New Arshi TS: Moirai's Gambit COMPLETED| Part 3| Page 11| 9/10

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dair10arshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

This story was sooo sweeet!! Loved reading it! Hope there are more like this to come from that treasure chest of yours!

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Shah Sair Hassan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

wow..quite a unique concept..
U have written in beautifully..
Take a bow

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Penny

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Posted: 9 years ago

#173

That was beautiful. That was one helluva ride.

It had it's extreme ups and downs.

I just couldn't believe that so much could just be left to circumstances. And, fate has always the last laugh.

We really can't control our destiny unlike the way A certain daily show hero believed.

I loved Khushi's tenacity when it came to true love. I loved how we were given Arnav's prospective so that we understand why for 4 years he never replied. Why for 4 years he suffered so much.

This is the pain of true love.

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cineraria

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: dair10arshi
This story was sooo sweeet!! Loved reading it! Hope there are more like this to come from that treasure chest of yours!

Thank you so much love for your sweet words, they mean a lot! So glad you liked the story. 😃

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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

This was absolutely beautiful!!!!!!!

Loved how you have woven a beautiful and touching story using a train journey!!!!

Finally Arnavji got the elusive Bollywoodish happy ending for his film and himself!!!!!

Great Job!!!!

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rk2127

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

This was such a Lovely read.

Arnav's love, his inhibitions and his despair it was all his fault that he didn't grab on the love life li and his Moirai offered in time. Yet you feel his sadness and pain and hope some day his love will be requited.

But what is amazing is Khushi's perseverance that her love will be return some day. Her faith in her love and Arnav was remarkable that she didn't give up.

As for Devyani, Karma is a Bitch!!!