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Posted: 10 years ago
chapter 3 and 4

coming back

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oh.my.god! chapter 3 mein toh you gave me Arnav Khushi ki itni badi doze. mazza aa gya. he kiss her like she is his girl but he is already having a girlfriend. why? even I am confused like khushi.

I loved the difference you showed between Arnav and Akash. prim proper Akash and cute teen Arnav. show mein Arnav ko kuch zaada hi brooding dikha diya. this naughty Arnav is cute yet intriguing.
so khushi discussed Arnav's behaviour towards her minus some details with Akash. ? What happened years back which make Khushi hate Arnav that much???
if Arnav used to hate khushi then why this sudden interest?

Aman the flirt! not the secretary. and Aman Advances towards khushi does not go well with Arnav. kuch to pakk raha hai boss!

Arnav ne dress kaise rakha?

khushi bake brownies ? already erasing the memory of making jalebis?? nyshhh!

I am loving this story already.

p.s I know that I had lost my commenting power!
Edited by BlackHole - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
dil mera saiyu di ne aisa toda.. Arhi Separation ki taraf story ko moda 😭
that soon?? that soon writer sahiba! abhi toh romance shuru hi hua tha. well well.

I loved the phone convo of Arhi. kitna cute. teen love *sigh* mere toh armaan hi reh gye. Arnav broke up with sheetal just before fest and informed khushi that means he is serious with khushi but this dish-dash-doosh drama on fest! hey bhagwaaan. ..sheetal naam se hi nafrat ho gyi hai muje. [:]
so Arnav agreed to sheetal to Make Aman jealous. but sheetal being sheetal played her game and poor Arnav! khushi b naaraz Aman b and Akash too!

really liked the ASR type Akash here! show wale Arnav ki yaad aa gyi! I hope I am going to get Payash???

Arnav ne yeh kiya tha khushi k sath bachpan mein?? no wonder khushi hates him that much! A classmate of mine gives me "adandi" (I dunno if you know what is adangi) when I was in class VI. I got two stitches. I am still in no talking terms with him! but he was no Arnav!

now what? Mera Arnav akela ho jayega? 😔
he is just a teen and teens galtiyaan nahi karenge toh aur kaun karega?

I loved Khushi's dress and those earrings. meko bhi chahiye:)

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I forgot to mention chapter 5!
I loved that walk. khushi ko itni sardi lagti hai??

infinity bracelet gesture by Arnav is so sweet. what I discovered in that chapter is by any chance khushi is a Muslim? covering head at the time of Azaan?? and the reason Manorama dislikes her?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mind blowing update!!! Just started reading it and loved it already... I just hate sheetal and lavanya whenever they come in arshi's life..so much of pain and complications they bring..can't wait to read the rest..
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Posted: 10 years ago
i really dono wat yu sibblibgs hav planned fr us ?!?!?!??!?!

yu bth strt writing a stry n thts t its going to be a mega dhamaka offer fr the arhilicious fanz...


n here i hav strtd to read thz stry of yurs...

b clear ...hav jyst strtd..say i read oly two chapters..but am reallly hoooked up wth t ;) ;)

it s so fun to read teenage arhi but thiz arhi s tooo cute fr their own good...

am really bounded..

so no more amgonnna blabber ...
jus running ti read the other chaptersss...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi there.
It was a really amazing story special mention to nainital

I could actually imagine those places.
The story had freshness to it and made it more special

How to the story.
I wondered initially why Arnav is hiding and giving attention to khushi when he's with that girl.
I thought numerous reasons that why he was with her but never thought it was some promise.

Khushi however was wary considering the way she was treated and how things were bet the 2 families.

The past bet mami and khushi's real mom was pretty messed up.
don't blame mami for what she felt but then khushi was not her mother she can't be blamed for what her parents did.

I loved the whole journey of Arshi from so called hatred to love.

Thank you for writing this story. I am not on your buddy list but came across this on the ff forum and if I remember initially comment once then was busy and lost track when I remembered it was already finished so here I am commenting at the end.

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