New Arshi TS: Moirai's Gambit COMPLETED| Part 3| Page 11| 9/10 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarahehsan


What on Arshi's Planet? How in the name of Atropos do you do this, Mathur? 😲 *Wonders to Eternity!* Back to IF!* 😛

I freaked out at the title, ya know. No idea, why. I wasn't even sure of what I was expecting. Just the knowledge that it was coming from you made me take the plunge and dive into it. Partly gathering what all of it was, smiling sheepish when I could make some sense, frowning at the predicted normalcy and focusing on the rarity of it all. The setup.. Cripes, is it the 1980's? I'm fascinated by the maahol you created, however little you gave us there. Then the baraatis were so apt and knowing(?) playing the tunes according (or not) to his mood, but lifting mine, for sure! 😆 Something that really got my attention was her promise that she kept for so long, without being discouraged by his lack of response. And to think, her not doing it actually led to shake his fainant mind, to get him to respond. Ironic? It wasn't intentional though, I guess. Her betrothal being fixed must be the reason why she'd stopped writing to him. And his ignorance(or so she thought) is perhaps an added factor contributing to it, perhaps? And now that he grudgingly accompanies his friend, there's hurt/shock/surprise in the knowledge that she's most probably the Bride of an employee of his. Or she's the Saali? 😕 If this is a two shot, Mathur.. I want it to be up soon and please don't give it a 'Love Lost' take. Please? I'm all nerves thinking what you've planned for us. For them. 🤔

This was darn impressive. You outdo yourself each time, darling. 👍🏼 And I'm not green even though I should be, since I'm your Shareek-e-Hayaat, remember? 😉 So chill and bask in the pride I feel for you. Hamesha.

And Oye, Update Soonish! Se Bhi Soon! 😆


Haye my darling Shareek-e-Hayaat! You know na, how much I love you. Ladki, you just make my day. I am found giggling like a lunatic reading your replies and straining to write more updates so that I could just have more of your replies. 😉

Hehehe, the all knowing Baraatis. 😆

The setup has been of 80s because who the hell writes letters now-a-days, i.e apart from sisters writing letters to their brothers on Rakhi. That too has been pushed out of vogue ever since Archies came. And abhi it's pretty easy to track people down.

Moreover, as you put it, I wanted to create a particular mahol for this TS and 80s provided me that.

Thank you so much dear for your lovely comment. 😃 Update toh maine kar diya.
PS: Arre haan I guess to clear the marriage mess this needs another update. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Splendid AMan...

Wonderful writing... it just pulled you in and kept you hocked...



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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
awesome part
loved it
I hate this devyani
plz continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
The Bees totally faraq you Riaji 🤗




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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Ria beautiful story and loved Khushi's unconfitional love for Arnav and Devyani 😡
Ofcourse we need epilogue 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Awesome part
Plz post epi soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Ria.

You. Kicked. A**.

Bas.

This was amazing. I loved it! The cliffhanger, this Arnav, the music at the end- everything!

But I love you more.


Fabulously done, meri jaan.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Beautiful story. Please please... Post an epilogue. And also why did not Khushi go through with her wedding (or did she?) if she seemed truely happy about it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
You left us with another cliffhanger, Ria!😡
Hate you for this!
How much longer will you make us wait for the next part?
Please take pity on your poor readers and post the epilogue soon.
Then one can kill Devyani and live in peace.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Nice story. Please post the epilogue.

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