Karna FF-Time Travelling in Mahabharata !!! (Completed)

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Posted: 9 years ago

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GEETHA KRISHNAN

@KURT15

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Posted: 9 years ago

#783

Oh No!! 😭 It was beautiful as usual, but you should have kept her alive... 😭. Loved the scene with the children. Loved Jr Swarnali too. 👏. Hope we are going to get more from you, Hemu... And thank you for mentioning me in the thank you note though I did nothing except read and enjoy!! 😆 😉. You are an amazingly gifted writer and I hope to see lot more stories from you! 👏

On a side note, this is my 1000th post in IF. And I dont even know what all I posted!! 😆

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#784

you should have posted all three posts on new page only naSee 1 page= 8 posts so u shud have counted according thread layout acha dikhta🤪
nyways res

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#785

No Karna in epilogue😭 How must he felt when Swarna die😭 I want a epilogue 2 with full family😭

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Sphinx.

@Sphinx.

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#786

so my dear hemu..you finished a fantastic ff.. i am really gonna miss this..this one will remind a special ff for me always.. the first meet of swarna with karna..her faint in his arms..

then her attachments with radha and shon..

her excellent characteristics.. and her encounters with dushsshan..sakku mama..

the fresh blissful moments of karn with vrish in amidst mango trees.

vrishali's next morning adventure after her first night..😆

then karna's calling her buddy.. their relationship beyond friendship..everything..everything.. i enjoyed as if i were there with swarna and karna at every step of their life.

that's the success of your writing.and sometimes i wonder when reading ur episodes with time machine.. whether you r a banker or a scientist actually..

now i am going to misss that.

😭

coming to the end..i would say its perfect ! its better than separating karna and swarna. u asked me abt this..i myself said she has to go back to her world..but when u changed it and the scene where swarna denied to her father and waited for her husband..when karna found her in the middle of the jungle.. i felt goose bumps and felt its the perfect ending.. now u made a satisfying end. thank god u did not bring karna here.

I wud feel heavy heart!

unforgettable work..always remain special for me!

I remember our good old days when we post chapters more or less at same time. we discussed abt portraying vrishali because both of our heroines were the second queens. my heroine was of the same period with revolutionary thoughts.. ur heroine was from different world..with more or less same type of traits.

i am editing again and again.. has lot to say..😆 finally swarna got a baby girl as per her wish.. which she craved for. so daughter for karna😳 swarna had gone but she left her trace ..her blood..her reflection for him.😳

we enjoyed that!! love u 🤗

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Prachi

@MBcrazyfan

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#787

Just loved it..super super likes dear...can't bliv swarnali didn't njoy her motherhood😭...bt she gave birth to Karna s only daughter..named after her..dats so touching😭😭...wat more can I say...I alws admire ur writing skills...it ws a beautiful journy for us..I ll go thru some my fav chapters 2de..n u keep writing coz v r waiting..dying to read ur stories🤗

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Piyali

@love.piyali

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#788

Ohh...that was a sad epilogue...was expecting happy ending yaar...but then ...its your story so your choice...but yesm.mit was a wonderful journey...loved this FF...thanks alot for writing it..