Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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rati123

@rati123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#831

Such a beautiful story as usual ! Thanks.

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Sayali_23

@Sayali_23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#832

Smitajiii ... Esa kaise edwa kiyee rahe... Aur bhi likhe ki padi...

Read last 3-4 updates in one go... As usual u r too good... Lobed reading ...

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pinkly

@pinkly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#833

Playful Love... it was super cute love story. In the beginning I was so mad at Arnav for his hurtful words towards Khushi. But he realzed his mistake. I could see his love in his words and actions during the Heer Ranjha drama and afterwards. Very nicely written Smita. I always look forward to reading your stories. I will read the new story and then comment.

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#834

How romantically beautifull!

How awesome, Smita..one amazing story after another!👏

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ocean28

@ocean28

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#835

All of your stories on arnav and khushi are for all seasons, winter fall summer spring in times of sadness or happiness. I simply cannot get enough of them. Thank you so much for writing such endearing tales on this lovely couple. Please continue writing their stories for a very long time. I have read all of your work multiple times and they always bring a smile to my face.

Thank you. You are such a wonderful writer...thank you a million times.

Waiting for more...lots more.

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Spoonai

@Spoonai

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#836

Loved it and buaji is so funny!!! Loved the here and ranja act!!! Wish ASR was like tht in the serial :)

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Spoonai

@Spoonai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#837

Awww tht was so awesome!!! Loved. It so much!!! So much loved for each other :) wish I cud see their marriage:) and Arnav is so eager to marry his khushi :)