Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #3 OS 7 (7~31) Link to #4 Pg 1

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shimerrr

@shimerrr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

OMG...lovely os
u always leave ur readers wanting for more smitha and thanks to rashmi who posts ur works so dat we could read them
pls post nxt parts soon cant wait to read them...once again fabulous writing !!

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barsana

@barsana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

superb...

arnav ki ti abb vaat lagnewali hai...

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Pastellitesoulx

@xMIC.Dropx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Awesome OS.
I loved shyaam, the way he took class of bro sis.
Anjali needs to grow up and stop involving her brother in her nonsense.let him live his life.
Arnav use your havard brain yaar.
Glad that Khushi behaved mature and took her stand.

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ameena671

@ameena671

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Wow wonderful updates loved them and congrats on new thread.

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pinkly

@pinkly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

OMG, for the first time, I like Shyam in any Arnav - Khushi FF. Smita, hats off to you for making him good for once.

Khushi spoke calmly and took Arnav home to show him the truth. Very nicely written. I am so glad she did not start crying and ask the same old question to Arnav, "what you would have done if somebody asked the same question to your sister".

The pea-brained Arnav got his lesson. Hopefully TearDripping-WideEyed-DumbWoman Anjali learns her lesson too :-). Shyam was really good. I liked the way he spoke to everyone.