Karna FF-Time Travelling in Mahabharata !!! (Completed)

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#771

Originally posted by: yoga123
Nice part...

Thank u dear 😃

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#772

Originally posted by: -StarryPhoenix-
I wanted Swarna nd Drau to have a talk! Lol u know some controversial fruits needed to be cleared😆 jst kidding... Bt it wud have been great if we get a Swarna-Drau talk though!
Sasur did go without meeting damad?😲 well I thot Swarna will return bck to where she belong u know biologically whole gene pool will get messed😆 again kidding
nyc update!

I did include a Swarna-Drau Convo in chapter 17 (Indraprastha)...though the conversation was not related to any controversy.
I would have to do thorough research for decades to clear the controversies...even then I m not sure if I could write a convo between these two strong headed to clear the controversies...yeah...but I wished I could...*sigh*🤔

Swarna's dad least expected his daughter to be married & with a family. He only came there to collect his daughter...the daughter who refused to go with him...meeting the damad would not have change anything. Moreover, Sasurji may have swoon if he gets to know who his damad is 😆
Swarnali messing the gene pool...yeah..I never thought about that. Actually I changed a major plot of this story...will answer after posting the epilouge

Thanks for the sweet comments dear 😳

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#773

Originally posted by: -StarryPhoenix-
well can u write a Karna pov on karnas curses nd his death aka last day of his life? Jst a prompt

Since many writer's wrote on Karna's curses...I did not venture into it. Lets see if my twisted brain comes up with anything new on this part 😳

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#774

^^What many???😲 I thot nly I have written😆

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Prachi

@MBcrazyfan

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#775

Great chapter Hemangi...

New twist n decision made by swarna..u hv really build dis character strong and likable throughout d storyline... Waiting for next part...😊

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#776

Originally posted by: -Fleurdelice-
^^What many???😲 I thot nly I have written😆

😆 U know na... apart from u many did touch on curses part while writing about Karna...u explored in Shapit Vidya & also Vada Bharat 😆... Dhivii explored the Bhumi mata curse in her FF. If I would have included war section in my FF then I would have explored it since the curses came into action in the face-off betwn KaJu

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#777

Originally posted by: MBcrazyfan
Great chapter Hemangi...
New twist n decision made by swarna..u hv really build dis character strong and likable throughout d storyline... Waiting for next part...😊

Thank u so much Prachi 😃

Glad u liked my story & the protagonist Swarnali...yes she did go thru many changes when she came in a different timeline...and she got what she never got or expected from her present life in today's world
The next part...I mean the epilogue will be updated soon 😊