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Posted: 18 years ago
fab part
i thought she was gonna ask 4 a drink afta eatin brekky
angad is funny man 😆 😆 😆
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part 😊
cant believe they got married really fast
ant the part where angad breaks the egg on kripas head was just too good 😆 😆
angad was really good he made kripa stop thinking about drinking that was amazing the way he distracted her.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great Part the egg part was funny
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Posted: 18 years ago
i really like the egg part angad i i sso sweet oh god they got married its awesome 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
just got caught up.. omg niceee.. she forgave him.. so soon.. woww!! realy niceeee

continue soonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome finally they r happily married am so happy
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
plzzz continue soon hun!! we are dying to read more! its just toooo good!
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww 😳

dat was chooooooo schweet 😳

GO ANGU!

continue soon 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

They both walk toward their car and sit down. Angad drives back to his farm house
K: angad….lets go home
A: we are
K: no not here….ur home
A: our home u mean
K: smiles) yes
A: ok

He drives and stops by their house. Both of them inters inside the house. The maids say hi to them well both of them just smiles and leaves to their room.
Maid: after long time I saw sir smile again
Maid 2: yea…maam is back that's why
Maid: god bless them

Both of them inters into their room
A: welcome to our room jaan
K: smiles and inters then sigh's) u know angad….I been to this room a lot but today I feel different
A: comes behind her and hugs her) becz we are married and I love u
K: turns around and hugs him) thank you
A: no thank you
K: apart) angad were is dad….did u tell him about us….I mean did he ever ask about me not being home
A: no….becz he wasn't home…he is in different country for passed a month becz of some business
K: and how is ur business going
A: its ok
K: just ok
A: yea….haven't really been working this days after u left
K: will now u will im back
A: smiles and bends to kiss her but kripa puts her hand on top of his mouth)
K: hears the phone ringing) phone is ringing
A: uff…why does it have to now
K: go pick it up
A: fine
Angad picks up the phone and it was his dad
A: oh hi dad…how are u
D: u guys are back from ur honeymoon
A: we were back along time ago
D: how was ur trip did u guys enjoy
A: puts the speaker so kripa could hear it to) not really dad….when we went there kripa got sick
K: looks at him confused)
A: I had to take her to hospital and yea we spend our honeymoon on hospital every day (looks at kripa who was giving him killing look
D: how is she now
K: hi dad
D: hi beta….how are u
K: im batter now….how are u….how is everything going there
D: everything is good
K: when are u coming back dad we miss u
D: laughs) I will be back in 3 days….ok bate…take care u guys
K: u to dad…bye
D: bye
K: cuts the phone and looks at angad angry) why did u tell that I was in hospital
A: isn't it true
K: yea but u didn't have to tell him that
A: I wanted to
K: why
A: so we could have another honeymoon (smiles to her)
K: shies) shut up….
A: lays down on the bed will kripa next to him and he hugs her)
K: angad
A: yea
K: looks at him) I want to tell u something
A: what is it
K: sits up) do u really love me
A: what kind of question is that…of course I love u (puts his head on her lap will she caresses his hair)
K: angad
A: humm
K: vo angad…
A: what is it kripa?
K: angad I want to tell u something about my passed…..angad I.
A: u been to jail for 8 years becz of killing prithvi shaams brother
K: looks at him shocked)
A: and ur wondering how I know that…well jaan when I was looking for u I mate aliya and she told me everything and before that shaam told me to that u killed his brother that's why u were with him
K: looks down and angad sits up and holds from her shoulder)
A: there is no reason for u to be ashamed of ur self
K: but I killed someone
A: anyone would have done that if they were instead of u
K: why doesn't shaam understand this then
A: becz no one ever tried to tell him the truth and even if u tell him he wont understand becz he loved his brother a lot
K: u still married me even though I killed someone
A: listen don't ever think like that again….ur my wife and my life….from today on we will start a new and fresh life ok….so forget the passed….don't even think about it….think about the present now…only me and u (gets close to her to kiss her but she pushes him)
K: nice try….im sleepy….tomorrow I want to visit aliya wane come
A: sure
Angad lays down and kripa next to him….they both fall a sleep into each others arm



K: angad…angad get up
Kripa kept on shaking angad to wake up but he was still sleeping
A: hmmmm…(turns to other side
Kripa forwards her head on his face will water from her hair kept on dropping on angads face
A: opens his eye) is it raining (sees kripa smiling to him her hair wet becz she just came from shower)
K: smiles) yea
A: (pulls her close to him) u took shower and didn't even wake me up
K: I wanted to wake u up after I was done so u wont do anything nuty
A: ur mean
K: thank you….now get up and get ready
A: looks at the time and back at kripa) its 7 am
K: yea
A: why so early
K: ur going to the office
A: office…no im not
K: yes u are….now leave me and get ready
A: first kiss
K: never
A: fine then don't talk to me
K: ok as u wish…get ready ( kripa leaves down will angad leaves to take shower)

After 15 mints later angad comes out with towel around him and sees kripa by cupboard….he ignores her and goes next to him trying to get his cloths
Kripa smiles and hands him his cloths
K: here
A: looks at her angry and takes his cloths then leaves to the bathroom will kripa just laughs to her self)
Angad comes out 5 mints later and goes to the mirror combing his hair will kripa brings him his tie to put it on for him
K: should I put it
A: doesn't answer her and looks away but standing there for her to put his tie
K: can u help me….I don't know how to tight a tie
A: I thought I said don't talk to me
K: ok then (leaves but angad holds from her hands and makes her stand in front of him)
He takes the tie and puts it around his neck then starts to tight it will showing kripa how to do it
A: there….that's how u do it
K: smiles) ok
A: now my kiss
K: crosses her arms) no
A: last time im asking u give me a kiss or I will take it
K: last time im telling u no no and no
A: fine ( cups her face in his hands and bends down kissing her will she tried to push him but her was to strong for her and he took his kiss)
A: apart) umm tasty
K: angry) angad
A: what? U want more ok (kisses her again and few seconds later he apart again)
K: pushes him) angaddddddd
A: wante more
K: breaths hard) I will kill u if u do that again
A: u wish to become widow so fast….we just married yesterday darling
K: darling my foot
A: really there is a darling in ur foot
K: angad (starts to hit him playfully will angad laughed and hugged him) ur getting late angad
A: wines) do I have to go
K: yes u do jaan
A: makes cute face and talks like little kids) but I don't want to go
K: makes cute face to him back) its ok jaan mama will miss u but if u don't go to school then teacher will hit u
A: hey no one can hit me
K: I could
A: yea right u and hit me (laughs)
K: slaps him lightly)
A: shocked and holds his left cheek)
K: smiles to him will he gives her killing look and starts walking toward her will she walked back….she looked behind him at the door) hi
Angad looks behind him when kripa runs from the room tricking him.
A: goes down after her and sits on the table to eat)
Kripa serves him breakfast
A: I will get my revenge at night
K: yea right like u can….
A: we will see
K: we will
A: starts to eat)
K: angad
A: humm….
K: we are visiting aliya remember
A: yea…when
K: I will go to her house few hours later and then when u come I will call u were to meet us….at night we will go to club ok…I want to see shiv
A: who is this shiv
K: a cute guy…u know he is really handsome…and he helped me a lot…and once he saved my life to
A: jealous) so
K: so I want to meet him and gives him a big hug thanking him
A: angry) give him a kiss to
K: I know I should after all he saved me
A: angry) I would love to meet this shiv guy
K: oh angad….listen when we see him don't tell him that we are married
A: why not
K: becz he loves me and I don't want to break his heart so quick….we will tell him later ok
A: do u love him to
K: of course…after all he is a great guy
A: hello madam ur talking about another guy in front of ur husband
K: so what…I know u don't mind….
A: and who said I don't
K: I said…ok now hurry up u will be later
A: but there is still time
K: hurry shiv u will be later
A: shiv?
K: oh sorry angad
A: angry) u forgot my name
K: no…
A: fine im leavening….see u at nigh…cant wait to meet Mr. shiv
K: laughs to her self…she loved to see him jealous) bye
A: bye (leaves to his car will kripa waves bye to him)


Kripa leaves to meet aliya. She tells aliya everything will both of them hugged really happy. They called shiv and around 5 pm they left to the club. Kripa calls angad and tells him where to meet her then when she cuts the phone kripa smiles evilly and leaves to her table were shiv and aliya was. Kripa told aliya that she wanted to joke with angad to make him angry and aliya agreed to play along with her.
K: shiv wane dance
S: really happy) u asked me to dance
K: smiles) yes
S: I feel like im going to die…am I dreaming
K: shies) let go
S: yea

Both kripa and shiv leaves to the dance floor will shiv puts his hand on her whist and kripa around his neck.
S: wow im so happy to
K: me to
S: really
K: shay's ) yea

Angad inters inside the club and looks around. He sees aliya setting in the table. Angad walks up to her and joins her
A: hi
Al: oh hi…how are u?
A: im good and u?
Al: im good to
A: were is kripa
Al: oh she is dancing with shiv (points at the dance floor)
Angad looks at the dance floor and his blood starts to boil when he sees shiv dancing so close to kripa and kripa laughing will shying.
Al: aren't they cute
A: no
Al: why not….they seem really cute together
A: no they don't
Angad walks up to them angry and taps at shiv's shoulder. Shiv turns around
S: yes
A: can I have a dance with the lovely lady
S: didn't wanted to)um…sure
Angad takes kripa's hand and puts his hands around her whist holding him really close to him self her body hitting his and he started to dance slowly
Shiv took aliya's hand and started to dance with her.
K: hi jaan…
A: hi (sees shiv was looking at them and angad kisses kripa from her lips)
S: shocked)
K: apart looking at him angry)
A: gives evil look to shiv)
K: angad
A: what?
K: why did u do that for
A: why not? Ur my wife
K: that doesn't mean that u will kiss me anywhere
A: why were u dancing so close with him
K: becz I wanted to…u dance with someone else to
A: I don't want to…I will dance only with u
K: really?
A: really
K: smiles)
A: smiles to her) u wane drink something
K: sure

All four of them leave back to the table and angad sits next to kripa across from shiv and aliya
K: shiv this is angad and angad this is shiv
A: hi (shakes his hand will smiling evilly to him)
S: hi
A: kripa u didn't tell them….its ok I will tell them….this is kripa khanna my lovely wife
S: heartbroken and shocked) what?
K: hits her foot on angad's foot angry)
A: laughs) waiter
S: kripa u never told me u got married
K: vo
A: she wanted to surprise u guys (smiles to them)
The waitress comes up to them to take their other
A: to vodka for them mans and juice for the ladies
K: no….angad I want some to
A: no kripa
K: plez angad a little bit
A: no no and no
K: then u cant have it to
A: kripaaa….fine no of us will have vodka….(to the waitress) four juices
W: sure sir
A: excuse me
Angad leaves pretending that he is going to the bathroom but snicks to the bar and tells the waitress to put vodka in his juice but for the rest three just juice. Angad gets phone call and leaves outside to talk.
The waitress brings the juice and leaves it for them. Angad's juice color changed after he put alcohol in it. Kripa tasted her juice and didn't like it
K: I hate this
AL: then get something else…how about like angad's his seems different
K: I will just switch it…I think he like my juice better
Kripa takes angad drink and drinks it all
K: this is good (calls the waitress and tell him to bring her one more of the same drink that he did for angad)
The waitress does and she drinks 2 more glass. Angad comes back and sits next to kripa
A: sorry u guys….important phone call (takes his drink and drinks it and the test was still the same….he looks at his drink confused) why is my drink test different
K: starts to laugh)
Angad, aliya and shiv looks at kripa confused at why she is laughing but kripa kept on laughing.
A: kripa
K: yes jaan (looks at him really sweetly)
A: rises his eyebrow) are u ok
K: can I have a kiss plez
Shiv and aliya laugh will angad was surprised at her act.
A: kripa what's wrong with u
A: gets close and smells her then backs up quickly) ur drunk


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