Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #2 OS 7 Link to #3 in Pg 1

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Spoonai

@Spoonai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#891

Plz plz khushi just slap him!!!! He is just so nasty n shameless :(

Yuck !!!!

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katj

@katj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#892

Awesomely written and a beautiful story concept. ..
read the whole story of unwanted wife..
Thanks for giving such a lovely story

Edited by katj - 11 years ago

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chaitali

@chaitali12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#893

this was really a very amazing and cute love story. .
totally in love with it..
beautiful ending. .

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#894

Nice story again Smita.. 😃 Khushi is so innocent and what is Arnav doing listening to Anjalis words.. Anjali is way too insecure.. Poor Khushi is gonna be so hurt.. 🥺

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Shyamala

@shyamidutt

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#895

This is such a beautifully written story. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Thank you :) can't stop smiling.

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ship13

@ship13

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#896

Such a beautiful and emotional story. Loved the way you expressed both Khushi and Arnav's feelings. It was absolutely amazing to read this story. You are GIFTED. 🤗

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luvbug

@luvbug

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#897

OH WOW ... read it in one goo... such a beautiful story 😃

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#898

Came across this story through the hunt for stories on arshi after marriage love and loved it.

Read it in one go. I lived how Arnav's nd Khushi didn't feel the need to show the family around what they shared and I felt it was a punishment enough fr he family to lie to Khushi about Arnav's nd marriage and for forcing Arnav to marry.

What of it didn't turn out the way it did? What if Khushi had not open up to Arnav on trere wedding night.

I loved when ASR poured his wrath on his Nani, Mami and Anjali for both times, especially the last one when he declared his decision on honeymoon and most importantly on treating his wife as his wife and the person she is than a help of the house.

I loved the fact that Khushi was not a character who cling or lay in self pity.

I love this story can read it again and again.

P.S. If you have anymore ongoing or completed stories please share the link.