
Vivaan make them listen prove and telling his fake anger reasons
Family get shock.
Vivaan:(hold ears with tears)I can't forgive myself for yesterday & until I die, phir bhi I am sorry my family, I just don't want anyone like madhu get fake blame, isliyefake angry hua madhu aur vihaan pe, to get hate and distance from them and everyone,
Family( get shock and surprise) its OK & I am sorry
Vivaan:(felt nice)
Vihaan: aapko bhi plz promise karo at least mujhe boldoge, headache excuse aur anger main time waste nahi karenge.
Vivaan:(smile a bit)dekhenge, anyways Madhu kahan rehgayi,
Madhu:(arrive is angry on kasak, eating)
Vivaan:(sat beside her ,hold ear) sorry madhu, I was helpless.
Madhu:(smiles) don't be sorry, in fact thank you. Last year competetion end types vihaan select Kara tha mujhe over trophy ,kal bhi vihaan mujhe except Kara tha wife hun except Kaha bcoz of u, isliye ulternate day aisa kariye.
Family laugh
Vivaan:(nod in disbelief smiles) kya madhu, guilty feel karane wala work karana chahti ho mujhse, I will decide my punishment, main sabke liye ,madhu k liye sorrygift launga unke wish ka, babys arrive hote ab toh, favorite country send karta tha unke saath.
Family smiles.
Gunjan kasak (arrive and join)
Family is upset with kasak including vivaan and eating.
Kasak:(join hand sadly) i dont know how i fall for vivaan? , i think bcoz of his caring nature, and yeh sab kiya,I am sorry everyone, I promise you all, 7months k baad hum kabhi nahi milenge.usse b4 kissi KO aur hurt nahi karungi.
Family excepted vibala & vivaan: its OK.
Gunjan:(normally) vivaan vihaan madhu, forgive Karo na usko.
Vivaan:(normally) its impossible for me.
Vibala: for us also.
Gunjan: what is this guys?
Kasak:(sadly) gunjan, no problem, I deserve it.:(went from their)
Gunjan:(to family) aaplog samjhaiye na yeh teeno KO. Woh bad nahi hai. Ek mistake Hui.
Vivaan: I am sorry family and gunjan, itne complains hai us se, nahi bhulsakta. Na forgive karsakta hun.(get flashbacks)
Gunjan: madhu fake blame Milne se,vihaan, blame hote dekhke, itna hurt hogaya tumlog KO, mere liye bhi forgive nahi kar raha ho usko.
Vibala: its not like that, aapke liye kuch bhi karsakte, kuch bhi karsakte, but yeh nahi karsakte
Vivaan:(normally join them) they are right. And same here.
Gunjan: atleat usne vivaan k love main kiya, Jo tum3log nahi forgive kar rahe ho mere liye. Actually I am no one for u three right that's y:(left)
Vivaan-vibala: (whisper)how can someone is great:(get up) hum aate hain.
Jeevika: yeh log right the.
Maanvi: unique children's mile hain humko past aur present main.like us
Virat: (tease)congrats be happy.
Maanvi:(madeface) eat food.
Virika: agree
They left
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In backyard
Gunjan is sad.
Vibala:(arrive) I am sorry, aapko indirectly torture hurt karne k liye, forgive nahi karsakre hum. Bcoz:(get intrupt)
From behind"I love u"
Gunjan:(get shock & felt nice to hear him)kya kaha?
Vihaan:(take phone start videography)
Vivaan:(sat on knees with smile) hamare grandparents ka grandson, parents ka son, siblings ka bhai,siblings's babies ka tobe mamu, baby ka tobe dad, love their ,granddaughter,daughter,siblings ki sister, siblings baby's to be Mami,to be mom . , if kasak had hurt me or kill me :(get intrupt)
Gunjan:(felt bad and scold him) stop it vivaan, otherwise main aur family forgive nahi karenge tumhe.
Vibala: agree
Vivaan:(madeface) oh god, tumlog mere wife& siblings ho ya inspectors, chance nahi dete in front person ko.punish aur warn kardete ho.
Gunjan-vibala: inspector bhi right karte aur hum bhi..
Vivaan: anyways,(start thinking)main kahan tha,? (smiles)family aur tumhe suffer karte nahi dekhsakta., tumhari insucrity k bcoz family aur main aur on the way baby, tumhe khodete the,, batao kaise forgive karun?
Vibala:(felt nice)
Gunjan: insure nahi thi fool thi main Jo pehle separate hogayi tumse. Ab nahi hun,
Vivaan:(smiles) actually v were fool.main bhi toh gaya tha
Gunjan: you are not fool ,unlucky ho bcoz of me:(smiles)
Vivaan:(smiles point toward himself) unlucky KO unlucky lp hi milega na, kya karsakta koi?
Gunjan-Vibala:( get confuse) meaning?
Vivaan:(smiles) every case time, death follow karti hai mujhe attack karne, if win hogaye toh lawyer vivaan ki wife se dead vivaan ki wife bolengeworld, unlucky ho tum more then me. You are with me for ever.
Gunjan-vibala:(glare at him) not again.
Vivaan:(smiles) reality example tha, meri presure cookers team.
Gunjan-vibala: we don't want tipicle example.
Virika:(arrives)
Vivaan:anyways(normally close eyes)this problem is not hurting me, your being with Me giving me happiness.:(open eyes) Don't be sad and be happy for my happiness.
Gunjan:(felt nice) plz forgive kasak for my happiness. I have forgiven her.
Virika: she is right, orphan KO hurt nahi Karna chahiye, jao good things teach Karo.
Vivaan:(get up)okay:(went along gunjan)
Vihaan:(show video) aaplog video dekhiye apne children's ka.
Madhu:(nod in disbelieve and join)
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In guestroom!
Kasak packing her things in advance.
Vigun (arrives and get confuse along vibala)
Nimrit: kasakmam, gunjan mam & vivaan sir aye hain
Kasak:(turns) koi work tha.?
Gunjan: yes, .:(smiles)help karogi?
Vivaan: she is right:(smiles)
Kasak: kaise help?
Gunjan: sab forget karke friends bante hain.(forward hand hands)
Kasak:(getsurprise) I have cheat u both, then kyun? You both are best
Gunjan: humne bhi toh aisa hi kiya, dost se lovers se couples bangaye apne aap:(smiles)tum bhi friend se angel bangayi, rahi feelings ki baad vivaan hai hi aisa, madhu KO elder bhai mila us main, tumhe bhi waisa lp milega hum find karke layenge.
Vivaan:(felt nice with gunjan)agree
Kasak:(felt bad on herself and cries)don't say like that, i don't fit to this title.you both fit for this title thats you both who are perfect couple my bad antics fails to spoil your relation. Thankgod, sorry madhu.
Madhu: its ok:(smiles)
Vihaan:(smiles) let's go
Vibala went
Gunjan:(smiles and notice) yeh bags kyun pack kar raha ho?
Kasak: 7month bad jaana haina. Last time main kuch bhi nahi hoga
Vivaan:(left)
Gunjan: let it be we will help u later.
They spends time.
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In baby room!
Foursome couple spending time watching vigun video in vihaan phone.
Vigun:(felt shy)
Vihaan: movie main kahin dekha aapne aisi chemistry?: (smiles)
Ranjan-maanak: no. Amazing hai. Yeh Apne vivaan gunjan hi haina? Hamare samne kuch aur hain
Vihaan: obviously hai.:(smiles)actually kya haina, inki gkless videography hui hai.tabhi best shot dekhre hain hum.
Madhu: exactly.:(smiles)
Ranjan-maanak: oh I see.(smiles)
Vivaan: vihaan hamari family the court KO nahi batao, mere words se problem main ajaunga main.
Vihaan: mute karke show karunga, ya ek aur edited video ready karke show karlunga.
Vivaan: chalega. I hope babies mujhse scare nahi hunge,
Ranjan-maanak:no.
Vivaan:(smiles) good then.
Sehgalsisters: gunjan KO uski favorite country lejao na vivaan.:(smiles) babys ke paas full family hai.
Vigun:(get confuse)babies, one baby hai.
Sehgalsisters:I am sure babies milenge. Future main pata hoga dekhna, wish karte raho aur debate bhi.
Vigun: aaplog wish kardiye ek hi baat hai:(smiles)
Vibala: humlog KO apni turn k liye wait nahi karna hoga, wow hum bhi pray karenge aapke liye:(smiles)
Vigun: thank you.
They spend times
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In lunch
At dinning
Triple to be mothers waiting for their lp handmade lunch along kasak.
Family as well.
Jaanvi:(get boreby waiting) rp fast lao, otherwise dreaming k liye jaunge main aur baby.
Vihaan:(smiles) preffesional person hai woh, magician nahi jaanvi di, wait kariye,
Ronak-ranvir- vivaan:(arrives and serve their wife feed also)
Maansi-jaanvi-gunjan:( eat and praise their LPs): nice.
Ronak-ranvir Vivaan:(felt nice bcoz their efforts win)
Gunjan:(help kasak in eating as her palm burns)
Kasak:(felt nice)
Maanvi: vihaan very bad to be mamu-chachu ho kuch nahi kiya to be nieces ya nephews k liye.aapne brothers types
Vihaan:(smiles and show juice jug) I was thinking what to do new, idea( serve juices to his triple sisters and kasak)
Triplesisters:(felt nice) thankyou: (sipping juice)
Kasak:(also sip juices)
Vihaan:(smiles)
Vivaan:(in mind) sorry gunjan and family, patch up ka pretend kar raha hun kasak ke sath.
Gunjan:(get emotional)
Jeevika:(notice and get worried) kya hua Gunjan.? Vivaan ka dish achcha nahi hai?
Gunjan: actually
Vivaan:(understood) to be mother guest bangayi isliye, believe nahi tha aisa hoga, isliye emotional hori hai?
Family felt nice on their tunning.
Gunjan:(nod in yes)
Maanvi: gunjan, best names sochna start Karo, apni mamma aur meri sister types emotional hone main time nahi waste Karo:(smiles) like us OK.
Gunjan:(smiles on her joke)
Virat:(smiles) bhabhi at least ab, s.I.l form dikhao aur control Karo apni s.I.l KO.
Maanvi:(madeface)table manners hai eat only and talk never.
Virat: we are equal, dono follow karenge.:(smiles)
Virika: stop irritating and start thinking baby names.:(smiles)
Virman: okay.
Vibala: my sister number 3 are u still angry with me?
Gunjan:(smiles) not at all?
Family (eat and left)
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At hall
Virika-virman spending time except foursome couples and kasak.
Virat: unbelievable, hiding try achchi Kara vivaan, humlog KO gunjan ko tension free rakhne. Family ki baat ayi toh far hogaya wantedly.
Maanvi: agree:(smiles) thank god sab solve hogaya.
Virika: agree.
Jeevika:(get sad) jo bhi vihaan KO slap nahi Karna chahiye forgeter.
Virman: its OK, itne yrs toh chaha na family k behalf, as brother right hai usko.
Virat:bhai slap nahi Karna chahiye tha vivaan KO, bcoz aap toh vihaan savior ho na,
Viren:(smile a bit) idea thodi tha. Woh intention se kar raha hai drama
Virat:(smiles) right saying,
Maanvi: third new member bhi lucky hai, gunjan vivaan kitna chahte hain usko:(smiles)
Jeevika:(smiles) right saying. Achche se comfortable hogaya.
Vivaan-vihaan: (arrive) kaun comfortable hogaya?
Maanvi:(smiles) tobe father vivaan.
Vihaan: to be father jaise hain waisa baby milenge isliye. Kyun vivaan bhai?
Virika notice him get surprise
Vivaan: haan to u both also(has doubt , wheather he can make cry baby happy or not on time,)
Vihaan:(smiles and went)
Virika: phir kyun khogaye?don't lie.
Vivaan:(normally) papa chachu, aaplog mamma maasi ke absence main happy karlete the humko, when we cry? Mujhse crying dekha nahi jaata? KissI ka bhi, as mamu aur as papa kaise dekhunga no idea.
Virika: don't worry hoga.
Virat: exactly ,apne brother k Mr motivator.u
Vivaan:(smiles) I will go to siblings side:(move forward)
Virat:(tease) s for sibling side ya.
Maanvi:(tease) g for gunjan side
Vivaan:(smiles and went)
They spends time
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In evening after dinner
In maanak room!
Maansi:(normally) mujhe gunjan k past days problem sunke bad feel hora hai, uski greatness achcha bhi lagra hai, along vivaan.
Ronak: right saying:(smiles) ab se dono truly happy rahenge, baby KO welcome karenge.like us
Maansi: agree.:(smiles)
Ronak:(smiles) tumdono good wish kare woh dono ke liye by the way.
Maansi:(Smiles) thank you.
Ronak: welcome:(smiles)
Maansi:(normally) aapke kitne names ready Hui.?
Ronak: 22 weeks hore so 22 names.
Maansi:(smiles) same here.
Ronak: good. Confession promise yaad haina?:(smiles)
Maansi:(smiles) of course hai.
Ronak: me to.
Maansi: I am afraid ronak, main seccusful hungi ya nahi sochke.baby k sath aane main.
Ronak:(smiles) don't worry, hojaiga. Jaanvi k saath ayi thi natum save karke ,Don't be afraid and let baby learn to be afraid.
Maansi:(smiles) very funny.
Ronak: on seriousnote, tum kuch bhi karsakti no.: (smiles) aagey bhi karogi.
Maansi:(smiles)thanks.
Ronak: welcome:(smiles)
Maansi:(smiles) let's rest
Ronak: right saying
Maansi: good.
Ronak: baby girl dream dekhna OK.
Maansi: aap baby boy dream dekhna.
Ronak: dream exchange karte hain.
Maansi: better hoga
They take rest
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In ranjan room!
Ranvir :(put coin in box)
Jaanvi: ranvir, daily coin kyun fill karte ho box.
Ranvir:(lies) baby KO calm karlunga, box shake karke. Natural baby ka natural toy
Jaanvi:(smiles) nice.
Ranvir:(smiles) thank you. Baby KO bolna mat OK.
Jaanvi:(smiles) done deal.
Ranvir:(smiles) thanks again.
Jaanvi:(normally) kya day tha na tension ful.
Ranvir: sab fast okay bhi hogaya.
Jaanvi: kal tension feel hi nahi dekhke bhi,
Ranvir: tumhare aur mere bhabhi k best k liye along babies.hide kare Hunge.
Jaanvi:(smiles) right ho.
Ranvir:(smiles) I hope tum better feel kar rahi hogi.?
Jaanvi: yes:(smiles)
Ranvir: nice.
Jaanvi:(smiles) kyun? Ask kare
Ranvir: lp hun love care hai.
Jaanvi:(smiles) right saying.
Ranvir: rest Karen.
Jaanvi: okay.
Ranvir:(in mind) tumhareliya kya socha main idea bhi nahi hai my wife, only yeh aur next month jaane do, phir pata hoga.
Jaanvi:(in mind) ranvir KO sudden aise kaise aya god, ajib hai baat.
Ranvir: kya hua awake ho?
Jaanvi: simply awake thi rest karungi.
Ranvir: okay fine
They take rest
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In vigun room!
Gunjan:(still sad as vivaan was hiding and facing tension)
Vivaan:(smiles) kya hua?
Gunjan: (with angry smile) friend vivaan, actually I am sad bcoz of lp vivaan.
Vivaan:(get confuse) kyun?
Gunjan: khud bolta hai, usko mere ya family members ki 24hrs report chahiye, aur self kuch nahi bolta
Vivaan:(normally) friend gunjan, meri lpgunjan ki same habit hai.
Gunjan:(smiles) then divorce dedo.koi everything teller find karlo.
Vivaan:(get up and start finding some thing)
Gunjan: kya find kar rahe ho:(smiles)
Vivaan: mil gaya, light of kardo.
Gunjan:(switch of lights)
Vivaan:(lighten a candle went to take her and start taking rounds) 1
Gunjan:(get confuse) kya kar rahe ho.
Vivaan: 2,(smiles) wife gunjan KO chodke friend gunjan se wedding.
Gunjan: very funny:(smiles)
Vivaan:3:(smiles) very nice bolo.
Gunjan: nice.
Vivaan: good, 4:(comebehind)
Gunjan: 5
Vivaan:(smiles) good.
They complete 7 rounds.
Vivaan: congrats secret wedding, hamare lps KO nahi pata ho bas
Gunjan: right saying.
Vigun laugh.
Gunjan: rest karte hain, mere rules to pata hi hai?
Vivaan:(smiles) I am not dumb like him, kabhi hide nahi karlunga?
Gunjan:(madeface) don't call him dumb OK. Apne lp KO bolo.
Vivaan:(madeface) never ever.
Gunjan: let's rest
Vivaan: okay
They take rest
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In vibala room!
Vihaan:(smiles) anyways madhu, thank you mera anger words nahi bolne k liye.
Madhu:(smiles) welcome, we are vadera, but I am not dumb as u.
Vihaan:(madeface) this is cheating, main normal talk kar raha hun, aur tum fight?
Madhu:(smiles) bhai hoke seriously loge without soche, toh bolungi na.
Vihaan:(smiles) normal mode main thodi hota, anger main hogaya.
Madhu:(smiles) try Karo aisa nahi ho.
Vihaan: done deal:(smiles)
Madhu:(smiles) good then, even interfere nahi Karo hum siblings main.
Vihaan:(smiles) dekhenge.
Madhu:(smiles) by the way vivaan jijubhai is amazing, lp k sadness ka reason bhi pata kiya and over bhi kardiya
Vihaan:(smiles) right saying.
Madhu:(smiles) baki problem baby over kardeta.
Vihaan: madhu, baby overvkaregi bolo.
Madhu:(smiles) tum dekhna triple brothers ayenge.
Vihaan:(smiles) dekhenge
Madhu:(smiles) all the best
Vihaan:(smiles) same to u.
Madhu: thanks.
Vihaan: lets rest OK
Madhu: okay
They take rest.









Edited by jeemanfan123 - 10 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. LOVED IT. IT WAS REALLY SUPERB UPDATE. SO FINALLY KASAK KO AKAL AA GAYI. BUT VIVAAN AND VIBALA R NOT FORGIVING HER EASILY. IT IS NATURAL. REALLY GUNAN HAS VERY BIG AND PURE HEART WHO FORGIVES KASAK FROM HEART. ON HER SAYING EVERYONE FORGIVES KASAK. SECRET MARRIAGE OF VIGUN IS AWESOME. ALL COUPLES SCENES S AWESOME SPECIALLY OUR CUTE VIBALA. NOW UPDATE SOON DEAR. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊
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Part 351
On the way after breakfast
Tense Vivaan is going with vihaan.
Vihaan:(notice him) vivaan bhai, kya hua bataiye, (warn)no fight trick.
Vivaan:(is angry on himself) Iam angry with myself, pehle hi clear karna chahiye tha us kasak se jab uski aur gunjan ki Convo suni, meri gunjan hi nahi on the way baby aur family target hogaye the.third time bhi gkless raha. Main family,gunjan,baby ke capable nahi hun,tabhi baby responsibility nahi milri thi bcoz me, right hai, actually alive rehna disserve nahi karta main.
Vihaan:(heard him and put break) I know AAP hurt ho, it doesn't meant u the confidence gainer aisa bolo?
Vivaan:(get emotional) right hi bolra hun vihaan, us stupid k bcoz mujhse kya kuch hogaya nahi hua? Mamma papa ke lesson gaye mujhse,disappoint hogaye, woh stupid ka slap tumhe mila, woh stupid KO blame ya scold hona chahiye tha, madhu scold hogayi.
VihaaN:(smile a bit) sabko pata hogaya na reason, sab happy bhi hai aapse,saath bhi hai, try toforget and take her easy like us, and move out of this.for all of us
Vivaan:(madeface) main gunjan aur family aur tumlog jaisa nahi hun.
Vihaan:(smiles) gunjan bhabhi k liye aisa kariye, like family & us.waise sorted kardiye the na,
Vivaan:(normally) gunjan & family k liye pretend Kara tha, agey bhi karlunga.(smiles)Jo hamare next level 2 k liye socha woh karunga,
Vihaan: all the best koi doubt nahi kare toh achcha hai,(get confuse) meaning.
Vivaan:(smiles)wait and watch.
Vihaan:(smiles) okay., I was thinking as other future parents aaplogdebate Karo. Gunjan bhabhi KO past se far hone main easy hoga.
Vivaan:(smiles) humlog aise hogaye toh tumdono ke teacher call hunge.so forget it.
Vihaan: humlog fight stopper banenge as u both.
Vivaan:(smiles) very funny,
Vihaan:fun ayega, ek baat ask karun?
Vivaan: bolo.
Vihaan: aap gunjan bhabhi KO reason bolsakte the na aur unko care Karen desakte the na.
Vivaan:(normally) I want her to enjoy to be mother phase, past bhulke last time haina,
Vihaan: oh achcha.
They went
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Back to VM Babyroom!
Ranjan-maanak spending time.
Jaanvi:(dramatically) kuch months ki baat hai, kiski entries hogi pata chalega.
Maansi:(smiles) right saying.
Ranvir:(show some pics)JP yeh dekho aur like Karo aur batao mujhe.
Jaanvi:(smiles) yeh toh car hai.tumhari car KO kya hua?
Ranvir:(smiles)koi SPL k liye KO dera hun.?
Maanak:(understood)
Jaanvi:(madeface) no need to be everyone Santa samjhe excepted me and family.world is evil
Ranvir:(smiles) okay boss, select Karo.ek friend KO suggest Karna hai uske SPL k liye
Jaanvi:(smiles and point) yeh open air car.
Ranvir:(smiles) wah kya choice hai meri wife ki.?
JAanvi: vivaan k type trick toh nahi kar rahe ho mere sath?,(smiles)
Ranvir:(smile and lies) nahi.
Jaanvi:(smiles) good.
Maanak: awesome gift hoga jaise gift taker.(smiles)
Ranvir:(smiles) right hain aaplog.
JAanvi:(smiles) all the best with your gift help.
Ranvir:(smiles) thank you.
Maansi:(in mind) hum dear life daughters hain isliye, car nahi gift kare hamare papa's , ranvir KO stop Karna bhi wrong hoga. Is condition main save nahi hoga jaanvi. K liye..
Ronak:(notice her) kya hua?
MaaNsi:(smiles) nothing
They spend times
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In guestroom!
Vadera sisters is with kasak & nimrit.
Kasak:(smiles) kal k liye thank you gunjan, tumhare bcoz sab forgive kare aur main comfortable hun rehne main.
Gunjan:(smiles) welcome kasak,forget everything OK.
Kasak:(smiles) anyways baby ka name decide kiya?boys favorite hote na mom ke.
Gunjan:(smiles) tumlog vivaan KO batana mat OK.
Kasak-madhu: okay fine.
Gunjan:(smiles)hum dono ka beta GarV vadera.
Madhu:(smiles) wow vivaan jiju bhai apke name ka first aur apne name ka last letter se name decide kare ,aur aap apne name ka first letter aur unke name k first letter se name decide kare.
Kasak nimrit madhu:(claps) nice.
Gunjan:(normally) but humlog competors jaise hogaye hain, koi win karega toh koi lose karega,(smiles) chehenge humdono hi usko.
Madhu:(smiles) gunjan di,apne siblings ki wish haina, aaplog KO Garv and Gun milenge, 3g network type Hunge vivaan jiju bhai aur humlog.
Kasak:(smiles) madhu is right.
Gunjan:(smiles) very funny.:(sudden realize) oh know how can I forget about voicerecorderframe.name pata hogaye vivaan ko.
Madhu:(smiles) b4 aake sune, aap divert kardo.simple.abhi toh work main busy Hunge woh.
Gunjan:(smile a bit) yeh hi Karna hoga.
Madhu:(smile a bit)
Gunjan: madhu tum bhi socholo, tumlog hi rehgaye ho.
Madhu:(normally) aap teeno parents k baby on the way, not ours:(smiles)
Gunjan: kabhi bhi possible hosakta, as us, god chahe toh, decide karlo name. Family bhi pray karenge
Madhu:(in mind)god plz three months end hone tak possible nahi hone Dena family ki wish.
Kasak-gunjan: kya hua madhu.?
Madhu: nowhere.
They spend times
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At kitchen
Sehgalbrothers cutting fruits for making juice.
Ronak:(smiles) ranvir, kyun nahi Gaye jaanvi ki car lane?
Ranvir:(smiles) anniversary august main haina, car gift us din dunga. Babys aate uske checkups k liye jayenge hum couples jayenge.
Ronak:(smiles)nice thought brother, I will contribute don't hesitate.
Viren-virat:(arrives)kisko hesitation hori hai?
Ronak:(smiles) hamare jaanvi ranvir ki anniversary hai yeh aur ek month over hone k baad, ranvirjaanvi KO uski choice ki open air car denewala hai. Uske liye contribute karne ki baad hori.
Viren-virat: humlog bhi contribute karenge.
Ranvir:(smiles) trust me, past savings hai b4 se ab tak ki,
Viren:(smiles) indepent rehna is good habit, papa ya badepapa KO decline nahi karte.
Ronak: even brother KO.:(smiles)
Ranvir:(smiles) koi aur help kariye aur bataiye jaanvi KO driving aati ya nahi.secret rakhna tha ask nahi kara
Viren:(smiles) jaanvi maansi dono different nature k hai isliye diye na soche, driving ke liye car nahi diye dono KO.
Sehgalbrothers:(smiles)meaning?
Virat: maansi darti hai.
Viren: jaanvi darati hai:(smiles) khud KO hurt na karden sochke gift nahi kiya.dear daughters haina.
Sehgalbrothers: (smile a bit) oh achcha. Aaplog tense nahi ho Humlog teach bhi karenge aur fear bhi remove kardenge and save rahenge.:(went with juice)
Viren-virat:(smiles and left)
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In lunch at office
Vivaan i only working and for its lunch time.facing otherside
Gunjan:(arrives and get amaze with him, come saying) saara office lunch kar raha aur tum work not good. Mamma aate toh lawyerji scold hote the.
Vivaan:(get surprise by her voice and turns getting up) gunjan tum alone yahan kaise agayi?
Gunjan:(goes to sofaside and takeout food for him) papa aare the workse, main bhi surprise k liye agayi saath main.
Vivaan:(join her) kaisa laga hamare office, mera cabin.
Gunjan:(smile a bit) nice hai,nervous bhi hun sabse milke.
Vivaan:(smiles) I understand, boarding se before mamma k saath aata tha, phir on joining scare tha.
Gunjan:(smiles) mujhe lagta hai yahan bhi voice recorder fix Karna chahiye, tum kitne din food skip karte pata chalta tha.
Vivaan:(smiles). Main kiski sign language main refuse karta tha.
They eat by each other hands.
Gunjan:(smiles) meaning skip karte hi the food, you are very bad boy of our mamma.
Vivaan:(madeface) LD spoil Karna tumse sikhe. Right hai tobe parents main se koi change hote hain.
Gunjan:(bit tongue) its not like that. Tumne hi bola na, every person KO unke types lp milte.
Vivaan:(smiles) right.
Viren:(arrive) tumlog ka lunch hogaya toh chalen?
Vigun: aap join huiye na.
Viren:(join) okay
They eat
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Back to VM hall
Family spending time
Jaanvi:(smiles)gunjan tumhe na aise surprise every week main Dena chahiye vivaan KO. Dono KO acha lagega.
Gunjan:(smile a bit)
Ranvir:(whisper) whenever I rejoin, tum bhi aisa Karo mere liye along baby.
Jaanvi:(smiles) why not.
Ranvir: thank you.(whisper) baby irritate kardena roroke dad k pass aane OK.?
Jaanvi:(cover his mouth) ABC teach Karo yeh sab nahi.
Ranvir:(remove her hand whisper) woh tumhara work hai, hum hungama karenge.
Jaanvi:(smiles) okay fine.(change topic) to be maasi madhu, tum bhi jao na office tobe chachu vihaan ka tiffin leke as surprise.
Madhu:(smiles) I will think someday. Temperature bhi dekhna hoga na aapke bhai ka.kab kya kare god knows.
Gunjan:(whisper,remembering) stop it madhu. Work main kuch log khud KO forget kardete,serious hona kya big thing hai.
Madhu:(smiles) okay fine vivaanjijubhai ki officer.
Jaanvi: madhu, confession video dikhao na.
Madhu:(show everyone)
Jeevika:(get serious to hear) buddhu ladka kuch bhi dramatic bolta apni maasi k types.
Virat: right saying bhabhi.
Maanvi: loving lp hai vivaan.
Family smiles and spend times.
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In evening after dinner
In maanak room!
Ronak:(smiles) thankgod, pata chalgaya humko k jaanvi ko drive nahi aati.ranvir teach karlega
Maansi:(normally) abhi kaise.
Ronak: don't worry, parents banne k baad.(smiles) anniversary gift hoga Jo ek next month over hone k baad hai.
Maansi:(smiles) so nice of him.
Ronak:(smiles) right saying.
Maansi:(smiles) aap contribute Karo OK if needed.a!ready bahot kuch Karna hai usko
Ronak: I will see:(smilee).dont worry. Anyways tumhe car driving learning Karna hai toh boldo, baby aate teach karunga.
Maansi:(smile a bit) next time dekhenge.
Ronak:(smiles) f9,
Maansi:(smiles) next year se baby's present Hunge har function main.
Ronak:(smiles) right saying, VIP baby's Hunge.saare babies, humse more dear Hunge.
Maansi: agree:(smiles)
Ronak:(madeface) names kya Hunge.pata hi nahi.
Maansi: sehgalbrothers ya sehgalsisters.(smiles)
Ronak:(madeface) very funny. Baby ka wait bhi Karo, name ka bhi wait Karo.
Maansi: humsabko wait Karna hai.:(smiles)
Ronak:(smiles) right saying.
Maansi: aap bhi aise karenge if beti aye toh? Jo hamare papa's kare.(smiles)
Ronak:(smiles) for sure karunga.
Maansi:(smiles) let's rest
Ronak: okay.
They take rest
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In ranjan room!
Jaanvi: yeh phase kya interesting raha na:(smiles)
Ranvir: (smiles) agree, slow and steady baby become our dear, just like we become for each other dear.
Jaanvi:(smiles) right saying.
Ranvir:(smiles) first tum comfortable Hui then main?
Jaanvi:(smiles)its OK.
Ranvir:(smiles) thanks.
Jaanvi: welcome:(smiles).
Ranvir: Is baat k liye gift deserve karta hun main:(smiles)
Jaanvi:(smiles) kya gift chahiye?
Ranvir: baby ka name bolo aur suno mujhse.
Jaanvi: sehgalbrothers.:(smiles)
Ranvir:(madeface) not fair.
Jaanvi: everything is fair between us:(smiles)
Ranvir:(smiles) bahot jald pata chalega. U don't tell.
Jaanvi:(smiles) done deal, same 2 u.
Ranvir:(smiles) thank you.
Jaanvi:(smiles) welcome.
Ranvir:(smiles) last time ask karunga batao na.
Jaanvi:(smiles) surprise is surprise.let's rest
Ranvir: okay
They take rest
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In vigun room!
Vivaan:(smiles) thank you, for not doing my complain to mamma.?
Gunjan:(smiles) na complain karungi, na food skip Karna dungi.on her behalf
Vivaan:(smiles) daily aaogi meaning?
Gunjan:(with seriousness) follow karungi tumhe.excepted courtworks.sply in this.
Vivaan:(smiles) don't do OK, baby k behind ghumna haina?
Gunjan:(smiles) tum roaming karlo baby k behind, foidskipping se Jo energy mili usse.change toh hogey nahi.
Vivaan:(smiles) chance dogi toh pata chalega na.Mrs vivaan vadera.main kya hunga kya nahi.
Gunjan:(smiles) okay fine.(normally) anyways vivaan pata hai, simply talk kar rahe the main madhu kasak. Kids finding karne ki.
Vivaan:(get tense) so.
Gunjan: main madhu KO bolo, woh bhi find kark rakhe, after some time kuch bolke thoughts main khogayi.?
Vivaan:(smiles) as u said sochna start kiya hoga madhu na, don't worry.
GunjAn:(smiles) right hoge tum.
Vivaan:(smiles ).
Gunjan:(smiles) I was thing humko kasak k liye kuch karna chahiye, as she is doing.
Vivaan:(normally) meaning.?
Gunjan:(smiles) uske friend jaisa lp, Jo usko SPL feel karaye. Chahe
Vivaan:(normally) woh sab chodo, future parents wale work karte hain, like kaun baby k close hosakte? Who will come?
Gunjan:(smiles) lawyer work Karna hai ghar main woh bhi mujhe enemy lawyer banake.
Vivaan:(smiles) obviously.
Gunjan: restkarte hain ok, fresh mind fresh name ayenge tabhi.
Vivaan:(smiles) good idea.
They take rest
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In vibala room!
Vihaan tells madhu about vivaan on her force.
Madhu:(feltnice) amazing thought.
Vihaan: don't tell this thing to gunjan bhabhi OK.(smiles)
Madhu: why not:(smiles)
Vihaan:(smiles) I hope tum gunjan di KO show nahi karti us kasak k liye hate.
Madhu:(normally) not at all. Some months ki baat hai, manage karungi, (smiles)apne aymp ke types.
Vihaan:(madeface) tumhara kuch nahi hosakta.
Madhu:(smiles) change hogayi toh chalega.
Vihaan:(smiles) haan.
Madhu:(normally) kal new madhu KO miloge, ready rehna.
Vihaan:(smiles) y not.
Madhu: atb toh bolo.
Vihaan: atb.
Madhu: atb
They take rest.






Edited by jeemanfan123 - 10 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. LOVED IT. IT WAS REALLY SUERB UPDATE. LOVES VIVAAN AND VIHAAN PART. WOW RANVIR WILL GIFT JAANVI A OPEN CAR OF HER CHOICE. SO SWEET IT IS. LOVES THE NAME OF BABY TOLD BY GUNJAN . REALLY LIKES THE NAME GARV SO MUCH BECOZ IT IS MADE UP OF GUNJAN FIRST LETTER AND VIVAAN FIRST LETTER. ITS MEANING IS ALSO AWESOME. LOVES THE SCENE OF VIGUN AT OFFICE. LOVED RANJAN AND MANAK PART. OUR VIBALA R ALWAYS AWESOME. NOW UPDATE SOON DEAR. TAKE CARE.😊
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Superb update dear.
Loved all three parts.
Atleast all problems solved now.
Now update next part soon dear.
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Part 252
In VM
In baby room! Afterbreakfast
Foursome couples spending time
RanjAn maanak:(unborn babys 23week began b4 & after ).
Madhu:(in mind) vihaan vadera, aj nahi toh kal regret karoge tum, mujhe change hone kehke.
Gunjan:(felt strange) all off sudden Teri voice KO kya samajh nahi ara.?
Madhu:(text her) don't worry I will fine soon.
Vivaan:(smile a bit) madhu, trykaro ,kya pata ?thode silence se better hogayi hogi.voice
Madhu:(text him) I am not able speak.
Vihaan:(smile and tells)sleepwalking karke ice cream factory main gayi thi aur icecream choorake over ki kya? Jo silent movie ki heroine bangayi ho all of sudden?
Ranjan-maanak vigun nod in disbelieve on his comment
Madhu:(text him) answer ke liye wait Karo mere OK hone ka. Family se baat karlo till then excepted me.
Vihaan:(text her) sure.(smiles)
Madhu:(inmind) its just beginning, agey agey dekho hota hai kya? Mr.forgeter.
Vivaan:(smiles) new way main nokjhok Karnewale ko congrats.
Vihaan:(smiles)don't worry as usual nokjhok hogi, aj nahi toh kya?kal tak wait kariiye. Chatnokjhok nahi hogi.
Madhu:(in mind) kal nahi,wait Karo as much u can, vihaan.
Vigun:(smiles)
Jaanvi:(tries jealous him) all the best to get bore vihaan?
Madhu:(smilesinmind) kya baat hai mere thought vihaan tak chalegaye bcoz of u jaanvi di.
Vihaan:(smile a bit) thank you I won't be bore.
Maansi:(smile a bit) third to be parents, name decide kya baby ka?
Vigun:(lies) still thinking.
Ranjan-maanak: don't worry sab family find karenge.
Vigun:(smiles) OK.
Jaanvi:(smiles) lie to nahi haina?
Vigun:(smiles) not at all.
Someone shout vivaan
Vivaan: let's go guys.:(smile's went)
Ranjan-maanak vaderasisters and vihaan: okay.
They follow him.
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At hall
Youngers arrives.
Some members is happy for vivaan,some members is emotional for vivaam
Vivaan:(get worried) kya hua? aaplog emotional lagre ho.
Viren:(handover some envelope) dekho khud hi.
Vivaan:(take and check and get surprise)I can't believe this mujhe:(left invitation)
Family:( is amaze) congrats vivaan for winning reward, we are proud of u.
Vihaan:(pick envelope and sees get happy) vivaan aap amazing ho, itni achchi baat Hui hai aur ho k different reaction dere ho.
Madhu:(text him) stop irritating him.and congrats him.
Vihaan:(hug him) congrats my brother from me and madhu. Holi festival types interview Dena aj evening main jaake.
Vivaan:( getting nervous) what
Vihaan:(smiles)its not wedding proposal Jo aap SPL plan nahi kiya wala look dere ho.
Gunjan:(went from their with some idea)
Vivaan:(smile and take elders blessing)
Sehgalsisters: (use baby call trick)vivaan calls for u.
Vivaan:(smiles and receive)
Baby callers:(wish him) congrats to u our vivaan mamu. Achche sppech Dena aur hamare arrival ke kuch yrs after apni story batana ,nahi forget karna.ok?
Vivaan: teacher's I will tell u not only my sabki ok(got msg in mind reading)
"Vivaan,backyard main aajao surprise hai tumhare liye"
Vivaan: main abhi join hota hun(smiles and went)
Family:(smiles and sat)
Vihaan: I was thing humlog vivaan bhai ki victory surprise party Karen kya?:(smiles)
Madhu:(claps for his idea)
Family:(smiles)
Vihaan:(realize something) oh no,
Family: kya hua?
Vihaan::(with care)vivaan bhai KO stage phobia hai, usko sendoff Karna hoga unse, party se more important hai, madhu tum gunjan bhabhi aur family k saath deciding Karo, main spb bhagane kuch sochta hun.
Madhu:(show thumvsup)
Family start deciding.
Vihaan:(start thinking)
Jeevika:(whisper) kitna caring hai vihaan.
Viren:(whisper) right saying
Virman: aaplog jaake evening ki preparation Karo na.
Virika: how come v can go. Two invites hai vivaan and gunjan ka.
Virman: okay.
They spend times
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At backyard!
Gunjan waiting for vivaan.
Vivaan:(arrives)gunjan.
Gunjan:(turn and wish him) congrats vivaan, tumhare hard work ka rewards milne wala uske liye. Im happy & proud to be your wife and friend.
Vivaan:(felt nice and hug her) thank you.me to
Gunjan:(get separate and gave phone) welcome,call for u.
Vivaan:(understood and receive)
Babycaller: my dad congrats,1 day as u I will work & try to win woh kya hota? trust of all and rewards also, its little vatera pomise, so u soon.
Vivaan:(get senti suddenly,on hearing and sat down on floor& return phone)
Gunjan:(join him) r u OK? Sorry best day emotional kArdiya,
Ranjan-maanak: (arrives)
Vivaan:(hold her hands) its not like that gunjan, mujhe evening ki happiness se more yeh 3 calls ki happiness hori hai. Pata nahi kyun senti hogaya main stupid ?third call k baad (smile a bit) Cute cute talk sunke. Some day u don't behave like me. Baby will get angry
Gunjan:(smile a bit)
Ranjan-maanak:(overhear) tobe dad aur mom k 7 Hota hai?vivaan. Baby won't mind.
Vigun: (get up)
Sehgalbrothers: hamare saath hua tha vivaan on ours birthdays.don't worry.
Kasak:(arrive with smiles) vivaan, congrats in advance.
Vivaan:(with fake smile for gunjan) thank you.
Gunjan:(feltnice,in mind) thank god everything is getting normal.
Vihaan:with smiles) let's reherse Mr vivaan vadera,
Vivaan: rehearsal.
Vihaan: jab aap stage par invite Hunge, toh aap bhuljao sab guests KO, then aap speech start karo. Try here.let's welcome to honour the goodlooking fourth lawyer of the month the one who always protect us from harm without caring of ourself, to gift his reward!and learn his feelings none other mr vivaan vadera.:(sign him to begin )
Youngsters:(claps)
Vivaan:(smiles)thank you so much.
Vihaan:(smiles) how are feeling?
Vivaan:(smiles)its like I am in dreamland, i haven't expect this chance in my whole life.but its happened.
Vihaan: iska credit kiskisko Dena chahenge.:?(smiles)
Vivaan:(with smiles)first i would like to thank god who send me, then parents who had wish to get me in their lifes some yrs ago ,and family whose blessing and best liveswith me wherever I go,last but not the least my friend+ wife mrs gunjan vadera. Bcoz of these spls persons I never stay in tension and work nicely.
Siblings and kasak claps
Vigun look each other.
Vihaan:(claps) ek aur victory hogayi mere bhai. Aise perform karlo vivaan bhai.
Vivaan:(smiles)I will try.
Ranjan-maanak: good speech,
Vivaan: thank you. Two sec k bade bhai:(smiles)
Vihaan:(nod in disbelief) aake party Dena hoga OK.thank you main nahi over Karna story.
Vivaan:(smiles) okay done deal.
Jaanvi: jaana kab hai? Aur kiskisko
Vivaan: 6 pm k baad. Mamma ya papa ya gunjan main se koi one KO chalna hai.
Gunjan:(smiles) try to take them.
Vivaan: jaake ask karte hain:(went along gunjan)
Siblings talk with each other excepted madhu, kasak went
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In hall after lunch
Virika virmam others family members talking.
Vigun:(bring cloth for virika) papa mamma, hum aapke room se yeh select karke laiye, kaise hai?
Virika: nice suit hoga tumdono ko:(smiles)
Vivaan:(smiles) hum kuch bhi wear karenge, aaplog yeh wear kariye.
Gunjan:(smiles) agree.aapke bete ka best day hai aj.aaplog ko jaana chahiye
Virika:(smiles) tumlog jao.kasak aur baby k paass family hogi nimrit hogi, order hai hamara.
Vigun:(smile) okay we will go.
Virman-virika: good.:(smiles)
Vigun went to select their dresses.
Vibala arrive and show vivaan's video.
Virika:( felt nice) well done vihaan. Humse more samajhte ho aapne bhai ko
Vihaan:(smiles)
Madhu:(write a note and gave them)
Virika:(reads) aisa nahi hai.copy kar raha hai apne bhai KO:(smiles)
Vihaan:(smiles) madhu go and rest, u need it most.
Madhu:(stomp on his feet in anger)
Vihaan:(felt pain stomp her feet back)tit for tat.
Maanvi:(sternly) vihaan woh unwell hai care Karne k instead irritate nahi Karo samjhe.
Vihaan:(smiles) voice gayi energy nahi
Madhu:(madeface and went)
Vihaan: follow her
They spend times.
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in guestroom!
Vigun unborn baby 8week begin.
Kasak resting
Vivaan:( arrive tocheck about their unborn baby needs things is their).nimrit woh.
Nimrit:(keep finger on her lips)
Kasak:(get disturb) vivaan tum achcha kiya, congrats gift Dene nahi tha,
Vivaan:(normally) medicine check Karna aya tha, if nahi rehti toh lata tha.congrats gift lene nahi aya.:(left)
Kasak:(felt bad,in mind). Jo hona tha hogaya, sad rehke is baby KO harm nahi karungi:(smiles)
Gunjan:(arrives) sab okay haina.?
Kasak:(smiles) haan.don't worry, chahiye toh nimrit se ask Karo.
Gunjan:(smiles) its OK.
Madhu:(arrives and sign them as) what happening?
Gunjan:(smiles) simply talking.
Kasak: koi medicine liya madhu?
Madhu:(with fakesmile nod in no).
Gunjan: medicine time pe lo madhu., mamma ka homemade medicine try karlo.
Madhu:(text her) kal for sure.
Gunjan:(smiles) good then.
Madhu:(in mind) sorry to lie my sister, important hai.
Gunjan:(inmind)looking main fine lagri madhu, throat pain hota toh, kuch nahi eat karsakte koi.
Madhu:(sign her bye And left)
Trio talks
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In evening After dinner
In maanak room!
Ronak:(with smile) less age main achche work handle kare vivaan vihaan, archivements bhi.
Maansi:(smile a bit) aap aur ranvir kuch less behind ho kya?
Ronak:(smiles)for you, not at all.
Maansi:(smiles) good.
Ronak:(smiles) thanks.
Maansi: three weeks k baad second stage over, babys arrival day near.:(smiles)
Ronak:(smiles) right saying.kids chain grow hote jayegi near future.
Maansi:(smiles) right saying.
Ronak:(smiles) sohum KO usse little friend milenge.
Maansi:(smiles) rightsaying, playing main busy hojayenge.hamare turn ka wait Karna hojaiga.
Ronak:(smiles) try karenge k, sabko time mile.
Maansi: agree, and sohum samjhega.
Ronak:(smiles) goodboy Jo hai.
Maansi:(smiles) agree.
Ronak: rest Karen?
Maansi: kyun nahi. Daughter dream rehna Jo hai kisiko.:(smiles)
Ronak:(smiles) kisiko son dream main rehna bhi toh hai.
Maansi:(smiles) dream dekhnewale KO dream dekhnewale ka pata hota hai, most in siblingship & couplesship.
Ronak:(smiles) right ho.
Maansi: let's rest.
Ronak: okay
They take rest.
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In ranjan room!
Jaanvi: ranvir, if meri voice KO much hota toh kaise rehte the tum?
Ranvir: (smiles) main koi bhi find karta aur tumhe alright karta tha. Same time not day
Jaanvi: I thought same answer from u.
Ranvir:(smiles) nice tuning.
Jaanvi: (smiles) exactly.
Ranvir:(smiles) sudden aisa question kyun?
Jaanvi:(smiles) simply.
Ranvir:(smiles) okay.
Jaanvi:(smiles) gifting idea achcha laga tumhare friend KO.?gift kardiya
Ranvir:(smile) abhi nahi bahot jald gift karega.
Jaanvi:(smiles) okay fine.
Ranvir: don't worry tumhari choice dislike nahi karsakte koi.(smiles)
Jaanvi:(smiles) really.
Ranvir:(smiles) yes.
Jaanvi:(smiles) even your choice also.
Ranvir:(smiles) after u.
Jaanvi:(smiles) after u.
Ranvir: after u.
Jaanvi: after u.
Ranvir: after u.
Jaanvi: rest karte hain, baby disturb hojaiga.
Ranvir:(smilies) okay
They take rest
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In vigun room!
Gunjan: jab tum speech sunare the, toh mujhe tum nahi on the way ka little vadera dikhra tha apni age ka.
Vivaan:(smiles) achcha aur hum kaise the. Apne Parents age k.
Gunjan:(smiles) yes.
Vivaan:(smiles)good dream hai
Gunjan:(smiles) reality hoga toh kya karoge.
Vivaan:(smiles) cakebake kardunga, happily tum dono ke liye. Mujhse share Karna nahi Karna tumlog ki choice hogi.
Gunjan: (smiles) don't worry we know sharing is caring.
Vivaan:(smiles) abhi kuch bhi bolo, reverse karoge,
Gunjan:(smiles) right saying.
Vivaan: little lawyer k dream dekho no problem, vihaan aur meri deal ka kya karun?
Gunjan: kaise deal.
Vivaan: ontheway apna little vadera singer hoga uske chachu types.unka little vadera lawyer hoga apne badepapa types:(smiles)
Gunjan: (smiles) kya idea hai wow.
Vivaan:(smiles) what about your dream.
Gunjan:(smiles) let it be.as u let it be your daughter wish.
Vivaan:(smiles) its not like that.
Gunjan:(smiles) yeh sab chodke name search karte hain.
Vivaan: good idea, I don'twant to make our world a court world.let's rest
Gunjan: okay
They takerest
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In vibala room!
Vihaan:(smiles) I am so happy, vivaan bhai ka s-p bhagaya.
Madhu:(text him) same here.
Vihaan:how is your voice.
Madhu:(text him) not fine.
Vihaan:(smile a bit) maasi KO bolke medicine lelo, 1 evening main OK hote.
Madhu:(text him) better nahi lage toh bolungi.
Vihaan:(smiles) as u wish, tumhara voice problem kitna lucky hai, mera relax, vivaan bhai KO trophy diya.
Madhu:(madeface, text him) how rude & mean you are, mere sorrows se kidding kar rahe ho.instead of missing me.
Vihaan:(smile) iam kidding,you not in London.Jo miss karunga.
Madhu::(text him) meri talking bhi miss nahi kar rahe?
Vihaan:(smile) not at all.
Madhu:(text him)meri talking, fight lagti hai tumhe. Haina?
Vihaan:(smiles) only sometimes.
Madhu:(text him) liar, okay bhi hungi toh talk nahi karungi tumse for sure.
Vihaan:(smiles) all the best, Jo bola karke dikhane.which is not easyfor ur types talkertalented
Madhu::(text him) thank you, I will show u my new talent.
Vihaan:(smiles) I am ready.
Madhu:(text him) good for u.
Vihaan: let's rest
Madhu:(text him) okay
They take rest.



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AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. LOVED IT. IT WAS REALLY NYC UPDATE. LOVES THE WAY HOW MADHU IS SPEAKING TO EVERONE BY TEXT. SO CUTE IT IS. LOVES THE BEAUTIFUL SPEECH OF VIVAAN AND IDEA OF VIHAAN OF THROWING PARTY. GUNJAN GESTURES R SO SWEET. ALL COUPLES SCENES R AWESOME. VIBALA R SO CUTE. NOW UPDATE NEXT PART SOON DEAR. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊
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Part 353
2days after
Invm Babyroom!
After breakfast
Foursome sisters spending time!
Gunjan:(normally) Didi's, I hope main aur madhu aapdono KO along babies harm nahi kar rahe hain uknownkingly, if harm kiya toh sorry.
Maansi: not at all gunjan, tumdono best care kar rahe ho hamari.:(smiles)
Jaanvi::(smiles) forget it and be happy.
Madhu:(smiles)aur wish kijiye Garv main vivaan jijubhai ki habit aye Jo aapko bahot achchi lagti hai unmain woh.
Gunjan:(glare at her for spoiling surprise)
Sehgalsisters: (smiles) yeh Garv kaun hai?vivaan ki quality kyun chahiye
Madhu:(smiles) hamare third sibling ka son. Gunjan vivaan vadera ka son garv.
Sehgalsisters: (smiles) nice name, sisters ki talk sister main rahegi.don't worry.
Gunjan:(smiles) thanks.(relieze something) madhu tumse talk nahi hori thi na?
Madhu:(normally) I wanted to see wheater vihaan miss my talking with him are not, bcoz usko meri har talk foolishful lagti hai that's y lie kardiya.
Gunjan:(normally) its not right way to irritate like this to lp, lunchbreak main call karo sorry bolo usko.next time repeat nahi hona chahiye.
Madhu:(smile a bit) ok
Vadera sisters left
Sehgalbrothers: (arrive with their juice) juice for u.:(smiles)
Maansi:(normally) pastdays main Jo kasak Kari woh nahi karna chahiye tha, insecure hogayi thi but show nahi kiya tha gunjan ne.
Jaanvi:(normally)right saying. Phir bhi woh forgive Kari.so nice of her.
Ranjan-maanak spend times.
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In guestroom!
Nimrit is busy with kasak medicines.
Kasak:(remembering vivaan yesterday behavior getting sad bcoz of herself)
Gunjan:(arrives) kya hora hai:(smiles)
Nimrit:(smiles) nothing mam just checking medicines.
Gunjan:(notice their friend) kasak, kya hua? Lost ho tum.
Kasak:(smiles) not at all, I am fine.
Gunjan: okay fine,:(join her) nimrit, progress kaise hai kasak aur baby ki.
Nimrit:(smiles) theek hai, tension free rehna important hai.
Gunjan: (smile a bit) kya baat ki tension hai kasak.?
Kasak:(normally) nothing SPL.
Gunjan:(smiles) tum apne past friends se chat karlo na, entertainment hoga.nimrit bhi hai.
Kasak: I will :(smiles)
Gunjan: vivaan bhi hai, but Busy hai:(smiles)
Kasak:(smiles) its OK tum ho madhu hai family hai.
Gunjan:(smiles) better lage toh outdoor hall main aake time spend karlo OK.
Kasak:(smiles) I will try do as u said.
Gunjan:(smiles) try kyun?
Kasak: u know the reason.
Gunjan:(normally) I understand.don't worry ,we have move on, u to moveon
Kasak: okay.
Gunjan: tumlog talk karo I will be. Back.;(getup and went)
Kasak nimrit talks
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Back to Babyroom!
Ranjan maanak spending time!
Ronak: vivaan , fathers aur tobe father KO teach karne bolra tha usko, kitna expert hogaya woh haina.:(smiles)as lp and father protection ki Sochi usne.
Ranvir:(normally) right saying, I wish main bhi confident rehta new relation ki care karne main. Twist and turns nahi aate the Jo aye
Ronak:(smiles changetopic) it's OK, everything is fine now, happily welcome karenge new relation ka.
Sehgalsisters:(smiles)agree.as bhai bhi
Sehgalbrothers:(smiles) right saying.
Maansi:(normally) I hope madhu ki reality se problem nahi ho vihaan madhu main.
Jaanvi:(smile a bit) don't worry kuch nahi hoga,
Sehgalbrothers: he get bore without talking madhu, already problem hogAyi yeh, new kuch nahi hoga don't worry.:(smiles)
Sehgalsisters: (smiles) okay fine., fast fast names think Karna hoga, third to be parents almost sochliye Hunge.
Ronak: y not..
Ranvir: 1 time name share kare, actual day tie hoga otherwise.: (smiles)
Maanak-jaanvi:(smiles and shouts) no.
Ranvir:(madeface) how rude.
Ronak: actual day near hai almost, wait karte hain.
Ranvir:(smiles) why not.
Jaanvi:(extend hand) surely.?
Ranvir:(smiles) haan.
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In backyard
Madhu:(texting vihaan so many sorrys)
Gunjan:(normally) kya hora madhu?
Madhu:(smile a bit) sorry texting.
Gunjan: kisko.
Madhu: vihaan KO,
Gunjan:(smiles)personLy sorry bolna chahiye madhu,
Madhu: easy nahi hai:(smiles)anger dekhna hi hoga.
Gunjan:(smile) whats big deal, mistake hoga toh yeh bhi hoga.
Madhu:(got some Idea) I will gave him lunch surprise. Uske calm mode main hote sorry boldungi.
Gunjan:(smiles) good idea,
Jeemaan:(over hear) kya good idea.
Madhu:main vihaan KO surprise karnewali thi. Silent movie ki actress banne k liye sorry bolna bhi tha.:(smiles)sorry to u all also for prank
Jeemaan:(smiles) its OK from family.jao surprise ready Karo self bhi ho OK.jao driver k saath
Madhu:(smiles)OK:(left)
Maanvi: gunjan tum bhi jao vivaan KO surprise Karo.:(smiles)
Gunjan: last time hi gayi thi.(smiles)
Maanvi: it's OK.:(smiles) next time jao for sure.
Gunjan:(smiles) okay:(went from their)
Maanvi:(normally) gunjan happy toh hai.
Jeevika:(smiles) hum sabke liye happy dikhari hai, papaya incident k liye scare hai. Maansi jaanvi se bolri thi sorry proper care nahi kiya toh.
Maanvi:(smiles) don't worry theek hojaigi. Name best socha usne anyways, garv
Jeevika: rightsaying,
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At vmj music studio in lunch!
Madhu wait for vihaan.
Vihaan:(arrives) madhu what pleasant surprise.:(join her)
Madhu:(smiles) main alone surprise nahi hun,(show packed lunch) yeh bhi surprise hai.
Vihaan:(smiles) kya baat hai, double surprise. In fact triple surprise hai, u can talk
Madhu:(smiles and feed him) sorry vihaan I was playing prank. My throat is ok from b4 only
Vihaan:(getshock!)what?
Madhu:(feed him) actually tumhe meri har baat bore lagti thi toh socha aisa karun. Taake Tum mere talking KO miss Karo, that's it. Tumhe meri tension nahi Dena tha:(get up and turn to leave)bye main jaati self hun tum nahi throw Karo mujhe,otherwise yahan k log wrong samjhenge tumhe jaise last year samjha tha.return ake angry ho OK, right hai tumhe.silent movie k hero bhi banjao family KO nahi show Karenge.
Vihaan:(hold her hand made her turn) aisa kuch nahi karunga main.(smiles)
Madhu:(get shock) kya?
Vihaan:(smiles) hAn, replay karke phsic banjayenge double him.
Madhu:(smiles) right saying.
Vihaan:(ask) ek its OK ke liye yeh sab kiya tumne?
Madhu:(smiles) haan.
Vihaan:(smiles) very funny.
Madhu: fast food finish Karo mujhe jaana bhi hai return.
Vihaan:(smiles) babies ki Mami & chachii, let's share food with eachother.:(feed her)
Madhu:(after chewing)music director ho wahi raho, relation decider bano mat.got it.other wise main bhi relation decider banungi.
Vihaan:(smiles) let it be,
Madhu: even I have to go:(get up and went)
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Back to VM hall
Family spending time
Vibala arrives
VivAan:(also arrives indicating shopkeepers) here only
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Vihaan:(smiles) aj ka k day KO dekhke lagta hai k, surpriceday hai aj.
Madhu: yeh sab kya hai vivaan jijubhai.:(smiles
Vivaan:(smiles) glowing lamp hai madhu, ghar rehke bhi every country ghumne ki feeling ayegi, darkness hone k baad.. Orphanage k SPL children ki creativity hai i like it aur main laya for u all and babies.
Family felt nice and take it.
Vivaan:(smiles) I hope aaplog KO achcha laga.?
Family: yes,thank you so much.
Vivaan:(smiles) welcome.
Madhu: nice way hai apka promise flfilL karne ka.:(smiles) koi tired nahi hoga aanejaane main. Enjoy bhi hojaiga sabka
Vihaan:(smiles)rightsaying.
Vivaan:(smiles)
Gunjan: kasak K liye kaunsa laMp achcha hoga vivaan:(smiles)
Vivaan:(change topic) gunjan main Didi's aur madhu tumhare ke liye gift lenewala hota hun toh mamma maasi se views leta hun, even tumlog ki help liye the hum, afterall ladka hun, tum hi decide karlo.gift karo
Family understood him.
Gunjan:(smiles,take and left)
Vivaan:(in mind) sorry gunjan
Jeevika: vivaan backyard main aao mujhe talk Karna hai:(left)
Family spends time
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In backyard.
Virika waiting for vivaan.
Vivaan: kya work hai mujhse.?
Jeevika: move on Karo Vivaan, Gunjan KO bad feel hoga sab OK nahi dekhe toh tum friends main. Uske types baby k near nahi rahe toh ghar main hoke.
Vivaan:(normally sat on knees) itsok ,gunjan & baby far rehsakte hain then main kyun nahi, :(smiles)actual day hum gum k types rahenge:, sab OK hai(change topic) mamma aapko mujhe Gunjan k sath rehne ka lesson dena chahiye ear hold karke, koi aur k 7 nahi.:(smiles) selfless m.i.l d.i.l ho aap aur gunjan.
Jeevika:(smile) mother daughter bolo.
Vivaan:(smiles) sorry next time repeat nahi karunga.promise
Virman-vibala:(arrives) now what happened?
Jeevika: main vivaan KO bolri thi, childhood promise nahi bhule aur na vihaan KO slap kare:(smiles)
Vihaan:(smiles) maasi aap ek warning do ,mujhe rokne excuses nahi kare tipicle se. Sab bolde excepted court work Jo meri gk se far hai.
Virika smiles
VirmAn:(nod head in disbelief)
Madhu:(madeface) vihaan kab tak past days main sitting karoge? Get up and walk away from past
Vihaan:(smiles) u to move away and let me talk with our brother.
Madhu: talk nahi complain thi according to my ear.:(smiles)
Vivaan:(join them)guys leave it dance practice Karo, i know Didi's babyshower KO time hai,
Vihaan:(smiles) aap entry possible karaoge?vivaan bhai.
Vivaan:(smiles) sorry I forget we are not allow.
Vihaan(madeface) aisa nahi hosakta?
Madhu: CCTV main dekhlo.
Vivaan:(smiles) good idea.
Vihaan:(madeface) not fair koi change hoke wish kar raha hai toh, fulfill karna chahiye wish, main uninvited guest Hi happy tha:(went)
Virika virman madhu nod in disbelieve
Vivaan:(feltbad,with smile) I think aap elders ko different baby shower karna chahiye onthewaybabys kaun hai nahi pata na.
Virat:(pretends together jealous) I wish mere bhai bhi aise hote.
Viren:(smiles) tum jab bhagte the apni to be & bride se milne jate the, kuan family ko bolta tha? Main.
Vivaan:(smiles) so sweet.
Jeevika: elders ko bolke dekhenge.
They spend times.
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In evening after dinner
In maanak room!
Glowing light is on
Maansi::(smiles) kitna beautiful haina scene.
Ronak:(smiles) right saying, baby KO fear nahi hoga usse.
Maansi:(smiles) oh yes. Hum se more uske liye best gift hoga yeh.
Ronak:(smiles) everyone cares baby alot.
Maansi: even us also:(smiles)
Ronak:(smiles) right saying.
Maansi:(smiles) aapko pata hai, vivaan types gunjan bhi baby is name decide Kari. Actual day family bolna hai usko.
Ronak:(smiles)nice then, lawyerlp kab tak hide rAhega dekhna hai.
Maansi:(smiles) don't worry hide rAhega.
Ronak:(smiles) agar hide nahi raha you tumhe batana hoga.
Maansi:(in jaanvi style) lawyer is beta lawyer ki beti ko chalenge kar rahen hain.
Ronak:(in ranvir style) yes any problem?
Maansi:(smiles) not at all.
Ronak:(smiles) be ready then.
Maansi:(smiles) you to.
Ronak:(smiles) done deal
Maansi:(smiles) lets rest
Ronak: okay
Maansi: good night
They take rest
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In ranjan room!
Glowing light is on
Jaanvi:(smiles) room look is change so much haina?
Ranvir:(smiles)right saying.
Jaanvi:(smiles) anyways babytoy bangaya?
Ranvir:(smiles and lies) time lagega.best baby's k best toy bana hoga na.
Jaanvi:(smiles) multitalented lp hotum ,
Ranvir:(smiles)thank-you.
Jaanvi:(smiles) wish bhi karo multitalented son aye.
Ranvir:(smiles) sure.
Jaanvi:(smiles) thanks.
Ranvir:(smiles) wish karo super duper beti aye.
Jaanvi: done:(smiles)
Ranvir:(smiles) good.
Jaanvi:(smiles)thanks.
Ranvir:(smiles) baby kaisi hai.?
Jaanvi:(nod in disbelieve) kya?
Ranvir:(smiles) how is her mother jaanvi?
Jaanvi:(smiles) we are fine until we are with u.
Ranvir:(smiles) same here, lets rest
Jaanvi: okay:(smiles)
They take rest
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In vigun room!
Glowing light is on
Gunjan tells vivaan about madhu pranks.
Vivaan:(laugh and say) children's Alike parents. Pranksters.
Gunjan:(smiles) I am glad madhu ki reality se problem nahi hui dono main.
Vivaan:(smiles) right saying.
Gunjan:(smiles a bit) vivaan, try to come home for sometime After finishing important work ,daily for
Vivaan:(misunderstand in one breath) sure aunga, if your ready lawyerexam finish karake saath rakhta hun tumhe.(smiles) phir humlog ko family and hum family ko miss karenge.family ko problem nahi hoga I will talk with
Gunjan:(intrupt and smiles) vivaan, main hamare togetherness k liye nahi bolri thi, woh kasak k liye bolri thi, am kal
Vivaan:(loss his cool and without realising hersaid) what is this har kissi ko uski care hain mujhe convince kar rahen hai, like main family ka apna nahi hun woh family ki apni hain.
Gunjan:(my him & turns in crying tone) I am sorry, family and main baby ka sochenge aur happy rakhenge kuch bhi karke,tumhe koi kuch nahi bolega. Even baby bhi nahi.tum Jo karte ho woh karo.
Vivaan:(felt bad and comes to her side) gunjan mere types tumhe missunderstanding hui hai. I am sorry main kuch over bola.
Gunjan:(pretend to sleep)
Vivaan:(in mind)I am sorry gunjan for missunderstanding u & notable to agree with u.sorry god don't punish us excepted me.
Gunjan:(in mind) pata hai problem thi kasak se it doesn't meant usko aur baby ko effect hone dein hum.(tearfalls)
Vivaan:(sees it and wipe it.
They take rest
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In vibalaroom!
glowing light is on
Madhu: yeh kitna beautiful haina?:(smiles)
Vihaan:(smiles) 100 times.
Madhu: hundered kya?
Vihaan:(smiles) abtak hundred times praise kiya tumne. Like lp ho yeh.
Madhu:(smiles)is someone is jealous of glowing light?
Vihaan:(smiles) main more good looking hun.
Madhu:(smiles) agree but glowing light k baad.
Vihaan:(madeface) miserwife,if mujhse koi ask karta toh main kuch aur best answer bolta unlike u.
Madhu:(madeface) same to u.
Vihaan:(madeface) main miser nahi hun.
Madhu: main bhi miser nahi hun:(smiles)
Vihaan:(smiles) very pehle bola tha Jo main hunga tum bhi hogi.:(raise eyebrow) yaad hai?
Madhu:(smiles) yaad hai.
Vihaan:(smiles) so don't do my straNge naming ceremony.
Madhu:(smiles)anyways pata hai, sorry first promise me u won't tell vivaanjijubhai
Vihaan:(smiles) okay fine bolo.
Madhu:(smiles) third baby is name final hogaya ,garv vadera.
Vihaan:(smiles) wow nice, yeh to mere types hogaya papa ka vi+ mamma ka aan+ tumhara+ h hai.
Madhu:(smiles)right saying,
VihAan: lets rest
They take rest






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