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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#361

Smitaji! your story is like a bowl of delicious mangoes, Once you start eating one, you can't stop, you want the next one😃

I just can't get enough of your story, every update leaves my dil mangoing 😆more!!😃

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Uarnkhui

@Uarnkhui

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Posted: 11 years ago

#362

Wow awesome, part loved I like khushi open her heart talk to arnav . I loved khushi want to work I hope arnav make her work with him plz don't end this os it's really best read make more part plz😊😊😊

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daljeet

@daljeet

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#363

Wonderful update. Really realy loved it dear.

Applauds for you and ASR in this update.

I really loved how ASR made it clear that Kushi is the mistress of this house and not the other way round. Anjali should be placing orders in her own sasuraal, not here.

I thought they might cause trouble again. But thank God.

I wish Arnav show this sense to Kushi's adopted family too. I wish there was a scene like that if they come to point at her for leaving Payal alone and going for her honeymoon!!!!

I hope Arnav clears the air with Kushi and do take her to Coorg.

Ok now I understood what he meant by needing space and renovating house.

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daljeet

@daljeet

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#364

Originally posted by: surrazdan
u know when khushi opened her heart and confronted arnav,,, u made me cry...

it feels so bad.. i can never imagine her feelings...

but d way u hav written its beautiful..

one of the best stories of urs...

and i am proud of this arnav,,, really proud..

and i hate all...be it nani.. anjali anyone.. how cud they do this to khushi especially after knowing arnav...

and guptas... i dont know wat to say abt them...

happy that they adopted khushi or sad that they still considered her as an outsider...

True. I agree with each line of yours, especially the last.

They had been generous to her and she even got Arnav because of them. But still she is not Payal's helping hand but an individual, that should be drilled into Buaji. She is not a trouble maker and she is not a cause for a disgrace, that should be asserted b4 them in such a way that they never dare say that again.

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ajeetha

@abivicky86

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#365

wah kya update tha aap dono ne dil kush kar diya the best dialogues were of kushi which brought tears to my eyes where she said how she lived a life under the thumb of the guptas and she wanted a husband who would willingly marry her .

the honeymoon declaration came at the right time his confrontation with the family was like icing on the cake he felt they were taking kushi for granted it was in the reckoning because he did not like buaji ordering kushi to help payal . this story is getting more interesting than ever

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amritafan

@amritafan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#366

I loved it...specially arnav standing up for khushi

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Jyothsna

@joe4joe

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#367

Awww outstanding updates khushi told all her insecurities & dreams. Loved the way arnav stood for her. Every burden falls on khushi ,not fair na... Waiting for his confession. Wonderful... Reading it again..