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Posted: 18 years ago
great part.... loved it.... just caught up with your ff.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part 👏 👏 👏 ...so kripa has got addicted 2 alcohol 😡
hope she overcomes it 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 poor angad he got his wife drunk by mistake but it was so funny 😆 hope kirpa get over her drinking habit soon
btw pls conti soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome part! rocking as always 😃 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 😆 haha funny part! luved angad being jealous! continue soon! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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A: shocked) kripa u drunk
K: puts her hand on her mouth) no
A: yes u did….I told u not to drink
K: I didn't
Al: angad we saw her she didn't other any drink
A: realizes it was his drink and he hits his hand on his forehead) oh ****….did u drink my juice
K: slowly nods
A: there was alcohol in my drink
Al, s: starts to laugh)
A: now what am I suppose to do
S: take her home before she starts screaming
A: yea…kripa lets go home
K: shakes her head) no
A: kripa plez
K: first kiss
A: no
K: then im not going
Angad says bye to aliya and shiv then picks up kripa in his arm and walks out of the club toward his car….kripa starts to scream will hitting him
K: screaming) leave meeeeeeeeeeeee
A: be quite
K: screaming more and hitting him) leave meeeeeeeeeeeeee
A: puts her inside the car and starts to drive will the whole time kripa starts to sing)
K: ok now ur turn sing
A: I don't know how to sing
K: screams) I said sing
A: ok ok…(starts to sing)
K: stop….u suck…I will sing
A: laughs will shaking his head at her behavior)
Angad reaches home and takes kripa out of the car will she wasn't coming out. Angad reaches to his bedroom and lays her down on the bed. Kripa get up and starts jumping on the bed will angad sits on the couch helplessly




K: I love u angu
A: I love u to
K: can I have a kiss
A: smiles big) sure why not
Angad kisses kripa. Will they were kissing all of sudden kripa passes out and falls a sleep.

In the morning kripa wakes up. She sits up on her bed will her head hurt a lot. She looks at her cloths that were changed already. She couldn't remember what happen last night….as she was last in her thoughts the door opens and angad comes inside with breakfast in his hand
A: good morning jaan
K: what's so good about this morning
A: puts the food on the bed will gets close to kripa and smiles evily) lots of thing….thanks for the last night
K: what? What happen last night
A: the thing that should have happened between us
K: what are u talking about? Angad tell me what happen
A: gets close and kisses her neck) this
K: pushes him) angad tell me
A: ok…look at me and u will know ur self (shows him his chest and shoulder)



K: shocked) what?
A: why are u so shocked….after all ur my wife so what
K: angad u didn't even stop me….u knew I was drunk
A: I know….but what could I have done…u did everything (smiles at her)
K: angad (starts to hit him) I hate u….ur so mean
A: laughs will trying to hold her hands) im joking jaan
K: stops) really
A: of course jaan…I was just joking
K: the marks
A: I made them with ur lipstick…
K: angad ur so mean (hits him again) get out of my way I need to take shower
A: me to lets go
K: u stay here….
A: C'mon jaan plez
K: no plez
A: yes plez
Kripa runs to the bathroom and locks the door quickly will angad shouts by the door
A: kripa that's not fair
K: everything is fair in love and war
A: kripaaaaaaa….fine be like that
K: I am like that
A: ur mean
K: thank you jaan
A: ufff (leaves to get ready for work)


A month passes by….dilip was back and all three of the were living really happy together….shiv proposed to aliya and now they were engaged.

Angad comes home and sees no one was there…all the maids were gone….he knew dilip was out for business to different country again. Angad left to his room when he saw roses paddle on the bed. As he turned around he got shocked and jerked when he saw kripa scream loud
K: happy birthday jaan
Kripa was holding small cake in her hand with one candle on top
A: kripa u scared me
K: laughs) ok make a wish
A: kripaa
K: make a wish
Angad shuts his eyes and makes a wish then opens his eyes and blows the candle. Kripa kisses his cheek wishing him again.
A: thank you jaan…ok so were is my gift
K: sorry jaan….I tried to think of something really good to give u but I couldn't think anything really good like u….whatever u ask for I will give u
A: really
K: yes promise
Angad takes the cake and puts it on the table and hugs kripa from behind will putting his hand around her and one of his hand on her stomach. He shuts his eyes will let a tear drop and slowly whispers in her ears.
A: I want this
Kripa freezes…she feels all her old memories back. Her eyes get teary will she tried hard to fight back the tears
A: im sorry ( whips his tear and apart to leave from the room when kripa turns around and holds from his hand. She hugs him will both letting their tears out. Kripa apart and whips his tears)
K: don't cry…why are u crying
A: ur crying to
K: I got something in my eyes
A: nice try
K: laughs slowly) I love u (kisses his cheek)
Angad kisses her cheek will slowly going down her neck. The lights turn off.

In the morning angad wakes up and sees kripa in his side. He was hugging her and her face berried in his chest. Angad smiles and hugs her more tight will she wakes up. Kripa shays and turns around trying to hid her face under the blanket but angad was pulling the blanket down.
A: get close to her ear) good morning
K: laughs…she gets up quickly and runs to the bathroom will angad after her. Kripa tried to close the door but angad put his foot in the front and opened the door. He got inside smiling evilly to her.


Moderator's Note:
Edited to remove inappropriate language.

Edited by shahidlover24 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
aww so nice continue soon it was grea so sweet yaar continue soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwwww soo cute! continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwww.... sweet part!! i love this fanfic! 😳

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