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amus5

@amus5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

hayeee ... what a beautiful epi...it is yet to sink in ... will be back later to gather my thoughts and pen it down...at the moment allow me to relish it ... 😳

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sonal

@srain10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Finally they meet and promise to be gether for life long...

Beautiful ending...

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Wow dil khush ho gaya!😊

Arnav's one letter more than made up for the all the years that he didn't write to khushi.

All's well that ends well bas ab aur kya chahiye...Arnav & khushi finally together in their choti si duniya.

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Ria...

Though short on time could not resist reading the epilogue...

Here is what I felt at first...

You are one heck of a talented writer...👍🏼

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sudhareddy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Ria marvellous epilogue 👏 👏 👏

Loved Arnav's letter to Khushi and his phone conversation with her 👏 👏

Khushi faith for four years that Arnav would come for her one day and the letters she wrote him without stopping eventhough she didn't gets reply from him 👏 👏

Loved last part where Arnav waiting for Khushi and his thinking "How had she not given up on him in four years when he was this mad in just four days?" 😆

Khushi and Arnav whole conversation 👏 👏

"What is it in you Arnav?" "that I fell for you in a single day of familiarity, and fell so hard that I lived four years in almost a fantasy and a belief so firm that it could be scary at times." 👏 ❤️

"What's it in me? Nothing, but a heart that beats for you. " 👏 ❤️

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Kya Bolu Ab??

Finally All MUs gone and Arshi meet 😃.

Wish you could make it longer though I mean the part after the meet. And that marriage part was acting?? 😡 Good one!! 👏

So how abt faster updates for AKR or new ss?

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Sugi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Finally ArShi meet superb epilogue

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Nicely tied at the end, this one.

To begin with, I applaud your Khushi for being the patient woman that she is. Four years is a very long time, and it was not just a wait for her; in combination with the unanswered letters, I'm sure the misery must have exacerbated.

And even in this one, there were small things that caught your eye; may it be the shiny lock at Khushi's door, or her flare upon being asked about her marital status.

You know it's easy to dislike Devyani for the role she played in Arnav's and Khushi's lives. even so, I felt sad when it was revealed that set was rebuilt, but the actress was simply replaced.

P.S. A mechanical engineer in the film line?😲

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shree10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

And yes, I loved Arnav's letter though it was horribly late. and one of the reasons he gave "his ineligible handwriting😆!!" ow I cant help but wish what if they had responded to each other?? Letters to and fro..

But Aman tuzse ummeed nahi hai.. You update as late as Arnav's letter..

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Ria, I've said it before but I want to say it again, you have a wonderful turn of phrase and a gift for capturing the readers attention and lodging it in the 'moment' you have chosen.

The love you spoke of was so much more than mere 'pyaar'. For me, it personified ishq - Saath bitaye huye chand lamhon ke sahare zindagi bitane ko taiyaar the. Khushi's awe inducing belief in her love was humbling. At least he got to know more of her through her letters. She didn't even have that.

Arnav's keedhe makore ki baaraat was moving to read, when it finally did arrive. "Maybe, it's nothing in me, but all in you" This emotionally self effacing line hides a multitude of his insecurities. But he also realises that in him is "Nothing, but a heart that beats for you"

A very clever twist to explain his MU. Reel life success leading to real life havoc. I like how you have lovely continuity asides, like him not being able to read his own writing when looking at her address.

Although I wanted to say 'Fie on you Devyani' for all that she had done, I did feel sorry for her predicament after Arnav and Khushi had been reunited. Literally and metaphorically burning in the fires of hell.

Lovely story superlatively told! 👏