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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Painted_Sky

That's my style of reserving. btw, see, i updated 😃

Did I ever tell you that it was a reserved comment? No! And from nowhere does it resembles to one :P

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Well there's probably nothing that I can review. You know I did tellyou everything about this in my not-so-melodious voice.

Well you gotta keep a few things in mind. He isn't a robot with probably no emotions. He is a MAN. But certainly yet to achieve the desired stability to his career. He needs to settle down in his career but at the same time there is this manly beasty thoughts. See thoughts can be beasty either ways. When he is too much into working and being rude or when he is oggling at her with eruption of certain unintentional feelings and words at the same time.

And all I say is shorten the length. And let the words just flow. Don't bang your head to form something. Let the flow form the words. Let your fingers trace the path to the required alphabets and make sense and justify it. Just get consumed by the aura of the piece of write up. And write.

Bas! I have got nothing more to say. :)

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Aarushi Gupta

@cool_star14

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

I loved d update. ..
Rey was literally drooling over her...
I love this carefree nature of Kriya...
I waiting to see now what will Rey do??
waiting for d nxt update. .

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@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: ramya.reddy
reswaaa
unreswaaa😛
this update was awsmmm😳
the way u describeddd is just awsm👏
hehehe rey literally checking out kria 😆
aaur kriaa bina jaane coffe banayingg😆
rey is just drooling over herrr😳
and reys mom rey ke liye ladki doodingg🤣 and rey wnts some timee
poor kria usse ye nhn pataa 😆
and ab rey thinking ki kria ko gharse kaise bhagaye🤣
awsmm updateee
update next part soonn

Thankyouuu sooo muchhh! :*

I love youuu! <3 Thankyou!

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@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: shelly_Arsha
Aw i love the concept!! ^_^
Rey checking his tenant out
And kriya leaving rey shocked saying we'll be strangers
I'd love to see that, I can imagine aggression on the way too :P
It was lovely
Update super soon!!

Thankyou so much! Means alot to me!;* <3

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@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: sally1196
Eeepppsss this is awesome I loved it Rey is falling for his new tenant Kriya ^_^ Yipeee ... Lolzzz :p I truly loved it his feelings and her carefree nature and above all Iloved the last line by Kriya 'If you choose to be like stranger , That's what we'll be' yeah Go girl I loved Kriya ^_^ :* Update soon thanks for the PM ^_^ :*

Thank you so much Saloni! How sweet of youuu! c: <3

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@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Sanchita_ArSha
res
Unres

it was awesome Lovely
Wonder full
All the things r just to gud
part 2 Jaldi want
thanx for the pm 😳

Thankyouuu for appreciating my efforts.! <3 :*

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@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: don girls
Lovely update

Thank youuu! :* <3

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@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: luv_arsha
Super amazing update
Loved it

Thankyouuu! :*

Originally posted by: anjali22
Awesome update

Thankyou! <3

Originally posted by: chand91
soo lvly updat

Thankyou so much! :* :)

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Lovely Update !!

Thankyou! :* :)

Originally posted by: lovely7010
Nice concept...waiting to read further...continue soon!

Thankyouuu! :* :)

Originally posted by: nature2
Good😉

Thankyou! :)

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@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha
its not a straight one...nd thats what m loving...
known strangers...i like it
u described his fantasies nd thoughts very well...though the compliment is nothing new for you...
update soon

Thankyouuu so much Anku! I always look forward to your reviews! ^_______^

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