Karna FF-Time Travelling in Mahabharata !!! (Completed) - Page 45

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What an chappy Hemu darlinggg!😳 Take a jhappieee🤗
I m wonderingg frm where to start!😛 fine lets start with Brayn😆 his xplantion on her dads quest that he is nt a gay was hilarious🤣 I dnt know y I was laughing there😆!!!
The fist night experience ought to b memorable to them😳...Swarna drank the milk she must give to her husband it Was defo a symptom of her nervousness😆 then Karna tried to kiss her twice bt sumthing came in middle first her nosepiece then her machine😛!! First night in TT machine😲😆☺️...then his research results first that highlighted hair...I dnt know y I was wondering abt his expressions if he see his star matashree😆 then that tatoo my gwaaaddd🤣 yup phoenix is a very engaging character! U know I too draw it with red, green, black, blue ball pen on my wrist...on my Sci paper in 10th the supervisor thot seeing pen marks its a copy some science diag bt then laughed out looking @ me when he saw it🤢! Plus u know I recently read on a fossil similar to phoenix and...hold on hold on! Y I m battering this I m tired of deleting it bck so skip it while reading ha!!😛
Waise I was imagining Karna nd Swara talking abt her xfiance nd Karna possessive cum jealous! Kya kare yaar when it cums to Karna yeh dill always maange moree😳
Then mostt imp part that stealed the show frm Karn nd Swara by his re-entry is Dushyyy🤣 so the star is backkk😉...Swara nd Dushy in Dushy ki dhulai... I still remember it😛
plus plus plus is Swara goin to meet Krishu as she knows future of MB that wud be an interesting talk!!...nw its Karns mariage so u can introduce Kunti here😳 is shee on the way🤓????

Waise srry I thin I went longgg😛 bt frm scholar studies its revealed that my comments r very entertaining nd informative😎 so njoyyy reading😉😳

Update soon😉

I know m very late n commenting... m really very sorry.. I had job exms.. I couldnt come out f my books fr dese days.. jus nw I gt free fr ds week.. nd frm next week I hav another bunch f exms.. I dont knw wen ll I gt free frm ds.. bt I ll surely read nd comment n ur wrk..

Originally posted by: Sonatia

Sry sry sry
i vil surely unres by midnight i am just back frm class and i have a heavy loads of studys so saveing ur ff 4 the time when i vil be boar and vil need a break.

Sure will be waiting for you to unres

Oh My God.

woww👏
Wonderful update Hemangi.👏
Well, I like the Dushy part. Chalo dhulai ke baad to Dushy sudhar gaya.😃
We need to accept one thing ki Dushy ek bohut accha Bhai hai Duryodhan ki.
I like the way U deal with Dushy character. Its really nice.😊
Bryan Explanation was funny.😆
Then, the Swara & Vrushali convo.Yes, its indeed true, that at least in this story Vrushali came between Swara & Karna.
I really want to see how these three are gonna to adjust???
Actually, I never understand this concept of Polygamy.😕
Yaar, mujhe naa kabhi samajh main ek baat nahin aata, Abhi ke time main agar koi ladki uski friend ki boyfriend se kuch zyada baat kar le, to dusri naraz ho jaati hai, Husband share karke kaise rehte the tab ki girls???😉
now, the most important portion, First Night.😳
well, I love this portion.U indeed wrote it brillaintly.Common things, but unique representation.👏
Swara drank the whole milk, ha ha, ha,thats simply mindblowing.😆
Then, in TimeMachine the overall Suhaag Raat,Swara's research with Karna's Armour, then, her punch in his chest, 😳
Karna's reaction on Swara's hair & phoenix tatoo, superb.😳
😃& Last paragraph, woww, amazing writing.😳
👏Beautifully written update, U rocked Hemangi.👏⭐️
Waiting for the next part.
What is in store for Swara in her new life in a completely different Deapar yug???