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srilathas

@srilathas

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#321

Your updates leave me breathless dear...

awesome one...it just revolves around arshi and i get glued to the words...i read it so slowly so that i can enjoy the feel of it...

awesome dear...

very very eager to know arshi's past...

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deepthi

@deepsdspeed

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#322

amazing update..👏

u must be tired of hearing this again and again but im not stopping..u r really an AMAZING writer.

so perfectly penned down the emotions of khushi.. literally had tears in my eyes..

loved the friendship between lavanya and khushi.. every friendship has to give space when required and at the same time be present when u need them the most..

khushi is afraid to love again.. loved lavanya for holding her when she needed.. truly is it even possible to forget a person if we moved on??? hope she'll come out of her shell soon and start living life..

along with lavanya even im very eager to know what happened between khushi and arnav..

im loving it dammit and LOVE YOU more for giving us such a beautiful story..😊

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Brishti

@brishti84

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#323

This story is just getting better with each chapter. I have officially fallen in love with your writing. Khushi's pain gets me all choked up. Your portrayal of NK makes me want to know more about him and his and Khushi's lovely marriage, forgetting about a certain someone. However the last part left me very curious about Arnav's and Khushi's past.

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#324

Awesome update!!! Totally loved it!!!!

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#325

Brilliantly portrayed the emotions of a lover...of a friend...loved their close knit friendship...Awesome chapter...thanks for the PM

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#326

Emotionally beautiful updt
Convo bw lav and khushi literally brought tears in my eyes..

Loved d updt?
Continue soon..

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DDC1

@DDC1

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#327

MB your words, your work.. please keep writing.

Couldn't help quoting Rumi's lines for Kushi:

Late, by myself, in the boat of myself,
no light and no land anywhere,
cloud cover thick. I try to stay
just above the surface,
yet I'm already under
and living with the ocean.

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GuruDeep246

@GuruDeep246

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#328

MB, it is truely worth to wait for ur update..even though it comes once a week but it never fails to keep us high on heels..damn i fell in love with every scene you wrote..have not seen this level emotional bonding between this two unusual pair khushi and nk..khushi remembering memories of nk..i kept on crying..loved bonding between khushi, lavanya and akash..with these three i too missed nk very badly in this awesome group..and i really surprised here seeing ur creation of manorama, khushi's MIL..now my heart doesnt want to call her as khushi's MIL, rather i can call her as her mother..so matured to her age, the support she is giving to khushi, and wanting her daughter-in-law to move on in her life, and how she put in her situation when she came married to nk's father in front of khushi in the last update, and how she wants khushi to change with time..i m speechless here MB..and lavanya's firm determination to ask khushi abt lunch with ASR, and in that process asking for flash back i.e her relationship with ASR, and how lavanya did not fail to observe the transformation from ASR to Arnav came from khushi's heart..i kept myself to flow in the emotions..and even i felt goose bumps reading this story..so here i m hoping that khushi will text back arnav for his sms and eagerly waiting what she would text in the next update..thanks MB for this beautiful update..

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#329

Brilliant Update..Absolutely Intriguing..Please Do Continue Soon... Waiting For The Next Update Eagerly...👍🏼

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SharuAG

@SharuAG

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#330

Thank you for the PM. I m so eager For their next encounter. Y do women have to suffer in broken relationship? Especially in novel? In really, women do move on and find happiness, rather than suffering.