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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: reyaditi

ohhh..gr8 update... Reallyyy?

Sooo Roommates...errr...Like U said...Flatmates... Yesh! Flatmates!

Rey admiring the unknown beauty in his Kitchen... Haha, yes! :D

Ohhhkk...I get it...His Mom...wanted him to get settled..Yeah, good that you do. :)

Buh Rey being Rey doenst wants to... Haha :P

He doesnt even know about Kriya being his Flatmate... Yeaahhh :P

Why does he wants to get such a beautiful soul out of his house...?? Hehe.. Lol, lets go ask him :P

I loved the first impression of Kriya... Haha! Thankyou so much! ;)

Do write soon... I'll try.

Love Aditi..

PS: Read Ur reply to my first comment...soo sweet of U... Aww! How sweet!


Thankyouuu! :* <3 ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: arshafan94

Well tge update was insane. I know! :(

Insalely amazing. Realllyyy? ^_^
Perfect. *Dies happily* :P
Rey going gaga over her beauty still doesn't want her here. Haha yeah, guys can go bipolar at times :P
I have never seen a guy would do it. You will. :P ;)
Amazing. Will be waiting for the next two days for the update Awwh! Sure! I'll try to write.

Thankyouu! Tthankyouuu! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: aishu3003

this update was freakingg awesomeee😊

wowwzz rey checking out kriya😆
and rey's mom searching girls for him🤣
m luving ttt😊
continue soonish😊


Thankyou so much dear! It means alot to me, really!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: -shenz-

Well there's probably nothing that I can review. You know I did tellyou everything about this in my not-so-melodious voice. Not so melodious voice? or not so melodious text? :P

Well you gotta keep a few things in mind. He isn't a robot with probably no emotions. He is a MAN. But certainly yet to achieve the desired stability to his career. He needs to settle down in his career but at the same time there is this manly beasty thoughts. See thoughts can be beasty either ways. When he is too much into working and being rude or when he is oggling at her with eruption of certain unintentional feelings and words at the same time. I'm going to use all of that man, I love you!

And all I say is shorten the length. And let the words just flow. Don't bang your head to form something. Let the flow form the words. Let your fingers trace the path to the required alphabets and make sense and justify it. Just get consumed by the aura of the piece of write up. And write. Shit. You are so awesome! What makes you a non writer? (like professionally)

Bas! I have got nothing more to say. :) I get that, you already read the chapter and corrected it twice. :*


Thankyou, I'm forever grateful to you! :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: cool_star14

I loved d update. ..
Rey was literally drooling over her...
I love this carefree nature of Kriya...
I waiting to see now what will Rey do??
waiting for d nxt update. .


Thankyouuu thankyouuu! That's actually very sweet of you! Your name btw?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Chapter 2


She stormed into her room, how could he have acted like such an incoercible jerk? Not that she cared. She stepped out into the balcony, as if to clear her head, the breeze flew past her, leaving her quite, and it was just something about the new place that seemed to modify her, and she was relishing it.

She smiled at the mirror once she was done changing. She knew, that her clothes were way too exposing, and she knew that the more you cover the more there is for people to wonder, but she stood covered for more than twenty years and now, she was sticking to the equation that as long as you have, flaunt it.

She walked out of the door, the handbag hung in her shoulder, while her curls bounced as she walked. It was enough, enough to tickle the animal within him. the animal inside him crept over, and for the moment he just wanted to grab her and kiss her, savour each and every delicious part of that creamy tanned skin and stick himself to the intimate, incomplete part of hers. he knew that he was eyeing her, and he had been eyeing her for a little too long. His eyes fell on her overly exposed cleavage, and for a moment he nearly licked his lips. For heaven's sake, he was a man, not a saint.

"This." she pointed a long manicured nail to her face "this is my face"

"You remind me of something you know" he said

"I do?" she narrowed her eyes in suspicion.

"someone once said, a girl is everything, beautiful, sensuous and classy, but that is, until she opens her mouth" he remarked.

"Speaking doesn't take brains you know, for an example, look at yourself" she said, the touch of sarcasm never leaving her voice.

"And dressing doesn't take sense you know, for an example, look at yourself" he retorted

She rolled her eyes as her sharp nose twitched. "As if I give a shit about your opinion" she said

She discreetly walked past him, vividly aware that his gaze was following her.

He diverted his attention back to the football match which he was previously engrossed in, yet, he knew that his thoughts were haunted by her.

She had gone to the museum of Science and Technology and then to The Royal Exchange Theatre, she has always appreciated technology and art, she thought of them as two things that could change the world.

The truth was, that she was tired from head to toe, her entire body was aching and she was sure that she couldn't move an inch. And, she went pale, as she saw her unpacked bags waiting outside the door. it was time for round 2' she thought.

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So how was it?

Let me know what you people feel about it, in the below comments! ^__^

I love you all guys! All of you potatoes! ;)

Cheers to the best readers ever! ;)


Keep the support

Rashi xx

Edited by Painted_Sky - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
You potato.
And why is there a question mark to the best readers :P


Me goona catch up with the reply for my comment. And get back to this
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: -shenz-

You potato.

And why is there a question mark to the best readers :P


Me goona catch up with the reply for my comment. And get back to this


Better call me a lazy potato! :P

And, You already know what's there in the reply for your comment. why reading it? I literally dictated it to you while writing. Haha. I'm weird. I know.

And. i'll be looking forward to your comment!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
i love this i love this i love this...
damn this is so bloody cool...nd more than that...m surprised with the writer...so obedient...nd you???
let me take it first...
sexy kriya nd beasty thoughts wala reyaansh...oouch..thats more than perfect...
nd the sarcasm in their oh so great convos is ice on the cream..(my own it is)...
whats up with unpacked bags outside...has she been thrown out???
oh yes...it wud be amazing..fiesty i like...
its wonderful...bt update other wrks PRETTY PLEASE
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
finally i read it..

this is freaking awsum rashi..

m in love with this babes like really..

i loved the way this two acts seriously like the first chappy were reys ignorance was what i loved

nd in second chappy their remarks for each other made me laugh..

rashi me waiting for update..^_^

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