ArHi SS: One Winter#1. Link for Th 2 on Pg 1 COMPLETED - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
Saiyyu you're back with a bang. I completely loved it. A very interesting start. Relationships are quite similar to show but the dynamics have changed. And I'm taking Shyam isn't the bad guy here and loves Anjali genuinely.
Manorama as the graceful & sophisticated woman - Cool!! I'm loving the changes in characters here. She is loving yet strict with no nonsense kind of attitude. I wonder if she ever laughs here or not! Someone tell Manorama that even the most shy people fall in love. 😉 Who knows Payal's coy persona may attract Akash who appears quite a softy here. 😳
Why Arnav got upset with Khushi? Did he get jealous or insecure over Akash because Akash developed a sibling bond with Khushi?
My Note 😉😆 : First of all well done. You are a very smart & brilliant girl to have put your free time in writing a new ArHi SS. Nothing beats social service of making so many people happy. I don't mind if it's only a SS and not a FF as long as I get to read it and then you can start another SS 😉 (as per your schedule obviously).
I know you won't leave us in lurch. Hamein bharosa hai aap par, aapke vaade par. 😳
What do you mean by "hoping that people still read ArHi"? We never stopped and can never stop. Such is our love for ArHi. Bas aapka intezar tha. Der se aayi par aana toh tha hi 😉
You describe quite well Saiyyu or are you fishing for compliments here? 😉
I most of the time never get to res in the first place But still if I get lucky I'll keep that in mind. 😊
I have never visited Nainital. But now I'll be visiting it with Arnav-Khushi, all thanks to you.😳
ArHi can never be enough. But I may ask you to leave them alone without any interruptions in their Rabba-veys 😉
I don't think your friends will feel betrayed because the surprise is just awesome 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Welcome back 🤗
Arnav and khushi ..same age and teenagers ...hai ab ayega mazaa

It's non arhi update...but kept me glued to each word...very crisp and fresh..


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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
My monday became best after getting my hands/eyes on this. U r back with a new story. This is awesome. I have read all your works except for Finding Solace. But unfortunately that time my AD didn't allowed me to be more than a silent reader. Now is the time to undo that.
Manorama founds more happiness in materialistic things and that's why she thinks anjali chose wrong for herself. She thinks anjali and her other children will be like her to found more happiness in materialistic things. She already dislikes Gupta's thinking that they stole anjali. But why she hates Khushi? Does she get vibes from AK that something is brewing between them? I'm excited for arnav-khushi. waiting for the explosion between them 😃.
Ps. I loved ur notes. They seriously cracked me up very badly.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Great start!! Can't wait for more!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
brilliant update ...
each time i read your new piece of writing i just start craving for reading your old works about whom i have only heard heaps of praises from my friends and prominent writers out here ...
if possible then please consider them posting again ...
and thanks a lot for writing this one ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Oh my god!!!
You are back Saiyeda.. 😃 Yayywa.. Coming to the story, the families are apart but the kids of both families seem to be very fond of each other.. 😳😳 Manorama is very skeptical abt Khushi... Lets see how it goes.. Waiting for updates..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Someone pinch me.Am I dreaming
This was the first reaction when I saw your pm
Wow I am so excited,You are really writing an ss
That was fantastic
And another good thing is you had mentioned that you will never discontinue and give regular updates,That was cherry on the top
What else to say you are one of the writers for whose story I was always waiting.Though I haven't read many,I am glad that I atleast get to read one new ss
The 1st part was awesome
Hmm seems like both Arnav and Khushi are not less than the other.So surely sparks will fly.Eager to read about them
In this chapter we didn't even get to read their conversation.So its still like suspense
Shashi's family seems good
And Manohar-Manorama was also good.Mami is always like this na so no worries but she is also good.She cares for everyone
But what a pity all her children will marry from shashi family only.
Wow she is waiting for Anji.That was sweet of her.
Ofcourse mom can never stop thinking and worrying bout their child
Looking forward for more.



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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
res :)
Welcome back!!!...wat a lovely start...arnav n khushi same age???
oh i love mahindra already
Edited by luvbug - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Welcome back! Feels soo good to have you writing on ArHi again :')
Hope you haven't forgotten me!!
Coming to the chap. Firstly I love the name of the SS I love winters so yeah :P
ArHi sharing a rocky relationship is my fav.! Can't wait to read further<33

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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Wow, a new story by you!!!! So looking forward to it😃

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