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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ok guys... 1st of all I m sorry... I know I very late...u ppl waited so much especially wen u were so excitedly waiting 4 nxt... So 2 repay it I will try 2 post nxt 2moro or day after 2moro... So here I go... Purni ds is 4 u baby...


PART 8

They stood infront of the farmhouse. She was gazing it with smile whereas he was in tension to stand infront of that house.

S: rd kitna beautiful hai na. Dekho yahi wo ghar hai jahan humare ek hone ki starting hui thi.
R: kya beautiful sanyu. Dekho kitna andhera hai.

S: tum thik ho na rd. Subah k 4:30 baje andhera nahi hoga kya subah ka ujala hoga kya. Chalo ander chalte hein.
R(in mind): agar andar k baare me pata chala to tum kanhi mujhe bahar na nikaal do.

S: kya hua chalo.
R: aa..haan..

As they both opened gate, red spy started attacking on them. They reached the main door and during opening it made a sound "keennkkkchhh". Randhir gulped some saliva and stared inside. The house was full of spider webs. He was scared and lost. Suddenly he got a shock when he sensed tapping in his shoulder. "eahnn", he shouted and found sanyu.

S: kahan kho gaye.
R: sanyu dekho na kaise aawaaz aa rahi hai is door se.

S: rd itne dino se band padaa hai to thoda sa sound to hoga na. Kal carpenter bulwaa k thik kar denge. Shaayad greece khatam ho gaya hoga.
R: aur ye makdi k jaale. Main abhi bhi keh raha hoon sanyu kisi hotel me ruk jaayege.

S: koi aayega jayega nahi to yahi hoga na. Aur kya baat baat pe bachon ki tarah chalte hein chalte hein laga rakha hai. Dar lag raha hai kya?
R: o hello main kisise nahi darta.
R(in mind): shiwaye us incident k.

S: to fir andar chalo aur saaf karne me meri help karo.
R: haan..haan..chalo.

They both kept their luggage at a side and started cleaning the spider webs. After a few minutes of efforts they succeed. The whole time the red spy eyed on them.

Sanyu was finishing it up on their room by wiping the webs from roof standing on a large stool. Still her hands were not reaching so she stood on her toes to reach and due to all weight at only one side of stool, she slipped down.

[kya soch rahe ho giri ya nahi? Are obviously giri bas niche nahi rd ki baahon me. Haan ye soch bhi sahi hai, hero k hote hue giregi kaise. Par romance ko destroy hone me zyada time nahi lagega, red spy jo hai. Aage dekhte hein]

Before she fall down rd caught her. She had closed her eyes tightly due to fear.

"you are safe", said rd and she opened her eyes to find herself in rd's arms. She gave a short smile and gazed into his eyes whose vision was already into her eyes. They had a small eyelock, but it did not last long as rd got a gust due to red spy. He removed his vision and started moving back towards window putting sanyu down gradually.

He stared here and there outside the window but in vein. Only he was follwed by red spy. He was disturbed by sanyu.

S: rd, are you fine?
R: haan, par aisa laga jaise kuch tha yahaan.
S: oho firse? Tumhe shaayad khiski se hi problem hai.
R: nahi sach me.
S: uff hawaa chal rahi hai rd, tum bhi na.

And she closed the window. But rd was staring that closed window only. She hugged him from behind placing her face on his back and her palms on his chest.

S: rd, jabse bangalore aane ki baat hui hai tabse ek kiss bhi nahi kiya tumne mujhe.(making a puppy face)

Finally he forget what happened and turned back with a smile clutching her hands.
R: to abhi kar dekha hoon.
And he kissed her hands taking them into his fist.

He advanced from her arms to shoulder and gave a love bite reaching upto her neck. His arms were on her bare waist as she was wearing a chest length top with jeans. She moved her lips towards his cheek and kissed there. He moved towards her face they shared a small eyelock. After a few seconds, their eyes were closed and lips were not inches but millimeters apart, they stopped and stared each other opening their eyes with questionable looks.

S: tumne kuch suna.
R: haan. Tumne bhi?

To be continued...

Thank you 4 reading... Hope u ppl lkd it... Plz leave ur valuable comments below... Spl rqst 2 silent readers...

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Edited by Nain5000 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: MeherS

Tumhe jitna daraawana likhna h likho bt plzzz sanyu n randhir ko last main sath rkhna...end happy hona chahiee...plzzz yaar...post nxt asap



Dont worry meher... I hv told earlier... I always gv hpy endings... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: reet21

My guess.going raaj -one style...some girl died in banglore farm house...whose ghost is after randhir and sanyu?

sn extent u r r8... Bt nt exactly... Its smthng more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey, the story is going great! Again a cliffie? Okay, jaldi jaldi update kar dena, just like a good girl! ;) anyways, thanks for pm'ing! Continue soon huh, keep writing! Love you! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey! Nain
Lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely update dear😳😳
Lovely, nicely and beautifully written👏⭐️
love it❤️
keep it up👍🏼
Update soon plz
eagerly waiting
Thanks for pm
Love
Bushra
🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsme...

so interesting...

eagerly waiting for nxt part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg this is really scary one yaar
tumne sach mein dara diya...lol

awesome update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: karishmagsewani


hey, the story is going great! Again a cliffie? Okay, jaldi jaldi update kar dena, just like a good girl! ;) anyways, thanks for pm'ing! Continue soon huh, keep writing! Love you! :)

dont worry sweeto i will post 2n8
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was nice dear
thanx for the pm
lovepari
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60

its nice update

but that red spy sandhir romance ki dushman😡😡

thanks for pm

ndnext part soon

love u nain😊

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