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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#351

ur ff was suggested by deepti and im super glad she did because this story is a big must to read, its sounding very promising and im just loving how u describe every little things in detail and so beautiful. eagerly waiting for the nexr chapter, next saturday. takecare:)

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Pastellitesoulx

@xMIC.Dropx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#352

Res
till i finish reading chap 4 and 5

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Uzii

@Uzii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#353

Just read all chapters in one go n must say you are a tremendous writer.

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Shamz

@Shamz94

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Posted: 10 years ago

#354

Can't wait to know the past now

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Dandelion

@nikita-nair

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Posted: 10 years ago

#355

i luvd it...itz such a beautfl stry...

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

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Posted: 10 years ago

#356

Fantastic ff...will comment in detail later

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suji5

@suji5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#357

just read your story
it was amazing
want to know about Arnav and khushi's past

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sonal

@srain10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#358

Emotional update...

You have portrayed every emotion so beautifully be it khushi's yearning for NK and his kiss or the friendship between khushi lavanya and Akash...

My heart went for khushi when she confesses to lavanya about not losing NK again...

Like lavanya even I'm waiting to know what happened ten years ago...

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 10 years ago

#359

I remember opening this FF to read once before because I remember the picture that you have used - a wall full of memories! But did not get around to reading it.. Entirely my loss but in the bargain I got to read 5 chapters of an absolutely fabulous FF!

Every time a friend has lost someone, I always tell them that while I can commiserate, I cannot ever, even begin to fathom the extent of their loss. It is perhaps, only another person, who has lost a dear one, who can perhaps understand the loneliness, sense of abandonment, the abject despair and helplessness of knowing that your loved one is never going to come back, and the refrain of how could it happen to me?

Poor Khushi. It would seem she has lost her loved one not just once but twice. Once with Arnav and now with NK. Both losses have left her drained, weakened and vulnerable enough to breakdown before a man who has also hurt her in some way.

Sometimes a loss can gain you another bond as has Khsuhi. Loosing NK has made Khushi that much closer to Amma... and I loved Amma's candid analysis of her sense of loss - loss of a husband and a habbit versus the loss of a son, the centre of her existence, the source of her joy! And what credit to a woman who willingly relinquished her greatest joy to another woman with no rancor.

I loved the way you have captured Khushi's despair, her sense of loss and her struggle to deal with NK's loss even after three years.. ad the wonderful friendship between Akaash, Lavanya and Khushi that has them grieivinf for the loss of a dear friend together an din that being pillars for Khushi to stand on.

But more than Akaash and Lavanya, I think its their spouses who are commendable who have accepted the deep sense of loss of their spouses for another person, accepted that while they are part of a larger group, the three are united as a much tighter group by their shared sorrows and yet not be threatened by any of it

Waiting to read the next...

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@xshilohx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#360

Mirabell,

Your words are so real, so thoughtful. They make me pause and wonder at the vivid pictures they create. Of a wife mourning her loss, of her beautiful memories, of tenacious best friends and very wise mother-in-laws, of Meera :)

You must understand that with every update, I will spend a few lines marvelling at the sheer beauty of the words you weave. That is a given.

My favourites from the story are the moments Khushi has to herself, where she goes back to a happy time and we get to witness NK, a character I've come to adore. I..want him back, with Khushi, for Khushi. (This coming from a girl who will cry for days if a story doesn't end up with Arnav and Khushi together, or atleast a little hope of that. :P )

Is it strange, I'm not even curious as to what the past might have been. What I am curious about is will that past change anything, does it matter so much to the story? Also, Arnav. Mohan. What is their world like? What happened in Arnav's life? I'm hoping you'll let us know soon.

What else do I say, Mira, I'm speechless. Spellbound. Take a bow, please. I've never come across something like this before.

Love,
Isha

P.S. This is @ishilohx from twitter. I wasn't so keen on making an account but whatever. I see it is a lot more convenient commenting. :D