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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Archisma

Awesome update.. what next?? they r trapped??😲😲
Next time pls pm me na please???

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omggg 😲

its so scary i mean voh phas gaye

ab kya hoga

and precape omggg

plzzz next part soon

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amazine,aweome,scary,fab part its relly interesting part.

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very interesting n mistirious plz cont soon dear awesome update 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Param_love

Hey! Dear

lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely update dear
Lovely, nicely and beautifully written
Love it to the core
The update was super scary
keep it up
Update soon
Eagerly waiting
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its going 2 b more scary...
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Originally posted by: aarushi04

Amazing part...wow
Randhir arrested???
Waiting for d next...post soon

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Originally posted by: karishmagsewani

OMG! They are trapped in the whole house? That's so horrifying yaar! And now the precap, rd will get arrested! Why? Omg! The phase is really scary! I love your writing and this story. Thanks for pm'ing! Keep writing, continue soon, lots of love! :) <3

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awesome update
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continue asap :)))

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Posted: 11 years ago
hello guys... ready wd nxt chapter... thnk u 4 showering so mch lv... feeling blessed... lv u all..


PART 15


Recap: sanyu scared and unconcious due to facing of ghost. Rd got a scary mms. Both scared. in morning rd took sanyu under shower to get back her sense and he succeeded. NEXT...

Sandhir stared in each others eyes and it created an eyelock. This time they were in their individual world.

Randhir's Narration:-
Main janta hun sanyu tum is waqt bahut dari huyi ho. Ab time hai shaadi ki saari promises ko pura karne ka. Main tumhari har taklif me saath dunga. Koi bhi eri geri aurat aa k tumhe apne dar me jine ko majbur nahi kar sakti. Main promise karta hun, main khud bhi strong banunga aur tumhe bhi banaunga par is waqt tumhara dhyaan usse hatna zyada zaruri hai aur main wo kar k rahunga.

Sanyukta's Narration:-
I am sorry rd. Maine tumhe galat samjha. Tum sach keh rahe the. Ye sab kuch bhi normal nahi hai. Koi aur bhi baat hai. Main jaanti hun, tum puri raat nahi soye, meri wajah se. Abhi bhi yahi soch rahe ho ki main dari hui hun. Tum jisse tasalli mile main wahi karungi. Par tumhe face kaise karu????

My narration..
With this a lone tear drop escaped from her eye and she was leaving wiping it out. Just then, rd caught her wrist and moved a step forward towards her. He trapped both her arms and inter-crossed them around her belly being behind her.

His chest had a direct contact with her back. He raised his left arm, removed her hairs, slid her sleeves down from her left shoulder and placed a wet kiss there. She shivered at his sensation. He advanced towards her neck continuing his seduction.

Her eyes were shut hell tight and she was breathing heavily. She gasped as he planted a love bite on her neck sucking her blood like a vempire. She turned around at a sudden and placed her lips on his. She started kissing him vulgerously. He too was responding to it. At this situation they had forgot that they were soothing each other and were flowing with the moment.

He glid his both palms to her waist and removed her top as well as his shirt. She placed her palms on his bare chest and pinned him to the wall continuing the kiss. She moved down and placed some love bites on his chest, which made him crazy and he threw her undergarment unhooking it. He freed himself and pinned her. He was licking, sucking and placing love bites on her entire upper part.

Meanwhile a voice came. It was of laxmi. She was audible enough that they came back from SANDHIR LAND.

L: aiyoo babu. Mayine naashta bhhana di. Waango (means come).
R: haan laxmi. Tum rakh do. Hum serve kar lenge.(he said turning back and his voice high)
L: wokhhey babu.

R: chalo tum fresh ho jao. Main bhi ready ho jaata hun.

He was leaving but sanyu grabbed his wrist and pulled him close. Shee grabbed him in a extremely tight hug.

S(sobbing): I am sorry rd. Maine tumpe believe nahi kiya. Tumne kitna mana kiyq yahaan aane se par main. I am sorry.

R(caressing her hairs): shhh koi baat nahi. Main hun na. Kuch nahi hoga. Main kuch hone hi nahi dunga. Trust me. Aur meri sanyu to fighter hai na wo aisi chizon se kabse darne lagi. Yaad hai, har problem me tum mujhe himmat deti thi aur aj khud aise bacho ki tarah ro rahi ho. Hum saath hein na koi problem badi nahi fir ye lady kaun si badi baat hai.

She was still sobbing and gradually left his embrance pecking his lips hard. She stared him in tearful eyes.

R(wiping her tears): Chalo rona band karo aur breakfast kar lo. Kal se tumne kuch nahi khaya.
S: tumne bhi to nahi khaya.
R: thik hai chalo saath me khate hein.
S: aur fresh nahi hona.
R: wo to ho hi gaya hoon subah subah.(he giggled and she hit his chest playfully)

S: I love you rd.
R: I love you too baby.

Breakfast table 9am.

S: tum jaldi se breakfast kar lo. Office jaana hai na.
R: maine tumhe akela kaise chhodun.
S: to saath le chalo. Bahut dino se office ka koi kaam bhi nahi kiya.
R: par tumhari health.
S: tum ho na saath me kuch hi bhi gaya to handle ho jaayega.

And they wet to office.

Evening 9pm.
They returned from office and opened the main door. It opened as usual with its "keennkhhhkhh" sound. The whole house was completely dark and they entered inside.

R: sanyu tumne lights off ki thi kya?
S: nahi laxmi ne ki hogi maine kaha tha usse ki dinner banaa k jaaye.

He switched on the lights..

R: achha thik hai. Fresh ho jaate hein.
S: hmm..

They both were fresh and it was 10pm. They both were having dinner peacefully. Suddenly, the electricity went off and they both shocked.

S: lights kaise chali gayi. Mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai rd.
R: koi baat nahi sanyu. Tum candles leke aao main switch dekh k aata hun, ho sakta hai usme koi defect ho.

S: bilkul nahi main nahi jaungi.
R: sanyu candles yahin paas waale drawer me padi hein. Aur main bhi yahin hoon. Just bring it.

She followed his words and went to drawer using her mobile torch.

There rd found a torch and was advancing towards the main switch. I was whole dark and the torch light was the only source of light. Suddenly he heard something near a reck. He stepped forward towards it. As steps were decresing, it was clear that the reck was shaking. As he reached to it... Then "hoommm", the violent white eyed and red skinned lady came out and rd fell on ground screaming "aaahhh".

The torch was in such an angle on his thies that the focus was exactly on her face, which made her look even more dangerous.

"haa haa haa haa", the lady pouted in her extremely terrific voice with a strain of blood and saliva.

"chu chu chu chu... Tu to dar gaya. Aage to aur bhi baaki hai. Tujhe to abhi sazaa milni baaki hai. Haa haa haa haa", again she chipped in her scary voice.

She fingered towards a vasc and it came and automatically his rd's forehead. He screamed "aaahhh" and a strain of blood started flowing from his head. He quickly placed his palm there in pain.

"haa haa haa haa", her voice again echoed and within this she again disappeared in the darkness.

Meanwhile sanyu came shouting from the dining hall and found rd lying on the ground. She screaming forwarded towards him and quickly grabbed the torch.

Rd was still in shock that what happened few seconds ago. He was staring in wide teary ted eyes to the place where the lady was standing. Sanyu shook his face placing her palms under his chin.

S: rd tum thik to ho na. Chillaye kyun?
R: (still in his position and no reply)
S: rd bolte kyun nahi. Rd.

And she succesfully turned his face and found the wound.

S(sobbing and shocking): what the hell. Ye chot kaise lagi. Bolte kyun nahi rd. Kya hua?(she shouted hard)

He gained some sense but still his state unchanged.

R: wo wo aayi thi. Usne kaha sazaa.
S: kya bole jaa rahe ho? Usne ye sab kiya.
R(screaming): sanyu.. Wo usne bola bahut kuch karegi. Usne.. Usne vo vasc mere maara. Sanyu.. Sanyu.. Wo zor zor se has rahi thi.. Bahut.. Bahut dangerous.. Wo..

S: hum abhi k abhi yahaan se chal rahe hein. Chalo. Utho.

And she dragged him somehow making him stand. They ran towards the door to open it but in vein. It did not open. They tried hard but no reaction.

S: khidki. Khidki se nikal jaayenge chalo.

They ran to every possible window but no use. Rd was angry now. He picked up a flower pot and threw it to the window but the pot scattered in several pieces on ground.

They were more scared to see that. Suddenly sanyu got another idea.

S: rd.. Pichhe ka darwaza. Chalo run.

They tried but no use. They were locked in the entired house. At last they got tired and retuned to the hall.

They were screaming and breathing heavily as they were hell tired.. And a scary voice echoed in the entire bunglow.

"haa haa haa haa... Tum log tab tak is ghar se nahi jaa sakte jab tak main na chahun. Haa haa haa haa. Yahin kaid rahoge tum log", whom it would be other than the scary lady.

To be continued..

Precap - mr. rss you are under arrest. Rd in jail. New entry..


So guys.. Opening of mystery has been started. In this episode, you found two new appearance and in further episode, there will be more mysteries, tragic, hotness and new faces to reveal. So stay tuned.

Thank you 4 reading. Hope u all like it. Dont 4get 2 leave ur precious reviews below. Love you all..

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Edited by Nain5000 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey I thik you give part-14 instead of part -15 plz correct the updated

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