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Hriju321

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

I had never imagined that I will be saying this...awesome snakewa 😉

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javeria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

congratulations for the new thread

Wow i like khushi handled the accusations thrown at her. She acted very bravely and guarded er self respect.

I am glad shyam is actually a faithful husband not some cheapster. I like his bond with Khushi.

Arnav and anjali are in deep trouble. I think Khushi will not spare arnav this time.

waiting for the next chapter.

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thangam100

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

shyam as a positive character, good to see...

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@SarunArshiIpk

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

wow. Such awesome part. Shyam was bang on abt arnav and anjali. anjali needs to grow up. waiting to know what happens next

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Aruni.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Even in his villainy self, i am really fond of shyam. But this shyam is so cool! I LOVED the way he told off Anjali. I dont think i have ever come across this angle - a good shyam, an insecure anjali, and shyam giving back good to her. Ice bucket challenge worked!

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Anuradha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

i am so loving this shyam.. glad he knocked some sense ti this hyperactive siblings

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Sindhu Ramakrishnan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

that was a straight shot! wonderfully written

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Wow! Loved the spirited Khushi and how she took the bull bythe horns but more than that loved loved and loved Shyam! You have portrayed him as an awesome character! And Anjali was perfectly characterised as the dependant whiny sould she was!

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sincereme

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Awesome update...

Loved Khushi for how she stood for herself but didn't let anyone questioned her dignity... And Shyam is bang on... He is clear in what he wants from Anjali and how he thinks after learning the truth... It is a shame that Anjali doesn't trust him...

Loved it... Waiting for the next update.. .