Karna FF-Time Travelling in Mahabharata !!! (Completed)

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AMAR_LOVE

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Posted: 9 years ago

#751

happy ending...waiting fr the epilogue

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#752

Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE
happy ending...waiting fr the epilogue

Thank u dear 😃
I will post the epilogue soon

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zebali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#753

It was nice .
Just awesome dear.
Tf pm.

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shristi1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#754

Amazing ff

Loved it to core

Waiting for epilogue

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#755

Originally posted by: zebali
It was nice .
Just awesome dear.
Tf pm.

Thank u Zeba 😃

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#756

Originally posted by: shristi1
Amazing ff
Loved it to core
Waiting for epilogue

Thank u Shristi 😃
Will update the Epilogue soon

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GEETHA KRISHNAN

@KURT15

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Posted: 9 years ago

#757

Really great update. Worth waiting for. Karna's internal struggle and worry over his friend's reaction is nicely captured. Krishna is as enigmatic as ever. Loved Swarnali's decision to stay with her husband. Waiting for the epilogue now. 😊

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#758

Originally posted by: KURT15
Really great update. Worth waiting for. Karna's internal struggle and worry over his friend's reaction is nicely captured. Krishna is as enigmatic as ever. Loved Swarnali's decision to stay with her husband. Waiting for the epilogue now. 😊

Thank u for the sweet comments Geethu 😃 😳

Well i feel that revelation would have shaken the very course of many lives both in political front and in emotional front. But for a few the truth would have worked against their vested interest for instance Shakuni. That's why I have mentioned that Shakuni is grappling the thin strings of trust and friendship betn KaDu tight so that his grand plans with his nephew does not change for naught and his nephew succumb to the friendship of Karna.
The short convo with Krishna is a last minute entry...I thought a pep talk with Krishna would clear Swarna's tired mind and arrive to her decision.
I will update the epilogue soon

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Sphinx.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#759

so finally one more chapter 😭..u stretched this ff for one year..ya..but this one yr we were in our world living with our beloved anharaj and his family..ur karna and swarna were really delicious..!! i loved them so much..so goin to miss them terribly..fine coming to thestory..good move..

krishna there in the cave and asking her to decide..was so nice..and her decision..huff!!

first! i thought is thie possible for her to stay here forever..u once asked me abt the climax..

so i thought she wud go back with her father..since her main duty was over..she revealed the truth..

but i dont want to make her go before informing her husband..i don't want her to go in the half way leaving him mad..so i thought she will take time until she meets her husband..but the decision was a twist..👍🏼 i loved it..especially when she visaged her husband approaching her..wahhh..my heart was jumping..🤗

lovely karna and swarna..one more day with u😭

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#760

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31
so finally one more chapter 😭..u stretched this ff for one year..ya..but this one yr we were in our world living with our beloved anharaj and his family..ur karna and swarna were really delicious..!! i loved them so much..so goin to miss them terribly..fine coming to thestory..good move..
krishna there in the cave and asking her to decide..was so nice..and her decision..huff!!
first! i thought is thie possible for her to stay here forever..u once asked me abt the climax..
so i thought she wud go back with her father..since her main duty was over..she revealed the truth..
but i dont want to make her go before informing her husband..i don't want her to go in the half way leaving him mad..so i thought she will take time until she meets her husband..but the decision was a twist..👍🏼 i loved it..especially when she visaged her husband approaching her..wahhh..my heart was jumping..🤗
lovely karna and swarna..one more day with u😭

Aww..Thank u Dhivii darling 🤗
Yeah...I know about the climax...i had to do some major changes in the plot. That's why I took some time to re-write this chapter. It was a last minute decision. Glad u liked how this chapter came out.
I know I will miss my Swarna & Karna & their buddyship 😭
Finally we will end our journey with the epilogue