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Lepzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Awesome one.

Thanks for the PM.

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Bhool gayi.

@Sanaya.Barun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Hey when will you post the epilogue ? 😳

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cineraria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Sanaya.Barun
Hey when will you post the epilogue ? 😳

It has been already posted dear. On page 11. 😃 😃

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Bhool gayi.

@Sanaya.Barun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

[QUOTE=cineraria]

Originally posted by: Sanaya.Barun
Hey when will you post the epilogue ? 😳

It has been already posted dear. On page 11. 😃 😃

Sorry i just read it.. I thought that 3rd part was the last i read. Confusion.

Epilogue was awesome! Divyani got what she deserved. :)

Arnav Khushi are finally together.. I specially loved Arnav's last dialogue <3

"What's it in me? Nothing, but a heart that beats for you. " pulling her closer still, her body molding in his, he crushed her lips with his.

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Whiterainbow

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Wow! This was beautiful...

Arnav had Khushi's letters to infer her feelings for him, but Khushi's convictions just baffles me...I am not a fan of love at first sight, but her Strong belief and unconditional love makes me wanna believe it

You are awesome...

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amus5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

alright dramatic it may sound but this is what it looked like to me...

remember Sleeping Beauty who slept for a hundred years before she was woken up by the Prince Charming... well when the kiss happened it was said that not only did the Princess wake up but also the whole scenario around them changed...the dreary look of a hundred years and the high rise walls of vegetation surrounding the castle dramatically changed and disappeared and life and activity was charged up all around...

ok now what does this have to do with our Prince Charming and Beauty???...

this is what came to my mind ...the moment they connected across a telephonic call then the whole scenario around them changed the so called barrier between them which seperated them for a period of two years dramatically disappeared - and this is signified by the reel set that went up in smoke carrying alongwith it the evil😉 witch...😆

In short this is a beautiful fairy tale in the making... 😳

PS. I could never guess that it was a dramatic representation at the Sangeet ceremony 😆

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SS88

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Oh man. This is not fair. You need to write something about their life together. Please.

It was a lovely epilogue. I had so much fun reading this story.Everything, Khushi's perseverence, the way you sketched the characters, even Devyani's psychotic jealousy was well-written. Hope you write more.

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Pastellitesoulx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Yayy part 3 updated 🥳
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finally arnav babawa got time to write his first reply urff prem patra to his premika!!!!!! hain arnav you are so fast i must say😆
awwweee that telephone covo is so cute, i find it cute😳.the way she got angry in the last.😆
karma aunty is bitch.😛devyani got bitten badly.arnav gaya saath mein film bhi...
fianally they met and confessed
"What's it in me? Nothing, but a heart that beats for you. " pulling her closer still, her body molding in his, he crushed her lips with his. -this is the best moment hayyeee
yayyy finally arnav took sridevi in his film
aaj hum bahut khush ho gaye.
it is brilliant part <3

p.s:sorry for being late in editing res.but being late is better than never. :P

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canapoem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Ria, after reading the first two parts and since the ending and what would follow in the epilogue was quite obvious, I thought would you be able to match upto to the standards of the first two updates in the epilogue? I was so keen to read the epilogue and know whats going on in your mind when you even decided to write an epilogue considering that you could have even stopped it at the end of 2^nd update.

And Oh boy, you surely blew me away.

Loved the way you have penned down the one letter Arnav wrote after four years to compensate for all the missed letters and the four days of anxiety and turmoil he faced not being able to reach her, making him understand how she must have felt in the last four years was just beautiful and out of this world.

And finally their talk, about the act on the stage which was originally his idea and from his film, everything just fitted so beautifully well in the final part.

Ofcourse Devyani getting injured on the sets, as you mentioned "What goes around, comes around" maybe apt for her.

Ria, do continue to write such stories, and next time maybe a short story. I would love to read more of your work.

Edited by canapoem - 11 years ago

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stg1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#140

yay, thanks for the scrap, u wrote an epilogue and what a beautiful one it was i loved his letter to her, i felt a little sorry for devyani (i always think of nani when i hear this name 😆) and again his pov fascinated me. he had to cool his heels for four days before he could go to her and hardly managed it and she waited four years for him in such optimistic hope and belief 😳 neat little twist for why khushi was dressed up as the bride and i loved how absolutely perfect their fateful milan was, not mushy and weepy but still romantic, fraught with so much meaning and depth and love - just like this utterly beautiful story ⭐️ and awww, he finally made their movie and it got a happy ending

*fangirling* - i hope u keep writing whenever u get a chance, i hardly get time for ff's so prefer shorter shots but i thought about this story for days - the theme is so beautiful and different and thought provoking, it was equivalent to a 30 chapter story ⭐️

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