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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG noooooooooooooooooo! continue soon! i hope angad breaks free and kills shaam!
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsum part 👏
how dare shaam do dis 😡
let angad come out of jail(though i dont know how he will 😕 )then he will beat hell out of him 😈
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Posted: 18 years ago
amazing prt....this shaaam i hate him!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome part! but very sad for angad nd kripa pooor them! they did nothing nd shaam is making them suffer god i hate him nd psycho 👏 continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
sham 😡 😡 😡
plz save her angad 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago

awsome FF👏👏totally rocked!👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
amazing parts
i hate shaam...idiot, stupid guy
cont soon


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Posted: 18 years ago
Angad keeps on shouting but shaam already left taking kripa with him. Angad falls on his knees helplessly will crying that he couldn't help kripa. He gets mad and looks up angry will trying to do something to get out of the jail.

The driver stops the car by a club…the guards takes from kripas hand and takes her out from the car. They forcefully pulls her and takes her inside. Shaam walks inside will his guards behind him. He sees someone and smiles. Shaam walks up to the stairs and inters inside the room that was made of glass. It was an big office with few guards inside. From the office u could see down the club girls dancing will mans are throwing money at them and on one side they were saying price to buy a girl. Kripa tries a lot to free her self but she couldn't….they were to strong. A man comes inside there and shakes hands with shaam.
S: I got something good for u ( shows him kripa)
The man smiles big then looks at shaam
M: nice one…I like it…were did u find her
S: u don't need to know dev….she is all urs
D: I believe this time I should pay u a lot
S: not on this one
D: surprised) really…
S: gift from me…just remember…I want u to seal her not only for one but for many as u can (looks at kripa angry)
D: u seem to not like her much
S: we never like our anyme
D: laughs and shakes his hand) thank you shaam
S: my pleasure
Shaam walks toward the door will his guards handing kripa to the other guards.
K: shaam no plez don't do this
S: looks at her angry) there is no mercy for u
K: shaammmmmm
Shaam walks down from there and leaves.
Dev walks up to kripa smiling. He looks at her and then smiles. Kripa was pulling her hand trying to free it from the guards but couldn't.
D: tells his guards) leave her
The guards leaves her hand will dev smiles to her again. He puts his finger on her forehead and goes down her kneck when kripa slaps his hand away. Dev gets angry and holds from her face and brings her mouth close to his trying to kiss her. Kripa pushes him hard and slaps him hard across the face. The guards takes their guns out and points at kripa but dev tells him to stop.
D: touches corner of his lip that little blood came….her slap was really hard…dev looks at her) first time in life someone raised hand on me….no one ever dares to do that (looks at her angry)
K: keep ur hands off me
D: laughs) u have been just sold here and ur saying not to touch u (laughs more) ur going to be touched not only by me but thousands of people
K: plez leave me
D: what? Leave u ( laughs more) I will leave u to other after im done with (walks toward her)
K: don't u dare to touch me….
D: what makes u think that anyone can stop….(holds from her hand and pulls her with him…he walks to the door and opens it…there was a room inside there….he pulls from kripa's hand and pushes her inside will getting inside to and locking the door behind him. Kripa backs up will scared and kept on telling dev not to come close to her but dev just kept on walking toward her. As dev forward his hand to pull from her sleeve kripa gets down on her knees and folds her hands in front of him crying.
K: plez I beg u don't….I belong to someone else…plez leave me I beg u
D: oh really….and who is that
K: my husband
D: surprised) ur married
K: plez leave me
D: sorry…but I don't have mercy for anyone



It was late at night. Angad was not a sleep and just thinking. He looked up and saw that there was one guard standing little close to his cell. Angad holds his stomach and fakes it
A: I need help….someone plez….guard….
The guard looks at angad and comes by his cell
G: whats going on
A: plez help me…
The guard opens the cell and inters inside when angad gets up quickly and puts his hand on the guards mouth then turns his neck killing him. The guard falls down on the ground and angad gets out of the jail. As he was trying to get out when two guards saw him and run up to him. Angad punched one guards in stomach hard and another one on the face knocking both down. More guards started coming but angad got out before they reached to him. Angad was running down the street will he heard the cops car sound. He got to the side and looked down….it was really deep and it he jumped he would fall down and die.


The cops car passed when angad looked up…he was holding from a tree will under him was deep down and rocks. He pulled him self up and got back up to the street. Cops were looking for him everywhere and he knew he couldn't go home.

The door bell ringed when aliya opened. As she opened the door angad got inside and locked the door. He was breathing heavy. Shiv came there from kitchen
S: who is it (shiv sees angad) angad how are u man

Shaam and aliya were married now…its been a month from their marriage.
Aliya saw angad who was in bad condition.
Al: angad are u ok…what happen
A: I need to hid u guys…cops are after me
S: what happen?
A: plez first hid me…I will explain later
S: there is a basement down…aliya leads him down to the basement will the door bell ringed and shiv opened. The cops asked shiv if he seen anyone or if someone came there…shiv told them he hasn't….the cops left and shiv left down to the basement to see angad.

Angad told shiv and aliya about what happened and shaam taking kripa. Aliya started to cry will angad was trying hard to hold his tears back.
A: I need to find shaam some how…were is he keeping my kripa…I wont spare him I swear.
S: I think I could help u on that
A: how?
S: im a computer engineer…so every business man sometimes get problem in their computer don't they?
A: we cant wait until something happens and he calls
S: exactly…becz we could cause the problem our self ( smiles to him will angad and aliya were confused at how he will do that)
S: just wait and watch what I will do….but now u need to rest….
A: I cant rest will who know what condition kripa is in
S: angad….we all care about her…but if u be like this until u reach to her u will not make it…u will fall ill then what
Al: he is right….
Aliya takes him to a gust room and she leaves with shiv. Angad lays down on the bed will not being able to sleep. Tears starts rolling from corner of his eyes will he kept on thinking about kripa. Slowly he drifted to sleep not noticing.

The door opened and kripa jerked up from the bed she was sleeping. She saw dev coming inside
D: good morning….
K: sitting up will backing up scared
D: why are u so much scared ( laughs)
A lady comes in the room
D: she will be telling u how to make our costumers happy…don't u dare to do anything that will make them mad….and remember u will dance and sing until we tell u…or mans standing there will hit u with their built…understand (leaves from there)

Shiv inters into the shaam's building. Everyone was working busy and people going around…he walks up to a security and tells him that there is some problems with computers here that why they have called him. The security lets him in. as shiv was walking down the hall he stopped by a door. He looked around to see if anyone was looking the quickly inters inside the room. There was lots of computers inside the room. Shiv sat down in the chair and started to type something.

Shaam was in his office trying to work in his computer when it froze…he called his secretary to call a engineer for fixing his comp. as the secretary was about to call when angad came there and stood in front of her.
A: hi…im a computer engineer and it seems to be some problems around here with lots of computers I was send here to see.
S: oh yes…plez (points at the door toward shaam's cabin)
Angad inters in shaam cabin and locks the door behind him. Shaam didn't notice him locking the door and didn't really recognized angad becz he had big glasses on with beard on.
A: sir ur computer
S: oh yes….come
Angad walks up next to shaam. Shaam was writing something when angad put his hand on his mouth shutting him up.
A: shhhhhhhhh (takes his glasses and beard off and shaam sees him)
A: turns his chair around will pointing a gun in his head) were is kripa
S: I don't know
A: hits him hard across the face with end of his gun. Shaam starts bleeding will angad asks him again) I said were is kripa
S: I wont tell u (smiles to him)
A: then u called ur death to ur self (angad press the button which scared shaam and he thought angad will really kill him.)
S: I will tell u….(tells him were he took kripa….angad was shocked will his blood start to boil in angry)
A: u ******…I wont spare u (points the gun in his head and press the button)

No one heard the sound becz the gun was one of those gun which didn't make notice. Angad puts his glasses and beard on and leaves from the door will smiling to the secretary. Few mints later the secretary inters inside shaam's cabin when she screamed loud seeing shaam dead.


Angad sits in the car next to shiv.
S: did he say where
A: yes….(tells him will shiv was shocked to)
S: how did u get out from there….he will call cops now
A: not anymore…he wont

Before angad killed him he made shaam sign a paper saying that angad was innocent and he was the one who accused angad wrong.

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Posted: 18 years ago
kool yaar 😃
par pehle kripa ko bachaoo 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
amazing part 👏 👏 👏
poor kripa 😭 😭 😭

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