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ship13

@ship13

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#341

Superb update and thanks so much for the pm. Truly appreciate it. 😃I am amazed that this is your first ss since you write so beautifully. 🤗Coming back to the update, I absolutely loved it. My heart went out for khushi when she told lavanya that a reason why she wasn't texting Arnav back was because she didnt want to lose nk all over again by forgetting him as memories were fickle. I felt that somewhere khushi knew that Arnav had it in him to make her completely crazy for him and push nk's thoughts in the background. Really looking forward to the next update and can't wait for khushi and meera to go to India and meet up arnav.😳

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#342

Lovely Update. I am so glad that Khushi has such beautiful friends. They care deeply for her. I liked them very much. I like your writing style. Very realistic and hear-warming.

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#343

This story seems really cute! I just started reading and can't wait to read more! please pm me when you continue again?

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#344

Going good, loving it...Can't wait for the flashback to know what happened in the past...😳

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#345

Thank you for updating...😃

The update is beautiful...👏

Please let us know about Arshi's past...

Waiting for Khushi to be in Delhi & Arshi to meet...

Arshi have gone thru lots of sufferings in the past, So hoping that now they get all the happiness with the help of the other's love...

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amus5

@amus5

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#346

Dear MB ,

I'm totally at a loss for words to comment on this SS.For one, it doesnt feel like a SS its more life. And , life cannot be commented upon, as it is how it is - it cannot be pointed a finger at. It rolls forward unfazed . All I can say is that when each character plays out their part I'm able to put myself in each one of their shoes 😳...

thanx for the update...pls continue soon 😃

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arnshi

@arnshi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#347

its an amazing story and you write brilliantly

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#348

Mindblowing updates
Heart touching concept
Loved it
Well written
Plz notify me for your updates

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#349

Loved the update... Oh... Much awaited ARSHI past...

Khushi is scared of forgetting NK if she thinks too much of Arnav..? I know she loved NK and misses him a lot...but what did she mean by those llast words she said to Lavanya..?

I so loved the way Lavanya and Akash formed the support for Khushi...

One more thing...Had Arnav only came to know about NK's death during this visit..?

Does Akash knows about what happened between Arnav and Khushi in the past..? Is it the reason he was apologising to Khushi for unexpected call on her door from Arnav..?

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#350

That is such a wonderful story. 😃 And love your writing.. Im glad I found this.. Coming to the story.. Khushi and Arnav.. So much has gone by in the years they werent in touch with each other and I feel life has given them another chance to be together.. As it is Meera already feels so comfortable with Arnav.. NKs loss is something very heartbreaking... 🥺 Loved how u described Aakash, Lavanya and Khushi's friendship.. Loving this.. Now I will look forward to Saturdays... 😃