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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwww...soooooooo cute!
it was an awsum part
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awsome part u rocked! do cont soon 👏
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwww amazing prt hun geeta...cont sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow they are one again bu tpls don't separate the and pls conti soon can't wait to read more 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwww............ so cute. just rad the entire fanfic and it is AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!! i love it. i hope u continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
aww sooo cute juste read the entire story!!
it was great
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Posted: 18 years ago
just caught up and it is great!!!

it was sad about the baby but still.. awsome part.. im sure it'll all be fineee

continue soooooooonnnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
An Hour later kripa comes out trying to run but angad holds from her hand trying to pull her back
Kripa was wearing towel around her and same with angad.
K: angad let go of me
A: no (gets closer to her and holds from her towel
K: stops him) angad no stop
A: smiles evilly)
K: angad stop (holds from his towel) if u don't let go I will pull it
A: holds from his towel with one hand and with another trying to pull kripa's
K: angad I mean it….stop
A: I wont
K: plez (makes cute face)
A: one condition
K: what?
A: u will do whatever I tell u for the next month
K: no way
A: fine (pulls her towel but kripa holds it)
K: ok ok I will
A: thank you…starting now…give me a kiss
K: no
A: u said u will do whatever I tell u now I want a kiss
K: that's not fair
A: fine then (tries to pull it when the maid nocks on their door and angad smiles evilly) think about it….if u don't promise to do it I will pull it harder and u know I could ( smiles to her)
K: looks at the door then back at angad angry) angad let go plez the mid will come in
A: no until u promise
K: I promise…plez let go now
A: smiles) now kiss first
K: gives him quick kiss)
A: tasty (laughs)
K: angad now plez let go I have to change
A: ok ( lets go of her and she runs to the bathroom taking her cloths with her)
The mid comes in and brings breakfast. He leaves will angad sits on the bed still with towel around him. Kripa comes out wearing beautiful salwar kamiz
K: looks at him angry) I hate u black mailer
A: oh really ( walks toward her again smiling to her)
K: angad stop…aren't u getting late for office
A: no im off today (walks up to her but kripa puts hand in front of his chest stopping him but he still bends and kisses her cheek)
K: angad didn't u have enough….stop now
A: no….I already made the plane for the whole month
K: what? I aint doing anything
A: u promise
K: so…
A: that's not fair
K: everything is fair and love and war
A: so ur forcing me to turn my love into war….fine let it be…we will see who wines
K: yea right…u cant force me
A: just watch me….
K: oh yea….fine then after now we will sleep in separate rooms ok and that's my force
A: im locking all the rooms….
K: then I will sleep in the living room
A: I will pick u up and bring u here
K: I will put security for my self
A: I could pay them to leave
K: then I will run away from home and hid from u which u will never find me
A: puts his hand on her mouth) don't u dare to ever say that….and don't u dear to think of leaving me….I wont survive
K: takes his hand on her and kisses his hand) I was joking jaan…
A: u better
K: laughs) but for now (pushes him and starts to laugh) stay away from me and plez put something on for god sake
A: I like being like this
K: walking around half naked
A: nods) yup
K: ok…goes to the cupboard and locks it then takes the keys) now u will be like that all day
A: hey…kripa give me the key
K: nope…im going out bye (runs from the room)
A: kripaaaaaaa….I wont leave u when u come back
K: laughs) yea right….stay like that all day

Kripa leaves to the mall. She was shopping for passed an hour…she left to the perfume shop….as she was smelling perfumes all off sudden a hand went around her whist and someone hugged her. Kripa jerked and turned around quickly pushing the person….she was surprised finding angad. Angad was wearing his suit looking dashing and smiling at her.
K: angad
A: surprised ha
K: how did u?
A: laughs) I just pulled the cupboard door and it accidentally broke ops
K: what?….
A: lets go shopping…u were trying to do shopping with out me

K: yea….
A: to bad…now im here….ok what purfume are u buying…need help to chose

Both angad and kripa shope more. They finish and angad send kripa's driver home and kripa sits in angads car will angad drives. They stop at the light. Kripa looks out her window and sees shaam in his car. every time she was him she got scared. Kripa looks away and trying to hid her self. Angad sees this.
A: kripa…what are u doing
K: nothing…I just…
A: sit up
K: I am
A: no ur not….ur sliding down as if u trying to hide ur self
K: no
A: yea….now sit up
Kripa sits up.
A: holds her hand on his then smiles to her) im with u then u don't need to fear anything
K: looks at him) I know (smiles to him) ok so were are we going
A: far away…(smiles to her evilly)
K: I don't like that look
A: but I love it…u know what it mean….
K: no way angad…stop
A: its payback time…
K: angad im getting off right now (tries to open the door but angad pulls her and starts to drive will laughing)

3 weeks passes….life was going great with them….they loved each other a lot….kripa went to do test about her pregnancy….the doctor told her something which made her really sad. Kripa came back home and sat in her bed will getting teary. Angad comes to the room and jumps on the bed behind her.
A: hi jaan…so how was the test…what did the doctor say
K: ----
A: kripa….turns her around) kripa what's wrong….what happen
K: tries to talk but she was crying so much no voice came from her)
Angad felt his hearth etch seeing her in such a condition. He hugged her holding her tight trying to calm him down
A: kripa….stop crying….now tell me what's wrong
K: subbing) the doctor said…the doctor said there is only 50 chance for me to be a mother
A: shocked and sad)
K: she said…she said becz I had miscarriage I might not have any child (starts to cry more)
A: really sad but tried not to show becz right now kripa was really weak and he need to be strong for her) kripa jaan stop crying…..don't lose hope….the doctor said only 50% right….think positive…what about the other 50...don't lose hope so soon…looks if u keep crying like this I will start to
K: aparts and stops crying but was wiping)
A: that's like a good girl….
Angad tried to cheer her up all day….

A month passed and kripa was getting more sad but didn't show….shaam was still angry at kripa…he was more mad becz of angad marrying her. They had big wedding 7 weeks ago and that's what made him more mad. Everyday he was trying to think of something to hurt kripa but didn't know how to…he got a plane…he paid a guy in angads office and to put a paper for him to sign….angad didn't know and signed the paper. The next day when angad and kripa were home the cops came to their house and arrested angad for sealing drugs with his products in the company….angad was locked in the cell and kripa left to meet him…the cops let kripa in to see him…as kripa saw angad she run toward his cell will crying.
K: angad
A: kripa…kripa they are lying I didn't do anything like that
K: I know angad…(puts her hand on his cheek) im scared angad….dad isn't here either…no lawyers are welling to help us…I don't know whats wrong with them they are denying to help us.
A: I don't understand who is doing this….
Shaam walks in there will laughing… angad looks up with kripa. Both shocked seeing shaam.
S: aww poor angad….what happen angad…how could u do such a thing ( laughs)
A: angry) u did this?
S: laughs more) who else….of course me
A: what do u want
S: I just don't want to see her happy ( looks at kripa angry)
A: shouts) shaammmm
S: shhhhhhhh….don't shout….( goes close to kripa and pulls from her arm toward him will angad angry shouts at him again)
A: shaam…let go of her
S: laughs) really…what if I don't want to
A: shaam
S: save her if u can
A: shaam don't u dare to hurt her
S: oh I will try my best…I will not hurt her only but u also….actually I have a great place for her….this days people make lots of money selling girls right….what if I put kripa there
A: get angry and shout more) shaam stop…don't u dare.
S: laughs and pulls kripa with him) shouts as much as u can…no one will help u…I paid them all ( laughs and pulls kripa with him will kripa tried to free her hand and was shouting for angad. Angad behind the cell kept on yelling hitting the cell trying to get out but he could….he just kept on shouting
A: shaammmmmmmmmmm…..stoppppppppppp.........kripaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aa
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 i wish i could kill shaam 😡 😡 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
its getting interesting with every part

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Churake dil mera...Stealing my heart... I dedicate this OS to parthz who requested me to write on AviSha. Hima went to a park and looked around....

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