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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwwww how cute! im glad kripa forgave him n gave him another chance! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so sweeeeet.....mind blowing prt 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome mind blowing!: such a great part u rocked yaar 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part 👏
hope this time they wont get seperated
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Posted: 18 years ago
fab part
yaaaay she 4gave him
but the hell is this new person
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Angad reaches by his farm house and stops by the house…he doesn't get out just stairs at kripa. Few mints later he gets out of his car and takes kripa in his arm. He goes inside the house and then to his room. Angad lays her on the bed and she was fast a sleep. He sits next to her on the bed and puts his hand on her forehead will smiling and really happy to have her back. He remembers something and quickly picks up the phone…he gets phone # of aliya from her work place and calls her telling her that kripa is with him so she doesn't worry
Al: how did she get there
A: I brought her…don't worry she is safe
Few seconds later after convincing her that kripa is safe with him he puts the phone down then lays down and sleeps next to kripa.

Around 8 clock kripa wakes up. She sets up thinking she is in her room at aliyas house. She sees angad next to her then remembers she left with angad to his car. She smiles slowly when she sees how cute angad looked when he was asleep. She tried to get up when angad held her hand….she looked back at him who was smiling.
A: good morning
K: smiles to him)
Angad gets up and sits next to her on the bed. He then laid on the bed putting his head on kripas lap.
A: im sorry kripa
K: -----
A: I love u
K: slowly whispers) I love u to
Angad smiles then jerks up facing her
A: lets go out today all they only us
K: angad
A: yea
K: I…I need a drink
A: kripa
K: angad….I cant stand with out….its like a habit to me now….I cant stand not drinking
A: holds her face in his hands) I will make u leave it
K: I cant angad
A: u have to
K: angad
A: trust me…u will leave it…I will teach u
K: but I need a little bit plez
A: no
K: angad I cant stand it…..plez angad
A: ok I will but first hurry get ready
K: then u will give me
A: nodes)
Kripa leaves to the bathroom and half an hour later she calls for angad
K: angad I don't have cloths
A: hands her a cloths) here
K: takes it and wears it…she comes out few mints later looking really cute with her wit hair on her face) ready
A: smiles to her) u look good
K: thanks….but were did u get this cloths
A: its ur own….u left it here last time
K: can we go now….angad I need to drink
A: takes her hand and leaves down) lets have break fast fist
K: angad
A: first break fast
K: ok
Kripa sits on the chair in the kitchen will angad puts apron around him self and takes out some eggs….he breaks the egg but the whole egg falls on his hand making mass
K: laughs at him)
Angad looks at her and she quickly quits
Angad looks at the egg and takes another one. He breaks it again but puts the egg on the pane with the cover making mass again.
Kripa couldn't hold her self and brust out laughing. Angad looks at her angry then looks inside the refrigerator. He was looking thru It when kripa stands next to him and taps in his shoulder. He looks up at her then stands next to her. Kripa takes a egg in her hand and showes him. She hit's the egg on his forhead making it crack then puts it on the pane.
A: heyyyyy(holds his forhead)
K: learn….
A: ok my turn ( angad takes another egg smiling evily to kripa and does exactly as kripa did hit's the egg slowly on her forehead but instead of cracking it he hits it to hard which makes the whole egg smash on her forehead
K: shocked)
A: ops
K: wines)anagddddd
A: im sorry im sorry I try to do the same thing but im sorry (takes a napkin and cleans her forhead) ok I will try one more time
K: not on my forehead ok…
A:ok….looks around) then whose head
K: hits her hand on her forehead) uff…u don't have to hit it on someone's forehead to break it….just crake it on side of the pane
A: oh ok ( does it on side of the pane and then puts it inside the pane) yay I made it
K: not really…angad ur burning It…hurry up scramble it
A: with what?
K: with my hand
A: ok (takes her hand)
K: what are u doing
A: u said with ur hand
K: uffff.….angad I will really hit u
A: but….
K: get a spoon hurry
A: (takes the spoon and scrambles the egg cooking it)
Kripa gives him the plate and he takes the eggs out and puts it in the plat. Both of them sets on the table and eat breakfast will angad trys to make her laugh….after they finished kripa takes the plates to the sink.

Kripa starts to wash the dishes when angad hugs her from behind and kisses her neck
K: angad stop it
A: we will both wash the dishes
K: oh really (turns around and will taking some soup bubble in her hand and puts it on angad's nose then laughs)
Angad looks at his nose then back at kripa smiling evilly
A: oh u wane play game with me (takes some soup from the sink and puts on kripas cheek with his hands)
K: looks shocked and angry at him will angad takes more and puts it on her face then runs from there)

Kripa runs after him will holding more soup in her hand . Both of them run around the house for few mints chasing each other. Angad stops and sees kripa running toward him….he smiles and when she comes close to him he picks her up in his arms and swings her. They both fall down on the ground laughing.
Angad was laughing when he notice kripa stopped laughing and she got lost in her thoughts.
A: shakes her) kripa
K: comes back to earth) huh?
A: what u thinking?
K: nothing (tries to get up but angad pulls her back and she falls in his lap)
A: don't lie….tell me plez
K: looks down) I laughed after so long…something bad is going to happen
A: why do u think that?
K: vo…
A: tell me
K: becz every time I laughed something bad happed which hurt me a lot and made me upset to never laugh again.
A: feels bad and hugs her will she slowly starts to cry) hey kripa….stop crying
K: starts to cry more)
A: kripaaaa
K: hugs him more tight will crying her hearth out.)
Angad just hugs her will without noticing tears started to roll down his cheek.
After few mints kripa stops and sobs will angad try to cheer her up.
Angad takes her out. They both leave to shopping and angad picks cloths for her.
K: shakes her head) no
A: kripaaaa….plez say yes to something
K: but I don't like anything here
A: I got a best cloths for u….u cant say no to it
K: ok
Angad shows her a beautiful blue sari
A: u like it
K: shakes her head) but I don't wear this kind of cloths
A: its ok after now on u will
K: but angad
A: no buts
K: but
A: I said no buts
K: I don't know how to wear sari
A: smiles) I could teach u
K: looks at him surprised) u know how to tight sari
A: of course
K: suspiciously) have u ever wear one (rises her eye brow)
A: very funny…no I haven't…it says in this catalog how to tight it (shows her the catalog
K: smart…
A: duh…im always smart
K: yea right
A: what do u mean yea right
K: laughs)
A: very funny
K: it is
A: yea right
K: smiles)
A: ok lets go somewhere else
K: where
A: u will see
K: ok

Angad takes her home
K: home?
A: we change then we will go out for dinner
K: we could eat home to
A: its fun outside
K: as u wish

Both of them change and kripa wears the sari fallowing the paper. She comes out and angad was waiting for her on the couch. He sees her and smiles big
A: looking beautiful
K: thanks
A: ok lets go

Angad drives and stops by a place were was water. They walk in the duck when kripa sees a table with two candles on it. She smiles then looks at angad
A: smiles to her) lets go
They both take their seat
A: kripa can u stand up
K: why?
A: plez
K: ok (kripa stands up and angad knees in front of her
A: sorry…I haven't made my lines yet…but im going to say it anyways…..kripa….im sorry for hurting u….im sorry for misunderstood u….plez forgive me for whatever I did
K: angad…I already forgive u
A: I know….but that wasn't enough for my mistakes….I will agree for any punishment u give me
K: the only punishment I will give u is right now stand up…why are u kneeling down
A: takes a deep breath then takes out a beautiful ring) will u marry this stupid guy
K: surprised and happy then laughs)
A: I promise u I will take good care of u…never hurt….I will be with u in health and sickness….will u marry me
K: slowly nodes and whispers) yes
A: I didn't hear u
K: a little louder) yes
A: I still didn't hear u
K: shouts loud) yes yes yes
A: gets really happy and slides the ring in her finger then kissed her hand and hugs her tight will small tears Rollin down his cheek) thank you….thank you so much kripa
K: apart and sees tears in his eyes then wipes them) why are u crying
A: nothing….I love u very much….
K: I love u to (hugs him)
They both sit together and eat for about 15 mints
A: lets go
K: where now
A: come with me
Angad takes from her hand and both of them sits in his car….he drives for few mints then stops by mander
K: why are we here
A: to marry
K: what?
A: I want to marry u now….
K: but angad all of sudden
A: I want u to be main forever
K: I am ur angad
A: yea but not legally
K: laughs)
A: lets go
K: we will marry with this cloths
A: smiles and takes something from back seat) this is red dupata for wedding put it around u
K: angad ur crazy
A: about u…lets go

A pandit comes there
A: we are here to marry
P: surprised) all of sudden….do u have anything ready
A: I got mangelsuit and sindoor
P: looks at angad weirdo)
A: can u start now…im in hurry
P: did u guys run away from home
A: no….can u just start
P: oh well
K: laughs under her breath)
The pundit lights the fire and starts….after 10 mints later they both get married
P: u guys are now husband and wife
A: hugs kripa) yayyyyyyyy (then hugs pandit) thank you so much

They both were walking down the stairs of mandir
A: kripa…how do u feel
K: about what?
A: do u still wane drink
K: what?
A: smiles to her) I kept u busy all day and see u didn't feel like drinking
K: opens her mouth surprised)
A: puts his finger under her chine and closes her mouth) lets go home wife
K: smiles and hugs his arm will both of them walking toward their car)

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Posted: 18 years ago
omg that was soo sweet of angad!!! hes soo smart! i thought when kripa stopped laughing she would remember she wants to drink! continue sooon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg dat was sooooooooo sweet 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was sooo sweeeeeeeet

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