Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #3 OS 7 (7~31) Link to #4 Pg 1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Awesome... I loved the last bit... Arnav is notanjalis appendage.. So true.. Wairin fir next

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Very nice ... wonder from where you are getting all these wonderful ideas ..

God bless you dear ...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Awesome update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I loved it.❤️

I loved how Shyam gave a much needed reality check to Anjali and Arnav.👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I never thought that I would ever say this about Shyam: Way to go Shyam.👏👏⭐️⭐️

I can't wait to read more.

Thanks.😃

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KtotheM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Awesome updates
Wish we could've seen such an understanding shyamji in the show

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badfaith4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

A reasonable explanation for all those phone calls. I'm glad Shyam scolded all of them. Lets the Siblings get the help they need.

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sonal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Congrats on new thread...

Wonderful update...

Khushi handled whole situation very maturely...

Loved Shyam giving piece of advice to Anjali and even suggesting therapist...

Looks like shyam is nice person in this os...

Now how will Arnav make up with khushi...

Waiting...

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Swathi/Ammu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

WOW!!!! Loving this very different Shyam😊!!!! Nice concept!

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hydsri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

wow, stupendous. Finally, anjali needed someone to open her eyes. Yes Shyam, way to go!!! Loved how he gave it to both Anjali and Arnav.

Lovely that Khushi dealt with this head on - brought it right out into the open in front of whole family.

great one!!!

Please don't wind up soon. I just enjoying reading your stories. Continue with his plot. Let Arnav grovel at Khushi's feet and a apology to Khushi from Anjali too. She cannot be let off easy.

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Preeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

congrats on new thread
great update

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incarnadine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Congrats on the new thread! :)

Awesome parts Smita! :)
Loved how Khushi maintained her cool and decided to take the matter to where it started from. The Raizadas had to know what was going on.
My hands were itching to virtually slap Anjali, not once, but innumerable times! Even in the show, I had wanted to enter the screen and strangle her 😡
I like this Shyam! Alot! 😛 Yes, the silly cry baby needs a psychiatrist! And I applaud him for leaving his hair brained wife to decide what she wants.

Loved it! Looking forward to the next parts. I'm so curious to know how Arnav will try to rectify himself and what Khushi has to say to him.

Thanks for the email Rashmi :) x

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