The Beasty Thoughts - KR Drabble. - Page 10

Originally posted by: -shenz-

Bookworm, do you really realize what have you written? Like seriously? Gee! Was it not good or something?

You said, No! You cribbed that you lost your charm. But the way you have got her ideology about independence and freedom, and the relief to be out of a suffocating system, an environment which was uneasy and restrictive; was beautifully described. With apt amount of words. So you do deserve the appreciation for that. OHMYGOD! THIS CAME AS A TOTAL SURPRISE! :'D THANKYOU SO MUCH!

Finally, the girl is getting into the system of writing a Drabble ;)

You are the one who teaches me things!

Dude, the guy has his eyes popped out at the girl. I wish she would have taunted about adapting some decency when you have girls around. Because let's face it. Whatever we girls wear, it's more for our comfort rather then a show for the world. Though I even agree, he isn't a saint to keep his eyes shut when there is something interesting laid in front of his eyes. :P

Hehe! Yes! exactly!

Yaar the conversation, that was plain sarcasm. I mean, I agree you read many of your fics all day. But still, I couldn't get the required feel. Not that it was bad. But I guess there's some locha with my own system. My problem.

No! I have to look over the dialog, i'm not good at writing convos.

Why did he throw her bags out, when it's night time. You know the taunting conversation could have been easily carried forward and he could made her pay, Like in some unique manner ;) *can't stop my mind off the beasty thoughts :P* I thought it would've been too early. I mean, they just met I should show a li'l more banters right? you can expect something like that in upcoming chaps though;)

Now you get working. And keep the length simply like this one. :* Aaram se likh, I am not in a hurry. I have too much of work you see 🤣 Hahahahaha! Yes! I know right!

Originally posted by: sally1196

Ahhh Rashiii I frankly Honestly loved this chapter that small Banter Ahhh ^_^ Really thanks!

and then WTH I am sure her bags are waiting outside for her which is done by ReyaanshSinghania :p

Haha! I hope u enjoyed it!

Updateee soon Waiting ^_^ & Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: So_Naley

He lusts for her.Okay.

She wants him to do that.She enjoys it.Okay.

STOP REMINDING ME OF THE FAULT IN OUR STARS OKAY? I CRIED FOR 2 HOURS TODAY, BECAUSE OF ITS MOVIE! ^_^

Perhaps, okay could be our always! :') :'( *DROWNS IN TEARS*

Like I got the gist but this chapter was incredibly cryptic. Cryptic? I'm afraid i dont know that word. :p

As in most stories sort of reveal where they are heading sooner rather than later.But this one still remains a mystery to me.

Its like, I have little time to write, so i just write what i feel like, i dont look at the flow or the significance or something. I'll try to look over what yiu sat anyways.

I like it.That is all I know right now. Thanks! :)

PS:Sorry if that comment sounded a tad bit weird.Its the fever that's causing this behavior.Can't help it!

Don't worry about it, its okay, its not at all weird okay? *say okay!*