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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sadiasaba68

it was a beautiful update di 👏

vrushali is a sweetheart [:->]

finally karn n Swarali confessed

update soon di..😃
can't wait 4 the next chapter 😉

thanks 4 the pm di ⭐️

ps: hope u feeling better now di 😊



Thank u Sadia...😊
Yes I m feeling better now
Yes they finally did...& Vrushali is sweet until now...
Ok I will try to update that part soon...b4 I go missing again 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
heyy Hemangi,
How are U dear??? hope u are fine. Take care.

As Usual, wonderful update.👏
, U beautifully described Karna's as well as Swarnali's feelings & Karna Swarnali's special bondings.😊
The trust, the affection, the friendship & the love, everything is so special.😳
So, Vrushali understand Karna's feelings.
So, Karna ne aa kar propose kar hi diya.😳
how beautifully they both expressed their fellings.What I loved the most, is Swarnali's hesitation, she is thinking that she will backstab Vrushali by confessing her feelings.
Loved this update.Great going.👏
so, Karna Swarnali's marriage next month, ohh yipeee, I am super-duper excited.😉
I also very much want to know what kind of research will come on Swarnali's mind on her wedding night.😉
😳Eagarly waiting for next update.
U know, I love ur Fic.Each & Every part.But somehow I still wonder, in this Karna Swarnali fic, why U need Vrushali?? What is the reason for her entry??😕plzz dont mind.I just want to know.




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Posted: 10 years ago
wow hemangi😆

it is a amazing update😊
so karna and swarnali are gettind married 😃

i have a question that is will the future time get affected by this?

keep updating😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi



Thank u Sadia...😊
Yes I m feeling better now
Yes they finally did...& Vrushali is sweet until now...
Ok I will try to update that part soon...b4 I go missing again 😆


Please keep Vrushali sweet till the end. PLS PLS PLS
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow!!! awesome awesome awesome piece hemu dear...the inner turmoil and teir struggle was beautifully written with apt words ...both karn and swarna 's emotions were beautifully described ..I really liked the plot where vrushali makes him ease and karn makes swarna ease..and the last part where vrushu waving green signal..hats off for u for making them to realize their reality their bonding so naturally..the point were he realizes er as a part of his life and the point where she is struggling to accept the truth at the same time cannot leave him was wonderful.. so marriage..wow..karna marries swarna..hot romantic episode is ahead..lovely darling.
and thanks for ur sweet comments there hemu..take care of ur health..dear..health is everything..all the best for ur exams..no problem that u comment late dear..my ff can wait for worthy comments..take rest darling
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sania_58

heyy Hemangi,
How are U dear??? hope u are fine. Take care.

As Usual, wonderful update.👏
, U beautifully described Karna's as well as Swarnali's feelings & Karna Swarnali's special bondings.😊
The trust, the affection, the friendship & the love, everything is so special.😳
So, Vrushali understand Karna's feelings.
So, Karna ne aa kar propose kar hi diya.😳
how beautifully they both expressed their fellings.What I loved the most, is Swarnali's hesitation, she is thinking that she will backstab Vrushali by confessing her feelings.
Loved this update.Great going.👏
so, Karna Swarnali's marriage next month, ohh yipeee, I am super-duper excited.😉
I also very much want to know what kind of research will come on Swarnali's mind on her wedding night.😉
😳Eagarly waiting for next update.
U know, I love ur Fic.Each & Every part.But somehow I still wonder, in this Karna Swarnali fic, why U need Vrushali?? What is the reason for her entry??😕plzz dont mind.I just want to know.




sorry u asked hema I am replying here..if I and hema think alike ..feel te same then I tink I can answer u..She brought vrushali because she don't want to portray karna who disrespect or disloyal to his wife..we don't like to show him as a man who ignores a woman and take decision selfishly..because we are Kaliyugi writers..I don't know whether I am rigt or not..hemu would say
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sania_58

heyy Hemangi,
How are U dear??? hope u are fine. Take care.
M fine now...but just a bit busy...& need some sleep thats all...rest is all f9 😊

As Usual, wonderful update.👏
, U beautifully described Karna's as well as Swarnali's feelings & Karna Swarnali's special bondings.😊
The trust, the affection, the friendship & the love, everything is so special.😳
Of course before the confessions, it was necessary for both of them to think over their relationship & what makes each other special in their life 😊

So, Vrushali understand Karna's feelings.
She proved to be a good & understanding wife as well as a friend. She has certain will power & she went ahead to her husband to confess his feellings for Swarna 😊
So, Karna ne aa kar propose kar hi diya.😳
how beautifully they both expressed their fellings.What I loved the most, is Swarnali's hesitation, she is thinking that she will backstab Vrushali by confessing her feelings.
Swarna was a true friend to Vrushali. even though Vrushali agreed for their relation, Swarna still had doubt & brought the topic of Polygamy & men having many wives which of course being a Kalyugi swarna found it hard to digest & after witnessing the disruptive marriage of her parents.
Loved this update.Great going.👏
so, Karna Swarnali's marriage next month, ohh yipeee, I am super-duper excited.😉
I also very much want to know what kind of research will come on Swarnali's mind on her wedding night.😉
U have know idea...what how Swarnali will react in the wedding night... I hope you will like it 😆
😳Eagarly waiting for next update.
U know, I love ur Fic.Each & Every part.But somehow I still wonder, in this Karna Swarnali fic, why U need Vrushali?? What is the reason for her entry??😕plzz dont mind.I just want to know.
I know you have mentioned it earlier as well. Although Vrushali character will be mentioned a bit less but it is important for a few future chapters


Thank u for the sweet comments Madhu 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Bella02pie

wow hemangi😆

it is a amazing update😊
so karna and swarnali are gettind married 😃

i have a question that is will the future time get affected by this?

keep updating😆


Thank You Rohita 😊
Yes the buddies are finally moving in to the next level 😉 😆

@Red: This is one of the question which is bugging Swarna & it is one of the reason she wished to rushed back to her own time. Along with Swarna, its writer i.e., me is also thinking over it 😆...its a tricky one
I will update the next chappy asap 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shipreeta


Please keep Vrushali sweet till the end. PLS PLS PLS


Ok...So many requests for sweet Vrushali...I fear by the end of this FF she will have Diabetes😆
Will try for it 😛

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31

wow!!! awesome awesome awesome piece hemu dear...the inner turmoil and teir struggle was beautifully written with apt words ...both karn and swarna 's emotions were beautifully described ..I really liked the plot where vrushali makes him ease and karn makes swarna ease..and the last part where vrushu waving green signal..hats off for u for making them to realize their reality their bonding so naturally..the point were he realizes er as a part of his life and the point where she is struggling to accept the truth at the same time cannot leave him was wonderful.. so marriage..wow..karna marries swarna..hot romantic episode is ahead..lovely darling.

and thanks for ur sweet comments there hemu..take care of ur health..dear..health is everything..all the best for ur exams..no problem that u comment late dear..my ff can wait for worthy comments..take rest darling



Thank you Dhivii darlu 🤗
To be frank, i decided to pen the confession part as only a sub plot before the marriage part. But when I started to write, I felt the plot being too rushed. I felt realization of the characters - Karn & Swarna about their change of feelings since they met & once they realized how they would take their bond further was much needed. Of course both Karn & Swarna thought about Vrushali as she was an important link to both of them. Karn was lucky that Vrushali understood him & as you said she gave the green signal to go ahead. But Swarna felt she was betraying her friend so she decided to betray her heart rather than her friend. So ultimately an entire chapter on confessions pans out.
Karna_Swarna wedding night 😆 😆...You have no idea... what geek brain of Swarna will have in her mind & what Karn will discover in her 😉 😆

M better now Dhivii dear...just need some sleep... u know work & exam together ..all messed it up

Will update the next chappy soon 😛

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