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Hi u guys😊

im starting a new ff called DilšŸ˜›

hope u guys enjoyšŸ˜‰

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Posted: 18 years ago
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The judge sings the paper and speaks loud
J: kripa sharma will be send to jail for 8 years of murder case
Kripa looks down will the police officers comes from behind and handcuffs her hands in her back and takes her back to the jail.

The police officer opens the cell and pushes her in. they unlock her hands and locks her inside the cell.
Kripa looks around the cell and makes disgusting face.
K: ewww 🤢 this cell is nasty (she sits down on the bed when her head hit's the top bed) aw stupid bed (she lays down on the bed
Few mints later the cell opens and a lady inters in. she looks at kripa who is sleeping in her bed and she gets mad. She goes up next to the bed and say in anger tone
L: get off my bed
K: looks up at her) huh?
L: I said get off my bed
K: chill chill man…ok sorry (gets off the bed and the lady sits) then were do I sleep
L: I don't care (goes to sleep)
K: same tone) I don't care (makes face at her 🤢 …she trys to go up to the top bed but was to short to jump up) uff (try's again and again but fails…she looks around and sees small table…she stands on that and jumps on her bed and finally makes it) feww thank god (goes to sleep)


In a big house u see a guy sitting in his bed putting his hands on his ears trying to not hear the voice of his parents fight. He gets mad and goes down then leaves out of the house. The guy starts walking outside and takes a cigarette out and starts smoking. He sees his friend by his house trying to fix his car and he smiles and walks up to him.
G: hey josh need help
The looks up and smiles
J: no thanks angad…and ur smoking again
A: what can I do…can take it
J: again fight
A: as usual
J: im sorry man…but dude ur only seventeen and ur smoking…its bad for ur health and it will hurt u later a lot
A: its ok…I don't care…no one cares for me in this world anyways

In jail
K: I do…I swear I do….I know how to fight…ok maybe a little but that's enough
The lady gets mad and shouts at her
L: stop talking…u know what's ur problem…u talk a lot…now shut up
K: ok I will try….but hey can u teach me how to fight more
The lady puts her hands on her ears trying not to hear kripa.
L: uffffffff…..quite
K: ok….


Outside
A: dude I want to run away from home
J: hands him a cup of coffee) don't be stupid…C'mon dude its ok its just for few more days and then u will be 18 and u could rent an apartment
A: I need money for that
J: so u could get a job
A: no way…I'm not getting a job….I will do something to my life….
J: listen few years later u will find a good girl and get married then live happily
A: are u crazy….don't be stupid…I will never get married….I hate marriage so much….u want my life to be like my parents, no thank you….I rather do something else
J: like what?
A: u will see…something much more batter
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow great can't wait to read more it sound s really interesting
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds interesting cont soon plz!!!!!!! šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome😃
ur back wiv another ff šŸ˜›
i luv ur ff's šŸ‘šŸ‘
amazing start
cont soon

it luks diff from the other ff'sšŸ˜‰

Edited by hot_girl_2525 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ths seems interesting..
krpa in jail and angad tensed and all.. he got a plann....... wonder wat t is....hmmm

continue sooooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey Geeta jaan.....i m glad u started a new ff...missed u alot...how z ur trip??amazing FANFIC

cont soon

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Edited by me_iq - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Kripa woke up when the big bell ringed for all the jailers to wake up. They all went to get breakfast. She was alone and didn't know anyone there yet. There was another girl in the line but everyone was pushing her back not letting her take her breakfast. People keep on cutting her. When she came in front of kripa, kripa didn't push her back she just stood behind her. The girl in front of kripa was surprised and happy that finally she didn't get to be last person in the line. They all got their food and sat down at the tables.

The girl saw kripa and sat next to her.
G: hi im Jia
K: looks at her and smiles) kripa…im kripa
G: friends (forwards her hand)
K: sure (shakes her hand)
They kept on talking how long they have been in jail. Jia told kripa why she was in jail but kripa didn't tell her why she was in jail.

Another lady was passing by when she almost tripped and her food fall on Jia. Everyone started to laugh well Jia got embarrass but didn't say anything back. The lady left back not even apologizing.
K: u ok
J: yea…It happens everyday….
K: everyday?
J: I cant do anything back…that's why they always torture me like this…
K: idiot get up and hit them back

Well kripa was talking to Jia another lady passed by and she dropped her food on kripa. Everyone knew kripa was new that's why they wanted to torture kripa like Jia. Kripa looked at her self and got up
K: ewwwwwww…(looks up at the lady and get really angry) why u b***** (slaps the lady really hard which makes the lady fall down on the ground and blood comes from her mouth. Everyone stairs at kripa shocked but get back to their food when they see who comes there. A group of ladies comes up there and one lady speaks up
L: how dare u hit one of us
K: stupid…just like the way u guys did this to me…now I have to wash this freaking clothes..uff (turns her back to leave but the lady puts her hand on kripa's shoulder and turns her back around)
L: were do u think ur going little girl
K: listen old lady….I'm sometimes a short temper so plez leave me alone….u might not like it when I get mad
L: laughs at her) why what u going to do
K: want to see (takes her plat of food and throws it on her head)
The lady was shocked and got really mad
L: why u little (tries to hit kripa but kripa ducks and goes under her leg then kicks her back from behind her which makes her fall on the floor. The rest of the ladies that were in the gang runs up to their boss and stands her up
L1: boss u ok
L: angry) shut up…(to kripa) how dare u…. ur going to pay for this….1 year from today we are going to have a match…and that will be between life and death….be ready to die (leaves)
K: same tone) be ready to die
Jia starts laughing at kripa the ways she mad face at the lady


It was middle of the night and angad gets back home. He inters inside and sees his parents waiting for him in living room.. angads dad speaks
D: were have u been
M: do u know what time it is….its passed 3 in the morning
A: I don't care….and why do u guys care….all u guys do is just fight….have u ever thought of me…when u guys don't care about me then why should I give a shit about u b******
D: watch ur language
M: how dare u speak like that
A: I will speak anyway I want and by the way u guys were the ones who thought me that (leaves angry to his room will slamming the door hard)
D: its all ur fault…did u see that….u are the one who thought him how to talk to me like this
M: what ur blaming me….what about u…(they continue to fight)

Angad lays down on his bed will getting angry….he shuts his eyes when he hears a gun shot. He was shocked and runs down to see what happen….angad gets to the living room when he sees a gun in his fathers hands and his mom falling down….
A: shocked and runs to his mom) moooom….
His mom falls on angad's laps will blood was coming from her stomach
A: moooom (gets tears in his eyes) mom….
M: im sorry beta (puts her bloody hands on angads cheek and his cheeks gets blood all over….his mom passes away in his laps)
A: mom (shakes her) mommmm(shakes her again but hears and nor sees any respond in his mom) noooo (he looks up at his dad who drops the gun shocked)
A: u killed my mom….ur a bloody murderer u killed my mom….(gets up and runs away from home)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow this is something different 😃 😃
pls cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsome fic šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ its really different and interesting.cont soooooooon 😊 😊 😊

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