ArHi SS: One Winter#1. Link for Th 2 on Pg 1 COMPLETED - Page 10

A story in Nainital...The setting is beautiful :)

I have read quite a number of FFs/SSs/OS...Manorama mami has been good, bad, neutral ...But she has never been described as a lady in possession of an enviable, inherent sense of style and cultured taste. That's a first and I liked it!

She hates the Guptas and thinks she has good reason to. Just like her to put class, money and status above relationships and feelings. And in Khushi she senses trouble... like when everybody else sees only the enmity between Arnav and Khushi she can sense something else beyond that? Afraid what happened with Anjali is gonna repeat in Arnav's case too. What with him looking as if he had jumped out of bed and ran straight towards her? Okay I'm gonna keep anymore of my guessing and speculations for later(I actually have a lot of scenarios running through my mind now). Even in the show, though she was mean most of the times when it came to Arnav and Anjali, Mami has always been caring. I always liked that about her.

I like the Mahinder-Manorama relationship. I like the idea of a convent educated Khushi. I also like the Akash-Khushi bond you've described. There are characters yet to make an appearance. I'll wait to know more. I'll wait for Arhi.

I haven't read stories in IF in a long time. Haven't commented. I have tried to write a decent comment about this chapter but if it didn't make sense Saiyu I would just say I really really liked the beginning. I had actually thought I wouldn't be able to read anymore but when I read I realized I had actually missed this.

And you have used Georgia.

And the comment isn't over yet...

"Creased black track pants, grey t-shirt and disheveled coke brown hair..." Sigh...Arnav

Like this ??

Old habits die hard. My comments can't be complete without pics now, can they?