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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Supab update

Love it

Rey getting attracted to kria

Was really amazing

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Bookworm, do you really realize what have you written? Like seriously?

You said, No! You cribbed that you lost your charm. But the way you have got her ideology about independence and freedom, and the relief to be out of a suffocating system, an environment which was uneasy and restrictive; was beautifully described. With apt amount of words. So you do deserve the appreciation for that.

Finally, the girl is getting into the system of writing a Drabble ;)

Dude, the guy has his eyes popped out at the girl. I wish she would have taunted about adapting some decency when you have girls around. Because let's face it. Whatever we girls wear, it's more for our comfort rather then a show for the world. Though I even agree, he isn't a saint to keep his eyes shut when there is something interesting laid in front of his eyes. :P

Yaar the conversation, that was plain sarcasm. I mean, I agree you read many of your fics all day. But still, I couldn't get the required feel. Not that it was bad. But I guess there's some locha with my own system. My problem.

Why did he throw her bags out, when it's night time. You know the taunting conversation could have been easily carried forward and he could made her pay, Like in some unique manner ;) *can't stop my mind off the beasty thoughts :P*

Now you get working. And keep the length simply like this one. :* Aaram se likh, I am not in a hurry. I have too much of work you see 🤣

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Painted_Sky

Better call me a lazy potato! :P

And, You already know what's there in the reply for your comment. why reading it? I literally dictated it to you while writing. Haha. I'm weird. I know.

And. i'll be looking forward to your comment!

No you didn't.

And I did comment. My style :P

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Painted_Sky

Thankyou, I'm forever grateful to you! :*

You should be *flaunting* :P

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SALONI KAPADIA

@sally1196

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Ahhh Rashiii I frankly Honestly loved this chapter that small Banter Ahhh ^_^ and then WTH I am sure her bags are waiting outside for her which is done by ReyaanshSinghania :p Updateee soon Waiting ^_^ & Thanks for the PM

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Khyati

@So_Naley

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

He lusts for her.Okay.

She wants him to do that.She enjoys it.Okay.

Like I got the gist but this chapter was incredibly cryptic.

As in most stories sort of reveal where they are heading sooner rather than later.But this one still remains a mystery to me.

I like it.That is all I know right now.

PS:Sorry if that comment sounded a tad bit weird.Its the fever that's causing this behavior.Can't help it!

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

I need some timepass thingy.

I have something unusual that crept into my system. I have a thing to do, or put it like, I am willing to do. But I am in a sort of confusion.

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

and am finally here :p

the prologue is really fab

seems a beautiful concept

way to go monku :p

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-Monika-

@-Monika-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Awesome update...

literally loved it..

amazing convo between kr..

unpacked bags..
outside.. :O

new twist.. ;)

update soon..

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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Ausome...I loved the update...

Kriyas dressing sense is ausome...

If U have it flaunt it...hehe...ausome...

Obviously it will wake the animal within him...If hes not a Gay then it will...

The convo between KriYaansh was suprb...I loved it...

Waise I dint get the last part...What does time for Round 2 mean...??

Cheers to the Best writer...!!

Do write soon...

Love Aditi...

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