New Arshi TS: Moirai's Gambit COMPLETED| Part 3| Page 11| 9/10 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: cineraria


Oh yara there is a second part for sure. I will post it by evening. Thank you so much Behen. Your words mean a lot to me. 😃

Yeah i see,😊 because when i had started reading the OS, you hadn't res-ed for the second part!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yeah i see,😊 because when i had started reading the OS, you hadn't res-ed for the second part!


Oh haan. I had forgotten to res. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What on Arshi's Planet? How in the name of Atropos do you do this, Mathur? 😲 *Wonders to Eternity!* Back to IF!* 😛

I freaked out at the title, ya know. No idea, why. I wasn't even sure of what I was expecting. Just the knowledge that it was coming from you made me take the plunge and dive into it. Partly gathering what all of it was, smiling sheepish when I could make some sense, frowning at the predicted normalcy and focusing on the rarity of it all. The setup.. Cripes, is it the 1980's? I'm fascinated by the maahol you created, however little you gave us there. Then the baraatis were so apt and knowing(?) playing the tunes according (or not) to his mood, but lifting mine, for sure! 😆 Something that really got my attention was her promise that she kept for so long, without being discouraged by his lack of response. And to think, her not doing it actually led to shake his fainant mind, to get him to respond. Ironic? It wasn't intentional though, I guess. Her betrothal being fixed must be the reason why she'd stopped writing to him. And his ignorance(or so she thought) is perhaps an added factor contributing to it, perhaps? And now that he grudgingly accompanies his friend, there's hurt/shock/surprise in the knowledge that she's most probably the Bride of an employee of his. Or she's the Saali? 😕 If this is a two shot, Mathur.. I want it to be up soon and please don't give it a 'Love Lost' take. Please? I'm all nerves thinking what you've planned for us. For them. 🤔

This was darn impressive. You outdo yourself each time, darling. 👍🏼 And I'm not green even though I should be, since I'm your Shareek-e-Hayaat, remember? 😉 So chill and bask in the pride I feel for you. Hamesha.

And Oye, Update Soonish! Se Bhi Soon! 😆

Edited by sarahehsan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mathur.. Please check your mail! 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarahehsan


Mathur.. Please check your mail! 😡


Khana kha ke aate hain my darling Shareeke Hayat. 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That is so so wonderful, yet so heartbreaking!
If you hadn't mentioned a part 2, then, I'd still not complain-it still would have been a great standalone piece, even though it is so heartbreaking!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: cineraria


Khana kha ke aate hain my darling Shareeke Hayat. 😉


Abhi tak kheench chaalu hai? 😲 Aap kabse itna khane lage? Hamein yaad hai aap toh aadha 'Desi Cheela' aur do sangtre k slices se hi pet bhar lete the..! 😆

Update soon!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nycc short
Waitin for part 2
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What a beautiful, wonderful tale of two strangers on a common journey...yet too far...

This part said so much in so less words...but the beauty is in the words that remained unsaid, yet were conveyed!! Loved it!!

I love train journeys...they are much more amicable than flights...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome.. cant wait to read next part..

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