Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#801

25-30...

Awesome updates...

Loved the play... Arnav has changed his lines... He has that last chance so he has to show her how much he loves her... That he is sorry for what he said...

But khushi is very angry and hurt... Will be accept his proposal???

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#802

Superb...

Khushi accepted his proposal... 😊... And their admission of love and all the secrets they shared... How they fell in love at first sight, how they were seeking ways to be with each other, Arnav gentle kisses... Everything was so beautiful... ...

Loved the story...😊

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paaskhanna

@paaskhanna

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#803

Loved it... Simply amazing
Heer-Ranjha play was adorable the way Arnav changed lines to portray his feelings
Waiting for your next one
Thanks to both of you ... For writing these lovely stories and for sending me mails

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magss24

@magss24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#804

Aww that was such a sweet os. .

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#805

yr y did ur stories end so soon!? m in luv wid ur each story!

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#806

thax fr EA! Eagrly waiting fr ur next story!

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#807

That was a wonderful ending for this OS... so beautifully written... loved it 😊

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chaitali

@chaitali12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#808

oh..This was sooo amazing. .
I never wanted it to end.

Arnav added his own dialogues in Ranjha's.
I loved his way of proposal. .it was a
Surprise for khushi. .
The Gupta s hd to agree..