Karna FF-Time Travelling in Mahabharata !!! (Completed)

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bips_freedom

@bips_freedom

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#761

I m a silent reader. This is first time I m posting any comment to any story. Your story is simply awesome. I feel short of words to praise your works. Please keep writing such wonderful stories. God bless you...

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

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+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#762

well congratzzz on crossing hundred pages!
Very very very very nice chapter!
Finally swarna made a decsion though she loves her children fact that she is still barren hurts her!
Y did Karna feel he wont see her ever again? Is it nly coz of the strom or some sixth sense?

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#763

only one more updt... I will miss stalking this fic... 😭

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#764

Originally posted by: bips_freedom
I m a silent reader. This is first time I m posting any comment to any story. Your story is simply awesome. I feel short of words to praise your works. Please keep writing such wonderful stories. God bless you...

Hi bips 😛
This is Hemangi here 😊
Thank u so much the wonderful words 😃...I never thought this imaginary fic of mine would come this far. I am so happy that you liked my story😳
Even I started here in IF as a silent reader then gradually a stalker 😆...but later I got enough confidence and encouragement from my buddies to start writing this FF.
I will try my best to come up with more stories.

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sania_58

@sania_58

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#765

Sorry for the late response Hemu.
Superb update.
As usual, your beautiful descriptions.
Wow, wow, woww.
Loved each & every lines. Your wrote it brillaintly.
Fantastic chapter.
Now, eagarly waiting for the epilogue.

P.S. This Fiction is one of the best writing on Karna & Swarnali's character is just awesome.
Thanks for gifting us such a beautiful story.

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#766

Originally posted by: -Fleurdelice-
well congratzzz on crossing hundred pages!
Very very very very nice chapter!
Finally swarna made a decsion though she loves her children fact that she is still barren hurts her!
Y did Karna feel he wont see her ever again? Is it nly coz of the strom or some sixth sense?

Thank u Sansii dear 🤗
Yeah...this FF scored a century 😆
Glad u liked it...i was in two minds while writing this chapter...I quite deviated from the plot which I first intended...but I feel it turned out well

Well karna's world was turned upside down after what Swarna revealed...he was elated to finally know who is really was...but it did cost or rather I should say the thread of trust betn KaDu was strained...he did not feel anything was going smooth after the big revelation. On top of that he was worried about his sick wife...and she was missing was the final thing...he would tolerate. So you can say his worry for his wife and some intution played here.

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#767

Originally posted by: -Fleurdelice-
only one more updt... I will miss stalking this fic... 😭

Yeah...I will miss it too badly...my Swarna_Karna and their teasing, their debate, their romance😳, their buddyship 😭

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#768

Originally posted by: sania_58
Sorry for the late response Hemu.
Superb update.
As usual, your beautiful descriptions.
Wow, wow, woww.
Loved each & every lines. Your wrote it brillaintly.
Fantastic chapter.
Now, eagarly waiting for the epilogue.

P.S. This Fiction is one of the best writing on Karna & Swarnali's character is just awesome.
Thanks for gifting us such a beautiful story.

Thank u so much Madhu 🤗
No need to be soory yaar. I was pretty late myself. I changed the plot after writing half of the chapter...so my update was a month late
I will post the epilogue very soon

@bold: I am overwhelmed dear...infact i am blubbling with happiness. Thank u again dear 😳

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--Scarlett--

@--Scarlett--

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#769

I wanted Swarna nd Drau to have a talk! Lol u know some controversial fruits needed to be cleared😆 jst kidding... Bt it wud have been great if we get a Swarna-Drau talk though!
Sasur did go without meeting damad?😲 well I thot Swarna will return bck to where she belong u know biologically whole gene pool will get messed😆 again kidding
nyc update!