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Shalma/Suman

@arhi_crazy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#351

loved d update.
Loved ASR little confrontation wid his family.
Akash is supportive unlike other family members who r manipulative.
waitn 4 arnav to clear khushi's misconception.

Edited by arhi_crazy - 11 years ago

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@EchTee

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#352

Arshi on honeymoon..
Waiting for it...

Loved the updates

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magss24

@magss24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#353

Omg what an update. ... mind blowing. . Yippee they are leaving for their honeymoon. .hope all the misunderstanding gets solved...and back to normal. Waiting for the next part.

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#354

Awesome dear
Love it ...
Awww honeymoon
Waiting fr nxt

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cosmina

@cosmina

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#355

thank you!!! i love this Arnav,i love how he figured his wife is no one's maid,neither Gupta's,neither Raizada's! can't wait to see how will impress her and how will convince her about his love

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Sindhu Ramakrishnan

@Sindhuramakrish

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#356

that was fabulous!! ASR in his real form in front of his family and kushi the only girl to tame him. superb updates. waiting eagerly for the next ones

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#357

khushi 's inner turmoil is penned perfectly . An adopted child is treated like an outsider & the child is always reminded of the gratitude bestowed upon him / her by the family , relatives and the neighbours .Before ASR could explain his part as usual disturbance from family members . Loved the way ASR stood up for his wife and reminding family members that she is his wife and not the maid . ASR is off to honeymoon with his wife , hope the couples will talk the problems brewing between them and enjoy their alone time .

loved it

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surrazdan

@surrazdan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#358

u know when khushi opened her heart and confronted arnav,,, u made me cry...

it feels so bad.. i can never imagine her feelings...

but d way u hav written its beautiful..

one of the best stories of urs...

and i am proud of this arnav,,, really proud..

and i hate all...be it nani.. anjali anyone.. how cud they do this to khushi especially after knowing arnav...

and guptas... i dont know wat to say abt them...

happy that they adopted khushi or sad that they still considered her as an outsider...

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tanu3579

@tanu3579

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#359

i hv read all ur work... n everytime wanted it to never stop till the end...

bt this one... i just cant stop checking it every few hrs to see just incase it has been updated again... cant help bt want to read it rt till the end ... :) :)