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shalini_s

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Posted: 10 years ago

#331

good one.. loved La here.. she is the best friend..

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 10 years ago

#332

amazing update! loved it.. looking forward to know what happened between khushi kumari gupta and arnav singh raizada ten years back??

thanks for mail 😊

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shamy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#333

Oh I love love this story and am seriously waiting for the next chapter!

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saschades

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Posted: 10 years ago

#334

amazing and a very beautiful update

thanks for pm xx

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#335

Am hooked and i do not have words to express what i feel while i read every update of yours!! There are so many things that i want to praise and does not know where to start or how to put words to what i feel.

You are giving us the depth of the emotions here..the little nuances is what makes this SS worth reading..they are not simple words with simple story anymore..each word is to be relished and cherished even after they are read..thanks!!

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Jayashree

@JshreeB

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Posted: 10 years ago

#336

lovely update 😊😊 thanks for the PM

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barbiebala

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Posted: 10 years ago

#337

Khushi has to live with their good memories without getting hurt

Everyone around Khushi loving her a lot

She has to live her life like Lavanya pointed out

What really happened between Arnav and Khushi in the past?

So curious to read the next update...

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JJKKL

@JJKKL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#338

How can I appreciate your writing when I feel my words are inadequate to explain the feelings ?

Appetence indeed ...

Appetence for reading more chapters from you
Appetence for seeing NK with Khushi
Appetence to be out in the son in Lav's house to see the kids and Andr and Manorama
Appetence to be in the kitchen for the group hug.

Every character you introduce is described to a T. Even Adrian I could imagine with his burning stare on Khushi. I could hear the rustle of the cotton saree which Manorama usually wears. I could feel the kiss Andr dropped on Khushi's head.

Every detail I could feel, sense, hear and see...

And believe me I took about an hour to read your chapter. Reading two lines max at a time due to the number of people who were trying to get my attention in that time. Just imagine how the chapter will affect if I could read it fully in one go with no disturbance ...

Thanks Mira. You are a great writer.

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prpk525

@prpk525

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Posted: 10 years ago

#339

Dear, I love this story!! You are a great writer:)

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#340

Absolutely wonderful...

Loved the way you have shown Khushi clinging to her past even when she comes across present that can be the future. For past she knows what it entailed whereas present and future are unknown quantities... No wonder she is apprehensive...

Loved the bonding between the friends... Loved the ease existing between them...

Waiting for the next update...