Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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muskaansobti

@muskaansobti

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#821

Awesome n amazing suoerbb updates

read al 👏

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smitar

@smitar

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#822

Originally posted by: monsi08
Rocking 👍🏼

Ek shabd mein comment karne waali dost, jantaa maaf nahi karegi!!!!😆

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Tvbug2011

@tvbug2011

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#823

Lovely ending, Smita!! Especially appreciated that you didn't rush it, but allowed it to unfold and play out. And love the pun in the title - a playful love. 😊 The backstage Arnav-Khushi chat before the act was so unexpected and such a pleasure for it. And the on-stage proposal touched my heart. The Heer Ranjha lines were uncannily suited for Arshi's love situation!! 😃

Waiting for your next one.❤️

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#824

Awesome updates Loved it <33 Loved their confession Loved the act Thanks for the email

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sheshnag1952

@sheshnag1952

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#825

wonderful story. loved it completely. finally arnav and khuhsi did become one.hope you have a new story coming soon.

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Uthra

@Viji79

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#826

You know what your success quotient is as a writer?

The smile that never leaves my face when I read your update and long time after I finish reading it.

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#827

Originally posted by: Viji79
You know what your success quotient is as a writer?

The smile that never leaves my face when I read your update and long time after I finish reading it.

Uthra...
When I read your story they are thought provoking too dear... Lovely piece of work your ongoing story...

Edited by rulama - 11 years ago

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#828

You create magic through the sadness of any story. You always guarantee a happy ending, hamesha! Sigh! Thoroughly enjoyed this and I am glad I got to know more about Heer Ranjha! Keep writing darling!