Karna FF-Time Travelling in Mahabharata !!! (Completed)

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zebali

@zebali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#791

End was great.
Well written dear.
Amazed me.
Tf pm.

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

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Posted: 9 years ago

#792

Wonderful epilogue Hemangi😊

I am going to miss reading this FF so much😭

Thank u for the sweet compliment😃

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sania_58

@sania_58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#793

awesome Hemu.

Sad ending as well as unexpected.Feeling sad because Swarnali didnot enjoy her motherhood.

But I loved the epilogue.

especially reading the next generation.

Loved Junior Swarnali.Daughter of Karna.Its special.

Its a fantastic story & one of my favourite also.

You are an amazing writer.

A beautiful journey coming to an end.

U know again I re-read the entire story together.

Its wonderful & magical.

Waiting for your other work.

U mentioned me in your thank U note.I want to thank U for gifting us such a beautiful work.

Yes, we became buddies just Karna & Swara from this story.

Yes, the nose breaking sequence.

ha ha.what to do, my violent nature.

Thanks dear & loads of Love.

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#794

Originally posted by: KURT15
Oh No!! 😭 It was beautiful as usual, but you should have kept her alive... 😭. Loved the scene with the children. Loved Jr Swarnali too. 👏. Hope we are going to get more from you, Hemu... And thank you for mentioning me in the thank you note though I did nothing except read and enjoy!! 😆 😉. You are an amazingly gifted writer and I hope to see lot more stories from you! 👏

On a side note, this is my 1000th post in IF. And I dont even know what all I posted!! 😆

Thank u Geethu 🤗
I have some ideas of different genre...lets see...my other two projects are still on...I have to update new chapters in them as well.
Thanks for supporting and encouraging me...Oh 1000 posts wow congrats...this post in my FF become another milestone for you in I-F 😉

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#795

Originally posted by: -Fleurdelice-
you should have posted all three posts on new page only naSee 1 page= 8 posts so u shud have counted according thread layout acha dikhta🤪
nyways res

I was rather sleepy while reserving the posts...did not check properly...yeah...u r right...the layout would have been better in one page 😊

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#796

Originally posted by: -Fleurdelice-
No Karna in epilogue😭 How must he felt when Swarna die😭 I want a epilogue 2 with full family😭

Oh...I imagined this epilogue with the next generation...that's why I mentioned Karna only once in Vrishasena's thoughts 😲
Full family...even if I have twisted the story...I dont know whether I would have able to show full family.

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#797

Originally posted by: GERUA
amazing dear

Thank u Rima 😃

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#798

Originally posted by: MBcrazyfan
Just loved it..super super likes dear...can't bliv swarnali didn't njoy her motherhood😭...bt she gave birth to Karna s only daughter..named after her..dats so touching😭😭...wat more can I say...I alws admire ur writing skills...it ws a beautiful journy for us..I ll go thru some my fav chapters 2de..n u keep writing coz v r waiting..dying to read ur stories🤗

Thank u Prachi 🤗
Well yeah...Swarnali didn't enjoy her motherhood but atleast she became a mother...she believed herself to be barren...but almighty smiled upon her...gave her the boon of being a mother and bore daughter...she fulfilled Karna's wish of fathering a daughter ...that's why he named he named his daughter after her mother.
I am glad u became a part of this journey and enjoyed it. I will keep u posted if I write any other stories 😳

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#799

Originally posted by: love.piyali
Ohh...that was a sad epilogue...was expecting happy ending yaar...but then ...its your story so your choice...but yesm.mit was a wonderful journey...loved this FF...thanks alot for writing it..

Thank u Piyali 😃

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#800

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was so Emotional Ending.😭
The Whole Conversations were so Heart-Touching.😭
The Whole FF was Awesomely explained.😊
You did a Nice Job.😊
Please write like this.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.

Thank u Priya 😃