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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part
yes shaam is dead 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
Angad left to the direction were kripa was. Shiv wanted to come and help him but when they were at home angad left quickly before telling them so they don't come with him. He wanted to get kripa back…by himself. As angad stopped by the big club he felt goose bumps. He didn't know how kripa was and was afraid that was she hurt. He inters inside the club. There was lots of people. Girls dancing on the stage. His eyes got watery will he searched for kripa. He looked around will tears started to roll down his cheek. After looking around for 5 mints he thought she wasn't there. He was about to leave when he stopped and looked back again. Two guards were holding from kripas hands pulling her on the stage. They left her there and went down will the mans started to throw money on her will kripa hugged her self and started to cry. Angad felt the world turning upside down for him. He was shocked seeing kripa like that. Kripa was wearing black dress



His hand turned into fist when he saw her crying hugging her self. There was some bruises in her cheek. Will the mans kept on whistling at her kripa kept crying more. Angad run there. He got up in the stage and run straight to kripa. Kripa had her eyes shut when she felt someone in front of her. She tightened her eyes more scared when she felt a hand on her cheek. She recognized the hand. Angad always put his hand on her cheek every time when she was sad. Kripa opened her eyes when she was angad in front of her his eyes red full of tears. They both quickly hugged each other tight will kripa crying more in his arms. Dev saw that and got angry at who is there and hugging kripa not letting her dance. Dev told the guards to apart them. 6 guards came to them. Two guards held from kripa and other four from angad a parting them. Both were holding tight to each there not letting go. The guards pulled them harder will they parted. Angad held tight from her hand not letting her go will one guard took his gun and hit hard in angads stomach which made him let go of kripa's hand. Kripa yelled louder for angad

K: angaddddddd (trying to get her self free will the guards were pulling her)

Dev heard his name and kripa telling him that her husband name is angad. He got made and told his guards to beat up angad will the other guards locked kripa inside the room.

Angad slowly opened his eyes. There was lots of pain in his body and side of his mouth was bleeding will so was his forehead. His hands were tight with chains on the wall. He was in his knees will his hands were chained



Angad tried to pull his hands but couldn't. dev interd to the room will smiling evilly at him.
D: hello….angad right
A: where is kripa
D: shhh…don't shout…I will show u….
A: leave me
D: oh sorry but if we free u, you will hurt us…and we don't want that do we (laughs)
A: (shouts) where is my wife
D: there ( moves out from front of him will angad looks. They were in a room with glass in front of them…they could see from there but from outside there was mirror. He saw kripa on stage again.
D: now she will dance and sing for us
A: she will never do that
D: aww im sorry but she has to or else u will die
A: u bat*****
D: laughs)

Kripa was on the stage and starts singing will crying her eyes searching for angad

Main Masti Main Mastani Hoon
Is Duniya Se Aanjani Hoon
Main Jis Ke Liye Deewani Hoon
Woh Chehra To Dekhla De
Rabba Pyar Se Mila De

Dil Ko Tere Chain Kahin Hain Bechaini Tadpaati Hain
Tanhaayi Mein Aab To Mujhko Yaad Usi Ki Aati Hain
Use Dhoond Rahin Hain Meri Nazar
Mujhko Uski Nahin Hai Koi Kabhar
Na Jaane Woh Ab Hoga Kidhar
Is Dil Ko Koi Batade
Rabba Pyar Se Mila De

Angad pulls his hands trying to free him self but the chains were tight….he fall on his knees will tears ruining down his cheek. He could see kripa who was looking for him and singing but she couldn't see him back.

Few mans starts saying price to buy kripa will kripa cry's more and singing

Sari Duniya Ki Aankhen Hain Meri Shok Jawani Pe
Har Deewane Ka Dil Paagal Hai Is Roop Ki Rani Pe
Koi Dil Se Ishq Jaatata Hai Koi Door Se Paas Bulaata Hai
Koi Mujhpe Jaan Lutata Hai
Main Kaise Bachoon Samjha De
Rabba Pyar Se Mila De
Rabba Pyar Se Mila De
Rabba Pyar Se Mila De
Rabba Pyar Se Mila De
Rabba Pyar Se Mila De

kripa couldn't take it anymore…she couldn't sing or dance…she was really weak. One man got up and pulled from kripa's sleeve ripping it. Kripa moved back quickly scared will other man came from behind her. Kripa screamed for angad name will the mans pulled from her arm taking her with them.
K: anagddddddddd (she kept on screaming)

Angad pulled both of his hands hard will hurting him self a lot. The chains broke when angad pulled more harder. As the guards took their gun to fire at angad. Angad punched one guard and took him in front of him self covering will the other guards fired at him but hitting the other guy. Angad took the gun and shot 4 of the guards. He shot one bullet on the glass breaking it down. The customer started to run will they heard the fire sound. More guards were coming and angad was about to shot dev but run before the more guards came.

The two man was still pulling from kripa's arm trying to take her with them when angad run to them. He pulled kripa from them will beating up the two man. Dev took the gun and fired toward angad. As the man stood up to hit angad when the bullet hit him. Both angad and kripa saw dev coming with his guards angad took from kripa's hand and run from there. They run between the people until they reached to a hail which they had to jump down. Angad told kripa for them to jump. Angad jumped down will rolling few feet's until he reach to the ground. Kripa stood on the hail not jumping scared. Angad shouted at her to jump but kripa still didn't.

K: crying) I cant angad
A: kripa jump u wont get hurt hurry up
K: shakes her head) I cant angad
A: kripaaaa
Two guards reached to kripa and held from her arms will angad was shocked and climbed back up. Other guards were still running but was a little far from them. Angad got up and beat both of the guards knocking them down. He held from kripa's hand to jump but kripa again moved back
K: no angad I cant
A: angry at her) kripa we will both die if u don't
K: shakes her head) I cant angad

Angad got more angry at her and looked to his right when he run holding from kripa's hand. The run down from side of the hail but was little longer. They got into the jungle and it was dark to. As they run more finally until stop bye few rocks trying to calm themselves down taking their breath. Both of their hearts were pounding fast. Angad looked at kripa angry and started to yell at her
A: what the hell were u thinking….why didn't u jump…u almost got ur self killed…
K: I couldn't jump
A: shouts more louder at her) why couldn't u….u have jumped like that places a lot….what happen today…
K: I
A: shut up…just shut up…u don't care about ur self at all…( looks away angry and steps away few feet from her sitting on a rock really angry)
Kripa looked at angad who was really angry at her. She walked by him and put her hand on his shoulder. Angad hit her hand off his shoulder angry. Kripa sat next to him on the rock will angad looked away.
K: ur right I don't care about my self…but I didn't want to hurt him (takes his hand and puts it on her stomach) I was afraid if I jumped lose it again.
Angad froze. His felt his hands shaking will he understood what kripa was talking about. Angad looked at kripa quickly breathing heavily will kripa smiled between her tears.
K: angad im pregnant
A: his anger vanished will tears started roll more down his cheek and he couldn't believe what he was hearing)
K: nodes) yes im pregnant
A: how many moths
K: 6 weeks
A: how could this be…but u said the doctor said u cant
K: u were right angad when u told me there is 50 other chance that I could be come a mom
A: hugs her really happy…both couldn't hold their tears and let them self cry…angad aparted from her) when did u find out
K: when I went to the doctor for the check up she told me I was pregent…that morning I was going to tell u but before I could u got arrested and I forgot to tell u….
A: scared) are u hurt….did they hurt u a lot…
K: angad im fine…ur baby is fine to…
A: I was afraid that I would be to late to find u before
K: nothing happened to me angad…they didn't do anything to me…last night when shaam give me to dev…I told dev that I was married and before he was about to touch me I told him that I was pregnant…he got angry and just slap me…not becz I was pregnant but becz now he couldn't sale me…that's why he locked me to a room and told me that I will dance only.
A: hugs her again) I was so scared that I would lose u….I promise that I will protect both of u till I die
K: hugs him tight both afraid but angad was more scared if kripa would get hurt he didn't want to lose her and nor lose his child again.

They heard foot steps when dev with 3 of his guards came there. The guards pointed the gun at angad will dev pulled from kripa's arm toward him.
D: where did u think u would take her…
A: leave her
D: once dev get something he doesn't let go of it at any coast.
The two guards held angad down on the ground will putting their foot on his shoulder holding his from his arm.
D: now lets play a game…lets see how much u love ur wife….(looks at kripa) oh im sorry but did u tell ur dear husband that ur pregnant becz I don't want him to find out when ur child is no more
K: get scared and puts her hand around her stomach)
D: takes a stick from ground



He raised the stick to hit in her stomach will angad shouted loud and kripa screamed


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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG great part
I hope he doesn't hit kripa OMG
cont. soooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
O NO HE DIDNT!!! HE BETTTER NOT!! OMGGG!!!! ANGADBE SUPERMAN.. U NO HOW U WERE FOR PRATEEK.. BECOME SUPERMAN AND BEAT BAD DEV!!

continue sooooooooooooooooooooonnn

i just got caught up and yayy shaam is dead. now he is with prithvii!! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
thats so i dont know wht but pls dont let him hit her after so many problems and difficulties they were together i fel like crying
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg!!!!!!!! i hope he didn't poor kripa already lost her baby! i hope not a second time..... angad to the rescue... hopefully shiv or aaliya will show up.
lots of love,
Nalni 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
omgg ur story is really tragic 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg i jus caught up!!! omg so glad shaam is ded but omg angad hury n save kripa n the baby 😭 n kill tht dev 😡 he better nt hurt kripa....omg cont sooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part!!!

plz say he ddnt hit kripa! 😭

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