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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Loved the epilogue. Happy to see them together.

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Aftr reading this i wondr is lovers lk them realy exist wondrful stry just lov it waiting for new stry tanx for pm

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#113

beautiful update

loved it

superb ending

thanks for the pm

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Hayeee Ria Behen, I totally heart the epilogue and your imagination! This beautiful little story couldn't have ended on a better note.

You have given us so much within this story, you have shown us how hope and persistence coupled with patience can finally get you what your heart desires via Khushi's unwavering faith in Arnav. If something is meant to be, it will happen regardless of any obstacles such as our Khanna Lady, MU's or Time. And so our Arnav and Khushi finally reunited in the best possible way one could imagine. Call me mean but I didn't feel sorry for our Khanna Lady, she got what she deserved, not that anyone deserves to burn but I suppose her Karma caught up with her.

Arnav's letter to Khushi and their telephone conversation was just too darn adarable, it left me awing away. I loved the way you made Khushi have her sweet revenge even if it was not intentional. This way Arnav could appreciate all the time she spent on waiting for him to respond. I must admit that when Arnav saw a Lock on Khushi's door, you had me scared for a tiny moment. Then I thought to myself nah all will be well because Ria behen is not that cruel. So when Khushi showed up with her shopping bags, I let go of the breath I was holding. Loved, loved, loved the friendly banter where Arnav told his Khushi exactly who he is, where Khushi resolved all his misunderstandings via super amusing and witty dialogues. ( Bravo Behna! 👏) And then happened the hug in the best possible moment reminding us of all those epic magical reunions we have witnessed on screen. The indication of a new AR movie based on Arnav and Khushi's real story with Khushi's favourite actress starring in it was just the icing on the already delicious cake!

Thank you for sharing this story with us love, thanks heaps for the scrap too!🤗

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stories.1408

@stories.1408

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Awesome.read all d parts in one go

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Hot_Chocolate

@Hot_Chocolate

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#116

oh god! oh god!

will come back and write more.

oh god!

Firstly Khushi was acting up as bride doing some sort of play to entertain ppl ?? god! 4 yrs. misunderstandings because of this?? I couldn't believe.

then I really loved the way Arnav wrote to khushi. my heart skipped a little when I read that her house was locked but then things cleared up.

The story was sweet yet tragic yet romantic. I am a sucker of happy endings and you gave me just that.

Thanks. not everyday I read awesome shots like these.

kudos!

Edited by BlackHole - 10 years ago

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Sithara ponnarasseri

@sanny-beautiful

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#117

wonderful story..👏
Beautifully written..
Loved it..😊

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#118

At least in print we can have happy endings. I am a sucker for those and yes, somewhere despite of destiny's hand and arnav's pig headedness. I was waiting for a happy ending

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arniepervaiz

@arniepervaiz

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#119

Awww..finally they meet again and meet they did 😳
Devyani punished for what she did

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#120

wow...a retro TS...u really tuk the readers to that era...loved it...a very spirited Khushi..unrelenting...and a hesitant Arnav...really really well written...👏

for a second I thought mayb the solution was that Khushi had a twin sister who got married that day and Arnav had mistaken her to be Khushi...😆..too filmy...

enjoyed reading this..😊

Edited by Aish002 - 10 years ago